Adultery INDIAN WIFE & ESCAPED CRIMINALS

[pro10]

The much awaited DP.
wonderful update..

[yenjvoy]

The story for now has ended. I had written only upto this point. On literotica, the story has come to a definite ending.

I have kept an open loop for this story on xossipy purposely so that of I ever feel like writing it further in the future, I can.

Thank you so much for your feedback and appreciation for this story.

Bdrew.

Every sexually liberated woman has a secret r a p e fantasy. It was really interesting to read yours, and your wonderful command of the language added greatly to your fertile imagination. Kudos. Definitely one of your best. Tiny edits here and there, and this is probably one of the best stories ever by an indian author of erotica. You are a unique talent.

That said, I think the story does deserve closure, or at least an epilogue. What exactly does a woman do after the intruders leave. Do they leave quietly after having their fill, without harming her out of gratitude for the never before thrills she made them experience? And how does she deal with the aftermath, coming down from the sdxual highs to confront the psychological toll of her own response to the situation? Does she go back to being wife and mother? Or does the unleashed desire within her compel her to scour the media for any news of her captors after they leave, while she goes through the motions of her mundane life, feeling bereft and empty. I think that is a possibility, at least until one day months later she gets a call out of the blue from her sexual soulmate fahim, and against all reason and sense she flees to join him in his hideout in nepal or wherever, unable to resist the heat of his mating call?

There is meat in this story still. I feel this is just the first act. Many adventures still await our heroine.

Another scenario was when you made teji go to the door to collect the pizza, exposing his well publicized face to the delivery boy, who also heard the lady of the house hollering the equally well publicized name of the other escaped convict in ecstasy. He slinks away and informs the security officer, who surround the house while the orgy is in progress, and they break in, in the morning hours to capture or shoot the finally exhausted men and liberate their poor innocent victim.

Many options. Look forward to a revisit at some point, after the release of this climax has abated and you feel restored again to continue. The characters you created are too compelling to leave open ended, so will wait patiently for your post orgasmic langour to subside. Thanksffir a really well written piece.

[Shelby_007]

--good

[Hotyyhard]

Please, please please don't stop this awesome story

[Rockket Raja]

Awesome. The author has left the end to readers imagination.

At the time of dawn, Naina went to kitchen and brought a knife and slit the throat of criminals and got the government award for bravery to fight with criminals and killing them. She got overnight popularity and became a lady known all over nation. Rohit was very proud of his wife. When he tried to fuck her in the same night she cannot feel his cock. Now she realized, she cannot continue to live with this wimp husband. She divorced him the same year and married a mu$lim man and converted to his religion. She had 5 babies from him with two twins. Her husband name is also Fahim. She lived a happy life thereafter. Rohit was shattered. He left his child in an orphanage and left the job and attained sanyasa.

[Karmayogee]

Was waiting for a completion, but you have left open ended. For these three the night is never going to end. She cant leave them, neither they will find a slut like her. She forgot her husband and child completely. What if security officer barge into the house and caught them red handed? It would be an interesting watch.

[Johnnythedevil]

Since the readers demanding more for updates, the author has ended the story like this to keep them wait indefinitely. Ha ha

[Shriya George]

Great story, Amazing narration, But, Disappointing end

[LustyLeo]

Never thought this would end so abruptly. Bdrew must have done this due to other commitments.
Dont think this would continue in future. Anyways, thanks for the wonderful updates.

[Ananthukutty]

Awesome. The author has left the end to readers imagination.

At the time of dawn, Naina went to kitchen and brought a knife and slit the throat of criminals and got the government award for bravery to fight with criminals and killing them. She got overnight popularity and became a lady known all over nation. Rohit was very proud of his wife. When he tried to fuck her in the same night she cannot feel his cock. Now she realized, she cannot continue to live with this wimp husband. She divorced him the same year and married a mu$lim man and converted to his religion. She had 5 babies from him with two twins. Her husband name is also Fahim. She lived a happy life thereafter. Rohit was shattered. He left his child in an orphanage and left the job and attained sanyasa.

You have written the epilogue for the story.  Funny, but close to reality. 

[Muralimm]

I think this is probably the best end for the story
I like very much want more stories from you soon

[Bdrew86]

Awesome. The author has left the end to readers imagination.

