Adultery INDIAN WIFE & ESCAPED CRIMINALS

[zulfique]

I thought this would have a different finish unlike the housewife continue to live normal life. Please dont disappoint. Request you to continue to few more episodes and give a satisfying finish like the fuck she had.

[Sexylady_36]

What a wonderful story.....and liked that u kept it open ended... hopefully u can bring a sequel in future... whenever u get time...loved it...thanks

[Muralimm]

Thank you for your kind words.

I didn't want to unnecessarily continue the story just for the sake of writing it.

ShipraT tried her hand at writing a marathon story years ago. It stretched for several chapters with newer and newer characters being added but after a point it got complex, lost focus, lost the plot and she stopped writing it.

So I don't want to write simply to write. I don't want to write a story like hay Asha and the fake Guruji which went on for eternity.

That's true 
Take time and bring back a new plot line and send the link also

[rockybilbao]

The story for now has ended. I had written only upto this point. On literotica, the story has come to a definite ending.

I have kept an open loop for this story on xossipy purposely so that of I ever feel like writing it further in the future, I can.

Thank you so much for your feedback and appreciation for this story.

Bdrew.

Hi Bdrew can there be no sequal involving the maid, even if it's short  one and then leaving it with a completion that they kept meeting in foursomes whenever an opportunity arose.

Regards
Rockybilbao

[raja shri]

I thought this would have a different finish unlike the housewife continue to live normal life. Please dont disappoint. Request you to continue to few more episodes and give a satisfying finish like the fuck she had.

YEp bro...this story is incredible and the end of story is not satisfying....i think nania adventure continue hote rehne chahiye....and I thought ye story kabhi band na ho.....bdrew 86 bro is a great writer and his writing skills and seduction level are very very good...

[raja shri]

My God that's a very dark ending. Too gory and extreme for my tastes.

If you have read my other stories; there isn't such a dark ending. Usually my stories have a happy ending or an ending where everyone goes back to their lives exactly how they were before.

Brother first of all thank you for writing such a wonderful story ....i know you thought the plot of this story till this ....but Can you continue this story..... please brother main is story ko padh kar apka fan ho gya hu ....so please ? continue this story....
And 
Can you give me a link to your other stories....and brother if you don't mind you didnot mentioned Fahim and Tejinder age... To unki age bhi bta do ...

[shubh0]

Bdrew86 continue this one it's the last series am ever going to read before quitting porn for good, am enjoying the read alot i wanna know how things happen ahead what she does n all. Huge fan and humble request

[Dignifiedtodirty84]

There is no wrong in ending this story else this may get repetitive.. But could have given proper ending on how the housewife character will be after this incident... How this incident changed her character and lifestyle could be explained... I can suggest 2 endings...

1. After few months, housewife lives with her husband however becomes a sout and cheats her husband in his absence

2. Housewife leaves the home and be the slut of gangsters.. Or even they sell her in brothel by which life destroyed...

So u can try something like this and give story a full stop

[Solotrubator]

There is no wrong in ending this story else this may get repetitive.. But could have given proper ending on how the housewife character will be after this incident... How this incident changed her character and lifestyle could be explained... I can suggest 2 endings...

1. After few months, housewife lives with her husband however becomes a sout and cheats her husband in his absence

2. Housewife leaves the home and be the slut of gangsters.. Or even they sell her in brothel by which life destroyed...

So u can try something like this and give story a full stop

Giving ur suggestion is ok...but demanding the story to end by ur liking is not accepted... 

[Dignifiedtodirty84]

Giving ur suggestion is ok...but demanding the story to end by ur liking is not accepted... 

I have  never asked author to stop writting.. It was the author who put an open ens for this story

[Dignifiedtodirty84]

I have  never asked author to stop writting.. It was the author who put an open ens for this story

[koolme98]

Very nice and hot story... Thanks Bdrew!
I would like to suggest you to End with a Epilogue with the future for the wife and gangsters. if they are caught or not and what happens does the husband find out or not...
that would be the icing on the cake

many thanks

[raja shri]

Bdrew continue this story bro....i know this story on Litrotica was up to the point.....take this story further brother....
Please continue this story.....You come online every day but don't reply....... Please reply brother

[Mottapayyan]

Bdrew  continue this story bro....i know  this story on Litrotica  was up to the point.....take this story further brother....
Please continue this story.....You come online every day but don't reply....... Please reply brother

Bdrew is a woman and she has a family. Writing is not her full time job. If you are sure that you cannot give a satisfying end to story, its better to leave it like this for the readers to have their own imaginations. 

[shubh0]

Bdrew is a woman and she has a family. Writing is not her full time job. If you are sure that you cannot give a satisfying end to story, its better to leave it like this for the readers to have their own imaginations. 

Is it really ? Making such intresting characters getting our hopes high for a good erotica and then khade lund pe dhoka kya h matlab adhi stories ka itne saare outcomes ho skte the yesab se mood h off hota h yaar chod aage se time waste na kre hum issab me vo h better h adhi story likh ke nikal jana ek trend h unlog ka hum yha read krte h support krte h hume satisfying ending thodi milega ye bore ho jaegi likhna chhod degi aage ane wale stories me bhi better hai uspe aage se dhyaan h na de do chaar ache chapters likh k ye ho lenge busy hum khamakha wait krenge request krenge. 

Being reader we too have a bond with writers and such a good piece of work, truly speaking bdrew if u r reading this it was once in a lifetime sort of plot progression but guess you're not in the mood right now to write more and as a reader have decided to quit reading too. 


The best i can compare it to is game of thrones to be honest such promising work in the begining and good narration and character development, but ending is like woah  did it jus end ??? 

It was my last erotic story which i followed u left a bad taste in the end by not giving satisfying ending ...


Take care 
Bdrew hope u have a great life and may u have happiest times with family .

Big fan 
Xoxo

[Gulfansa]

Please continue the "New Car" story....

[Eswar P]

Wonderful please update

[Kinky_Badshah]

Almost 3 weeks gone...where are you brother?
We want updates on this hot story ASAP

[albertozoc]

Hello Bdrew...There is still some scope for the story to continue...with her new accomplice the maid.

[pylode]

You are a masterful, amazing writer of forced sex incidents. The proof of this is the huge number of imaginative comments and suggestions given by your involved readers. Never before have we seen such heated participation from so many of your fans. This proves no doubt you are a talented erotic writer!
Bravo!
Would luv it if you can give us the sequel when she finally moves back to her husband. He drowns in her sink hole & realizes what his darling wifey has been through! The couple together go into another phase of depraved sex together, recounting all the drillings & suckings she enjoyed!
pylode