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Rebecca ka khud ka deemag usey jaise aur uttejit karwa raha tha. Koi aur agar hoti toh shayad sharam ke marey bhaag jati wahan se. Koi aur kyun? Agar woh puraani wali rebecca bhi hoti toh crazy people bolkey chali jaati wahan se. Par zamindar bahurani ab pehle se bahut badal chuki hai. Usey khudko bhi nahi pata ke kab itna parivartan aane laga tha usmey. Saheri zindagi se alag hokar jaise uskey under ki aurat puri tarah bahaar aney lagi hai. Ekant samay aur yovan ki aag sab milkey nayi bahu ki Kam Agni zyada jaag gayi hai. Isliye toh aaj aise paristhiti me bhi darr ya koi aur anuvuti se zyada kuch aur hi feel karne lagi hai woh.

KAL RAAT KO AYEGA IS KAHAANI KE CHAPTER 1 KA AAKHRI UPDATE. SHAYAD CHAPTER 2 ABHI NAHI LIKH PAUNGA PAR ASHA KARTA HOON KE PART 1 KA LAST UPDATE SABKO PASAND AYE.

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Rebecca soch toh rahi thi zamindar ghar se belong karta hua ek educated gentleman ke private part ko par ghoor rahi thi ek fatey huye lungi ke under tamboo bana hua dandey ko. Bar bar usey yaad aa raha tha kaise pati ke taango ke beech baithkey woh unke us sexy part ko muh me lekar chusti hai lekin neeli ankhein tika hua tha lungi ke under apne aap hilta hua woh gupt chis pe. Yeh kya ho raha pata nahi usko... Bus brain kuch aur deekha raha tya aur aankhe kuch aur dekhne pe majboor ho raha tha. Yahi sab chalte jaa raha tha ke tabhi Rebecca bahu ki nazar kuch pal ke liye us jagah se hath ti hai aur thoda left ke taraf jaati hai. Jahan woh vikari bhi exact dekh raha tha aur wahan nazar theek se jaate hi bahurani ka muh khula ka khula reh jata hai.!

Yahan se nadee saaf saaf dikh raha tha. Zamindar ghar se nadee jitna dur hai yahan se utna dur nahi, balki jahan Rebecca khadi hai wahan se nadee paas hi hai. Bus yeh jagah thoda unchai pe hai aur nadee thoda neeche. Aur beech mein yeh chota sa jungle jaisa ilaka hai. Aur yahan se dur kuch 4/5 nariyel ke pedh dikh rahe hai Aram haveli ke rooftop se bhi dikhta hai. Aur unhi pedho me se ek ke neechey 2 log majud hai. Saaf pata chal raha ke ek admi aur ek aurat hai. Aur dono kya karne me busy hai woh bhi saaf pata chal raha. Us aurat ke pair ke paas ek matka rakkha hua hai. Shayad paani lene ayi hui koi gaon ki aurat hai. Paani laane ke bahane yeh karne aayi hai. Aur woh admi jo usey peechey se pakar ke kamar hila raha hai..... Arey!! Yeh!! Yeh toh...... Oh my!!

Rebecca ko jaise jhatke pe jhatke lagte jaa rahe the. Dur khadey woh dono me se jo mard hai usko toh Rebecca dekh chuki hai. Aur woh bhi aaj subah hi apney balcony se! Yeh tog wahi admi hai jo kanta ke pati ke sath tab..... What the F!! Rebecca ko pehechanne me koi galti nhi hui hai. Yeh wahi hai jo subah vola ke sath milkey mardo wala maza le raha tha. Aur ab yahan ek aurat ke sath yeh sab! Woh bhi aise khuley mein? Oh my! Lekin Tabhi Rebecca ka Deemag usey kehta hai - Ekdin tum bhi toh yahi kar chuki ho apne pati ke sath. Tum karo toh sahi aur koi aur karey toh galat? Dekho..... Dekho kaise dono kaise judey huye hai ek dusre se. Ufffff aurat ko kitna maza de raha hai woh admi. Kaise uske boobs ko dabate huye peechey se Milan sukh le raha hai woh marad. Bikul jaise ekdin tumhara pati khule asman ke neeche tumko khush kiya tha.

Rebecca ka khud ka deemag usey jaise aur uttejit karwa raha tha. Koi aur agar hoti toh shayad sharam ke marey bhaag jati wahan se. Koi aur kyun? Agar woh puraani wali rebecca bhi hoti toh crazy people bolkey chali jaati wahan se. Par zamindar bahurani ab pehle se bahut badal chuki hai. Usey khudko bhi nahi pata ke kab itna parivartan aane laga tha usmey. Saheri zindagi se alag hokar jaise uskey under ki aurat puri tarah bahaar aney lagi hai. Ekant samay aur yovan ki aag sab milkey nayi bahu ki Kam Agni zyada jaag gayi hai. Isliye toh aaj aise paristhiti me bhi darr ya koi aur anuvuti se zyada kuch aur hi feel karne lagi hai woh. Jo chis abhi us aurat ke under ghusa hua hai usko apne aankhon se dekh chuki hai Rebecca. Aur woh bilkul bhi chota nahi hai. Halaki woh vola ka bhi dekh chuki thi. Par is admi ka woh ang jaise advut akarshak tha. Aur wahi akarshak chis abhi us aurat ko under se maza de raha hai. Uffffff dekho toh zara woh harami kitna wild hai. Us aurat ke baalon ko kheechke pakra hua hai aur kaise ghinoni nazar se ghoor raha hai. Ek pal ke liye toh aisa lagey ke woh us aurat ko jabardasti se kar raha ho. Par aisa bilkul nahi hai. Kyunki woh aurat bhi mard ka dard mehsoos karti hui has rahi hai. Aurat ke chehre pe aisi muskan tabhi aa sakti hai jab purush apney mardaani se usey jeet le.

Neeli aankhein unko ghurti hui jaise kho rahi hai ek advoot maya jaal mei. Rebecca kabhi apne pati ko dhoka nahi dena chahti. Uske jeevan ka purush sirf aur sirf Tarun hi hai. Woh jagah koi nahi le sakta. Par agar baat pyar ki na hokar kuch aur ki ho tab shayad deemag dagmaga jata hai. Rebecca ke dil me us anjaan admi ke liye koi feel mahi hai, balki shayad thoda gussa hoga. Kyunki woh admi haveli ke property me ghuske subah ganda kaam kar raha tha...... Par Rebecca ka deemag toh kuch aur hi sochey jaa raha tha. Ek ajeeb sa akarshan mehsoos kar rahi thi woh us admi ke liye. Dekhte hi pata chalta hai ke woh admi bilkul bhi koi gentleman nahi hai balki bahut hi ghatiya lalchi hai jo saaf jhalak raha hai uske chehre pe. Par yahi baat toh aur akarshit kar rahi thi bahurani ko. Aise badtamiz ashleel admi ke yeh harkat se zamundar bahu majboor ho rahi thi khudkey dono taang ke beechki jagah ko touch karne ko........ Nahi..... Sirf woh admi hi nahi....... Ek aur bhi toh hai... Jo zamindar malkin ki tarah chup chupke us drisshya ka lupt utha raha hai. Rebecca ki nazar firse ghoomke wahan jata hai jahan ek badsoorat sa buddha is umar me akar bhi asheel harkat karta jaa raha hai. 

