06-01-2023, 09:19 PM
Update do bhai. Mast story hai .
Adultery Jawaan Biwi
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06-01-2023, 09:19 PM
Update do bhai. Mast story hai .
07-01-2023, 06:11 PM
Mast update hae
07-01-2023, 07:54 PM
(This post was last modified: 07-01-2023, 07:57 PM by seansean007. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Karamchand aur Raghu ke beech jhamela ko 3-4 din beet chuke the. Ek din Karamchand kaam se jaldi ghar aa gaya. Woh lagbhag 5 baje ghar pahuncha. Ghar pahunchkar thoda der sofa par baithkar araam kiya aur dining table par rakhe paani ke bottle se paani peekar upar apne kamre mein chala gaya.
Kamre mein jab woh pahuncha to Garima wahaan nahin thi. Karamchand ko laga ki woh gym mein hogi kyunki uski dono gaadiyaan baahar parked thi. Woh thoda der kamre mein baith kar nahane chala gaya. Naha kar woh neeche gym ke paas gaya to gym khali tha. Woh upar waapas jaakar dusre kamro mein dekha jahan woh kabhi kabhi apne mood ke hisaab se rehti thi. Woh sabhi kamro mein dekha magar woh nahin thi. Dopahar ke iss waqt naukrani Shanta neeche apne kamre mein 2 ghante araam karti thi aur jab tak kuchh urgent na ho, na hi Garima aur kabhi kabhi agar Karamchand is waqt ghar par rahe dono use disturb nahin karte the. Garima ko ghar par na paakar Karamchand thode soch mein pad gaya aur apne kamre mein jaa kar ek bell bajaya. Kuchh second baad woh bell dubara bajakar kamre ke baahar seedhi ke paas khada tha ki tabhi Shanta kitchen ke peeche se ek kamre se hadbada kar nikli seedhiyon ke taraf aane lagi. Woh dining table tak pahunchi hi thi ki Karamchand usse puchha,"Shanta Garima kahin gayi hai kya? Kahin dikhai nahin de rahi hai" Shanta wahin khadi hokar jawaab di,"Nahin saahab maine to memsaahab ko kahin jaate hue dekha nahin" Karamchane yeh sunnkar puchha,"Tum kamre mein thi to kaise dekhti. Gaadi ke aane jaane ka awaaz suni ya nahin?" Karamchand Garima ki gaadi baahar dekh chuka tha phir bhi yeh sawaal yeh soch kar puchha ki shayad uski biwi Raghu ke saath uske gaadi mein kahin ghumne chali gayi hogi. Shanta yeh sunnkar thodi sochkar boli,"Haan saahab abhi thodi der pehle suna maine" Karamchand sang sang bola,"Are woh main aaya thoda der pehle. Usse pehle koi gaadi ke aane jaane ka awaaz suni ya nahin". Shanta phir sochlar boli,"Nahin saahab usse pehle to maine to koi gaadi ke aane jaane ka awaaz nahin suna" Karamchand yeh sunnkar puchha,"Tum earphone laga kar to nahin thi mere aane se pehle?" Shanta turant boli,"nahin saahab main earphone laga kar nahin thi. Agar koi gaadi aata jaata to sunai deta". Karamchand yeh sunnkar bola,"Achha theek hai. Pata nahin Garima kahan gayab ho gayi, ajeeb baat hai". Yeh bolkar Karamchand waapas jaane ke liye ghuma to Shanta boli,"Saahab iss waqt memsaahab kabhi kabhi chhat par rehti hai. Shayad chhat par ho memsaahab". Karamchand yeh sunnkar bola,"Are haan. Garima kabhi kabhi shaam mein chhat par baithti hai. Theek hai tum jao". Shanta yeh sunnkar puchhi,"Saahab chai ya coffee bana du kya?" Karamchand yeh sunnkar bola,"Nahin abhi nahin. Tum jaakar araam karo, main chhat par dekhta hoon". Shanta yeh sunnkar sir sehmati mein hilati huyi boli,"Theek hai saahab".Karamchand bolkar wahan se chala gaya aur Karamchand ko jaata dekh Shanta bhi apne kamre mein chali gayi. Karamchand chhat par gaya to chhat ka darwaza bandh tha aur udhar se light music ki awaaz aa rahi thi. Woh darwaza ko khola to khul gaya. Darwaza bas aese hi laga hua tha, locked nahin tha. Darwaza khol kar woh chhat par gaya to dekha ki darwaze ke daaye taraf swimming pool ke paas Garima ek poolside lounger par leti huyi thi. Uski chehre par facial laga hua tha aur ankhon par cucumber slice rakha hua tha. Woh ek thigh high robe pehni huyi thi jisme uski gori taang