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Abbbabaaa em twistluvra Nayana mind block aindi hahahh
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What a twist bro. Super story
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వామ్మో ఏంది స్వామి ఇది...????? ఆ ట్విస్టులు ఏంటి స్వామి.... క్లైమాక్స్ అంటే అదరగొట్టేసారు.....
రవి యొక్క క్యారెక్టర్ చాలా అద్భుతంగా డిజైన్ చేశాడు..... మోసం చేయకూడదు అనే కాన్సెప్ట్ చాలా బాగుంది... కానీ ఇంత నిజాయితీగా ఎవరూ ఉండరు.....
"మోసం మీద ఉండే జీవితం దేనికి పనికి రాదు"అని చాలా బాగా చెప్పారు....
క్లైమాక్స్ అయితే దిమ్మతిరిగిపోయింది.... పరిస్థితిని రవి ఎలా హ్యాండ్ చేస్తారో అర్థం కావడం లేదు... పాపం ఫ్యూజ్ ఎగిరి పోయినాయి... ఇప్పుడు ఏం చేస్తారో చూడాలి...
మీ మీ వర్ణన కి జోహార్ అండి....hats off to you...take a బో...
Eagerly waiting for next update with wonderful twists..... As soon as possible give the wonderful update...
Thank you
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Ur latest update ippude chadivanu,mind bloing, there should be early updte which is requested
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We never expected that twist wow...
Really appreciate it very interesting and exciting
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twistla meeda twist... super...
మీ
వెంకట ... కిరణ్
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Mee Katha chadhuvuthunte naaku na kadhaki sambhandinchina kotha alochanalu puttukosthunnai mitrama, antha bagundhi.
Carry on this writing skills
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Hello brother your concept is super and the way off ur taking in to story is super I am really enjoying while ready the story if u have write many stories like this all the best thank you
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Sweet shock , let’s see how can our Ravi will handle this
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