Ufffffff you old begger! Fucking pervert!! Uffffff horny son of a b*#!!

Rebecca ke muh se nahi lekin deemag se us buddhey ke liye yahi baatein nikli. Kyunki samney ka nazar tha hi itna ghinona. Jab Rebecca un dono ko dekhne me busy thi tabtak yeh vikari bhi apney sher ko pinjrey se bahaar le aya tha. Rebecca ki nazar jab us vikari ke taraf firse gaya tha tab woh chowk gayi thi nazara dekhke. Lungi neechey pada hua hai aur us buddhey ke neechey ke hissa pura naked hai. Uska kala gand Rebecca ke samney tha aur dono taang ke beech se ek lamba sa thaili lataak raha tha. Aur side se kabhi kabhi jo chis jhalak de raha tha woh toh.....!! Uffffff! Aisa chis chupa hua tha lungi mein!! How is this possible? Rebecca ka deemag jaise samajh nahi paa raha tha... Aur naa hi biswas kar paa raha tha woh nazara. Ek aise old begger ka private part kaise aisa ho sakta hai? Kaise?! Jo bhi khaney ko milta hai uska sara protein vitamin kya us ek jagah ko jata hai kya? Us din jab pehlibaar is gandey buddhey se mulakat hui thi tab Rebecca ne us part se peshab nikalte huye dekhi thi par tab woh shaant tha..... Lekin aaj toh yeh pura gusse meun hai! Aur gusse mein wahi chis itna vyankar akaar le leta hai?

Rebecca ko khud nahi pata us kaley lambey se dandey ko ghurtey huye kab usne apney honth jiv se chat liya. Kab neecey ke honth ko daanto se dabakey un lataktey hiye tattey ko phooltey huye dekhne lagi. Ab woh tattey pura phool ke cricket ball ka akaar le chuka tha. Matlab unme kamras pura bhar chuka hoga. Par is old man me kya itna ras hoga? Biswas nahi ho raha bahu ko. Apney gorey stan ko ek hat se dabati hui aur ek hat kapre ke under daal chuki zamindar bahu ab jaise alag hi seema me pahuch gayi thi. Iswaqt jaise woh bhool gayi the ke kaun hai woh? Kahan se belong karti hai.... Bus jo tha woh yeh ke woh na chahkar bhi vasna ke gehre sagaar me doobti chali jaa rahi. Ek taraf yeh buddhey ka yeh haal aur udhar woh dono ke khel. Ufffffff kya is gaon ke Logo mein itna hawas bhara hua hai kya? Yah sarey Bangali log itne hawasi hote hai? Uffffff ek Bengali ka lund toh khud le chuki hai. Aaj dusrey lund ko dekh rahi zamindar bahu. Udhar ek mard gaon ki gori ko jhukakey peechey se zordar sambhog kar ta jaa raha aur idhar dusra admi woh sab chupke dekhte huye apna hawas ki aag khudse shaant kar raha aur in teeno se anjaan ek dusre desh ki khoobsurat Aurat sara ka sara nazara aankhon se dekh rahi aur under se aur hawas ki kam sagaar me doobti jaa rahi. Aur jitna doob rahi... Utna bhookh pyas badta jaa raha. Deemag majboor kar raha ajeeb ajeeb drisshya sochne ko. Na chahtey huye bhi aise aise iccha jaag rahi ke shayad Rebecca kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti kabhi.

Udhar dusri aurat bhi apni yoni me paraye mard ka lund lete huye maza lene me khoyi hui thi. Woh lhud abhitak kunwari hai par usse jo mard chod raha hai  woh shadisudha hai aur bacche ka baap bhi hai. Yeh baat is aurat ko bhi pata hai. Par usse thoda bhi farak mahi parta usey. Kyunki usey us mard ke mardaani aur us lund se matlab hai. Kayi samay se yeh dono ek dusre ko maza dete aa rahe hai. Khaas kar ke sukhi ki biwi baccha dene ke baad se toh  aur zordar tarike se yeh badh gaya hai. Jo sukh biwi se nahi milta, woh is Aurat ko chodkey pura kar leta hai sukhi. Lekin aaj ki baat thoda alag hai. Aaj kuch zyada hi josh me aa gaya hai woh. Jabse vola se usko pata chala hai le us aram haveli ki nayi malkin aur zamindar bahurani apni hi naukrani ke sang kya kya kar chuki hai. Tabse toh lund pagal ho gaya hai. Ek toh aisi khoobsurat naari, upar se videshi, upar se woh yovan.... Aur uske upar aisi khatarnak kamukta. Sabkuch deemag me ghoom raha hai uske. Aur us chakkar me lund zordar tarike se chod raha hai Gaon ki is aurat phuli ko. Phuli bhi soch rahi hogi ke aaj kya ho gaya is harami ko? Aaj toh jaise alag josh me aa gaya hai yeh. Ab usko thodi pata ke yeh aur vola subah lund hilate huye kya kya discuss kar tahe thei. Aur kisko lekey?

Kitna ajeeb paristhiti aa paida ho gaya tha. Kitna kamuk tha yeh pal! Jisko sochkey sukhi us phuli ko zordar thukai kar raha tha..... Woh shakshat khud majud thi wahaan! Aur chupke sab dekh bhi rahi thi! Upar se ek aur insaan bhi yeh wab dekhkey lund ko hila raha tha!


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Raat ka sannata. Khuli khidki se chand dikh raha hai. Rebecca khidki ke taraf pata nhi kabse dekhi jaa rahi. Dusri taraf Tarun gehri neend me so raha hai. Aaj bahut hi thak gaya tha woh. Isliye jab Rebecca khud apni uttejana mitane uske paas ayi toh Tarun ko mana karna para. Aaj bilkul bhi mood nahi tha uska. Rebecca's ne bhi zyada zor nahi diya. Woh hhi samajhti hai husband ke problems ko. Lekin Tarun ko pata bhi nhi chala ke aaj uski biwi kitni khatarnak bhookhi pyasi thi. Aaj woh kya kya drishya dekh chuki thi. Aaj uskw deemag me kya kya chal raha tha. Yeh sab kuch jaan nahi paya woh. Aur bus bistar pe jatey hi so gaya.

