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Hello Everyone..
Writing a story for the very first time.. so your support is much needed..
Disclaimer : All the characters in this story are fictional and they have no relation with any person living or dead and if something like this happens then it can be just a coincidence. The purpose of this story is only to entertain people and not to insult any religion, caste, language, community.
Some scenes in this story may disturb you, readers please decide at your own discretion. This story is written for adults only, so read this story only if you are over 18 years old.
Your comments and suggestions are warmly invited to help me improve myself and the story. I hope you will like it here and keep encouraging me. Thank you.....
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Sehar ki ek alishan posh ilaake mai ek khoobsurat society thi jaha Par sabhi rich families rehti thi .. unhe mai se ek family thi Mr Dev Singh ki aur Mrs Divya Singh ki..
Mr Dev Singh ek punjabi family se belong krte hai, ek bahut badi multinational company mai bahut badi post mai job krte hai.. Mr Dev age 32, height 5’10 kafi fit and handsome aadmi hai.
Mrs Divya Singh hamari story ki heroine ..
Age 30 , height 5’5 ,Figure 34-30-36 . Ek behad he khoobsurat jism ki maalkin hai.
Divya ki khoobsurati ko jitna bhi describe kro kam hai .. doodh jaisa goora chitta badan , laal strawberry jaise lips jisse dekh logo ke muh mai paani aa jaye, lambe baal,
nasheele surk aakhe, patli kamar aur puri body mai jana jitna hona cahiye utna he fat hai.
Divya peshe se ek Fashion Designer hai but aajkal wo sirf ek housewife ka farj he ada krti hai. Wajah hai uska chota 4 saal ka baccha..
Divya daily jogging , excercise krti hai jisse uska badan ekdum perfectly fit hai.. koi usse dekh kr nhi keh skta ki wo ek bache ki maa hai..
Divya aur Dev ki shadi ko 5 saal ho gye hai aur wo dono abhi tak ek perfect couple ki tarah apna jeevan gujaar rhe the.
Divya Singh dikhne mai Tamanna Bhatia aur Kareena Kapoor ka mixure lagti thi..
Ekdum doodh jaisa goora chikna husn .. aur sundar pyara cehra kisi bhi mard ko garam krne ke liye kaafi thi cahe wo baccha ho ya budha.
Divya ki khoobsurati ko dekh sabhi log Dev ki keesmat par bahut jala krte the..
Dev ko bhi ye baat samajh aati thi par kbhi kabar usse khud bhi apni kismat par yakeen nhi hota tha ki kaise usse itne khoobsurat biwi mil gyi ..
Divya aur Dev dono ek modern vichar rakhne wale couple the.. Divya hamesha modern kapde pehna krti thi..
Divya jab bhi saree pehenti thi to usmai uska goora komal badan aur bhi jyda sundar lgta tha..
Divya hygiene ka bahut dyan rakhti thi aur Dev se bhi rakhwati thi. Shareer par uske ek bhi baal nhi rehta tha..
Kool mila ke ek jeeti jagti khoobsurati ki misaal thi Wo.
Dev ka transfer 2-3 mahine pehle he iss jagah par hua tha to wo log iss jagah par naye aaye the. Par dhere dhere wo log iss nayi jagah mai ghul mil gye the..
Dev aur Divya ki married life abhi tak kafi acchi chl rhi thi.. par aab aisa nhi raha tha.. wajah thi unki bigadti hui sex life..
Divya jaha bhi jati thi uski khoobsurati sabhi mardo ka attention receive kr he leti thi.. Divya ko dekh sabhi mardo ki aahe nikal jaati thi.
Ye baat har baar Dev bhi notice kr liya krta tha.. aur ye din prati din badta he ja rha tha.. shuru mai to usse ghussa aya krta tha par aab pata nhi kyu Dev iss chej ko enjoy krne laga tha..
Dev apni regular sex life se bore sa ho gya tha.. wo kuch alag adventure cahata tha apni sex life mai..
Dev ne sex stories aur porn ka sahara lena shuru kr diya.. aur na jane kyu usse Cuckold stories behat dilchasp lagne lagi thi.. aur dekhte he dekhte Dev ke dil mai wo sabhi fantasy janm le chuki thi..
Dev aur Divya ne apne sexual life ko sudharne ke liye ek dusre ki sexual fantasies ko share krne lage.. Dev ne Divya ke sath apni Cuckold fantasy ko share kiya to shuru mai to Divya ko kafi ghussa aya par kuch time baad Dev ke liye Divya roleplay ke liye ready ho gyi .