halke dhoop mein chamak rahi thi. Lounger ke paas ek chhota sa table rakha hua tha jispar Garima ki mobile, airpod, ek beer ka can aur ash tray rakha hua tha. Beer ka can khula hua tha aur ash tray mein cigarette ka ek bud tha. Ashtray ke bagal mein ek cigarette ka packet aur lighter rakha hua tha. Karamchand yeh sab dekhne ke baad aasmaan ke taraf dekhne laga. Garmi ka din tha magar aas paas pura khula aur ped paudha hone ke kaaran thandi hawa beh rahi thi. Suraj ki halki dhoop aur saath mein hawa achha lag raha tha. Chhat par music system tha jispar halka music baj raha tha. Kul dekha jaye to mahaul bahot hi sukun bhara tha. Karamchand waapas Garima ke taraf dekha aur use disturb kiye bina table par rakha beer can uthaya to dekh ki usme thoda beer abhi bhi baaki tha. Woh use uthakar chup chap swimming pool ke paas jaakar apna payjama ko upar karke pool ke kinare paani mein pair latka kar baith gaya. Woh thodi der baitha raha uske baad use awaaz sunai diya,"Karam tum kab aaye? Kya baat hai aaj bahot jaldi aa gaye?" Karamchand yeh sunnkar peeche ghumkar dekha to Garima apni dono aankhon se cucumber ka slice hatakar use dekh rahi thi. Karamchand jawaab diya,"Hi darling. Bas thodi der pehle hi aaya. Woh aaj kuchh important kaam nahin tha aur mann bhi nahin ho raha tha to socha ghar hi chala jaun. Aakar dekha tum neeche nahin thi to samajh gaya tum upar hogi to upar aa gaya" Garima yeh sunnkar puchhi,"Hmm. Tabiyat to theek hai tumhara?" Karamchand yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"Ohh yes darling, I am absolutely fine." Garima yeh sunnkar boli,"Hmm." phir woh complaint wali tone mein boli,"Aese tumne mera beer kyun uthaya? Jaakar bar se dusra nahin le sakte the? Haan?" Karamchand yeh sunnkar bola,"Ohh I am sorry darling. Mujhe laga tum aur nahin piyogi. Ruko main tumhare liye dusra laa deta hoon" Yeh bolkar Karamchand uthne hi wala tha ki Garima boli,"Rehne do koi zarurat nahin hai. Abhi mujhe nahin peena hai". Karamchand waapas relax hokar baithte hue bola,"Ok darling". Karamchand yeh bola hi tha ki Garima waapas cucumber ko apni aankhon par rakhkar relax karne lagi. Thodi der baad Karamchand ka dhyaan peeche gaya to dekha Garima uthkar chhat ke dusre side bane ek ghar ke taraf jaane lagi. Thodi der baad woh baahar aayi to uski chehre se facial saaf ho chuki thi. Uski haath mein ek towel tha. Karamchand ka nazar uski biwi ke taraf hi tha. Garima aakar towel ko lounger ke headrest ke taraf rakhi aur phir swimming pool yaani Karamchand ke taraf ghumkar apni robe ka lace kholne lagi. Robe ka lace kholkar woh use bhi lounger ke headrest le taraf rakh di. Karamchand apni khoobsurat, modern aur jawaan biwi ko ab sirf bikini pehne dekh raha tha. Bikini mein uski lagbhag aadhi chunchiyan baahar thi aur pahad ke jaisi uthi huyi thi. Agle pal Garima pool ke stair se pool mein chali gayi aur swimming karne lagi. Karamchand use swimming karte hue dekhne laga. Thodi der swimming ke baad woh pool ke kinare jahan Karamchand baitha hua tha wahan aakar boli,"Karam can you please prepare and get my hookah from the bar? and also please get my skincare cream from the spa". Karamchand muskurate hue bola,"Sure darling. Anything else?" Garima muskurati huyi boli,"Nothing else. Haan tumko beer peena ho to beer le lena." Karamchand muskurate hue bola,"Tumhare liye bhi le lunga ek can". Garima yeh sunnkar muskurati huyi boli,"No mujhe abhi nahin peena hai. I will just take a sip or two from yours. Now please go" Karamchand uthkar chala gaya wahin Garima waapas swim karne lagi. Kuchh der baad Karamchand ek haath mein Garima ka hookah aur dusre haath mein uski skincare cream aur ek beer ka can lekar aaya. Usko dekhkar Garima swim karti huyi pool ke kinare aakar boli,"Cream ko table par rakh do and