Par uski better half ke aankhon se need gayab thi. Aur neend ayegi bhi kaise? Jo vyankar sab drisshya ke shakshi woh aaj hui thi usse nikal pana asamvab hai. Ufffff is gaon ke har ek insaan kya itne hawasi hote hai kya? Ek taraf Tarun ke vansh ke log. Khas karkey woh jitendranath jisne naa janey kitne dushkarm kiye hongey. Naa jane kitney aurton ke sath uska yon samvandh rehe chuka hai. Aur jo sabse badi baat Rebecca bahu ko har waqt uttejit kar deti woh yeh hai ke jis haveli mein woh roz din raat gujarti hai yeh haveli hi banaya gaya tha jism ki bhookh mitaney ke liye. Yeh Aram haveli us jitendranath ke aish ki jagah thi. Naa jane kya kya kiya hoga us shaitan ne is haveli mein. Tarun ne bola tha ke woh apne aiyash dosto ko bhi le ata tha aur maza karta tha. Ufffff pata nahi sarey dost milkar kya kya karte thei is haveli mein.

Kahin sab milkey apne apney private part se ek hi aurat ka toh ijjat nahi lete thei? Uffffff kya pata? Shayad yeh bhi kiya hoga. Sarey milkey ek hi khoobsurat aurat ke sath sambhog. Ufffff pata nahi kaise samhalti thi woh aurtein un hawasi darindo ko. Ek taraf yeh zamindar gharaney ke log.... Aur dusri taraf gaon ke baaki log. Woh bhi kuch kam nahi. Uffffff us kanta ka pati se lekar woh admi jo aaj jungle me maza le raha tha sabke sab hawasi hai. Yahan tak ke gaon ka bhikari tak bhi!

Us vikari ka khayal deemag me ate hi Rebecca haise apne aap aur uttejit ho gayi. Pata nahi kyun? Ek zamindar gharane ki asadharan sundari bahurani hokar bhi ek mamuli badsoorat ghinoney buddhey vikari ka khayal atey hi tan badan pe kyu aag jaal uthi? Samajh nahi payi bahu. Bus yeh mehsoos kiya ke us vikari ka chehra aur harkat jaise hi deemag me aya... Turant neeche kuch hobne lag gaya uske. Jaise ek mard ka man aur tan chanchal ho jata hai kisi sundari aurat ko dekhkar, waise hi Rebecca bhi ho rahi thi. Par kyun? Ek ghatiya ghinoni shakal wale mamuli vikari ko sochke hi kyun aisa hua? Jawab malum nahi usko. Halaki us buddhey ke liye koi aur feeling nahi jaaga hai uske man me. Bus aaj ho jarkat usne kiya tha jungle me... Woh soch soch ke bahurani ki halat kharab ho rahi hai. Bulkul jaise uswaqt ho rahi thi.

Rebecca ke aankhon ke samne firse aa jata hai woh sab scene. Khaas karkey chup chup ke dekhta hua ek naatey dubla patla buddhey ka ashleel harkat. Ek lamba mota kalaa naag gusse se pura khada hai aur ska malik zor zor se usko ghis raha. Neeche latakte huye 2 andey bhi agey peeche ho rahe. Hawas me doobey un 3 praani ko pata bbi mahi ke sara ka sara scene is zameen ke malkin khud dekh rahi. Sirf dekh nahi rahi, balki woh bhi unki tarah hi hawas me doob ke tair rahi hai. Apney aankhon ke samney aisi vyanak sab dekhke uska mann kuch bole na boley deemag bahut kuch bol raha hai usey. Jaise woh anjaan admi ko us aurat ko dhakka deta hua dekh bahurani ka deemag use bol rha tha ke agar woh bhi wahan hoti toh kaisa hota? Agar achanak woh jakar unko rangey haat pakar le toh kaisa nazara hoga? Khudko bachaney ke liye pair pakar ke maafi mangegey? Ya ghinona kuch kar dengey? Waise bhi kaunsa sharif hai woh admi? Khudko bachane ke liye kuch bhi karega. Shaitan kahin ka. Lekin yahi baat ke liye toh Rebecca under hi under aur zyada uttejit ho rahi. Ek taraf uska pati jo ek accha insan hai..... Dusri taraf yeh admi jo vola ke sath milkey lund hilata hai, fir gaon ki kisi aurat ke sath sex karta hai..... Harami kahin ka! Par jaise woh us aurat ke sath wild sex kar raha..... Jaise us aurat ke baalon ko pakarkey usko ghodi banakey peechey se dhakka de raha, jaise ub dhakko se us aurat ko charam sukh mil raha... Yahi batein tob aur akarshit kar rahi Rebecca bahu ko.

Aur dusri taraf ek aur Ghatiya admi. Jo umar me us admi se bahut bada hai.. Baap ke umar ka. Jitna badsoorat utna hi ganda. Kahan woh lamba admi aur kahan yeh nataa admi.... 5 foot ka hoga bhi ke nahi pata nahi bahu ko. Aisa ek buddha vikari chupkey un dono mard aurat ko milan karta dekh apney hatiyar se khel raha. Heightme shayad woh bahut hi kam hoga par hatiyar ke mamley me wk vikari hokad bhi acchey badey ghar ke mardo ko haraa de. Haat me ganda kala lekin shandar siza ka pee pipe pakar ke hilata ja raha. Sgayad poti ke umar ke ladki ko aisehalata me dekhke lund se khelne me khoya hua vikari. Ahhhhhhhhh ek pal toh gussa aya tha Rebecca ko par fir pata nahi kya ho gaya usey. Us vikariko dekhte huye naa chahte huye bhi woh khud bhi ganda sochne pe majboor ho gayi. Firse deemag me ajeebsi iccha jagney lagi. Deemag jaise bol raha ho - dekha us private part ko? Ek mamuli beggar ka kaise yeh ho sakta? How is it possible? Kya Bangal ke har mard me hawas kut kut ke vhara hai kya? Uffffffff..... Kab se pervert hilata hi jaa raha lekin kuch nikal nahi raha. Jab jab woh chamri peeche khisak jata hai tab tab woh ganda lal mundi bahar aa jatahai..... Uffffff woh dekhkey kyun muh me paani aa raha hai? Ummmmmmm sshhhhhhhh kya  cock hai Rebecca dekh....... Neechey ke woh balls dekh.... Kaise ful gaye hai....... Ufffff na jaane kitna jama hoga soch! ...... Uffff fucking bustard!

