Thriller Vendetta "Revenge Is The Purest Emotion" (Complete)AMA Wining Story by Meriaiza

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One of the best stories of Xossip. Loved this when i first read it.

[Ramesh_Rocky]

Chapter 2 : An Eye For An Eye




Raghu was running like a wild wounded animal trying to save his life. He was knocking things down along the way that will make it difficult for the chasing man to catch him and due to his sheer panic, he fell down twice as well. Yet the fear of death made him get back to his feet and keep on running. On the other hand the guy who was chasing him was almost jogging confidently in his pursuit. He knew he would catch his prey and he was even smelling the blood already. Raghu's breath was now getting heavier and he knew that the guy chasing him was closing the distance between them as he now started picking up his pace. To his horror a dead end was fast approaching. He saw an old building nearby and went inside it. It was an abandoned building and the stairway to the second floor was broken. He quickly started searching for an exit but to his horror he realized that all the other exits were sealed off. At that point he heard someone shutting the open door from which he got inside the building. He turned around and saw the same guy who was chasing him staring at him with his eyes that had fire burning in them. Raghu was already tired by running so much and he was bleeding as well due to the beating that he suffered from the same man who was now slowly coming towards him. He panicked and started going backwards but his feet hit something on the floor and he fell down to the floor. His head hit the concrete hard and before he could recover, the man who was hunting him hit him hard on his head with an iron pipe. He fell down again and this time he stayed on the floor unconscious.

He was bought back to his senses when ice cold water splashed across his face. His head was hurting badly and it took him a while to figure out why everything was looking so strange. He was tied upside down from the ceiling and was completely naked. He wanted to scream for help but even his mouth was shut with duct tape.

Rahul:"Listen to me carefully asshole as I will not repeat myself again. I'm going to remove the tape now and you will answer every question if you want to live. The more you will lie, the more I will make you suffer. In the end you will tell me everything that I want to know anyway. One more thing, nobody lives around here. So no point in wasting your breath by screaming and making me angry. You didn't come here by mistake, I made you come here. Do you understand what I just said?" Raghu quickly noded his head.

Rahul:"Good." He said and roughly removed the tape from his mouth.

Rahul:"So Raghu what was the name of people that were with you that day?"

Raghu:"I don't know what you are talking about sir. Please let me go. I didn't do an....AHHHHHHHH" He couldn't even complete his sentence when Rahul kicked him hard on his face. His lips got cut and blood started coming out.

Rahul:"You and your kind never understand the easy way. Don't worry I have got just the thing to freshen up your memory." He had a bag lying on the floor right beside him and he took out a small sharp knife from inside it. Straight away he started hitting Raghu on his body with the knife and gave him several cuts. The place was buzzing with Raghu's screams but nobody was there to listen to them. After that Rahul took out a box and after opening it, started applying salt on Raghu's cuts.

Raghu:"AHHHHHHHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOO PLEASE STOPPPPPPPP I'll tell you everything but please STOPPPPPP." On hearing that Rahul splashed some water on his body to clean away the salt. It didn't stop the pain completely but it did help a little.

Rahul:"Start telling me the names otherwise this time I'll cut off your body parts."

Raghu:"Salim Hatkela and Manoj Patel. Please believe me I don't know anything about who was the man that hired us." Rahul knew about both the names that Raghu gave him. Both of them had criminal records.

Rahul:"Then how did you end up working for him?"

Raghu:"For money ofcourse. Salim hired both me and Manoj. Both of us were given 5 lakh each and the only condition was to follow every order that we will be given and don't ask any questions." After being an inspector for years and breaking so may criminals in interrogation, he could tell if the criminals were telling the truth or lying and Raghu was telling the truth.

Rahul:"Do you know the whereabouts of that man?"

Raghu:"No sir I have seen him for the first time the same day we broke into your house. Both me and Manoj were told to meet at Salim's house and when we reached there, he was already there before us. He told us about the plan. I was scared about breaking into a security officer inspector's house but needed the money badly."

Rahul:"So for money you didn't hesitate banging a defenseless woman and helping to kill her?" Raghu remained quite after hearing that.

Rahul:"Tell me why did you need that money that badly?"

Raghu:"My son was sick sir. I needed the money for his operation. Please forgive me sir. I was ordered to bang your wife. I already paid the money to the hospital and I had no other option."

Rahul:"There is always an option. I know where your family lives. I can bang your wife and kill her as well. I can kill your son if I want to avenge the death of my unborn son but I wont. That's the difference between you and me. I will take the option that you didn't." Raghu closed his eyes and tears started coming out of them.

