Thriller System is supreme
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As Avi opened his eyes finally he observed few of the clubmates lying unconscious around him. And it appears to be dusktime. He felt an indescribable experience as if he is viewing the surrounding world in a new limelight. He felt as if he is reborn. He can both connect to his former self but he felt a bit distant about his old identity. But he felt indescribably calm and serene. He can no longer hear the Buddhist chants but it he didn't feel disturbed even amidst the surrounding chaos as a huge crowd seemed to lie ahead and he can even hear security officer sirens in the distance. As he moved from his spot he even observed lying unconscious at some distance from the spot.

Then he suddenly remembered the previous events, and looked around for Anjali, she too seems to be in a daze but not as calm as Avi as she looks dishevelled and disillusioned. But he observed few changes in his surroundings, what was earlier a muddy, bare earth terrain dugout earth lying all around, he can see a clear green carpet surrounding all around him, with few flowering plants emitting a sweet smell. What the researchers later discover was there were many rare medicinal herbs typically found in the high altitudes of Himalayas. The terrain which was earlier devoid of life was teeming with life now. And as Avi observed his surroundings even more keenly, he felt the now familiar rock he has hit his cycle with earlier. What earlier felt like some alien language, he felt a keen sense of familiarity with the script although he could not pinpoint on what exactly it said, or why he is exactly feeling like that. He went in a deep daze looking at those letters trying to understand what exactly they meant. 

What Avi didn't realize was that as he was in a deep gaze a light golden aura began to surround his entire body, and sounds  so faint that only someone with superhuman hearing powers could hear. By this time, Anjali too gained consciousness and she is experiencing clear disturbance in her soul and mind. What were those earlier sounds ? She was clearly not able to mix these two worlds well, and unlike Avi who was serene allthroughout, Anjali was disturbed throughout. It felt like she was standing near the boundary of two different worlds, with one foot on this world while the other one lying in the other world. It felt like one half of her body is in chaos while the other half tried to remain calm and this dichotomy created a mess on her body.

As Anjali opened her eyes, she observed a stranger in the distance with a light golden lustre and for a moment she thought she was still in a dreamlike state. She could still hear those familiar dreamlike chants she heard earlier although faintly. And as she observed the rock she observed that stranger dazing at she realized that she has seen those characters before. While Avi remained in a trance all throughout this episode, because of the sheer disturbance she was in Anjali remained awoke to her surroundings. This confused her even more, so was that for real ?? So where are those thousands of chanting monks ? Am i still in a dream ?

Then she looked around her, she noticed many unconscious men and women surrounding the stranger and herself. Is he responsible for the conditions of these men and women ? She would have ordinarily be frightened thinking about it, but the reverend aura surrounding that person made her feel safe, and is prompting her to enter a meditative state herself. But then she observed her mom also lying unconscious near there, so she suddenly stoop up and ran towards her.

She woke her mom up and upon realizing that she was still in a daze, Anjali ran towards her bicycle lying there where her bag has fallen and she picked a bottle from there and offered it to her mother. Rukmini [Aunty's name] began to gain her composure and looked at her surroundings. She is in a dreamlike land with numerous plants, the air filled with sweet smell and the air itself carrying a feeling of mysticism and spirituality. Her earlier mental block is entirely removed now and it felt as if her entire mind soul is getting constantly nourished. She felt like she is in a dream, maybe this is how the heavens looklike. Her body felt so light and the constant backpain which had troubled her for the past few years seems to be getting relieved albeit at a slow pace. And then she observed that familiar stranger in the distance and unknowingly she lifted her hands to show reverences to that personality. 

Anjali---- Mom, Mom wakeup. Can you hear me ??
Rukmini---- still unfettered by her surroundings or her daughter still remained in that reverend atmosphere.
Anjali visibly disturbed poured some water from the bottle on Rukmini's face.
Rukmini now completely came out of the daze and looked at Anjali and realized about the previous accident and how Avi helped Anjali escape the disaster and how they have fallen down this pit. And how few of the clubmates along with Rukmini later entered this long dugout pit and how suddenly some energy suddenly burstout and how they fell unconscious.

Then Rukmini noticed her surroundings and she along with Anjali begun to wake them up. While a few were visibly disturbed at the situation they were in, majority experienced similar phenomena as Rukmini did.

Only then did they all realize that stranger was still in a daze and that light golden lustre has deepened a bit now. Then they tried to approach him.
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I recommend you reading these two episodes early in the morning with some fresh mind, while playing the youtube video i posted in the background. I felt truly immersive [listening to the chants] while writing these episodes, i hope reading also gives you similar kinds of experience, the one that i felt.