Par ye tarkeeb bhi jyda din kaam na aayi.. Dev iss fantasy ko asal mai jeena cahata tha.. wo cahata tha ki koi aur mard Divya ki khoobsurati ke maze le.. Dev Divya ko iss cheej ke liye manane ke roj koshish krta rehta hai, par Divya iske liye ready nhi thi, kyuki usse unke reputation aur marriage life barbaad hone ka dar tha..
Aur aise he samay nikalta jata hai..
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Aab aate hai present mai..
Subah ke 9 baje the aur Dev Breakfast kar rha tha ki tabhi bell bajti hai..
Divya ne iss wakt ek nighty pehen rakhi thi jismai uska goora badan bahut sexy lag rha tha..
Divya aise he gate kholne ke liye jati hai to samne society ka naya kachra collect krne wala budha aadmi khada dikhne mai ekdum badsurat kali shakal ka nata sa aadmi tha..
Divya usko dekh ekdum dar jaati hai..
Wo aadmi Divya ko dekh mantramugdh ho chuka tha.. Nighty mai se bahar aata uska jism dekh uski haalat patli hone lgti hai..
Aadmi : Namaste madam.. mai Bhola ..
Aajse mai he society ka kachra ikkhatta krunga..
Divya : ji namaste.. rukiye mai dusbin lekar
aati hu..
Aur Divya andar chli jati hai..
Wo Aadmi apne hawas bhari nazro se Divya ki matakti gaand ko ghure ja rha tha..
Dev andar betha ye sab nazara dekh rha tha..
Divya dustbin lekar bahar aati hai aur usse khali krne lgti hai to uska goora haath ekdum se uss admi ke gande haatho se touch ho jata hai..
Divya ko ekdum se current sa lagta hai.. aur wo apna haath peeche kr leti hai.. wo aadmi apne gande peele daat dikhata hua smile krta hua wapas chla jata hai..
Ye sab dekhte hue Dev ke pant mai uska lund ekdum ufaaan marne lgta hai.. usne aajtak aisa feel nhi kra tha..
uss gande budhe aadmi ka yu Divya ki khoobsurati ko hawas bhari nazro se dekhna Dev ko bahut accha lag rha tha..
Dev : Divya dekha tumne kaise wo aadmi bhi tumhare khoobsurati ke aage bold ho gya ..
Divya : shut up Dev .. kitne baar bola hai tumhe ye sab baat nhi kiya kro..
Dev : are Divya ismai kya hua aaab..
Dekho na bichare ka kya haal hua tumhe dekh kr.. usne shyd he tumhare jaise sundar aurat kbhi dekhi hongi..
Uska to aaj ka din bana diya tumne..
Aur Dev hasne lgta hai..
Divya : tum fir shuru ho gye Dev..
Dev : Socho na Divya agar usse tumhare jaise khoobsurat aurat mil jaye to kya haal honga uska..
Divya : Dev tumhara dimaag to thik hai .. tum aisa kaise soch skte ho ..
Uski shakal dekhi thi kitna kaala aur badsurat budha aadmi tha wo .. mai kya koi bhi aurat usko haat na lagaye..
Dev : Ye he to maza hai darling..
Socho jiss insaan ko tumhare jaise aurat jisse wo sapne mai bhi paane ka nhi soch skta agar usse hakekat mai tum mil jao to kitna maza aayenga..
Socho na Darling.. please isle baare mai.. please..
Divya : tum sach much pagal ho Dev..
Aur Divya waha se uth kar andar chli jati hai aur Dev chup chap apne kaam par chla jata hai..
Dev kaise bhi karke Divya ko iss cheej ke liye convince krna cahata tha..
Aur aise he dekhte dekhte kuch din aur beet jate hai..
Inhe sab ke beech Dev bharboor koshish krta hai Divya ko manane ki.. usne Divya ko iss cuckold porn aur stories padhana shuru kr diya aur surprisingly Divya ko wo pasand aane lagi ..
Divya unhe pad kar ekdum garam ho jaati thi aur usse bhi samjh aa chuka tha ki Dev kis hadd tak usse kisi aur mard ke sath sambhog krte dekhna cahata hai..
Ek din der raat Divya aur Dev dono bed par the..