Rahul:"Sooner or later all of us must pay for our sins. Mistakes are forgiven but one must pay for his sins. Remember this?" He said that and took out a butcher's knife from the bag. Raghu's face went as white as all his blood was drained from his body.

Rahul:"You guys didn't even let me or my wife beg for mercy or scream but I want you to. I want to hear you scream like a bitch. Every time you will scream it will be like music to my ears." He said that and hit the butcher's knife so hard on his right arm that the sharp knife went clear through it.

Raghu:"AHHHHHHHHHHHHH PLEASE STOP AHHHHHHHHH OHHH GOD PLEASE HELP ME. AHHHHHHHHHHHH" He screamed even louder than before as Rahul cut his other arm as well. Blood was coming out from both sides of his body now like it was coming out from a fountain. Raghu was crying and screaming for mercy but they were falling on deaf ears. If anything, his screams of agony were motivating Rahul. The screams only got louder as by striking twice he cut through Raghu's right leg. Now Raghu was hanging with only one leg and he was feeling the lights from his eyes getting dim. He tried pleading for mercy one last time.

Raghu:"Please don't kill me. I have a son and a wife who depend upon me." That only made Rahul even more angrier than before.

Rahul:"What about my wife? What about my son that wasn't even born? WHAT ABOUT THEM YOU SON OF A BITCHHH?" He was made with anger and hit the butcher's knife with full force on Raghu's face. Raghu's face was torn apart and he died instantly. After getting a hold on himself Rahul started cutting down rest of his his body. Rahul had already dug a hole big enough for Raghu's body. He threw Raghu's dead body inside the hole and started closing the hole. Once he buried him inside the grave, he spit with anger and disgust on his grave. After many weeks a smile of satisfaction was on his face and he thought to himself "1 down and 3 to go."...........

[Ramesh_Rocky]

Emotional.Jatt-

3rd update was the peak of brutality,cruelness and revenge. I read it really fast bcoz this kind of scene can never be enjoyed by a person like me. It may be very important part of story,but it really touch my soul. I have been thinking about the situation and feelings of Rahul. It is like whole world is destroing in front of his eyes and he can't do anything. Really a doom's day for the couple instead of a lovely romantic anniversary celebration.
Really that person is a maniac or psycho who made the goons to bang Kalpana so brutally. U r right bro,Revenge is the purest emotion bcoz the circumstances which made him so cruel can be more horrible than it.
Hats of to ur writing skills,you are really a master.

[Ramesh_Rocky]

That night lying awake on his bed he started thinking about how much has changed in the space of a few weeks? He no longer could sleep at night peacefully like he used to. The nightmares about his wife getting gang bangd and murdered brutally came every time he went to sleep and he woke up screaming Kalpana's name. Even after a few weeks and watching the same nightmare over and over again didn't lessen the pain one bit. Now he was even afraid to go to sleep anymore. He started thinking about the events which happened after Kalpana's brutal murder and among other things about Lavanya........

Lavanya was Kalpana's younger sister. She was 3 years younger than Kalpana. She got married 2 years after Kalpana but unlike her elder sister, she was not so lucky with her married life. She got married to a American based Indian business tycoon and went to USA along with her husband. Due to different views of looking at life and hardly ever spending any time together, they got off to a bad start and it only got worse with each passing day. Then one day she caught him screwing his Secretary and that was it. She got a a lot of money from her divorce and decided to live in America as she knew her parents will pressurize her into marrying again and after her bitter experience, marriage was the last thing that was on her mind. She got a job as a kindergarten teacher and started what she hoped will be a peaceful life. Out of the blue one day her mother who was crying hysterically called her and told her about the brutal bang and murder of her sister Kalpana. She was really close with Kalpana growing up and the sad news about her horrible death shattered her. She also started thing about Rahul and what he must be going through? Rahul and Kalpana for her were made for each other. She remembered how she used to tease Rahul after he got engaged to Kalpana and even after their marriage she used to pull the leg of Rahul every time they met. Infact they got along more like friends than mere relatives. After her marriage she lost touch with both Kalpana and Rahul but now all the memories of the past came rushing back to her mind. She took leave from her job and caught the first flight back to India.