bring that hookah here". Karamchand hookah lekar pool ke kinare gaya aur hookah ko rakhkar baithkar beer can khola to Garima boli,"Mujhe thoda peene do". Karamchand beer ka can Garima ko de diya. Woh do sip lekar use waapas de di. Kuchh seconds baad woh hookah ko inhale karke Karamchand ke taraf dhuaan exhale kar di. Karamchand yeh dekhkar haath se dhyaan bhagate hue bola,"Offo Garima tum bhi na". Garima yeh sunnkar khilkhilane lagi," hehehe". Phir woh ek baar aur hookah peekar dhuan dusri taraf chhodkar Karamchand se boli,"Karam why don't you also join in the pool. Change and get in the pool. Saath mein swim aur relax karne mein mazaa aayega". Karamchand yeh sunnkar beer ka ek sip lekar bola,"Nahin Garima main aakar naha chuka hoon". Yeh sunnkar Garima use gusse se dekhi. Garima ka expression badalte dekh Karamchand thoda ghabra gaya. Isse pehle ki woh kuchh bolta Garima gusse wali expression ae boli,"Toh? Nahane wale log swimming nahin karte kya?" Karamchand safai dete hue pyaar se bola,"Darling mera matlab tha ki main to abhi abhi nahaya hoon. Phir paani mein kya jaana". Garima yeh sunnkar gusse se boli,"What nonsense! Garmi ka mausam hai aur garmi mein thoda der swimming kar loge to kya hoga. Aur swimming is not taking bath okay? Swimming is an exercise, a recreational activity which helps in keeping fit and relaxing" Karamchand chup chap beer ka sip liye Garima ka baat sunn raha tha. Garima aage boli,"Pata nahin exercise chahe kisi bhi form mein ho usse tum kyun bhagte ho. Ek dum health ka khyaal nahin rehta hai tumhe." Karamchand baat ko khatam karne ke liye swim karne ke liye "haan" kehne ka soch hi raha tha ki tabhi Garima aage boli,"Khair tumhari marzi. Meri koi bhi baat nahin mante ho tum bhale hi tumhare fayeda ka baat ho". Garima yeh bolkar hookah peene lagi to Karamchand bola,"Achha darling main abhi change karke aata hoon phir saath...." Karamchand itna bola hi tha ki tabhi Garima hookah ka dhuaan chhor kar Karamchand ka baat khatam hone se pehle boli,"Ab koi zarurat nahin hai. Mera mood kharab kar diye tum". Garima yeh bolkar waapas swim karne lagi. Karamchand chup chap baitha beer peeta raha. Kuchh seconds baad Garima waapas akar phir se hookah peene lagi. Teen chaar baar woh hookah peene ke baad thodi swimming aur karke woh pool se nikal gayi. Karamchand Garima ko dekhne laga. Badan mein paani lagne se uski gori chikni badan bahot khoobsurat lag rahi thi. Garima puri bikini model lag rahi thi. Karamchand side se Garima ko dekh raha tha. Uski saamne ki taraf pahaad jaisi ubhri chunchiyan, uske neeche pura sapaat pet aur uske neeche pichhe ke taraf ubhri huyi badi gaand jo bikini Bottom mein aadhi hi dhanki huyi thi. Woh towel lekar apna badan ponchhi aur baal mein towel bandh kar Karamchand ke taraf dekh kar boli,"Karam please meri body par cream laga do na and also bring that hookah here". Karamchand muskurate hue bola,"Sure darling" aur yeh bolkar woh beer ka akhiri sip lekar hookah uthakar Garima ke bagal wale table par rakh diya. Tab tak Garima bikini mein hi waapas inclined lounge par let gayi thi aur apna mobile check karne lagi. Woh phir airpods nikalkar kaan mein lagati huyi boli,"Karam start with my legs please" Karamchand lounge par hi Garima ke pair ke paas baith gaya aur cream lekar uski dayi pair par lagane laga. Garima apni airpods kaan mein lagane ke baad mobile lekar kuchh type ki aur phir mobile table par rakhkar hookah ka pipe pakad kar ek baar hookah peekar dhuaan chhori. Karamchand ka nazar mobile par pada to screen par call ka frame tha aur Raghu likha hua tha. Agle pal Garima muskurati huyi boli,"Hello Raghu." Udhar se kuchh awaaz aane ke baad Garima muskurati huyi boli,"Bas aese hi. Baithi huyi thi to sochi ki thoda baat kar lun. Tum kya kar rahe ho?"