Divya : Dev mai kafi time se dekh rhe hu ki tum iss fantasy ko bahut enjoy krte ho.. kya tum sach mai isse hakekat mai badalna cahate ho ?
Dev : ha Darling.. sach much .. mai cahata hu ki koi aur mard tumhare khoobsurati ke maze le.. dekho soch kr he meri pant mai hulchal hone lgti hai..
Divya Muskusrati hui ..
Divya : maine bhi iske baare mai kafi socha hai.. mjhe lgta hai ki sirf tumhare liye mai isse ek baar try krna cahiye..
Dev : sach maj Darling..
Aur Dev Divya ko apni baho mai sameet leta hai aur uske hasen cehre ko chumne lgta hai..
Divya : ha Dev.. par yaad rahe isse hamari shadi shuda life aur hamare chote bacche ki life par bilkul bhi asar nhi padhna cahiye..
Dev : bilkul .. mai iska pura khyal rakhunga..
Divya : aur mai ye sab tumhare samne bilkul nhi kr skti ..
Dev : ha Darling.. bilkul ..
Divya : Dev agar ye sab start honga to meri kuch conditions rahengi ..
Dev : kaise shart darling..
Divya : Pehli to ki ye sirf ek one night stand nhi rahenga balki ye ek affair jaisa rahenga.. dusra ki tum mjhe kisi chij ke liye rokonge nhi mai apne partner ko conplete freedom dungi..
Aur isse kab khtam krna hai ye bhi mai he decide krungi..
Dev : thik hai Divya.. par meri bhi kuch sharte rahengi..
Divya : bolo ..
Dev : Wo insaan koi aisa rehna cahiye jisse mujhe bilkul bhi jalan na ho matlb ki koi aisa jiske liye tumhe pana namumkin sa ho jo dikhne mai ekdum badsurat sa ho .. aur age mai wo kam se kam tumse double rehna cahiye.. matlb 60+ , aur agar wo koi low class aadmi honga to jyda accha rahenga..
jaise ki Bhola kaka ya fir koi aur …
Divya ka ye sun kar dimaag chakra jata hai..
Divya : ye kya bol rhe ho tum Dev..
Mai kaise iss type ke aadmi ke prati attract ho skti hu.. kaise mai uske kareeb ja skti hu , uske khud ko chune de skti hu..
Dev : Darling isse mai to maza aayenga.. aise aadmi ke sath tumhara affair hai ye kisi ko bhi yakeen nhi honga isse tumhare izzat ko kbhi katra nhi honga.. dusra ki tum kbhi uss aadmi ke pyar mai nhi padongi to mai kbhi insecure feel nhi krunga..
aur aisa aadmi jiske liye tumhe pana sapne jaisa ho tum usse mil jao ye kaafi satisfying hai.. dhere dhere tum bhi isse enjoy krne lagongi .. I promise..
Aur aisa aadmi bed mai bhi bahut accha rahenga.. Dev aakh marta hua kehta hai..
Divya kaafi soch vichar krti hai aur kafi manane ke baad Divya aakhir kaar maan he jaati hai..
Divya : thik hai Dev mjhe manjoor hai par yaad rahe wo insan jo insabhi sharto par fit bethta hai usse choose krne ka right sirf mera rahenga..
tum bhale he mjhe suggestions de skte ho but final decision mera he rahenga..
Dev : ok Darling.. mjhe manjoor hai..
To koi hai tumhare nazar mai aisa ya fir ham Bhola kaka se he start kre.. Dev hasta hua kehta hai..
Divya : mjhe thoda time do Dev .. Bhola kaka ke saath abhi mai comfortable nhi hu ..
Dev : ok darling.. mjhe intezar rahenga..
Aise he kuch din aur nikal jaate hai..
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Mast start Kiya hai apne story ka.
Ap is story ka agye badao ham sb apke sath rahenge
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Dev aur Divya ke society mai ek South Indian couple Mr and Mrs Naidu rehte the dono ki age 40 years ke aas pass hongi .. haal he mai kuch din pehle Mr Naidu ke pitaji Mr Swaminath Naidu unke saath rehne gaav se yha par aaye the..
Mr Swaminath ( Swami) age 65 , height 5’6 , rang ekdum kala ,
sar par safeed baal jo ki kafi kam bache the, aakho par chasma aur pet bahar nikla hua tha .. Kul mila kar bahut bhaddi shakal ke the wo. Aur pathi inki kafi saalo pehle chod kr ja chuki thi..