Her relatives picked her up from the airport. His father died not long after her marriage and her mother lived alone now. She tried a few times to convince her mother to come and live abroad with her but she was not ready to leave the house which her husband had the memories of her late beloved husband. Lavanya was shocked to see her mother again. The death of Kalpana really had affected her badly and she was looking like a zombie. She went to meet Rahul and what she saw really hurt her deeply. The same guy that used to be jovial and full of life was looking as if the world has ended for him. He seemed like the world around him has stopped moving and he was waiting for the moment when the love of his life Kalpana will come back again. She was not ready to let him live the rest of his life in grief and pain and decided to help him start living his life again. After making up her mind she went to see him again. She made tea for both of them and they were sitting quietly drinking the tea when she told him what she had in mind.

Lavanya:"Rahul I can understand what you are going through. I can't say that I am going though the same pain that you are going through but trust me all of us are devastated by Kalpana's death. At the same time you can't live like that forever. Sooner of later you'll have to live your life. I can't see you like that. Why can't you come and live with us for a while? Even mother will be happy to see you. Trust me she's a wreck after the loss of Kalpana. Rahul all of us are devastated, can't we help each other get over this together?" He stayed quite for a while and than finally started talking

Rahul:"Thanks Lavanya for coming here. I really appreciate what you are trying to do but I don't think that's a good idea. I don't even know who those men were and why they did this to me? What if I started living with you and Pooja aunty and they attack your house as well? I can't take this chance. It's killing me inside that Kalpana died because of me. Now I don't want to risk your life as well. Infact it would be better if you don't meet me again until atleast the culprits are caught. If anything then take Pooja aunty with you to America. I'm even worried about her safety now. Trust me Lavanya those men that did this are animals. They will not even think twice before hurting even an old woman." Tears came in Lavanya's eyes upon hearing that. She gently held Rahul's hand and said

Lavanya:"Why don't you come with us as well? You don't have anyone here. Please come with us and start a new life there. It will help you to get away from here. Start a new life abroad."

Rahul:"My life ended when those animals bangd and killed my wife before my eyes and I couldn't do anything to save her. I can't go anywhere before I see them suffer the same pain they inflicted upon me and Kalpana. I can't start a new life before I see them suffer, beg for mercy and kill all of them."

Lavanya:"Revenge will not bring back Kalpana Rahul. What difference will there be between you and them if you will become an animal yourself to avenge Kalpana?" Tears started flowing from Rahuls' eyes upon hearing that and he replied

Rahul:"If it will make me an animal than so be it. It will be hard for you to understand but I need to do this. I know that I can't bring her back but I feel as if her soul will never rest in peace until I avenge her death. So please do as I say. Go back to America as soon as you can and take Pooja aunty with you." Lavanya was crying as well now. Both of them stayed quiet for a while and than she finally broke that silence

Lavanya:"Ok Rahul I'll do as you say but remember this. Never think of yourself alone in this world. I will be there and waiting for you. Promise me that you will come to see me once this is over."

Rahul:"I don't want to make a promise that I can't keep but I will try.".........

[Ramesh_Rocky]

He really was worried about the safety of Lavanya and his mother in law. A part of him wanted to comfort his mother in law but his soul was too disturbed to comfort anyone else. "Thanks God Lavanya is here. She will take care of her much better than I can anyway." He told himself to ease the guilt that was growing inside him about not doing anything for Kalpana's mother. At the airport when they were leaving Lavanya hugged him tightly and said "Remember that I will be waiting for you." He just nodded his head slightly and than saw them vanish inside the airport. The first thing that he did once Lavanya and his mother in law left for States was to resign as a security officer inspector. The security officer commissioner did his best to persuade him to change his mind. Rahul was regarded as one of the best cops and the commissioner didn't wanted to lose him. Yet he remained defined. In the end his resignation was approved. For Rahul now all the materialistic things lost their charm. There was no hope for a better future, no need for love, no nothing, just the burning desire to avenge Kalpana'a death. Than he made a vow remembering the man whose even name he didn't know yet "I don't know who you are or why you did this to me but trust me, this will only end once I will kill you even more brutally than you killed my wife. You didn't even left her corpse for me. No problem, no one will be able to find your dead body either because I will rip apart each and every part of your body and will swallow every last bit."