08-01-2023, 10:28 AM
Looks like it's building up to an intense story, this is unlike you're previous one Anita in many ways but will give this some more time.
08-01-2023, 05:31 PM
बिल्कुल दिमाग उड़ाने वाला अपडेट!बेहद हॉट और कामुक कहानी।आपका रोमांटिक लेखन कामुकता से भरा है।
08-01-2023, 05:41 PM
What an excellent update! Absolutely thrilling and sizzling story!Your romantic writing is full of sensuality.
08-01-2023, 06:07 PM
(08-01-2023, 10:28 AM)Spidy1818 Wrote: Looks like it's building up to an intense story, this is unlike you're previous one Anita in many ways but will give this some more time. Thank you for the feedback. Really appreciate it. Readers involvement really makes the story lively and more fun, especially when they share their understanding of the characters and the story in general. Thanks again.
08-01-2023, 06:08 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-01-2023, 06:11 PM by seansean007. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
08-01-2023, 06:11 PM
Garima phir hookah peekar dhuaan chhorti huyi kuchh sunne ke baad ek ada se boli,"Shut up. Achha mood mein phone kar rahi hoon, mera mood kharab mat karo".
Karamchand Garima ki pair mein cream lagate hue use narazgi se dekhkar uski phone ke taraf ishara kiya to Garima apni mobile ke taraf dekh kar ishare se puch hi ki kya hua aur phir hookah smoke karke dhuaan chhorke phone mein boli,"Ok sunao". Karamchand agle pal dheere se bola,"Garima tum uss Raghu.... ". Karamchand itna bola hi tha ki Garima apni honthon par ungli rakhkar gusse se use dekhti huyi chup rehne ka ishara ki. Garima ka ishara dekhte hi Karamchand chup ho gaya aur uski pair mein cream lagate raha. Agle pal woh khilkhilane lagi,"Hehehe Raghu tum bhi na, hehehe". Karamchand apni biwi ko hasta hua dekhkar chup chap uski pair mein cream laga raha tha. Garima phir se hookah smoke karti huyi baat sunne lagi aur Karamchand ke taraf dekhkar apni baayi pair ke taraf aankhon se ishara ki. Agle pal Karamchand apne haath mein cream lekar Garima ki baayi pair mein lagane laga. Woh dekha ki uski biwi ke chehre par ab khushi thi. Woh muskurati huyi phir se hookah smoke karke khilkhilane lagi,"hehehe".Woh muskurati huyi Karamchand ko dekhi aur phir uske taraf hookah ke pipe karke ishare se puchhi ki kya woh bhi smoke karega. Karamchand na mein sir hilaya to woh phir se smoke karke phone mein kuchh sunnkar jawaab mein boli,"achha theek hai, baad mein baat karte hain. Bye, take care". Woh yeh bolkar muskurati huyi phone disconnect kar di. Karamchand yeh dekhkar bola,"Darling us gunde se baat karne ki kya zarurat thi. Tumhe pata hai uska mere saath jhamela hua hai". Garima muskurati huyi boli,"Come on Karam. Be a man. Tumhara usse jhamela hua hai to mujhe beech mein kyun ghaseet rahe ho. Yeh tum dono ki aapas ki baat hai. Aur aesa kaun sa bada jhamela ho gaya ki baat cheet hi bandh ho jaye. Tum bhi na. Mera pair ho gaya ab please meri abs par cream laga do". Garima yeh bolkar hookah peene lagi. Karamchand thoda aage khisak kar Garima ki thighs ke paas baith gaya aur uski pet par cream girakar use Garima ki sapaat chikni pet par malne laga aur malte hue bola,"Garima main tumhe beech mein ghaseet nahin raha bas bol raha hoon ki uss gunde se ab baat karne se kya hoga?" Garima yeh sunnkar Karamchand ko gusse se dekhne lagi. Woh ek pal ke liye use gusse se dekhne ke baad boli,"Ab main kisse baat karun ya na karun yeh bhi tumse puchhna padega kya? Haan?" Karamchand yeh sunnkar muskurate hue pyaar se bola,"Nahin darling. Maine aesa kab kaha. You are a free woman. Tumhara jisse marzi baat karo,jahan marzi ghumo, jo marzi karo. Main to bas iss gunde ke baare mein bol raha tha kyunki use to baat karne ki tameez bhi nahin hai. Tum suni nahin kaise uss din mujhe gandi gaali de raha tha". Garima yeh sunnkar hookah peekar dhuaan chhodne ke baad boli,"To woh kaun nahin deta hai aaj kal. Uske paise nahin doge to gusse mein to bolega hi woh." Garima aage boli,"Come on Karam behave like a man. Raghu ka tumse jhamela hua to woh to nahin bola mujhe ki uska tumhare saath jhamela hua hai to woh mujhse baat nahin karega. Yeh tum dono ke aapas ki