Lambey lambey nakhun wali ek gori khoobsurat lamba haat jaise raat ke sannatey mein apne palang pe soye huye apni yoni se khel raha hai, tab bhi aise hi apney private area ke aas paas ghum rahe thei. Aur dusra haat khudke hi boobs press kar rahe thei. Udhar woh gaon ki aurat ka bhi bura haal tha. Woh lamba admi usko aise zordaar ek ek dhakka dene laga ke ek ek dhakkey se us aurat ke muh se cheekh nikalne lagi aur dard se chehra bigad gaya. Lekin woh admi ruka nahi. Man me ganda khayal aur lalach milkey uako insaan se jaise darinda bana dala tha tabtak. Udhar biwi baccha hone ke baad se utna paas aney nahi deti, dusri taraf gaon ki nayi bahuraani ka yovan, upar se us firangi bahu ka apne hi daasi ke sath sambandh... Sabkuch ek sath mix hokar usko jaise hawasi sach me Danav bana diya tha. Deemag me apne dost vola aur uski malkin ka nanga chipka hua badan imagine karkey lund toh jaise choot ke under loha ban gaya tha. Pussy rubbing upar se aur help kar raha tha isme. Ajeeb sa gussa aa raha tha Sukhdev ko aurat jaat par. Vasna jab charam seema pe pahuch jaye toh shayad aisa hi hota hai. Apne gain ki is gori ke upar sara ka sara gussa nikalne laga tha woh.

Tarun ko pata bhi nahi chala kab ek nangi gori taang uske kamar ke upar aa gaya tha. Baju me leti hui Uski patni aaj itna hawasi ho gayi thi ke hawws ke nashe me kab usne apna night dress upar karkey apna neeche ka part nanga kar doya tha shayad usey bhi nahi malum. Deemag me woh sab past ke scenes aur present me uska effect ufffff! Sachme is Haveli me kuch toh baat hai. Sexy hawasi toh woh by born thi. Lekin itna vyankar wala vasna toh khud bhi kabhi feel mahi kiya tha. Modern zindagi se dur is Gaon ke vatavaran me jaise ajeeb sa ek nasha chupa hua hai. Jo tan badan me aag laga deti. Upar se is haveli ka jaadu. Aur upar is gaon ke logon ke karnaamey.

Gulabi yoni ko pagalo ki tarah rubb karte huye ek haat se pillow pakar ke siskari nikal rahi thi bahurani. Middle finger ko pura ka pura geeli ched me dalkey under bahar karte huye hawasi nigahon se pati ko ghur rahi thi. Jee toh kar raha tha abhi akraman kardey pati ke upar kisi sherni ki tarah. Pant se lund nikal ke is choot me daldey.... Lekin kisi tarah khud ko rok rahi thi woh. Bechara Tarun aaj kal itna mehnat karta hai ke rest ka mauka nahi milta. Bus raat ko sokar shanti milta hai. Isliye pati ko bina jagaye khudke sath khelne lagi Rebecca. Lekin hawas kya itna asaani se kam hota hai? Ekbar deemag pe Chad jaye toh usse peecha churana lagbhag namumkin hota hai. Wahi ho raha Aram Haveli ke bahurani ke sath. Jab se pati ka haat pakar ke is anjaan desh me ayi hai tabse ek badlav ana shuru hua jo ab khud bhi mehsoos karti hai. Aur yeh badlav Rebecca pasand karne lagi hai. Ek nayi aurat banti jaa rahi hai woh. Us puraney foreigner Rebecca ke skin se nikal ke ek sampurn nayi naari ban rahi hai woh. Bangal ki zamindar bahurani. Aur under se ek bhookhi haseena jisko ab Lund ka nasha chadney laga hai. Mard ke sharir us ek hissey ke liye uske dil me toh nahi lekin deemag me advut akarshan jaag utha hai.



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Bar bar deemag me yahi ghoom raha hai ke pata nahi woh admi is waqt kya kar raha hoga? Agar shadisudha hoga toh Shayad is waqt zarur apni patni ke sath bistar garam kar raha hoga. Biwi ke under woh lamba danda dalkey usko maza de raha hoga jaise tab us ladki ko de raha tha harami. Aur woh dusra harami... That old fucking pervert!! Ufffff....... Is umar me bhi itna jama hua tha usme? Rebecca ko yaad aa gaya woh nazara. Jab ek vikari ke lund se tezi se safed gada kamras tezi se nikal ke neechey patto pe girne laga. Ek haat se tree ko pakadkey dusre haat se lund ko masalte huye aakhirkar uske under ka aag bahaar aa hi gaya. Pata nahi kitne samay se jama hua tha woh ras us buddhey me. Ufff itna sara nikal raha tha ke woh buddha vikari  pura kaapne lag gaya tha. Uske pair kaap rahe thei. Shayad itna kamsukh samhal nhi paa taha tha woh. Lund jitna peechey agey kar raha tha utna fach fach karkey nikal raha safed gada ras!

Udhar dusri taraf bhi kuch aisa hi nazara tha. Us lambey admi ke tango ke paas baithi woh aurat muh hila hila ke us private part ko chus rahi thi aur woh mard kamuk dard se tadaotey huye us aurat ke sar pe hat rakhkey maza le raha tha. Ek time ke baad toh woh admi is aurat ka muh pakarkey bahut hi ghinone tarikey se kamar hilane laga. Ufffff jaise woh aurat nahi... Koi lund Ko shant karne ka saman ho. Uffff kitna ghinona nazara tha.

Waise toh Rebecca khud ek aurat hai. Par us samay ek aurat ko aise bus sex toy ki tarah istemal hota dekh gussa ya dukh toh dur ki baat hai.... Balki woh chah rahi thi woh admi aur zor se muh me daley apna auzar. Galey tak lund dalkey apna hawas mitaye. Hawas ke chakkar me toh rebecca ekbar us aurat ke jagah khudko hi imagine kar liya. Un golden zulfon ko mutthi me pakra hua ek shaitan lofar mard aur uska lund pura ka pura ek firangi aurat ke muh ke under......!!

Sochte hi biklul kaap uthi thi Rebecca raani Jaise pati ke baju me soye huye ab kaap rahi. Uffffff khud hi apni Pussy sehla rahi hai... Par jaise lag raha hai yeh uska haat naa ho... Koi aur hi uake yoni se khel raha. Kya maza aa raha hai usey. Rebecca aur sahen nahi kar pati. Palang pe baithkey khudka night dress pura utarkey neechey fek deti hai. Ab woh puri tarah nangi ho chuki hai. Jism pe bus Mangal sutra aur haaton me chudiyan. Wph mudkey ekbar apne pyare Tarun ko dekhti hai. Gehri neend me soya hua. Fir woh khidki ke taraf dekhti hai. Chand ki roshni se ghar me ujala hai. Rebecca uthkar khadi ho jati hai aur chaltey huye deewar pe tangey mirror ke paas ati hai. Chand ke roshni me ek ajeeb sa Horror environment bana hua hai. Isme khudko mirror me us halat me dekhke Rebecca jaise khud ke liye hi lalch ho jaati hai. Yeh asadharan yovan, yeh Tan, yeh uttejna aur khudko ek Bengali Ghar ki shadisudha bahu ke roop me aise halat me dekhna ufffffffff!! Neechey firse gudgudi shuru ho gayi. Apney bhaari latkey huye stan me se ek ko pakar ke mirror me dekhte huye usko round round circle ke press karne lagti hai. Apne liye aisa lalach! Kabhi feel na kiya ho jaise.