With the help of a friend who was a painter, he got the sketch of that man. Not that he would ever forget that face but just to make sure with every passing day he saw his face again and his misery at seeing him again will keep his hunger for revenge alive and the fuel the fire in his belly. A good inspector never forgets a face a easily. Specially that of a criminal. That thug who removed his mask was a small time criminal Raghu. He was caught several times doing robberies. Rahul was surprised how he agreed to such a hideous crime and why did that man chose a small time criminal like him? Rahul would have been worried that the man would kill Raghu to save himself but he knew that he didn't wanted to hide in the first place. Otherwise why would he not hide his face like the others? Why would he let Rahul live in the first place? It was as if he wanted Rahul to find him as badly as Rahul wanted to find him. Something about this whole thing was troubling Rahul but he was not figuring out what? Maybe because his mind which was normally crystal clear while solving such cases and figuring out criminals was over shadowed by his desire of revenge.

Although the guy who was responsible for Kalpana's bang and murder was that asshole who was ordering the goons, he couldn't let the bastards who agreed to help him out live either. "All of them will die one by one and I will make sure that they will curse the day they broke into my house." Rahul told himself. At the same time he didn't wanted to let anyone got suspicious of him. He must now think like an inspector but also as a criminal in order to not get caught while killing the scums. He was not afraid of death anymore but he didn't wanted to die or get caught before he killed all of them. He waited for a few weeks for all of this to settle down a little. He sold his house and moved to a small apartment and there he started planing how to kill Raghu? First of all he bought all the equipment needed to make them suffer his wrath. After thinking carefully about it he came up with the perfect plan. He knew an abundant factory building that was located outside the city. No one lived near it either. He sealed all the exits of that building but let the main entrance open. Raghu was a small time crook. Finding him wasn't that difficult at all and neither was kidnapping him. After beating the hell out of him he tied his hands and feet and threw him inside the trunk of his car. Once he reached near the abundant building, he took out Raghu from his car's trunk and freed his legs and arms. Raghu like a wounded animal kicked him away and started running away. An evil smile spread on Rahul's face as he saw Raghu running towards where he wanted him to go. He was smelling the blood in the air and than the chase begin.........


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[Ramesh_Rocky]

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[Ramesh_Rocky]

Rahul got the names of the other 2 masked thugs from Raghu now and they were Salim Hatkela and Manoj Patel. Both of them were different kind of animals compared with Raghu. Salim Hatkela was a psychopath. He was the mastermind behind many murders, robberies and drugs smuggling yet he never left any evidence behind him which could lead the security officer to him. His men if caught never opened there mouth about him no matter how much you torture them. The reason was simple. If anything happened to them than Salim took care of their families but if someone dare to point his finger toward him than he not only killed him but even kill all od his family. He wasn't a low profile street thug either who security officer could pick up from the street and interrogate until he confess his crimes. He had solid political backing as well from many powerful political leaders. "That bastard really did picked the best man possible to execute his hideous plan." Rahul thought to himself.

Manoj Patel on the other hand might not be as high profile as Salim but he was no Raghu either. He was suspected in no less than 6 murders and countless other crimes but just like his mentor Salim, always got away because security officer didn't find any concrete evidence against him. He had a reputation to beat countless whores as well but none of them ever dared to open their mouths against him either. He was a really twisted slime bag who didn't committed crimes just for the sake of money but he really did enjoyed doing them. Rahul found it a little strange that he too was paid paltry sum of 500000 just like a small timer like Raghu. Maybe they just lied to Raghu to make sure he didn't asked for more. "It's time for that asshole to pay back for his sins with interest." Rahul thought to himself.

Finding Manoj wasn't the problem. Problem was how to not only find him but punish him without alerting Salim or security officer for that matter. After thinking hours about different ideas, a thought came to his mind out of the blue. Majid Lala was a famous deal broker in the underworld. Majid used to be a famous gangster in his time as well. He was lucky enough to escape getting behind the prison or getting a bullet in his head. Now at his age he acted from being a peace maker between rival gangsters to the guy to contact for getting done their shady business for the rich and respected businessmen. He owed Rahul a favor from a few years ago. Majid's young son was caught at a raid on a brothel where a druggie killed one of the prostitutes. Unlike Majid he was just another average teen who was a college student and not part of the underground. Rahul let him go with warning. He did it to earn a favor with Majid and wanted to cash that favor sooner or later solving a case or getting information about a criminal. Never in his wildest imagination Rahul thought that one day he will ask Majid to help him out like this. He met Majid alone in a uncompleted construction building after calling him on his mobile and asked for his help. Majid went quite on hearing rahul's request for several minutes and than he finally replied him in a little worried tone.

Majid:"You Know what you are asking me right? If he will survive than I'll be a dead man for sure."

Rahul:"Trust me that will not happen. This time he will not get away for sure."