{I tried listening to the chants in the afternoon maybe because i am listening it for the second time or maybe because those chants were to be made in the morning only, i didn't get similar kinds of experience}.
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Great update
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As Avi remained in this contemplative state the many students, security officer outside the venue began to become restive eager to enter the venue of happening. But the security officer have closed the venue for now and the archaelogical department is being contacted if they knew about what caused the incident.  The head of Archaeological department Prof.Das has just arrived to the scene and the inspector is asking him about the particulars of the site, asking if it is any strategic site of any national importance as then they may need higher ups permission to go into further details. Upon getting to know that no such findings of importance have been discovered yet at the site but that recently they did find something worth researching. That is why they are trying to cordon off this area from outside view.

Upon learning that, he realized that it is safe to enter the limits without receiving any disciplinary action in the future. He along with few constables entered the limits and began to enter the premises. The crowd surrounding the site are restive eager to enter the site themselves. The campus security is having a hectic job controlling the crowd. The inspector has earlier grabbed the smartphones of few students who were trying to shoot the area afraid that any national strategic details may get leaked to the media and wider public. Still some were posting the news in social media, and were trying to shoot videos.

Richa, Bhoomika and rest of the cycling club members too lost consciousness and were later taken to the campus hospital. Richa and Bhoomika gained consciousness and were wondering what exactly happened at that time. Richa was worried about Avi eventhough she only recently came into contact with him but he has become a goodfriend. Bhoomika too felt worried eventhough she repeatedly criticized him in the past. She reassured Richa that nothing bad might have happened to them, that they too must have just lost consciousness like the rest of them. Some of the nurses posted there were trying to get information about the incident from them but they received no information from them. The doctor later reprimanded these nurses and gave them a stern warning to not disturb them and let them recover.

Meanwhile in a faroff place in some lab, another kind of emergencylike situation is taking place. 
A young lady was being reprimanded by her senior.

Senior---- Do you know how serious of a mistake it could have been?? It could have led to cataclysmic consequences. It's consequences would not have been limited to this lab alone, it might have affected the entire campus and even nation. I didn't expect a senior researcher like you to have been so careless.

Lady---- But sir, that energy burst was so sudden, we were not expecting such event.

Senior---- That is the whole reason why while dealing with such sensitive experiments, that robot help is required to be taken. Don't behave like a child. You have undergone training, and you even assisted me severaltimes to train the students. That robot was required precisely to handle such sensitive cases. It was even well equipped to handle experiments even amidst an earthquake of magnitude 7. The type of experiments we are conducting require such sensitivity even though the chances of such events happening are negligibly low, i didn't expect you to commit such type of silly mistake.

Lady---- But sir, that robot requires maintenace and i had been complaining to the department for the last few months. The error rate in the experiments have been creeping up due to that, it almost reached double the average error rate that might have come with manual handling. Recently there had been budget squeezeoff for the project and we were under pressure to repeatedly show the results. The experiment was at a critical stage. Sample No.E-1782, C-286, ZB-4359 were showing favourable results. Especially Sample No.E-1782 successfully survived the first round of mutations to the gene Trp53+. We just need more such iterations if this is just a oneoff case and later we can involve the primates candidates. This could be the candidate for some serious funding from the Department of Biotechnology and Ministry of Science and Technology, Defence ministry. Not to forget even the industry leaders will fall in queue. It could lead us into an era of humans with enhanced anatomical capabilities.

Senior---- That maybe the case but you can't forget the ultimate pursuit of science can't come at the altar of public safety. Your mistake could endanger the whole department's standing in the eyes of the minsitry. I want strict cordoning off the lab. Lynch off every lab subject, this is Stage IV alert

Lady---- But that is the highest stage of alert. It requires special permission of the Head of the department. Besides our experiments there are multiple other serious experiments in the same lab. The losses will be humongous, it could run into tens of crores and even our future careerpaths might be at stake as a result.

Senior---- Any inaction from this point would be even more deadly. I have the powers under the secret clause to give such order under very exceptional circumstances. Call it luck or bad luck but the head of department is off to the conference in Switzerland and he is not available for contact at present. Now this is urgent, don't delay it anymore. Take the help of all junior assistants and all the lab equipment is to be destroyed and the whole lab is to be sanitized to the A-level. All the participants have to undergo 3 weeks quarantine later under strict supervision. Now delay no more and contact all the assistants, this is an emergency, nomatter what stage of experiments they were in destroy all the smaples, and don't let a single subject contaminate anything outside the lab. I will inform the minsitry so that an expert team from outside will later do a second level of sanitization. Now, get to the action instantl, i want no excuses. I want all the 25-30 assistants immediately on the ground and call them here nomatter what the situtaion they are in. Do you understand ??