Kuch der tak khudko ghoorke ke baad woh khidki ke paas aa jati hai. Bahar sabkuch shaant hai. Bus kabhi kabhi fox ki auuuuuuu awaz aa rahi. Nariyel ke pedh ke pattey hawa se hil rahe. Hawa khidki se under bhi aa rahe aur zamindar bahu ke sunehre zulfon ko udaa rahe. Ek ajeeb sa nasha hai is raat me jaise. Tan badan me yeh thandi hawa jaise aur aag laga rahi hai. Bar bar kuch ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha hai under. Lekin woh kya hai Rebecca khud nahi janti. Is haveli ke aaspaas ka mazara aur tarun ke vasnh ke logon ka ateet jaise uske under ek alag hi sahas de rahi hai. Sahaas kuch alag karne ki, sahaas kuch galat karne ki. Ek naya badmashi karne ki. Rebecca ke dil me tabhi ek khayal aya. Kyu na aise halat me kamrey se bahar nikla jaye? Ufffff nirbastra hokar apne kamre me rehna aur kamrey ke bahaar ghumne me farak hai. Aur yahi farak abhi iswaqt bahu ko mehsoos karna hai. Khudko woh rok nahi pati aise kuch karne se aur wahi karti hai woh. Udhar soye huye Pati ko pata bhi nahi chalta ke uski biwi uske baju me hi nahi balki kamrey se bahaar chali gayi hai. Bus akela hai woh.

Ahhhh varandah me kitni sundar hawa chal rahi. Firangan khoobsurat zamindar bahu ke sarey sunehri hawa me udne lagey aur isse Rebecca kaap uthi. Thandi se ya fir apni is harkat se? Pata nahi usey. Par accha lag raha hai use aisa karkey. Sunsaan is andheri raat me jahan charo taraf ek shanti aur sannata hai aise mahol me is halat me bahaar akar under ki uttejna jaise barti hi jaa rahi. Thodi der varandah me khadi hokar bahaar ka prakriti ka raspan karti hai Rebecca. Fir ek aur khayal man me ata hai uskey. Kyun na aise hi neeche jaya jaye? Aur wahan jakar kyuna apne ghar me kam karne walo ke naukar naukrani ke khidki ke bahar se chup chup ke dekha jaye. Kya pata woh vola apni wife ke sath is madhur raat me kuch naughty kar raha ho. 

Ufffff kitni badmash ho gayi hoon main..... Dusro ke aise kamuk pal ke sakshi hone ka nasha char gaya kya mujhme? Khudke upar has deti hai zamindar bahu. Lekin yeh khayal aney kw bad se under ka lalach ko control nahi kar paa rahi woh. Isliye apni marzi ka karte huye woh sirion se neeche chali jaati hai us halat me hi. Zindagi me pehlibaar aisa kuch karte huye jaise ek darr sa lag raha tha utna hi uttejna aur thrill bhi mehsooa kar rahi thi Rebecca. Khidki se ati hui chand ki jadui roshni se sidiyan aur neechey ka varandah ujala se bhara hua tha isliye aram se sabkuch dekh paa rahi thi bahurani. Woh neechey akar ruk jaati hai. Rebecca ka consciousness usko rok kar ekbar bolta hai ke aisa nahi karna chahiye... Usey laut jana chahiye par jab under vasna kut kut ke bharta jaa raha ho aur lalach bhi apna khel khelne lag jaye tab shayad acchai burai ka ved bhool jata hai insaan. Rebecca firse chalne lagi. Kayi sarey kamrey jo bandh parey hai unko cross karti hui woh agey badne lagi ek kamre ke taraf jahan 2 log majud hai. Dil dhak dhak kar raha hai Rebecca ka par woh rukti nahi. Ek samay woh us jagah pe pahuch jaati hai.

Yeh kya? Yeh log kya darwaza khol kar hi so jate hai kya? Aisa sawal Rebecca ke man me isliye aya kyunki kanta ke ghar ka darwaza locked nahi balki khula hua tha. Sirf under se laga hua tha jo shayad hawa ke karan thoda khul chuka tha. Aur us khule huye jagah se woh purana khatiya dekh paa rahi thi ghar ki Malkin. Sirf khatiya hi nahi, usme soye huye 2 logon ko bhi. Rebecca dekhte hi samajh gayi ke is kamrey me aaj kya hua hai. Shayad  kuch samay pehele tak bhi woh 2 soye huye pati patni ek dusre ke sath............!! Bus itna sochtey hi Rebecca ke under ki woh anjaana ehsaas dahek uthta hai aag ki tarah. Kaap utjti hai Bahurani. Deemag me firse kuch ashleel chitra aa jata hai. Aur lalach majboor karta hai malkin ko aaj pehlibar apni hi Dasi ke kamrey me janey ko.... Woh bhi aisi halat me.

Dono pati patni gehri neend me soye thei. Jab upar maley me malkin tadap rahi thi tab is kanta ka marad apna tadap mita raha tha apni joru ke zariye. Ajkal jaise uska bhookh bahut zyada badh gaya hai. Apni hi joru ko kabhibhi karney ka man karta hai. Deemag me bar bar woh nazara aa jata hai dono malkin daasi apas me liptey huye. Aur tab hawas se pagal ho jata hai kanta ka marad. Aaj bhi aisa hi haal tha uska. Isliye toh jab kanta rasoi ghar se wapas kamre me soney ko aayi thi tab achanak peechey se usko godi me uthake seedha khatiya me le gaya. Darwaza bandh karne ka samay bhi mahi diya joru ko. Aur fir wahi ajeeb khel shuru hua. Subah se sukhi ke sath sab discuss karne ke baad se vola babu ka man chanchal tha. Ufffffff sukhi ne baat toh sahi kahi hai. Aisi gazab ki chis jab aankhon ke itne paas ho toh kya ekbar bhi mauka nahi milega usko bina kapro ke dehne ka? Sali Kanta toh us aurat ke sath kya kya karti hai..... Toh kya pati ko thoda bhi haq nahi malkin ke us jism ko dekhne ka bhi? Kanta ka marad ka bhi man lalcha gaya tha apni nayi bahurani ke liye. Upar se sukhi ke sath milkey hilane me kya maza aata hai uffffff. Sukhi kamina sala na jane kitney aurton ke sath maza leta hai. Khudki biwi bhi kuch kam nahi par shayad woh bhi apne pati ka hawasi roop jhel nahi pati hogi. Ufffffff kamina jungli ho jata hai hawas mein. Lekin aise dost ke sath milkey plan banana hi padega kaise malkin ke sath.......... Uffffff sochkar hi kanta ke marad ka lungi tambu ban gaya tha.... Aur tabhi joru jaise hi kamrey me ayi thi... Bus..... Usko utha liya tha.

