Fantasy The Train Ride - **Fondling, Exhibition, Humiliation, Rough Sex**

[AjitKumar]

Hope you bring in Guard, station master, electrician, Trackman also in picture. Neat portrayal.
Still not clear why she is not trying to escape.

[B1ryani]

Hope you bring in Guard, station master, electrician, Trackman also in picture. Neat portrayal.
Still not clear why she is not trying to escape.

The first arc she was stuck and forced inside the train. The second arc , she could have run but realized she had given all her personal information to influencial men of authority. For the third arc , she feels compelled to follow as the men have her nude videos and pictures.

[B1ryani]

what a fucking hot erotic story...
what started as a train humiliation, the 2nd arc extended beyond expectations..
loved each and every episode of your ...
and now moving storng and more focused on more pain n humiliation with erotic content ...

fucking hot story and updates...
as a extension, the story can still be continued after gopal's (s)expedition... like constable guna taking her to her house in his vehicle .. with driver and guna playing with her on the way to room

then exposing her to the apartment security fellow and enjoying her and goes on

Thank you. Hope you are enjoying the story so far. I might end Divya's story after this as it seems some readers are a bit sensitive to the abuse.

[AjitKumar]

The first arc she was stuck and forced inside the train. The second arc , she could have run but realized she had given all her personal information to influencial men of authority. For the third arc , she feels compelled to follow as the men have her nude videos and pictures.

Her position is like, If the bang is inevitable, its good to enjoy it. 
She cannot get the photos erased or personal things. She is already bottomless. If things go like this, she will be made nude to run on the streets. 
Even the girls are not safe inside family. They are abused by their relations. 
These bastards call him "ma", and sexualy abuse her. 

[Steven Rajaa]

Story getting darker and darker. The low class men are enjoying the young bud.

[madiha.agarwal]

please don't bring such sensitive topics here... we are here for virtual pleasure and imagination.. nothing more

I'm sorry but I felt the same thing.. it's one thing to write on non con but pushing foreign objects inside without consent is a bit too much for me to read

[saxygabbar]

Thank you. Hope you are enjoying the story so far. I might end Divya's story after this as it seems some readers are a bit sensitive to the abuse.

Please dont 
this is not the place to get offended
If they are sensitive they should not be here
Because it is entertaining and a fantasy for some people as these types of stories are very less
You are already a legend!
PLEASE CONTINUE YOUR LEGACY!

[saxygabbar]

I'm sorry but I felt the same thing.. it's one thing to write on non con but pushing foreign objects inside without consent is a bit too much for me to read

Then please get the fuck out of here and dont read it if u are sensitive

[preethi15]

Nice story and please continue...
Also dont think about negative views..they also like the story but that talk like genuine person..here we are coming for fantasy and you have given to us..your an awesome writer and please continue

[B1ryani]

**Author's Note** - Thank you for your supporting comments. I have taken everything into consideration and I think perhaps Xossip isn't the right platform for this story. I will finish Divya's adventures perhaps later next week and end it. 

In the meantime, I will be toning down on the rough sex and abuse in all follow up stories that I will write moving forward.

Here is the link for my latest thread :- 

Dadi's Little Slut - https://xossipy.com/thread-44985.html

My apologies in advance to my readers who have enjoyed The Train Ride thus far. 

[madiha.agarwal]

Then please get the fuck out of here and dont read it if u are sensitive

Everyone has the rights to express their opinions and you don't need to be rude to others for expressing it.

Even the author is fine with the cricisim but you act rude

[madiha.agarwal]

**Author's Note** - Thank you for your supporting comments. I have taken everything into consideration and I think perhaps Xossip isn't the right platform for this story. I will finish Divya's adventures perhaps later next week and end it. 

In the meantime, I will be toning down on the rough sex and abuse in all follow up stories that I will write moving forward.

Here is the link for my latest thread :- 

Dadi's Little Slut - https://xossipy.com/thread-44985.html

My apologies in advance to my readers who have enjoyed The Train Ride thus far. 

I'm sorry but I did not mean to be rude but even though I do like non con ,there are certain limits I wouldn't cross . 

You can continue if you wish as there are other people who are fans of it.. anyway I sent you a email, respond to it any direction.

[B1ryani]

I'm sorry but I did not mean to be rude but even though I do like non con ,there are certain limits I wouldn't cross . 

You can continue if you wish as there are other people who are fans of it.. anyway I sent you a email, respond to it any direction.

No offence taken. I have replied to your message via PM. Thank you.

[Test07]

Hi, please don't change the theme.
We are here for fantasies only, and when we go back to real lives, we do respect women as much as anyone.
Please continue this story on a long run.

[tweeny_fory]

i understand the generral concern..
bro i suggest you can continue the non-con theme and multple arcs, but keep it with humans as some may not like the theme...

[Askk2me]

**Author's Note** - Thank you for your supporting comments. I have taken everything into consideration and I think perhaps Xossip isn't the right platform for this story. I will finish Divya's adventures perhaps later next week and end it. 

In the meantime, I will be toning down on the rough sex and abuse in all follow up stories that I will write moving forward.

Here is the link for my latest thread :- 

Dadi's Little Slut - https://xossipy.com/thread-44985.html

My apologies in advance to my readers who have enjoyed The Train Ride thus far. 

It's absolutely the right platform to write fantasy erotica. Do continue with same theme. Non-con is fairly common genre in xossipy. Adults do know the difference between reality and fantasy. Those who don't find it erotic have choice not to read it. I would agree some of the sentiment expressed above that try to keep it humane. Not many find masochism themes erotic.

[sexycharan]

Very nice, please continue.

[B1ryani]

Should I continue Divya's adventures ?

[Thegreengobin]

Should I continue Divya's adventures ?

Most definitely. Add a non-consensual tag at the top. If the admins have an issue they will be informed.

It has a right to exist as a story. Whether you decide to continue it or not is entirely upto you.

I personally hope you do.

[B1ryani]

Most definitely. Add a non-consensual tag at the top. If the admins have an issue they will be informed.

It has a right to exist as a story. Whether you decide to continue it or not is entirely upto you.

I personally hope you do.

Thanks man. I'm still like 50/50 on this. I want to pen down my dark fantasies but I fear maybe some are not so into it and might lead to a ban. 

Do check out my current ongoing story and tell me what you think. It's a bit toned down.