Lady---- Yes sir. [Secretly cursing the senior and her fate. Her dreams of her research featuring in the Nature methods were in shambles].
She immediately called her assistant and informed her to contact all the assistants immediately. Seriousness level is getting debarred from the college if not attending promptly to the call.

Meanwhile, Bhoomika who is comforting Richa in the hospital received a call from the department to come to the lab immediately. Even when informing of her situation, still they did not go lenient. It is a do or die situtation, one that can threaten her academic career in the college.

Bhoomika---- wow. I did not ever come across such type of a calling. That should be some serious Emergency.
Richa---- What happened ?
Bhoomika---- I have to goto the lab. I got an urgent call.
Richa---- Why now?? The doctor mentioned that we should take proper rest after that incident. Did you inform them about that incident.
Bhoomika---- Yes, i have informed them. But still they said that the situation reuires her presence immediately.
Richa---- wow. That is some serious department you have there. Well, you better take care and if you can explain to them your situation properly you need to explain to them there. They might be better able to access your situation there.
Bhoomika---- OK. I will. Meanwhile you atke care. I will try to come as early as possible after i finish my duties there.
Richa---- OK bye take care.
Bhoomika---- See you my love. :D :P
Richa---- Hey i said no such public display of affection repeatedly. And what is with your attitude, you are just going to the lab.
Bhoomika---- Haha. I just want to see  your cute reply. Byebye.
Richa---- Bye.
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#25
Excellent update... I have a doubt , which placed the story is located
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#26
Basically it's a fantasy story mixed with some realistic facts. You can consider it as setup over Nalanda Vishwavidyalaya [now non-existent] ruins although i am mixing facts with fiction.
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Waiting
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#28
Bro waiting for update
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#29
Actually i joined a job, there's a paucity of time currently.
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#30
I lost access to my other account and since there was such a huge gap when i last wrote the update, i had to reread the whole story. But seriously, it came out really good (opinions may vary for different people), i cannot believe that i have penned this. But i seriously lost track of my thought process at the time of writing the story. I just kept on typing whatever was coming into my mind at that time and this is my original story not plagiarized from anywhere.
I had some main points and while sticking to that, i have built the lineup but i don't remember much the main points now as i haven't written them down, so i am feeling difficult to continue the story from where i left.
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#31
Om Namo Narayanaya Namaha.


      Cold air is hitting my face consistently. There is vast expanse of white snow everywhere. Not a bit of life anywhere. But to my surprise, even in this extreme cold, i am not feeling cold. But a deep sense of mysticism i feel within myself, as if i am aloof from this material world. When i close my eyes, i feel nothingness within me. I am aware of my past self but the same time i feel like there is something more. I feel as if this entire world, and this entire expanse is part of this whole nothingness.
     Ommmmmmm Ommmmmm Ommmmm 
     These words are coming from my mouth inadvertently. I can feel the words themselves resonating, coming from the depths of the universe, traversing the vast expanse of universe, and finally reaching this small granule we call earth, and finally reaching this carbon mass called myself. But who am I ? 
     Am i really this small biomass, i feel like i am nothing and everything at the same time. Am i only this 20 year human, or am i an entity that has seen the very birth of universe itself. 
    What is hot, what is cold ?? I can feel this very cold atmosphere here, but at the same time i feel like i am aloof to this. 
    Is this entire thing real ? I tried to feel the snow lying beneath my feet, somehow i can feel this coldness, this mass, this white matter. When i close my eyes, i can even feel the molecules vibrating and interacting with each other. 
    I can faintly hear omkaramantra coming from the distance, and my feet started moving in that direction inadvertently. I can feel my body both as part of myself as well as only as an exterior cover. I can feel it merely as a carrier for me. Am i really this body, or as they call, am i the soul residing in this body, or am I that entity that is looking at this body called myself from above. Who am I really 
    As i am deeply in such thoughts, my feet is carrying me to the source of sound i heard earlier. As i am approaching there, i can hear other sounds vaguely. I feel like i wouldn't have heard these sounds if i was my earlier mortal self. But am i really this mortal biomass only, i can feel a part of myself within this snow, i can feel this whole earth itself as an entity emitting it's own signature beats just like we mortal humans give heartbeats.
   As my thoughts are traversing the various philosophical questions like these, i found myself nearer to some other entity. In contrast to the white landscape i have seen until now, i can actually see a small green biome here, and omkaramantra reverberating in the atmosphere here. I observed there under the tree a shining entity constantly uttering omkaramantra. 
   I seated myself there on that lush green grass carpet, and entered yogamudra myself.
Ommmm  Ommmmm Ommmm.
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