Majid:"I have been hearing that line for a many years now from different security officer inspectors. Why should I believe you now?"

Rahul:"Because unlike them I don't want to bring him to justice. I will serve the justice myself by becoming his judge, jury and executioner."

Majid agreed in the end. Truth was that no one really liked Manoj apart from Salim Hatela. Manoj never gave respect to anyone in underground and deep down all of them were afraid from the maniac as well. Majid contacted Manoj and asked him if he wanted to become so rich in one go that he could start his own gang? He knew Manoj was tired of working for others and dreamed about becoming as big as Salim one day. Ofcourse Manoj was interested and even agreed to Majid's condition of not telling anyone else. Majid fixed time with him and called him at midnight at a iron factory. One of Majid Lala's friend was the owner of that factory. Once Manoj was inside the factory someone closed the main door of the factory from outside and the lights came on. Manoj at first was shocked to see Rahul standing but than surprisingly started laughing.

Manoj:"I knew you will come to me sooner or later. Don't worry though. I'll deflower your ass just like I deflowered the ass of your wife HA HA HA."

Rahul:"Laugh as much as you can. Trust me in a few minutes I will make you curse the day you were born asshole." He said and bring out the butcher's knife from his bag. Manoj started laughing like a mad man upon seeing that.

Manoj:"I have a surprise for you as well. Remember this?" He said that and take out a butcher's knife from his clothes as well.

Manoj:"That's the same knife I cut your bitch with. Honestly I don't know what I enjoyed more? Fucking the ass of that bitch or cutting her into small pieces? HA HA HA HA HA See now you made me remember that bitch. Don't worry though, tonight I will fuck your ass as well before cutting you into small pieces as well from the same knife." That was all the Rahul could hear. With hate and disgust his face went red. If eyes are the window of the soul than there was nothing but fires of revenge burning in his eyes. Both of them started running wildly towards one another with their butcher knives held up in their hands. In the space of a few minutes, one of them was about to suffer pain more horrible than he had ever imagined.........

[Ramesh_Rocky]

Both of them started running wildly towards one another with their butcher knives held up in their hands. When they came close, Manoj was the first one to attack Rahul. Rahul dodged him right at the nick of time. Manoj's knife missed Rahul's face by just a few inches. Rahul recovered and attacked Manoj on his back. In the game of death their is no right or wrong or honor. Rahul's managed to draw the first blood as his knife cut through Manoj's back. "AHHHHHHH" Manoj screamed but also manged to turn around quickly. Now their was also blood in his eyes. He started attacking Rahul madly and without thinking about his own safety. Rahul manged to dodge his first 2 attacks but the third one gave him a deep cut on his right arm. Blood started pouring out from Rahul's arm and Manoj's eyes started shining seeing this. Rahul on the other hand felt the pain but only death was going to stop him now. While Manoj was happy seeing the cut on Rahul's arm, Rahul surprised him by attacking him straight away. His attacks were measured and even when Manoj dodged one, Rahul quickly came at him from another angle. After his flurry of attacks Manoj ended up bleeding from both his arms and chest. He fell on his knees with pain and for the first time fear in his eyes as his pwn blood was on his hand. Rahul came near him as he thought Manoj has given up but that was his mistake. Manoj hit Rahul on his leg. He didn't managed to generate that much power but still enough that his knife got stuck at Rahul's left leg. He started laughing like a maniac but something was wrong. Rahul stood his ground and now Manoj looked up at Rahul's face. Instead of pain he found hatred on his face. As Manoj was looking up at Rahul's face, Rahul bring his butcher's knife down on Manoj with full force. The knife went straight through the left ear of Manoj like hot knife goes through butter. Manoj's ear fell on the floor as blood started pouring out from his ear. "AHHHHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHH YOU MANIAC AHHHHHHHHHH" Maonj was shouting like a wounded animal. He was infact more afraid than being hurt. Rahul hit him with the handle of the knife he was holding in on his head. Manoj fell on the floor. Rahul took out the knife from his leg and went on his knees. He didn't cared about his own wounds and started hitting Manoj hard over and over again on his head until Manoj passed out.