Lekin yeh Hawas bhi kya khel dikhata? Jis mallkin ko soch soch ke kanta ka pati kanta ko thok raha tha..... Aaj iswaqt woh khud uskey khatiye ke paas khadi thi! Woh bhi bina koi bastra ke! Malkin Rebecca ke under itna dussahaas kahan se aya use malum nahi par do nangey badan ko aju baju soya hua dekh lalcha gayi thi woh puri ki puri. Ekdum khatya ke baju me akar dono spye huye pati patni ko ghoor rahi thi woh... Aur woh nazar bilkul bhi sahi nahi tha. Ek nangey jism ko toh woh kayi bar dekh chuki thi yani Kanta ko. Lekin uska marad ko aaj puri tarah bina kapro ke dekh rahi thi Rebecca. Dur se dekhna aur ekdum paas se dekhne ka farak ab pata chal raha tha bahurani ko. Shaant gehri neend me soya hua ek naukar..... Aur us naukar ke kamar ke neeche usi tarah shant uska auzar. Saant roop me bhi kitna bada hai. Thodi der pehle tak yahi shant auzar pura gusse me is Kanta ke under  bahar ho raha tha...... Yeh khayal Rebecca ke maan me atey hi aur lalcha gayi woh. Apne haat ki unglion ko honthon ke paas ghumate huye us soye huye admi ke us gupt hisse ko aaj pehlibaar lalchi nigah se dekhne lagi. Ek patni ke samney hi uske pati ko ghoorna ufffffff kya pal hoga woh.

Deemag me tabhi aaa gaya ek aur lund..... Jo pura khada tha.... Aur usse fach fach karkey safed gada ras nikal raha tha...... Uffffff yeh kya aa raha hai bahurani ke deemag me jispar usey niyantran hi nahi! Usi ke karan toh bahurani Rebeca ka man machal raha hai.... Kamina ek buddha vikari ka itna bada ho kaise sakta hai? Woh layak nahi waise lund ka! Ufffffff gussa, hawas aur lalach ne aakhir ek zamindar bahurani ko majboor kar hi diya apne life ka sabse Ghatiya kaam karne ko. Kanta ko pata bhi na chala ke uskey body ke upar se ek safed lamba haat agey bar raha hai. Aur wph haat jakar ruka usikey marad ke guptang ke paas. Jo chis Kanta raani ko kuch der pehle tak chod rahi thi...... Ab woh chis is Haveli ke malkin ke haaton me tha!!

Ek firangi haat us desi auzar ko bahut hi slowly pakar ke hila raha tha. Us firangan aurat ke tez aankhein us mard me tiki hui thi. Thoda sa bhi hulchul dekhe toh bhaag jayegi. Par jab tak aisa nahi hota...... Tabtak toh badmashi ki jaa sakti hai. Is ghar me bahu hokar aney ke baad se Tarun babu ki biwi ne kabhi socha bhi mahi hoga ke kisi paraye mard ke taraf akarshit hogi ya fir kisi gair mard ke sambandh me ayegi..... Par halat ne aur hawas ne is kadar bahurani ko majboor kar diya ke apni hi dasi ke pati ke guptang se khelne lagi. Usey pata bhi nahi ke uska unconscious mind ussey kya karwa raha hai. Kisi aur hi lund ko yaad karti hui kisi aur ka hi woh.... Uffffff!! Yeh sab woh apne pati ke lund ke sath bhi kar sakti thi par uske deemag me iswaqt pati ke lund se zyada ek gair mard ka lund hi zyada important tha. Dekhte hi dekhte soya hua lund ka akaar badalne laga. Waise toh biwi ko chodne ke sulh se woh mard aram se gehri neend me so raha tha par uska woh dono taango ke beech ka hissa ek naye haath ke sparsh se khud ba khud fulney lag gaya aur thodi hi der mein usne wahi akaar le liya jis roop me kanta ko santusht kar raha tha. Jo kaam bus ungli se pakar ke shuru kiya tha malkin ne... Ab usko haaton me pakar ke slowly karne lagi woh. Kanta ko malum bhi nahi padh raha tha ke uske suhaag ko ek dusri aurat aaj garam kar rahi thi. Pati ke us guptang ko acche se pakar paye isliye dusri side se pati ke paas jakar ghtno pe baithkey ek paraye mard ke khadey auzar ko galat nigah se ghur rahi bahurani. Hilane ke karan ab lund ka mundi chamri se pura bahaar aa gaya hai aur us topa ke ajubaju kamras abhibhi laga hua hai. Aur wahi lund ab neeli ankhon wali malkin ke chehre ke bilkul samney hai!

Bahut man lalcha raha hai Nayi bahurani ka samney ka nazara dekhte huye. Kuch galat karne ka mann ho raha hai. Ekbar deemag me Tarun aa raha hai. Soch rahi hai ke yeh sab galat hai... Uska pati usse kiyna pyar karta hai, aur Rebecca bhi toh sirf usse hi pyar karti hai.... Par fir ek dusra kala andhera jaise deemag ko kabza kar raha hai. Majboor kar raha hai Rebecca ko kuch galat karney ko. Is hawasi Aram haveli ke under... Jahan ek samay Tarun ke purvaj ne pata nahi kya kya kiya hoga... Usi haveli majud aaj ki Rebecca apne hi Dasi ke marad ke guptang ko dekhte huye jiv se apni laal honthon ko chaat leti hai. Gehri neend me soya huya Kanta ka pati ab neend me hi mud jata hai. Yani apni biwi ke side se ghoom kar opposite side me mud jata hai jahan uski Malkin ghutno pe baithi hui thi. Aur ab Malkin ke aankhein badi ho jaati hai kyunki uskey gorey gulabi chehre ke bilkul samney ek kalaa lamba lund majud tha jo dheere dheere naram hota jaa raha tha. Lekin yahi toh nahi chahiye BAHURANI ko! Aisa lund naram nahi rehna chahiye kabhibhi! Hawas ke nashe me doobi hui Rebecca ke deemag me ab niyantran kho chuka tha aur Vasna ne us firangi Bahu ko aakhir majboor kar hi diya apna muh kholkey agey jaane ko. Apni aanlhein bandh kar liya Malkin ne aur khuley hiye muh aur agey le jane lagi jahan ek lamba kala paraye mard ka guptang bekarar hai hawas me ddobne ko!