Dev cahata tha ki Divya jald se jald kisi aadmi ko uske liye pasand kre ..
Ek din society mai ek party organise ki gyi thi , Dev aur Divya bhi waha par maujood the wahi par unki mulakat Mr Swami Se hoti hai..
Mr Swami bhi baki mardo ki tarah Divya pe fida ho bethe the.. wo par Divya aur Swamiji kr bech thode bahut baate hote hai..
Party khatam hoti hai aur Dev aur Divya dono ghar pahuchte hai.
Dev : Divya kya tumhari search khtam hui ??
Divya : ha Dev, mjhe lgta hai jiske sath mujhe iss safar ki shuruwat krni hai wo insan mjhe mil chuka hai..
Dev excitement ke saath..
Dev : sach Divya .. kon hai wo lucky aadmi .?
Divya : Mrs Naidu ke sasurSwami uncle..
Tumhari conditions ke hisab he wo ekdum perfect hai.. wo old hai , ugly hai.. uppar se wo ek widower hai.. so unko apne kareeb lana mere liye kafi easy rahenga..
Dev ekdum se excitement ke mare Divya ko gale laga leta hai..
Dev : Divya …my Darling.. aj mai bahut khush hu.. finally wo hone ja rha hai jiska mjhe kbse intejar tha..
Swami uncle ko spne kareeb lane ka kaam ab tumhe krna honga ..
Divya : ha Dev .. thmhe bas unhe kal chai pr invite krna honga .. baki sab tum mujh pr chod do .. Divya aakh marte hue kehti hai ..
Dev excitement ke saath
Dev : ha .. kal he unhe bolata hu ..
Next day ….
Dev Swami Uncle ko apne ghar pr chai ke liye invite krta hai..
Divya ne aaj ek behad sexy yellow colour ki saree pehni hui thi , jiska blouse sleeveless tha, deep neck aur backless bhi , usmai uske cleavage saaf dikhayi de rhe the, aur uske nange goore goore haath chamak rhe the, lips par glossy red lipstick, aur thoda bahut makeup aur khoosbudar perfume.
Divya ke khoobsurati par char chnad laga rha tha..
Dev : bapre Divya .. aaj to Swami uncle ki jaan he nikal jana hai tumhe dekh kar.. haha..
Divya shramate hue : shut up Dev .. kuch bhi bolte ho..
Aur bell bajti hai ..
Swami uncle apne sath apne pote( grand son ) ko bhi laye the , wo bhi Dev aur Divya ke bete ke age ka he tha.. dono bacche andar jakar khelne lgte hai .. Dev Swami uncle ko sofe par bethalta hai..
Dev : Divya dekho Swami uncle aaye hai..
Divya andar se chai ki try lekar aati hai..
Divya ko dekh Swami uncle ki dhadkan tej hone lgti hai.. aise khoobsurat bala unhone aajtak nhi dekhi thi..
Divya chai ka cup apne komal haatho se Swami uncle ki taraf badati hai..
Divya cup pakdane ke liye niche jhukti he hai to uski saree ka pallu neeche sarak jata hai.. aur uske goore goore cleavage Swami uncle ki aakho ke samne aa jate hai..
Swami uncle ke liye ye nazara kisi shock se kam na tha.. unki aakhe fati ke fati reh jati hai aur muh khul jata hai..
Divya ek kaatil muskurahat ke saath apna pallu thik krti hai aur Uncle ki aakho mai he dekhti rehti hai..
usse unki aakho mai khud ke prati hawas saaf dikhayi pdti hai..
Divya cup Swami uncle ko pakade hai to uski najuk komal ungliya Uncle ki kaali ungliyo se touch ho jath hai..
Divya ko bhi ek tej jhatka sa lgta hai.. uske liye bhi ye sab new experience tha.. wahi Dev ka ye sab dekh paseena chute ja rha tha.. itna garam usne aj tak kbhi mehsoos nhi kiya tha..
Divya aur Uncle dono abhi bhi ek dusre ki aakho mai he dekh rhe the aur muskura rhe the.. uncle apne peele daat nikal kar Divya ko he dekh rhe the..
Swami uncle aur Dev aamne samne bethe hue the..
Uncle jiss sofe par bethe the uspar 2 log beth skte the..
