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When will we get another update
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Nice start keep going.....
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One more suggestion.....
I personally think that refrain of making Dev a cuckold at earlier stage.....
He can enjoy without knowing Divya about it....
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Absolutely wonderful start! Your writing is really fantastic!
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Ashadaran shuruaat! Terrific writing
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Wah Lekin swami uncle Ki KLPD Honi chahiye bas chdai shru Hone vali ho aur Kuchh Ho jaye. saruvat to Bhola se hi Honi chahiye. to mja aayega bad me bhle swami bhi bheti ganga me dubki mar le. ek aur suzav he sru vat me Bhola samany rhe pr 2-3 bar divya pe chdne ke bad use dominint dikhana jese DEv koi Guest ko khana khne lane wala he usdin dopher se Bhola divya ki jabrdst le aur 2-3 round le taki divya uth bhi na shke aur bimari ka bhana kr ke khana bhar se mangana pde. kabhi bchche ki college me urgent bulaye aur divya vha ja rhi he tbhi bhola aa jaye aur use jabrdsti jane na de. aakhir me thukte thukte dibvya fon kr ke dev Ko bhej de.
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Absolutely mind blowing update! Outstanding writing! Please let there be slow seduction.
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chamatkar update, bahut h shandar likha aapne yaar,
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superb! Excellent story line!
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Thanks everyone for your comments and valuable suggestions..
Kisi bhi writer ke liye sabke suggestion follow krna mumkin nhi hai.. I will try ki story aap sabhi ko acche lage ..