Usi samay aur bhi 3 log bhi is andherey me jaage huye hai kahin. Samaj ke 3 varg se belong karte hai teeno. Ek ko toh rehene ko ghar bhi nahi.... Par woh bhi aaj nasee ke paas aankhon dekha un marad aurat ke khel dekhkey is umar me bhi lungi ke upar se hi apna ganda danda garam kar raha hai kahin baithkey.... Dusra mard jisne aaj hi jungle me ek gaon ki gori ke sath maza lene ke baad bhi shaant nahi ho paa raha... Deemag me abhi bhi Gaon ki nayi zamindar malkin ka yovan ghoom raha hai....... Aur teesra... Usi zamindar Haveli ka bada beta... Jo apni biwi ke nangi badan se chipak ke soya toh hai..... Par uske bhi deemag me apney bhai ke Dulhan ka roop yovan aur jism ghoom raha hai. Kam vasna aur Hawas ne in sabko ek ek karkey apna daas aur daasi bana hi liya aakhir. Yeh vasna desh ya jaati nahi dekhta.... Har ek insaan me jab ekbaar yeh jagah bana leta hai... Tab dheere dheere is jism ka malik woh ban jata hai. Aur Bangal ke is gaon ke in logo me ab Hawas ne puri tarah kabza kar chuka hai! 

Idhar jab yeh log vasna me doobkey apney guptang ko uttejit karne me khoye hai tab Udhar Aram haveli ke kisi ek kamre me itni raat ko koi ek jaagi hui Sundari videshi Yovati ke muh me tab tak kisi Paraye Desi mard ke Lund ka kuch hissa pravesh kar chuka hai....!!

Aakhir kar....Is Aram Haveli ki Nayi Malkin shayad is Haveli ki Yogya Bahuraani ban hi gayi.

CHAPTER 1 SAMAPT HUA

Doston Bahuraani 1 ka aakhri update aa gaya hai. Is aakhri update ko padhkey kaisa laga zarur batana. Part 2 abhi nahi likh paunga. Par asha karta hoon ke part 1 aap sabko

 accha laga hoga. 

[Mande]

UFFFF....what a description....first of all thank you for spending so much time and give such a block bluster update. Seems you have won the match by hitting a sixer... I must say your description was so good that all scenes seems were playing in front of eyes. As usual your painting of mental tussle, transformation of a newly wed to the world of lust with the help of external ingredients....awesome twist you are giving to this story....and ground is set to reverse the rule of Zaminder (male) enjoyment with their subordinates/maids/servants....possibly Rebecca will set the new rule that is to be a female torch bearer of Zaminder family and enjoy her life in fullest.

Lastly thank you for such a nice part-1 end and will eagerly wait for next part in the coming weeks. Let your creative juice starts flowing further to build new eroticism situations and we reader will eagerly wait for that gala opening....thank you once again. Bhalo Theko

[Avishek]

Ufffff Baban da! Yeh hota hai Shandaar Ending! Gazab!
Rebeca ke under ka yeh transformation jis tarah se aapne present kiya... Khas karke uske mental situations ko ufffff super hot. Jungle me vikari ka scene, un dono ladkey ladki ka intimate scene aur wahi pe malkin Rebecca ka present rehna, end me malkin ka lust ko bahaar le ana and the cliffhanger... Gazab! Thanks dada aisa super hot story likhne ke liye first of all. clp); yr):

[Baban]

UFFFF....what a description....first of all thank you for spending so much time and give such a block bluster update. Seems you have won the match by hitting a sixer... I must say your description was so good that all scenes seems were playing in front of eyes. As usual your painting of mental tussle, transformation of a newly wed to the world of lust with the help of external ingredients....awesome twist you are giving to this story....and ground is set to reverse the rule of Zaminder (male) enjoyment with their subordinates/maids/servants....possibly Rebecca will set the new rule that is to be a female torch bearer of Zaminder family and enjoy her life in fullest.

Lastly thank you for such a nice part-1 end and will eagerly wait for next part in the coming weeks. Let your creative juice starts flowing further to build new eroticism situations and we reader will eagerly wait for that gala opening....thank you once again. Bhalo Theko

What a brilliant comment dear! ♥️
Main pehle bhi bol chuka hoon aap har ek line ko bahut dhyan se read karkey sarey aspects samajhkey ek jabardast comment kartey ho. Rebecca ko aur is story ke mul theme ko aapne barabar samjha. Aaj ka Aisa badhiya commnet padhkey laga ke sach mein....... Jitna bhi samay diya is kahani ke peeche woh aaj safal hua.

Aap aur aap jaise jitney bhi readers ne comments kiya un sabko a big big thanks♥️

Baaki jo naye pathaak hai woh bhi padhkey apna feedback dena zarur.

Ufffff Baban da! Yeh hota hai Shandaar Ending! Gazab!
Rebeca ke under ka yeh transformation jis tarah se aapne present kiya... Khas karke uske mental situations ko ufffff super hot. Jungle me vikari ka scene, un dono ladkey ladki ka intimate scene aur wahi pe malkin Rebecca ka present rehna, end me malkin ka lust ko bahaar le ana and the cliffhanger... Gazab! Thanks dada aisa super hot story likhne ke liye first of all. clp); yr): 

Thank you very much dear❤
Jaankey khusi hui ke aakhri update accha laga. As i said ke abhi part2 nahi likh paunga par yeh wala kahani ka ending se agar sab khush ho toh koshish safal ho 

[Papai]

Uffff yeh kaise jagah pe akar ruk gaye Baban da! Khel shuru hone hi wala tha! Par ek tarah se yahi best samapti hogi chapter 1 ka. Super Hot update. Jis tarikey se ek ek part ko likha gaya hai chahey Bahurani ka mental conditionsl ho ya jungle ka ek ek pal bahut hi sexy tha. A Dick blasting update! So aakhir me Rebecca is vansh ki Bahurani ban hi gayi.

[Baban]

Uffff yeh kaise jagah pe akar ruk gaye Baban da! Khel shuru hone hi wala tha! Par ek tarah se yahi best samapti hogi chapter 1 ka. Super Hot update. Jis tarikey se ek ek part ko likha gaya hai chahey Bahurani ka mental conditionsl ho ya jungle ka ek ek pal bahut hi sexy tha. A Dick blasting update! So aakhir me Rebecca is vansh ki Bahurani ban hi gayi.