Divya fat se Waha se hat kar Swami uncle ke bilkul side mai jakar beth jati hai , dono ki body ekdusre ki body se touch ho rhi thi.. behad he erotic mahool tha..
Divya Dev ki aakho mai dekh Muskusrati hai aur apne lips bite krti hai.. Dev bhi Divya ka ye naya roop behat kaatil lag rha tha..
Divya aakho se Dev ko undono ko akele chod kr jane ka ishara krti hai ..
Dev itne mai apne phone pr call ka bahana krke andar kamre mai chla jata hai aur door andar se band kr deta hai ..
Ab bahar Divya aur Swami uncle akele ek he sofe par bethe hue the ..
Dono ke bich baate hoti hai ..
Divya : Uncle aapko gaav se yha aakar kaisa lag rha hai.?
Swami : bahut accha lag rha hai beta, kafi acchi society hai, kafi acche aur sundar log hai yha par..
Aur uncle apne peele daat dikhata hua hasta hai..
Divya bhi uncle ki baat sun Muskusrati hai..
Divya : uncle aapko bore to hota he honga.. Mr and Mrs Naidu to subh se office chle jate hai, fir kya krte hai aap din bhar ..?
Swami : ha beta bore to hota hai , thoda time apne pote se saath katt jata hai .. hamari patni ke dehant ko 5 saal ho gye hai , to ab to aadat he ho gyi hai , aab is budhape mai kar bhi kya sakte hai..
Swami uncle thode emotional hote hue kehte hai..
Divya : uncle ji aapne dusri shadi ke bare mai kyu nhi socha .?
Swami : beta ji aab iss budhape mai kon shadi ke bare mai sochta hai..
Divya : uncle aap to abhi bhi fit aur jawan ho .. aisa nhi soche bilkul..
Swami : accha majak kar leti ho beta..
Divya : nhi uncle sacchi .. accha chalo aaj se aap kbhi bhi apne aap ko akela nhi samjiyenga.. mai bhi din bhar akeli ghar pr he rehti hu, aapka jab dil cahe yaha aa skte hai, isse aapka aur mera dono ka timepass ho jaenga..
Divya apne haseen cehre par ek kaamuk muskan laati hui kehti hai..
Swami uncle Divya ke baat sun kar khusi se jhoom uthte hai..
Swami : sach beta..
Divya : hanji uncle .. bilkul ..
Ajse ham dost hue ..
aur Divya apne komal goore hath uncle ke kaale haatho ki taraf badati hai..
Uncle bhi Divya ke haseen cehre ko dekhte hue apne kaale hatho ko Divya ke haatho se mila dete hai..
Divya ki body mai ek tej current chalne lgta hai.. usne aajtak aisa feel nhi kiya tha.. jeevan mai pehli baar usse kisi dusre mard ne chua tha.. uncle ke kathor kaale haath Divya ke komal mulayam haatho par bahut ajeeb contrast de rhe the..
Uncle ka bhi same haal tha.. itne komal twacha ko chune ka luft unhe jeevan mai pehli baar mila tha..
Dono ke bech fir thode bahut baate hoti hai..
Fir Divya andar Kitchen mai kuch nashta lane chli jati hai ..
Aur uncle sofe par bethe Newspaper padhne lgte hai ..
Divya bahr aakar Nashta table par rakhti hai aur wapis sofe par Uncle ke side mai beth jati hai ..
Uncle Divya ko smile krte hue dekhte hai aur wapas news pdhne lgte hai ..
Tabhi uncle ko ek interesting news dekhayi deti hai ..
Divya curiosity s ke sath News padhne ke liye Uncle ki taraf jhukti hai ..
Uncle apne hantho ki ungle Newspaper ke left side mai point krte hai ..
Divya News padhne ke life thoda aur left taraf jhukti hai jisse uske left soft boobs uncle ke haatho se dabb jaate hai aur Divya ke body puri tarah se Uncle ke goodh mai jhuki hui thi ..
Dono ke body mai zhurzhuri se dodd jati hai ..
Divya isse position mai kuch der rehti hai .. aur aise pretend krti hai jaise ki wo news padh rhi ho ..
Actually Divya bhi Uncle ke haatho ka touch apne boobs par enjoy kr rhi thi ..
Uncle bhi apne haatho ko nhi hatate hai aur wo bhi Divya ke left boob par apne hatho ko ragadne lgte hai ..