baat hai aur ise waisa hi rehne do. Please don't drag me in between" Yeh bolkar Garima hookah ka pipe rakhkar pyaar se Karamchand ke chin ko pakad ke boli,"You are my sweet husband, so keep being one. Itna achha relax karne ke mood mein hoon, please don't spoil the fun." Phir woh lounger par ghumkar pet ke bal soti huyi boli,"Ab please meri back par cream lagao. Agar lagane ka mann nahin hai to yeh bhi bol do magar faltu ka baat karke mera mood kharab mat karo" Karamchand yeh sunnkar muskurate hue bola,"Nahin darling main laga deta hoon." Garima pet ke bal letkar peeche gardan ghuma kar Karamchand ko dekhkar boli,"Good boy" aur phir gardan side mein karke apne sir ke neeche dono haath rakhkar uspar sir rakhkar aankh bandh kar li. Karamchand Garima ki peeth par cream lagane ke baad uski dono pair mein lagaya aur phir uski badi naram gaand ka woh bhag jo bikini Bottom se baahar thi uss par lagane laga. Karamchand apni biwi ki naram badi se gaand ko hilte hue dekhne laga. Woh cream lagaakar jab uss par cream mal raha tha to uski badi gaand hil rahi thi. Karamchand thoda der cream lagaya to Garima aankh bandh ki huyi hi boli,"Thank you sweet hubby. Tum jaa sakte ho ab". Karamchand yeh sunnkar chhat se chala gaya. Lagbhag dedh ghante baad Garima ek robe pehni huyi bedroom mein aayi jahan Karamchand baitha hua news dekh raha tha. Karamchand usko dekhkar muskuraya to Garima bhi usko dekhkar muskurati huyi bed par chadh gayi. Garima upar chhat par hi shower karke apni baal dry karke dusra robe pehen kar neeche aayi thi isliye use aur kuchh karne ki zarurat nahin padi aur woh chup chap bed par chadh gayi. Karamchand Garima ke mangne se pehle hi uske taraf tv ka remote badhaya to Garima muskurati huyi boli,"Thank you". Garima phir ek series lagayi aur dono pati patni ek ghanta yeh dekhne ke baad neeche dinner karne chale gaye.
08-01-2023, 07:00 PM
09-01-2023, 07:43 PM
(05-01-2023, 09:37 PM)seansean007 Wrote: Thanks for the feedback. Really appreciate it. Can you please be more clear about the story being so and so and what is missing in the story or writing so far? The readers perspective is also important and it may help me understand if there is something I have missed. Thanks.If I could be honest here, I am yet to move on from the Anita Singh story. I don't know what is the reason to not continue it and starting a new story. You may have your own reasons and that is understandable. As much as you want our participation in reviewing your updates, the same goes to us that we expect the same thing from you. I'm not saying that you had not delivered what you are and still capable of in Anita Singh story. It is the exact reason why i feel something is missing in this story. About this story what I think about this as of now but I could be wrong as well. Say what you can but I feel there is something in garima which she feels about the Raghu. We can see her attitude, her rich and lavish lifestyle through her dressing and by talking style. But what it is that which makes her want to talk to Raghu even when she knows that he is Gunda and not of her status? He talks like a ruffian, stays like a ruffian and acts like a ruffian, as we had seen in previous updates that how Raghu wiped out the remains of juice from his mouth by his bare hands and how garima responded to that. We can clearly figure out about Raghu and the strata he comes from and the same about garima by reading that small scenario. Garima has an attitude but is it really true so that she has a good heart? Or she is attracted to raghu's attitude, his masochism and his daring attitude? Only the time will tell if garima lowers her standards and becomes the woman we have seen in your previous story and we will be able to find Anita in her or Garima stays where she is and raises the standard of Raghu to accept him as a whole. Other thing Please Sean, it's a request from your sincere reader and admirer to start Anita, to let us read her journey, the dance with those 5 raunchy males and her gangbang with them. Let us have pleasure to read Anita and hariya, Anita and jeetu, Anita and her two yaars "Raghu and dilavar.'
