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Fantastic update bro bus likhate jao aur aise hi acchi acchi aur badi update dete jao story bahut acchi ja rahi hai
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Kal ke sabhi update bahut hi hot n erotic the,aasani se padma ko koi.chod na paye, abhi ye kamotejak khel chalta rhna chahiye, ek do bar to padma ke husband ko bhi lekr aao mouke pr, jisse padma ko pakde jane ka dar paida ho, aur uske andr ki ghrelu pativrata nari jag uthe aur wo ye sab band krna chahe, lekin ye sabhi milkr phir use hawas ki duniya me khich le jaye
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Waiting bro....osm story hai
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Bahot badhiya story hai yaar... Pls continue karo
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Very well written...
Try to add introspective emotions from lead female charcter point of view.....
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story badiya hai.
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padma ko Salim Ahmad naam ke
character se bhi chudwao
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Fantastic update bro aur galti use update mein dhundhte hain jismein galti hoti hai aap to bahut jabardast likh rahe ho bus likhate jao aur ऐसी-ऐसी khubsurat aur sexy update dete jao
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Bro next update jaldi do please please
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aagar English font mein hota to pad leta,,, alas It's hindi
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Hot story love it. Next update bro.