2 hard slaps on Manoj's face woke him up. As his eyes slowly started getting used to what was going on, he saw Rahul filling an injection with some liquid. If that was not enough to make him afraid what he saw next made his heart beating like a bullet train. He was completely naked and both his arms and legs were stretched and tied wide apart with 2 pillars. Manoj was bandaged as well which made his bleeding stop. He was only starting to understand what was happening when Rahul came behind him and roughly injected him. Manoj panicked and asked

Manon:"Wha...what are you doing asshole? What did you injected me?" Rahul slapped him hard on his face and replied

Rahul:"Don't worry it was just an adrenaline injection so you don't passed out again. Now listen scumbag, that was your last question. I'll ask the questions and you will answer all of them. Otherwise......." Rahul said that and took out something from his bag. Manoj's heart came to his mouth when he saw that it was a cutter most common in Russian mafia and it was used to cut the fingers.

Rahul:"Now we'll play a simple game. You can call it countdown or fingers top 10. Every time you'll lie, I'll cut one of your fingers. Do you understand?" Undergrounds most feared gangster was now trembling with fear and he just manged to shake his head in agreement.

Rahul:"Good. Than tell me what did you do with my wife's body parts?"

Manoj:"That man took it along with him. I just got my money and left from Salim's house. After that man left with the suitcase containing your wife's dead body."

Rahul:"Who is he and why did he do that with me?"

Manoj:"I don't know trust me I don't know anything about him. We have a simple rule that don't ask any unnecessary actions and do what we are told to do. I got my money and that was enough for me."

Rahul:"So there's nothing more that you can tell me about him?"

Manoj:"I just know that he must have paid alot of money to Salim for doing this because Slaim even paid me 25 laks afterwards and after a long time Salim came with us to make sure that everything went smoothly that day when we invaded your house. Normally he just orders us. That's it. Trust me I told you every thing."

Rahul:"Good. Since you have been so cooperative, it's time to reward you." He said that and cut Manoj's index finger.

Manoj:"AHHHHHHHHHH please forgive me pl..AHHHHHHHH" Rahul didn't even paid any attention to him and cut another finger. That place was echoing with loud screams of Manoj and his pleas of mercy that fell on deaf ears of Rahul as he kept on cutting all his fingers and thumbs. In just a few minutes Manoj lost all his fingers. He was crying and screaming with pain and his screams were giving satisfaction to Rahul. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" Manoj screamed again as Rahul cut the toe of his right foot. The screams only got louder as he cut all his toes of both feet. There was lot of heat near them but Manoj was in so much pain that he never once noticed that. He was just crying like a bitch and the pain was unbearable. That's when Rahul came back with another tool from his bag. He opened the mouth of Manoj with his hand started pulling out his teeth forcefully with his tool. Blood and Manoj's teeth were dropping on the floor as one by one Rahul broke all of them. Manoj was in so much pain and misery that even an animal would have taken a mercy on him but Rahul was in no mood of mercy. He started giving cuts on all over Manoj's body. They were not that deep but deep enough that Manoj felt the pain all over his body and than rahul started applying salt to all over Rahul's body. "MMMMMMMMMMMMM MMMMMMMMMM" Once again Manoj was screaming with severe pain. Each and every pain that he suffered was worse than dying and yet he was still alive somehow. That was only because Rahul didn't wanted him to die that easily. He wanted to gave him the pain of thousand deaths and that was exactly what he was doing.

Rahul:"I have got one last gift to give you before you die. No I will not fuck your stinking ass. I have something even more special than that." An iron rod was burning in fire near them and that's why there was that heat. With the use of a clamp he picked the hot burning iron rod and get behind Manoj. "MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM" Manoj shouted even louder than before as Rahul started shoving the hot rod inside Manoj's ass. He kept on shoving the rod deep inside Manoj's asshole. His ass and slowly even the organs inside him were burning and the pain was unspeakable. His eyes were poping out with pain and he was screaming with every breath he had left in his body. As he was about to die due to excess blood loss and the internal bleeding that was happening due to that rod inside him, Rahul didn't even let him die like that. With all the power he got he shoved the rest of the rod inside Manoj. The burning iron rod cut everything that came in it's way as it's end came out crushing the skull of Manoj. Blood was pouring out from every cut of Manoj's body and even pieces of his brain started falling on the floor. "I hope you will suffer even worse in hell you asshole. I curse you." Rahul said in anger and disgust and spitted on Manoj's dead body. On his call Majid Lala opened the factory door from outside. He told Rahul to go away as his men will take care of Manoj's body. Even when Majid Lala saw the dead body of Manoj he felt sick to his stomach and vomited on the dead body. His men took care of the dead body and started cleaning up the place.