09-01-2023, 08:36 PM
Great story! Great writings
09-01-2023, 11:02 PM
(09-01-2023, 07:43 PM)Kinkpinkboy Wrote: If I could be honest here, I am yet to move on from the Anita Singh story. I don't know what is the reason to not continue it and starting a new story. You may have your own reasons and that is understandable. As much as you want our participation in reviewing your updates, the same goes to us that we expect the same thing from you. I'm not saying that you had not delivered what you are and still capable of in Anita Singh story. It is the exact reason why i feel something is missing in this story.Thanks for the feedback. Appreciate it.
10-01-2023, 04:56 AM
10-01-2023, 08:53 PM
Kuchh dino baad Garima apne pati Karamchand ke saath ek movie dekhne gayi. Woh dono jaise hi multiplex pahunche to Garima car se utar gayi aur Karamchand car park karne chala gaya.
Woh jab car park karke waapas aa raha tha to thodi duri se hi Garima ke taraf dekhkar bola,"Yeh saala yahan kya kar raha hai". Woh aur koi nahin Raghu tha aur Garima usse muskurati huyi baatein kar rahi thi. Karamchand udhar ja hi raha tha ki Garima apni mobile Raghu ko di aur khud dusre taraf jaakar ek pose di aur Raghu uska photo click kar liya. Karamchand thodi duri par hi tha ki use Garima ki awaaz sunai di,"are aur click karo na. Pata nahin kaun si achhi aaye". Yeh sunnkar Raghu aur bhi pics lene laga. Raghu jeans aur shirt pehna hua tha. Shirt ke upar ka do button khula hua tha aur gale mein chain latka hua tha. Uske haathon mein bhi mota chain ka bracelet tha. Dekhne se koi bhi samajh sakta tha ki woh gunda hai. Garima jaisi khoobsurat aur modern aurat ko uske saath baat karte hue aur phir usse photo click karwate hue kuchh log use dekh rahe the. Kuchh mard Raghu se jal bhi rahe the ki use itni khoobsurat aurat ke saath baat karne aur photo khinchne ka mauqa mil raha hai. Garima ko inn sabse kuchh farq nahin pad raha tha. Woh notice kar chuki thi ki kuchh log uski taraf hi dekh rahe hain magar use kuchh farq nahin pad raha tha. Karamchand jab udhar pahuncha to Garima boli,"Ek last pic". Raghu uska last pic click kiya to Garima udhar aakar boli,"Chalo chalo nahin to late ho jayega". Raghu yeh sunnkar bola,"Lo kar lo baat. Khud hich modeling karne mein lageli thi aur ab hadbada reli hai" Garima yeh sunnkar boli,"Are to main Karam ka wait kar rahi thi. Khadi hokar wait karne se achha hai ki kuchh pics hi le liya jaye. Hehehe. Ab chalo bhi". Karamchand yeh sunnkar dheere se bola,"Garima yeh yahan kya kar raha hai?" Garima yeh sunnkar chalti huyi boli,"Wahi jo humlog kar rahe hain. Movie dekhne aaya hai aur kya". Karamchand yeh sunnkar chalte hue bola,"Ajeeb baat hai. Ise abhi hi aana tha". Raghu peeche se sunnkar bola,"Ae seth kahe ko.. " Isse pehle Raghu pura bolta Garima bolne lagi,"Are kaisi ajeeb baat kar rahe ho. Log kya ab tumhari marzi se kahin aana jaana karenge. Iska mann hua movie dekhne ka to aa gaya" Phir Garima muskukar boli,"and guess what hum teeno ka seat ek saath hi hai". Karamchand yeh sunnkar chaunk kar bola,"are yeh kaise ho gaya?" Uska reaction dekhkar Garima gusse wali expression se sakhti se boli,"Ab mujhe kya pata? Ticket to tumhi ne liya hai na? Ab se ticket inquiry karke lena ki humare aas paas kaun baithega. What nonsense! Pata nahin Raghu se tum itna kyun chidhte ho. Yeh chup chap hai aur tum sawaal par sawaal kiye ja rahe ho. Movie dikhane laye ho ya quiz show mein. Haan? " Karamchand yeh sunnkar jawaab dene wala tha ki Garima gusse se uske taraf dekhkar boli,"Ab chup bhi karoge? Jo bhi bolna hai baad mein bolna. Movie shuru hone se pehle mera mood kharab mat karo." Karamchand yeh sunnkar chup ho gaya. Use bhi khyaal aaya ki iss waqt apni