Told u all ke ending accha lage is hisab se likh raha hoon
Bilkul...... Aakhir firangi ladki Zamindar ghar ki BAHURANI ban hi gayi...... Yogya Bahurani 

[aamirhydkhan1]

वाह वाह ! उत्कृष्ट लेखन एवं विवरण !! यह केवल सेक्स के बारे में ही  नहीं है बल्कि प्रकृति, ग्रामीण सौंदर्य और संस्कृति, रेबेका के मानसिक संघर्ष आदि का भी आपने उत्कृष्ट वर्णन किया  है। आप एक अच्छे लेखक हैं। आपके पास कामुक भावनाओं का  उत्कृष्ट  फैक्टर है और आप जानते हैं कि इसे कब कहाँ और कितनी सूक्ष्मता के साथ मिश्रित करने की आवश्यकता है ... शाबाश !! आगे बढ़ते रहें और अपने लेखन के माध्यम से अपने पाठको और प्रशंसकों का मनोरंजन करते रहें।

[Baban]

वाह वाह ! उत्कृष्ट लेखन एवं विवरण !! यह केवल सेक्स के बारे में ही  नहीं है बल्कि प्रकृति, ग्रामीण सौंदर्य और संस्कृति, रेबेका के मानसिक संघर्ष आदि का भी आपने उत्कृष्ट वर्णन किया  है। आप एक अच्छे लेखक हैं। आपके पास कामुक भावनाओं का  उत्कृष्ट  फैक्टर है और आप जानते हैं कि इसे कब कहाँ और कितनी सूक्ष्मता के साथ मिश्रित करने की आवश्यकता है ... शाबाश !! आगे बढ़ते रहें और अपने लेखन के माध्यम से अपने पाठको और प्रशंसकों का मनोरंजन करते रहें।

Bahut bahut Dhanyabad mitra aise khoobsurat comment ke liye. Main mantaa hoon ke koi bhi erotic story sirf sex ke liye nahi likha jana chahiye..... Aaspaas ke samaj aur rehene wale insaano ke mental state ko bhi varnan karna zaruri hota. Zaruri nahi ke sabkuch exact realistic ho par kuch lines unko lekar bhi likhna uchit hai. Baaki characters ko lekar jitna erotic karna chaho karo...... Aur pathaako ka manoranjaan karte raho.

Meri yeh kahaani padhne ke liye firse dhanyabad ji.
Ho sakey toh mere baaki ke kahaniyon pe bhi nazar daliye. ❤

[aamirhydkhan1]

भाई , मैं बंगाली तो नहीं जानता . पर  प्रयास करूँगा हिंदी की कहानिया जरूर पढूं .  आपसे अनुरोध है बंगाली कहानियो का  हिंदी अनुवाद कर दो . अगर अपनी कहानी हिंदी  में लिखोगे तो ज्यादा पाठक मिलेंगे

[Papai]

Told u all ke ending accha lage is hisab se likh raha hoon
Bilkul...... Aakhir firangi ladki Zamindar ghar ki BAHURANI ban hi gayi...... Yogya Bahurani 

Superb Ending Dada clp);

[Baban]

भाई , मैं बंगाली तो नहीं जानता . पर  प्रयास करूँगा हिंदी की कहानिया जरूर पढूं .  आपसे अनुरोध है बंगाली कहानियो का  हिंदी अनुवाद कर दो . अगर अपनी कहानी हिंदी  में लिखोगे तो ज्यादा पाठक मिलेंगे

Aap mere Hindi stories hi padhey. Mere Bengali stories ke Hindi version hi hai woh. But with lot of changes. Aapko pasand ayega. Aur kaisa laga batana❤

Superb Ending Dada clp);

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[SMOD-P]

waiting

[Baban]

waiting

Waiting matlab? Story already end ho gaya hai. I mean chapter 1.
Abhi chapter 2 shuru nahi kar paunga. Ek tarah se yeh ek End hi samjho.

[The_Writer]

কিছু মনে করবেন না, আমি আপনার লেখা সব গল্প গুলো পড়েছি। বেশ লেখেন আপনি। তবে এই গল্প টাতে ঠিক সেই জিনিস টা পাচ্ছি না... আপনার আগের গল্প গুলো পড়লেই কেমন যেন পুরো শরীরে একটা আগুনের ছোয়াঁ লেগে যেত. কিন্তু এখন......

হতে পারে আমি হয়তো একটু বেশি আশা করছি।

যদি পারেন তাহলে প্লিজ সেই দিনের লেখার মতো কিছু একটা করুন।

(প্লিজ এটা ভাববেন না যে আমি আপনার লেখাটা নিয়ে খারাপ কিছু বলতে চাইছি। )

[Papai]

Gazab ki story thi Baban dada. Iska chapter 2 ka sochna zarur.

[Baban]

কিছু মনে করবেন না, আমি আপনার লেখা সব গল্প গুলো পড়েছি। বেশ লেখেন আপনি। তবে এই গল্প টাতে ঠিক সেই জিনিস টা পাচ্ছি না... আপনার আগের গল্প গুলো পড়লেই কেমন যেন পুরো শরীরে একটা আগুনের ছোয়াঁ লেগে যেত. কিন্তু এখন......

হতে পারে আমি হয়তো একটু বেশি আশা করছি।

যদি পারেন তাহলে প্লিজ সেই দিনের লেখার মতো কিছু একটা করুন।

(প্লিজ এটা ভাববেন না যে আমি আপনার লেখাটা নিয়ে খারাপ কিছু বলতে চাইছি। )

নানা আমি মোটেও খারাপ ভাবিনি। আমার পুরাতন লেখা যে আপনার পছন্দ হয়েছে জেনে উল্টে খুশিই হয়েছি। আসলে কি জানেন গল্প অভিনয় চলচ্চিত্র এইসবই হলো subjective. আপনার চোখে যেটা অতটাও ভালো নয় হয়তো অন্য কারো চোখে বেশ উত্তম আবার এর উল্টোটাও সম্ভব। পুরোটাই যে পড়ছে তার ওপর। আসলে পাঠক গল্পের মধ্যে কোথাও নিজের লুকানো ইচ্ছেটা খুঁজে পেতে চায়। সেটা পেলে সবচেয়ে ভালো লাগে। ধন্যবাদা গল্পটি পড়ার জন্য। আপনি চাইলে আমার আগের গল্পটা অর্থাৎ bhookh পড়ে দেখতে পারেন। ভালো লাগতে পারে।

Gazab ki story thi Baban dada. Iska chapter 2 ka sochna zarur.

Thnx again but abhi shayad nahi likh paunga. Ek tarah se dekha jaye toh yeh bhi ej Ending hi hai.

[Baban]

Jinhe bengali padhna ata hai aur har tarikey ki sexy stories pasand hai woh meri new bengali story ko read kae sakte hai. Its not a big story. Kuch hi updates me khatam karunga. But I think aap sabko accha lagega. Abhi hindi me likh nahi paunga isliye bola.

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