At the time of dawn, Naina went to kitchen and brought a knife and slit the throat of criminals and got the government award for bravery to fight with criminals and killing them. She got overnight popularity and became a lady known all over nation. Rohit was very proud of his wife. When he tried to fuck her in the same night she cannot feel his cock. Now she realized, she cannot continue to live with this wimp husband. She divorced him the same year and married a mu$lim man and converted to his religion. She had 5 babies from him with two twins. Her husband name is also Fahim. She lived a happy life thereafter. Rohit was shattered. He left his child in an orphanage and left the job and attained sanyasa.

My God that's a very dark ending. Too gory and extreme for my tastes.

If you have read my other stories; there isn't such a dark ending. Usually my stories have a happy ending or an ending where everyone goes back to their lives exactly how they were before.

[Bdrew86]

Never thought this would end so abruptly. Bdrew must have done this due to other commitments.
Dont think this would continue in future. Anyways, thanks for the wonderful updates.

I had written thr first draft of this story in 2018 and i left it midway. I suddenly picked it up in mid 2021 and started writing it again and posted it 6 months later. The reason for me writing so slowly is my personal life.

I write only when I get the time from my husband, my children and my business which I run. And I have to be in the mood to write this.

Yes...other commitments are one of the reasons why I have left this story at this point.

[Bdrew86]

I think this is probably the best end for the story
I like very much want more stories from you soon

Thank you for your kind words.

I didn't want to unnecessarily continue the story just for the sake of writing it.

ShipraT tried her hand at writing a marathon story years ago. It stretched for several chapters with newer and newer characters being added but after a point it got complex, lost focus, lost the plot and she stopped writing it.

So I don't want to write simply to write. I don't want to write a story like hay Asha and the fake Guruji which went on for eternity.

[Shelby_007]

So can We Expect Any Future Stories From You(this one or New one)?Is ther any hope for your readers?

[raja shri]

Story was very erotic and outstanding.....i never read story Of English section first story aapki ki padhi hai .... Story ? hai ...it's just said that you finished the story to soon....Abhi isme bahut kuch ho sakta tha ...pls iska sequal shuru karo yr ........ I like the story a lot.....pls Restart this story quickly ......and I hope tum jldi se aisi or story ya fir iska sequal la doge....

[drillhot]

Once a slut is always a slut.

After this experience and innumerable earth shattering orgasms, Naina cannot go back to her normal life like before. These men have brought out the inner desires of young housewife. So far she was living a life thinking her husband given sex is true pleasure. She now knows what a real man can give her. These men have shown her a different world where she forgot about herself. She became a participant in action and enjoyed it thoroughly. After seeing the stamina of Fahim and Teji, she understood her husband is a so weak and can never come close to them. They have fucked her whole night. and filled all her holes.

She is still young and would need hard sex henceforth. She is also aware that cannot continue to fuck with this criminals. She has to enjoy the moment and at the same time take a decision of her life in short time before someone comes to know about the presence of criminals in her house. Any man/woman indulged in adultery, does not like to get caught. Here the debauchery is with criminals and Naina inspite of giving shelter and food, enjoyed marathon and fulfilling sex. If the criminals leave the house, Some day or other, she can be exposed as women who has given shelter for criminals and there is a chance of she getting arrested. She is educated and sharp. She cannot continue to prepare exams hereafter and land in new job.

Not just their dicks, the criminals must have planted the criminal thoughts inside her by now. Therefore, Cant agree more with reader Rockket raja version epilogue.

All stories cannot have happy or "Nothing happened" sort of endings. Life is not always a happy for everyone. Many change their characters when something drastically change in their life. We have read thousands of news stories where wife elope with their lovers, kill husband and children etc in day to day life. It is the real thing happening around.

Though you have not given a definite end, Being a woman you have written the mind of Naina from point of women. It was really excellent, hot and interesting. Thanks for this wonderful story.

[sexycharan]

Great story. Thanks.

Delivery boy has seen Tejinder whose photo is shown in the news channels. There are high chances that he may go out and tell this friends about woman in the house enjoing with them. If there is a prize money announced for their heads, they will inform the cops.

[Losliyafan]

My God that's a very dark ending. Too gory and extreme for my tastes.

If you have read my other stories; there isn't such a dark ending. Usually my stories have a happy ending or an ending where everyone goes back to their lives exactly how they were before.

Please dont write all stories goody goody type. The wife sleep with many men and husband never come to know about it and be a fool life long -- projected the heroine like whore finally. 

I like this story, but would have been happy if you have ended it sensibly as it is not just a woman sleeping with neighbour. This lady has slept with hardcore criminals who are in the hunt.

[Sarvesh Siva]

Very hot story, Never a dull or boring moment. What is the need to end it so soon.