biwi se bahes karne ka koi fayeda nahin hai aur khaaskar itne logo ke beech. Teeno popcorn lekar cinema hall ke ander pahunche. Karamchand aage aage chal raha tha. Uske theek peeche Garima chal rahi thi aur uske peeche Raghu. Karamchand apne row mein jaakar dekha to teen seat khali the. Woh samajh gaya wahi teeno unke seats hai. Woh aage jaakar beech wali seat par baithna chahta tha. Woh jaakar beech wali seat par baith gaya to Garima usse boli,"Are hum dono kahan baithenge? Next seat par jao". Karamchand mana karke Garima ko gussa nahin karna chahta tha to woh agle seat par baith gaya. Uske bagal mein Garima baith gayi aur uske bagal mein Raghu baith gaya. Movie dekhne ka dauran Karamchand chup chap screen par dekh raha tha. Wahin Raghu Garima ki kaan mein ek do baar kuchh bola aur uske baad dono ke beech isi tarah se kabhi kabhi baat cheet hoti rahi. Karamchand ek do baar un dono ke taraf dekha aur bina kuchh bole waapas screen par dekhne laga. Isi tarah Raghu ek baar Garima ki kaan mein kuchh bola to woh bina awaaz kiye hasne lagi aur iss chakkar mein uski haath se popcorn girkar uski cleavage mein atak gayi. Yeh dekhkar Garima ki munh se "oops" nikal gayi aur woh muskurane lagi. Karamchand yeh dekh raha tha. Agle pal Garima muskurati huyi Karamchand ke taraf dekhi to Karamchand muskurakar use dekhkar waapas screen ke taraf dekhne laga. Phir woh Raghu ke taraf dekhi jo uski cleavage hi dekh raha tha. Phir woh chup chap apni cleavage se popcorn nikalne ke liye haath badhayi hi thi ki tabhi woh dekhi ki Raghu ki moti khurduri ungliyan wahan pahunch gayi. Raghu uski cleavage se popcorn nikala to Garima use dekhne lagi. Raghu popcorn nikal kar apne munh ke taraf badhaya aur Garima ko dekhte hue kha gaya. Garima yeh dekhkar apni ankhein badi karke use dekhkar elbow se use maarkar dheere se boli,"Yeh kya tha?" Raghu muskurate hue bola,"Ab woh gir giyela tha to tum to khaati nahin use, ab bhale hi woh itna chikna jagah mein girela tha. Isliye apun hich kha giyela". Raghu yeh bolkar use dekhkar munh chalate hue popcorn khane laga. Garima apni sir hilati huyi chup chap movie dekhne lagi. Agle pal Garima ki kaan mein phir Raghu ka awaaz aaya,"saala popcorn kismat wala hai. Zameen mein girne se bach giyela". Garima yeh sunnkar Raghu ke taraf dekhi aur kohni se halka maarti huyi dheere se boli,"Shut up". Pure movie ke dauran Raghu aur Garima movie dekhte hue isi tarah se ek dusre se baat karte rahe wahin Karamchand chup chap movie dekhne mein laga tha. Beech mein interval ke waqt Raghu washroom gaya to Garima Karamchand ko apni pics dikhati huyi puchhi,"Karam dekho to meri pics aur batao to kaun pic sabse achhi lag rahi hai". Karamchand Garima ko ek baar gussa kar chuka tha aur use sabhi pics mein Garima achhi hi lag rahi thi to woh use khush karne ke liye bola,"Darling tum sabhi pics mein achhi lag rahi ho". Yeh sunnkar Garima uske taraf gusse wali expression se dekhne lagi aur boli,"Tumse to puchhna hi beqaar hai. Pics mein farq nahin kar sakte. Main puchh rahi hoon sabse achhi pic kaun hai aur tum bol rahe sabhi achhi hai. What the hell! Chhoro". Karamchand yeh sunnkar chup ho gaya. Woh uthkar washroom jaane laga aur Garima se pucha"Main washroom jaa raha hoon. Aate waqt kuchh lekar aau kya?" Garima apni pics dekhti huyi boli,"Nahin kuchh nahin". Thodi der baad jab Karamchand waapas aaya to dekha ki Garima Raghu aur uske seat ke beech ka hand rest ke taraf jhuki huyi thi aur Raghu bhi udhar hi jhuka hua tha jisse dono ka sir bahot kareeb tha. Karamchand jab seat par pahuncha to dekha ki Garima Raghu ko apni mobile mein khud ki pics dikha rahi thi. Woh wahi pics the jo Raghu ne click kiye the aur jo Garima kuchh der pehle Karamchand ko