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Bro கதை ரொம்ப சூப்பராக இருந்தது. வாழ்த்துகள்...
அக்காவும் அம்மாவும் வருகிறார்கள் என்றவுடன் அவர்களையும் இணைத்து இன்னும் நீண்ட தொடராக எழுதுவதற்கான வாய்ப்பு இருந்தது.
ஆனால் கதை நாயகியான புனிதா செக்ஸ் போதும் என்று உறுதியாக முடிவெடுத்தது போல நீங்களும் இந்த கதையை சிறிய கதையாக முடிக்க வேண்டும் என முடிவெடுத்து அழகாக முடித்து விட்டீர்கள்...
அடுத்து எழுதப் போகும் தொடர் நீண்ண்ட நெடுந்தொடராக இருக்க வேண்டும்
மீண்டும் வாழ்த்துகள்
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(30-11-2022, 07:12 PM)Tamiljio Wrote: https://xossipy.com/thread-448-pag
நீங்க இதை மொழி பெயர்ப்பு செயிரிங்களா சீனு?
Though I cannot work on your request, I just tried to see what the story is, but the link is not working.......
Thanks for asking, but Sorry dear... Time than not enough.
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(30-11-2022, 08:14 PM)Anushkaset Wrote: Engaluku neenga daily story poganum athan enga aasai like nisha story.
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Very hot story, sad that stopped so soon. understand it is a short story as mentioned in the beginning.
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(30-11-2022, 08:44 PM)King Kesavan Wrote: With the big dick, jai has made the pussy of punitha bigger. Now when dinesh small dick goes inside it, it will be like anda kulla karandi. She will get disappointed every time and finally convince him to go back jai. sex feeling cannot be controlled. the more you control, the more it increases. i thought she will get pregnant with jai baby as he fucked her many times. this is not kalla kadal story. it is nalla kadal only. the love between jai and punitha. jai loved punitha much before knowing she is married. she is the first woman touched by him. so, definitely both will miss each other. karuthu is not needed in sex stories. good the way it ended though. thanks.
Karuthu konjamavathu irukanum pa.... real life la ponnunga pazhaiya love, appo kedacha good memories a manasula vachikittu Life a continue panranga la athu mathirthan ithuvum.
It is common to get out of the lovely atmosphere (though it is unforgettable) for the sake of family and respectful life in the society.
for reading the story...
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(30-11-2022, 09:52 PM)RARAA Wrote: Bro கதை ரொம்ப சூப்பராக இருந்தது. வாழ்த்துகள்...
அக்காவும் அம்மாவும் வருகிறார்கள் என்றவுடன் அவர்களையும் இணைத்து இன்னும் நீண்ட தொடராக எழுதுவதற்கான வாய்ப்பு இருந்தது.
ஆனால் கதை நாயகியான புனிதா செக்ஸ் போதும் என்று உறுதியாக முடிவெடுத்தது போல நீங்களும் இந்த கதையை சிறிய கதையாக முடிக்க வேண்டும் என முடிவெடுத்து அழகாக முடித்து விட்டீர்கள்...
அடுத்து எழுதப் போகும் தொடர் நீண்ண்ட நெடுந்தொடராக இருக்க வேண்டும்
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THANK YOU SO MUCH RARAA
FOR YOUR UNDERSTANDING AND WISHES
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(30-11-2022, 10:14 PM)xavierrxx Wrote: Very hot story, sad that stopped so soon. understand it is a short story as mentioned in the beginning.
THANKS DEAR XAVIERRXX
LOT OF LOVE
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Bro next story epo poduvinga nu waiting
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Short and sweet story to be precise. Thanks DS bro.
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Story started with top gear expected punidas's in laws also continue with them but unfortunately suddenly finished waiting for continue with 2nd part
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(01-12-2022, 06:20 AM)Gopal Ratnam Wrote: Short and sweet story to be precise. Thanks DS bro.
Thanks Dear...
I still feel good... when readers praise about LOW Hip Vanthana..
So I decided to keep the story short and focused to one girl, Punitha.
Even when I wrote Nisha, few readers suggested not do deviate from core story or tha main character.
This one feels better than having multi starrer heroines, for the people like me having limited time.
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(01-12-2022, 11:13 PM)Roudyponnu Wrote: Story started with top gear expected punidas's in laws also continue with them but unfortunately suddenly finished waiting for continue with 2nd part
Roudyponnu.. I still remember your comment when Seenu enjoys Nisha's Navel tharisanam after jewellery shop kinky scene.
Thank you for your comment .
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02-12-2022, 04:28 AM
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But I really admit,
I was eagerly waiting to get comments from
RojaRaja
Kitteppo
Me.you
Yesudoss
Anupavikkaasai
Tamilselvam
Renjith
Bala
Lustyleo
Lucksdial
Etc..
I miss most of them...
I pray all the people here to get good LIFE
But I hate incest culture.. it is slow poison.. Will spoil your life.. you don't understand now...
I wish the moderators to consider this and not to encourage incest stories.
We all want a good life, and as per my knowledge and understanding No mother is expecting sexual satisfaction from her own son. Or a father from her own daughter.
Then why to cultivate this bad habits in youngster minds????
A comedy is enjoyable when it doesn't hurt others
A sex story is enjoyable when it doesn't spoil the readers.
Guys, hope you are with me.
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மிகவும் அற்புதமான கதையை எழுதுவதற்கு நன்றி நண்பா நன்றி
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Though reality cannot be like this. Being a fiction, it is ok.
Wonderful story and message. Thanks for the story friend.
I completely accept your point on the incest culture. Many stories are going overboard.
The first page is full of incest these days and hardly find few thrill, romance and adultery.
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Appreciate the way you narrated and ended the story. Every woman should live the life with their husband only.
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Super story bro
It's nice
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