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Has bhavani turned a doctor bring the erection back to vikram. its a medical miracle if so. She got her lover back and he got her lover back. Worst thing is she never bothered about avinash when she is with vikram and now she is acting as if she really cared for him and missing him. She has never changed. Once a bitch is always a bitch.
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Good, tried do the justice to the characters
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Good way to end as you want a happy ending. Finally the lovers are united and formed a family.
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Its a different kind of finish compare to the tamil version. You have written in more justifying manner. I liked it. Thanks for completing the story as always. Only writers like you are needed for this forum.
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(28-04-2024, 02:31 PM)Sarran Raj Wrote: Has bhavani turned a doctor bring the erection back to vikram. its a medical miracle if so. She got her lover back and he got her lover back. Worst thing is she never bothered about avinash when she is with vikram and now she is acting as if she really cared for him and missing him. She has never changed. Once a bitch is always a bitch.
Sorry, maybe I didn't make it clear. After the accident and during recovery his libido was affected. Along with that his guilt made the situation worse. Over time as he and his body healed and with someone who truly loved him helping and not pushing pressure on him his libido returned over time. This was what I was supposed to write but as I tried to finish the story in the time I got this part was missed out. I don't write a draft and then recheck it. I write as the thoughts come to me based on the plot I had in mind. Thank you.
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Nice conclusion
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Awesome finishing bro
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No,
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30-04-2024, 02:47 AM
(This post was last modified: 30-04-2024, 10:47 AM by Hornytamilan23. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
I know this story from another website tamil sex stories,
May be you must have posted after finishing it here. Like 2022 may be. But I couldn't finish this story because I lost interest by reading same things from different point of view. Also I think you have good english backdrop and writing in tamil is difficult for you, because your choice of words and spelling mistakes suggested it.
So now for few months are so, the english version is trending, I tried avoiding, eventually out of boredom started reading.
Your English version of this story had conviction, at that time I realised that you have written the story in english and translated in tamil. May be I am wrong.
And both the ending were different, I think after the comments from tamil section, and many author's like Krish ending the story like no harm done to anyone. You have also done the same with English version.
Personally I think in cases of adultery, mostly after few encounters they lose interest. And the husband he had doubts from the beginning, so he must have started questioning her activities way before they got caught red handed. Because after so many years of being together and when she polished her nails for the fetish of vikram, the husband should have questioned her actions. Because in a relationship people notice subtle changes. Frequent fights between them must had impact on their illicit relationship between vikram and bhavani. Again they have a son, in real life ultimately women look for stability. So after few encounters, the frequency of intimacy between vikarm and bhavani must have reduced. Because of sheer pressure of a women get from running a family.
Also vikram, as a playboy he can never be with one women. I think he flirts almost with everyone. Just an predator waiting for it's prey. But as Bhavani was like an sex slave, he halted to enjoy her as much as possible. So guilt and remorse didn't fit with vikram.
And Bhavani, the character itself structured in a way that she likes to devour Cock more than anything else. A Cock hungry slut. So this story of yours is some what justifiable In her point of view. A slut is a slut no matter what. But as a women in a family life, to be so mild mannered one, rather she must be a divorcee or a widow to have this kind of hunger for cock. But She had a partner, a child , a family, and Stability. Yet she wants to sacrifice all of it just for the girth and length of penis.
So basically vikram and Bhavani are flawed by nature, who think with what's between their legs. So I think tamil version of ending is much acceptable comparingly, and this what must have afterwards.
Eventually they must have settled for a Divorce. With Avinash custody with his father. She must have ended up living single, after sometime with few more days of sex with vikram, he must have neglected her. Because, beauty is not permanent and she is already an aunty. Eventually men will know about her past, she would have ended up as an whore. And must have made headlines that some Physco killer used her for good and stabbed her at multiple places.
Vikram should have married someone who their parents seek, thinking that parents must have seen him a good girl. And because of his character she must have came to know about his infidelity. Left him for good. And if he continues to go in that path, he would have ended up in mortuary with his throat slit. Because one or another fellow will have the guts to stop him from damaging other families.
This is what happens in real life, again yours was a fantasy. I enjoyed it, it was mastrubatable. I really enjoyed your sex scenes, you have touch of nagae style sex from JAV porn. Also never expect logic from explicit content, because it will take all the fun. Hence writers ignore logic when they write for pure fun.
So the moral from this beautiful work of Game40it is fuck and forget, also read and forget.
Now I think of my last encounter and i am not as lucky as vikram. Lol
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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I really wanted an ending like.... worse.
People do mistakes, their is no excuse; But should get punishment, you are saying leaving her child is her punishment. Which nobody is accepting, not just me.
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Great finish.
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04-05-2024, 01:33 PM
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You want to show that she is punished and lost her son and that has affected her mentally and for lifetime. Actually she never said no to vikram for the sake of her son during her affair. She fucked in her own home where son is sleeping in another room. She drugged husband for mating with vikram. It means she lost the respect and love completely after the affair and in fact she humiliated her husband and son indirectly. May be vikram could have met her after 10-15 years when he lost his erection and lovers, and nobody is ready to marry him and both suffer in their own life finally joined for the sake of their child. Thanks for the story !!!
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04-05-2024, 02:48 PM
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In my opinion, your climax in tamil version somewhat better than than this english version.
I had different view....
I just want to share....
Few years have passed.
Bavani's second son brought her a college going guy.
With just one glimpse she realized who he is her first born son.
he is here to fuck a brothal woman. unknowingly he booked his own mother.
She scolds her second son (vikram) that she is not in mood. First left with out saying anything.
Second son came forward and slaps her, and cussed her. and left.
Later Bavani, met her First son outside, she asks about his parents. He said his mother died, when he was young. His father recently died. Money and properties are looted by relatives. Second son observes everything and confronts Bavani. and learned the truth. He targets his brother.
First son has a girl friend named Vindhya. Second son planned to loot Vindhya from him.
New triangle starts again...
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it was the best store and with ending. thanks you
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