dikha rahi thi. Garima Karamchand ke taraf dekhi nahin aur Raghu ko apni ek pic dikhati huyi puchhi,"Yeh wali kaisi lag rahi hai. Mujhe to pose achha nahin lag raha hai" Raghu jawaab mein bola,"Are theek to lag rela hai. Itna achha lag reli ho phir bhi nakhra kar reli ho". Garima Raghu ko dekhkar boli,"Nahin mujhe yeh utna achha nahin lag raha hai. Pose achha nahin hai". Phir woh slide karke do teen pic dekhi aur ek pic dekhkar boli,"Haan yeh thoda theek lag raha hai.Tumhe kaisa lag raha hai?" Raghu pic ko dekhkar bola,"Haan isme bhi achhi lag reli ho". Garima yeh sunnkar boli,"Tumhe to sabhi pic achhi lag rahi hai. Bolo na yeh kaisi lag rahi hai?" Karamchand yeh sab Garima ke taraf dekhte hue sunn raha tha. Agle pal movie phir se start ho gayi. Garima aur Karamchand ka dhyaan screen ke taraf chala gaya. Garima screen ke taraf dekhi to Raghu dheere se Garima ki kaan mein bola,"Uss photo mein tumhari aage aur pichhe ki pahaad ka shape achhe se pata chal rela hai". Karamchand ka bhi dhyaan Garima ke taraf gaya magar woh sunn nahin paya ki Raghu uski biwi se kya bola. Garima yeh sunnkar Raghu ke taraf dekhi aur dheere se boli,"Shut up. Yehi dekh rahe the kya meri pic mein? Haan? " Agle pal ek aesa scene aaya ki sabka dhyaan screen par chala gaya. Raghu screen par dekhte hue dheere se Garima ki kaan mein bola,"Ab jo dikh rela hai wahich dekhega na apun." Garima yeh sunnkar apni elbow Raghu ko maarti huyi boli,"Shut up" aur phir uske taraf dekhkar boli,"Achhi lag rahi hoon na us pic mein? Status mein yehi laga leti hoon. It's better than other pics" aur yeh bolkar Garima status lagai to Raghu phir se kaan mein bola,"Haan achha hai. Iss mein aage aur peeche dono achha lag rela hai" Garima yeh sunnkar Raghu ke taraf dekhi aur dono ki ankhein ek pal ke liye mili. Garima phir bina kuchh bole wapas screen ke taraf dekhne lagi. Movie khatam hone ke baad Raghu apne raaste chala gaya aur Garima Karamchand ke saath dinner karke ghar chali aayi. Garima Raghu ko bhi saath dinner karne ke liye boli magar usko koi kaam tha to woh chala gaya. Ghar aane par Garima bahot khush lag rahi thi. Uska mood Karamchand bigadna nahin chahta tha isliye Raghu se uski jo baat chit chal rahi thi movie dekhte waqt ya Raghu ka yun saath movie dekhne ko lekar woh Garima se kuchh kehna nahin chah raha tha.
10-01-2023, 09:48 PM
A great comeback seanbro hope you have been fine in all these days, your new story is promising and hopefully would contain new characters as well...but I request you please complete or simultaneously update ANITA Singh,bcz that is the story that set you apart from all other writers. And that story deserves to be completed, you can continue this story as per your wish but kindly update that story too. Bcz ANITA is your masterpiece and any artist won't like his masterpiece to be incomplete.
10-01-2023, 10:18 PM
(10-01-2023, 09:48 PM)Hellybelly Wrote: A great comeback seanbro hope you have been fine in all these days, your new story is promising and hopefully would contain new characters as well...but I request you please complete or simultaneously update ANITA Singh,bcz that is the story that set you apart from all other writers. And that story deserves to be completed, you can continue this story as per your wish but kindly update that story too. Bcz ANITA is your masterpiece and any artist won't like his masterpiece to be incomplete. Thank you for the feedback. I won't leave that story incomplete. I have every intention to complete that story, but in the meantime do enjoy this story. Let me know whether or not this story is good enough, without comparing it to Anita Singh. Thanks a lot. |
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