Dono ki body ekdusre se chipke hui se thi.. Divya uske baad apni nazare newspaper se hata kar Uncle ki aakho mai dekhne lgti hai ..
Uncle ki garam badbudar saans usse apne cehre par feel hoti hai ..
Divya unki aakho mai dekh ek kaatil muskan apne cehre pr le aati hai aur uncle bhi apne gande daat dikhane lgte hai ..
Dono aise he ek dusre ko dekh rhe the ki isse bech Dev ke aane ki aahat hoti hai aur dono ekdum se apni normal position mai aa jate hai ..
Swami uncle ka budha lund unki dhoti mai saaf uchal kud krta dikhayi dene lgta hai ..
Divya bhi jisse dekh leti hai ..
Dev ke aate he unmai kuch baate hotu hai aur fir nashta krke Uncle apne ghar ko chle jate hai ..
Uncle ke jaane ke baad ..
Dev : wow.. Divya .. gazab kr diya tumne .. tumne to aaj bechare uncle ki haalat bigad di .. haha ..
Divya : sharmati hui neeche dekhti hai ..
( darasal Dev ne pure ghar mai hidden cameras aur mike install kr rkhe hai taki wo ghar mai ho rhe action ko enjoy kr ske .)
Dev : aab Divya aage ka kya socha hai ..
Divya : thoda patience rakho Dev .. jo bhi honga step bu step honga .. aab uncle aur mai acche dost ban chuke hai.. aab aage aage dekhte hao maza aayenga..
Aur Divya aakh marti hui Dev ko kehti hai.. jispe Dev bhi hasne lgta hai..
Aab Divya aur Uncle mai baato ka sil sila kaafi bad chuka tha ..
Swami uncle ka poota aur Divya ka beta dono acche dost ban chuke the do un logo ka ekdusre ke ghar aana jana aab aam baat ban chuki thi..
Divya har roj subah jogging krne Society ke park mai jaya karti thi , uncle ne bhi waha jana shuru kar diya tha ..
Uncle ko apni kismat par yakeen nhi ho rha tha ki kaise unke shukhe jeevan mai Divya jaise haseen bala a gyi thi..
Dono ek dusre ki company ko enjoy krne lage the..
Dono ke beech aab phone par chatting bhi chalu ho gyi thi.. isse bech Uncle bhi halka fulka flirt Divya se kr liya krte the aur Divya bhi ..
Yuhi kuch din aur beet jate hai par Uncle abhi tak aage nhi bade the..
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Very low response compared to number of views.
Will close the thread by tomorrow evening if i get this type of response only.
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Come on bro.. don't close the story.. more people will comment after 2-3 updates..when story will take more erotic form...and I think it will.. eagerly waiting for another update
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Super excellent start! It will very much exciting if you let Bhola seduce Diyva and later mrs. naidu then this story will be a great hit.
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Fantastic and awesome start! Keep going!
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(04-06-2022, 08:00 AM)Veer Wrote: Super excellent start! It will very much exciting if you let Bhola seduce Diyva and later mrs. naidu then this story will be a great hit.
Super excellent idea
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Bhola ke sath hota to or bhi Mazza aata
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(04-06-2022, 08:39 AM)incest love Wrote: Bhola ke sath hota to or bhi Mazza aata
You are right.
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bahut bahut shandar shuruaat, bahut acha likha bhai
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(04-06-2022, 08:00 AM)Veer Wrote: Super excellent start! It will very much exciting if you let Bhola seduce Diyva and later mrs. naidu then this story will be a great hit.
bahut badhiya idea
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mast.lajawab aur excellent start! bahut khoob.
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(04-06-2022, 08:00 AM)Veer Wrote: Super excellent start! It will very much exciting if you let Bhola seduce Diyva and later mrs. naidu then this story will be a great hit.
ekdom sahi kaha hai bhai
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Thanks everyone for the feedback ..
I will try to implement your suggestions..
Bhola ko bhi pura muka diya jaenga ..
Keep supporting..
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(04-06-2022, 10:38 AM)Cuckguy69 Wrote: Thanks everyone for the feedback ..
I will try to implement your suggestions..
Bhola ko bhi pura muka diya jaenga ..
Keep supporting..
No problem brother but suggestions ko implement krke chakkar me..apna point of view mat khona..abhi jaise start Kiya h vaise hi chalne do jaha lgega ki bhola add ho skta h vaha krna..nd bhola se bang yaa jabardasti mat krwana seduce krwana
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