Once Rahul was back at his apartment, he removed the old bandages and applied new ones with care. Later he went inside his bath and started splashing water on his face to calm down his nerves. Afterwards when he straightened up and saw his face in the mirror he saw something very strange. 2 Rahul's were there. One was laughing like a maniac and the other one was as sad as he ever saw anyone in his life. Which one of them were him? Was he that sad soul who lost everything he had right in front of his eyes or the maniac who felt good while torturing others and was worse than a beast?"........

[Ramesh_Rocky]

Salim Hatkela was fuming with anger when the news of Manoj's horrible death reached him. In other circumstances he would have suspected many people but first Raghu and now the death of Manoj can't be a coincidence. He was angry at that asshole as well who didn't let them kill Rahul that day. To make matters worse Rahul had not only resigned from his job but he was also hiding some place no one knew. Rahul didn't have any family left either who would know about him. "Where can I find that bastard?" Salim was thinking that when one of his men came and told him that Mr.X had come to meet him. He was the same man who did all this to Rahul and now Salim and his men where paying the price. He didn't even tell his name to Salim and just told him to call him as Mr.X. That was annoying Salim as well. He told them to let Mr.X come inside his room. Once the young man came inside the room and closed the door behind him, Salim started venting his anger on him. He just calmly listened to his ranting and when he stopped he simply replied

Young Man:"No, you will not kill him."

Salim:"2 of my men are dead now including my best sharp shooter Manoj. Yet you are still telling me to not kill that bastard?"

Young Man:"Calm down. If Manoj was that good then he wouldn't be killed like a dog."

Salim:"Fuck you! You know what, it's all because of you. We never invade the house of an inspector yet you make me do that and than you even let that asshole live? Why? He don't even know you so it's easy for you to remain calm. Raghu and Manoj are both dead and he'll come after me next. All thanks to you letting that bastard live. Tell me why? Why you let him live that day?"

Young Man:"I thought you told me that you will never ask questions."

Salim:"Well things have changed now."

Young Man:"Lets just cut the crap. I have some work for you."

Salim:"Man have you got some balls or what! What makes you think I will still work for an asshole like you?"

Young Man:"This." He said that and opened the suitcase he came with. When Salim saw the amount that was inside it his jaw dropped in astonishment.

Salim:"Wh..what do you want now?"

Young Man:"First of all you will never ask me a question about him again.You want to kill him right? Ok go ahead but you will do it just as I will say. I'll tell you where he's living right now and you will drop a message there and invite him to your hideout. No guns or explosives will be used. Other than that you can use whatever you want to kill him. Now take this." He said that and handed an envelope to Salim.

Salim:"Can I atleast ask you what am I suppose to do with this?"

Young Man:"I was about to tell you anyway. If you'll kill him than I want you to deliver his dead body to me along with this envelope. On the other hand if you are about to die than give this to him. Trust me he will spare your life after reading this. Just remember one thing, you will not open this envelope under any condition. Do you understand?"

Salim:"Yes I do. As for him killing me, are you kidding me? I will have 20 men along with me. He has no chance in hell to survive now." That man just smiled upon hearing that.

Young Man:"We will see.".........

Rahul was amazed at how they managed to find out where he's living? He thought he was careful but maybe he just underestimated them. He was reading the note for the third time now and even the third time around, it managed to worry him. It read as

"Enough already. Lets just settle this like real men. If you have the balls than I'll be waiting for you tonight at my place. I hope you will not disappoint me."

He knew it was from Salim and he knew where his hideout was. Question was, should he go knowing fully well that it's a trap? He started talking to himself "What choice do I have anyway? Even if I'll run they'll find me again. Atleast this way I have a chance to avenge Kalpana rather than running like a dog and getting killed while trying to save my own life. Besides what do I have to live for anyway? Even if I'll die, atleast I'll die trying but I promise you one thing Kalpana, I will not die before I'll kill all of them"

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Once Rahul reached Salim's place, his sixth sense told him that something was not right. Nobody was outside and it wasn't locked either. It was too late to turn back now and knowing fully well that he might not be able to come out alive, he went inside the building. It was an incomplete building. Years ago a famous builder had refused to pay Salim money. Salim killed him brutally at this very building which was being constructing. The nature of the murder was so brutal that it shocked even the underworld. He then decided to turn the same building into his headquarter. His legend only grew stronger by doing this. Once Rahul reached the third floor of the building, he realized that his worst fears have just come true. Salim was sitting in a chair there surrounded by his gang members. Rahul roughly estimated them to be around 15-16 men and all of them were ready to welcome him equipped with knives, hockey's, chains etc. That wasn't a bad estimate, there were 20 of them besides Salim. Salim started laughing like a maniac upon seeing him. When he finally stopped laughing, he welcomed his guest

Salim:"Honestly I don't know if you are plain stupid or have a death wish. You could have tried to atleast run away. It would have been fun for me as well to hunt you down. Before I kill you, atleast tell me why do you want to die so badly?"

