04-04-2024, 08:25 PM
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Adultery A husband's mistake
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04-04-2024, 08:26 PM
04-04-2024, 08:28 PM
(04-04-2024, 01:59 PM)tweeny_fory Wrote: oh fucking hot dude... We have had quite a few stories with hardcore sex. I do not want to go down that path. Will decide on the progression of the story
04-04-2024, 08:33 PM
I posted the latest update in haste and half mind. When I look at the story from outside, I feel that the latest update does not gel with the soul of the story.
I have seen a few readers enjoy the update and few unhappy with it. I respect readers sentiment. But the progress of the story does justify the characters behavior. Hence I shall share an alternative version and progress from there. I hope all the readers enjoy the story.
04-04-2024, 08:38 PM
(This post was last modified: 04-04-2024, 08:38 PM by rahulishere. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Xossipy doesn't allow me to copy my own update for editing. Hence I have to write the update afresh. Because all the updates I have written were directly in the update post. I do not have the story saved in my own space. I'll try to share an update by this weekend. Until then please post your views and feedback.
04-04-2024, 08:39 PM
For your information this is my first story in any forum.
04-04-2024, 09:02 PM
In my opinion..there are dozens of stories on both sides of the coin. Seduction where Sukanya slowly but eventually starts affair..other side..blackmail and she gives into Sharath..both sides have been explored ample times on this forum. I would suggest you take mid way path where there won't be hardcore seduction as now Sukanya knows the plan from Sharath and Meena..also there shouldn't be any blackmail. Sukanya should keep it to her that she knows their plan while Sharath plans thinking Sukanya doesn't know his plans..but still Sharath gets succeeded in his games and Sukanya despite knowing the truth falls for him and is tricked. This path is very tricky and needs lot of good plot and not easy to come up with the screenplay.
05-04-2024, 07:28 AM
(04-04-2024, 09:02 PM)RCF Wrote: In my opinion..there are dozens of stories on both sides of the coin. Seduction where Sukanya slowly but eventually starts affair..other side..blackmail and she gives into Sharath..both sides have been explored ample times on this forum. I would suggest you take mid way path where there won't be hardcore seduction as now Sukanya knows the plan from Sharath and Meena..also there shouldn't be any blackmail. Sukanya should keep it to her that she knows their plan while Sharath plans thinking Sukanya doesn't know his plans..but still Sharath gets succeeded in his games and Sukanya despite knowing the truth falls for him and is tricked. This path is very tricky and needs lot of good plot and not easy to come up with the screenplay.Both the parts are well explored in many stories , give a twist to the story where sukanya confesses everything to her husband and they trick Sharath and save meena and in the process both enjoy light sexual moments and in the end the husband gets to enjoy suk throughly and gets his hand s on meena too with wifes support
06-04-2024, 12:41 PM
(05-04-2024, 07:28 AM)pavanbadugu; Wrote: Both the parts are well explored in many stories , give a twist to the story where sukanya confesses everything to her husband and they trick Sharath and save meena and in the process both enjoy light sexual moments and in the end definitely a different thought and i see the way the story may move, but this should not end up on suky getting exposed n doing more daring n naughty for her hubby..that was the main plan of the hubby
06-04-2024, 09:08 PM
super updates come soon
08-04-2024, 10:38 PM
Great story writing! Absolutely loved the slow build-up so far.
The way you built up Sukanya's character is very amazing. She's shy and incredibly beautiful but rapidly adopting to please her husband, what a dutiful wife. Can you also write her perspective as how she's feeling inside when things are getting heated. How erotic she's feeling, how her mind is taking over, how her breathing is high, how her pussy is leaking etc. How she's torn between values and tradition and equally horny. These things add to eroticism. I incredibly love her character. Her character progression has been great up to now. She's slowly finding comfort in being without inners that is very erotic! The husband is training her well. The seduction game set forth by Sharath is well written. The last update was extremely erotic especially the part where now Sukanya knows their game plan. Now what does she do?? Does she inform her husband about it or does she skip that part to husband and play along with Meena's games thinking that she'll outsmart them. We are yet to see what is that "Husband's Mistake"! Can't wait for the next update, don't bother too much by overwhelming response for the last update being turning into forced one... So far the seduction game has been strong and I trust the author's plan on how it will make sense in the future updates and why they're behaving the way they are behaving.
08-04-2024, 10:39 PM
Kaha busy ho gaye, jald update dejiye...
08-04-2024, 11:08 PM
(08-04-2024, 10:38 PM)xossissippi Wrote: Great story writing! Absolutely loved the slow build-up so far.
09-04-2024, 01:56 AM
Wow nice keep going I can imagine myself from sukanya character
09-04-2024, 09:13 AM
(04-04-2024, 09:02 PM)RCF Wrote: In my opinion..there are dozens of stories on both sides of the coin. Seduction where Sukanya slowly but eventually starts affair..other side..blackmail and she gives into Sharath..both sides have been explored ample times on this forum. I would suggest you take mid way path where there won't be hardcore seduction as now Sukanya knows the plan from Sharath and Meena..also there shouldn't be any blackmail. Sukanya should keep it to her that she knows their plan while Sharath plans thinking Sukanya doesn't know his plans..but still Sharath gets succeeded in his games and Sukanya despite knowing the truth falls for him and is tricked. This path is very tricky and needs lot of good plot and not easy to come up with the screenplay. Thank you for your comment. Please keep reading the upcoming updates
09-04-2024, 09:15 AM
(05-04-2024, 07:28 AM)pavanbadugu; Wrote: Both the parts are well explored in many stories , give a twist to the story where sukanya confesses everything to her husband and they trick Sharath and save meena and in the process both enjoy light sexual moments and in the end Thank you for your ideas. Will see how the next update pans out
09-04-2024, 09:15 AM
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09-04-2024, 09:18 AM
(08-04-2024, 10:38 PM)xossissippi Wrote: Great story writing! Absolutely loved the slow build-up so far. Thank you for taking your time out to write a response. The Husband's mistake will be a highlight update from where things take a different turn
09-04-2024, 09:18 AM
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