Rahul:"Everyone dies sooner or later but what is a life without any purpose? Scumbags like you live to fulfill their greed. I have only one now, to avenge what you assholes did to my wife. 2 of you are dead and now your number is up." He said that and took out both the butcher's knives from his bag. After killing Manoj, he had kept his knife as well. Since it was one of the knives that murdered Kalpana, he felt it was only right to use it to avenge her. Salim wanted to see the fear of death in Rahul's eyes. He wanted him to beg for his life like all his victims did before he killed them but there was not even a hint of fear in Rahul's eyes and his voice was firm when he spoke. That only pissed Salim.

Salim:"You bastard! Who do you think you are talking with? Do you think I'm another Manoj? Remember what I did with your wife? That day it was because of that asshole's wish I let you live but even God can not save you today." He turned his attention towards his men and ordered "Go ahead and break each and every bone in his body." They started walking towards him and within seconds that place turned into a bloodbath.

All of them were shocked and confused when one of the thugs head exploded all of a sudden. His blood was all over those who were standing near him. If that stopped them in their trunks than soon they were running for their lives as more and more heads started to explode as a sniper expertly started killing them with clean head shots. Rahul took full advantage of their panic and he started mercilessly chopping away at the fleeing thugs. Cries of pain were echoing everywhere and it felt as if it was raining blood there. Rahul was going for the kills as well and he mercilessly chopped the necks and heads of everyone that came near him while trying to flee. Whoever did manged to get passed him and tried to escape by the stairs, got their head blown away by the sniper. Soon even the stairs were red with blood and gore. Salim was sitting shell shocked on his chair. He saw many shootouts in his life but what was going on in front of his eyes was both unbelievable and horrifying as the bodies of his army of thugs were falling on the floor and stairs like flies. Soon their was nothing but blood, body parts ranging from arms, hands, fingers, ears, noses, eye balls and lots of dead bodies all over the floor. Even the walls were sprayed with blood. Rahul slowly turned his attention towards Salim. Salim pissed in his pants when he saw the man who was staring at him with fire in his eyes. Rahul was soaked in blood and drops of blood were falling on the floor from his hands, face and hair. It was almost as if he showered in blood and in a way, that was exactly what he did. He stepped on the bodies that were laying on his way as he reached Salim who not only pissed in his pants but now was shaking like a leaf.

Salim:"Please please forgive me. I'll turn myself to security officer. I'll give them the names of everyone that's involved in the underground. I have evidence against even politicians. Just don't kill me please please forgive me. Trust me I'll turn all the people you were after in. All of them. I w..AHHHHHHHHHHHHH" His scream was almost as loud as of those who died in front of his eyes as his right ear fell on the floor and blood started pouring out from Salim's face.

Rahul:"I don't give a fuck about any of them. Listen carefully and tell me who is that asshole who made you do all this? Remember that you have only 1 ear left now and I have no time to hear any bullshit."

Salim:"Wait wait! Trust me I don't know who he is. His first condition was to never follow him or ask him any questions. You can't even think about how much money he paid me. Please trust me I don't know who he is?"

Rahul:"Well than you are of no use to me. Time to pay for your sins asshole." He said that and chopped the fingers of his right hand.

Salim:"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH PLEASE STOP I HAVE SOMETHING FOR YOU. PLEASE PLEASE STOP." Rahul stopped and Salim took out something from his pocket and extended it toward him. It was an envelope.

Salim:"He told me to give it to you if you are about to kill me. He told me that it will save my life." Rahul took out the letter from the envelope and started reading it.

"So you managed to kill all of them? Bravo! I must confess that you even exceeded my expectations. Than again you were always a monster weren't you? Anyway, in case you are wondering if it's me who just saved your ass than yes you are right. Why? Well if I ever wanted to kill you than do you honestly think you would have been alive now? I know you are dying to meet me but trust me the feeling is mutual. I'm writing my address and I'll be waiting for you tomorrow. Kindly don't waste your time by coming today as you wont find me there tonight. Once you are done with drinking the blood of this poor soul who is begging for mercy from you, go and rest. Trust me you'll need all the energy you can muster tomorrow. What a meeting it will be between 2 animals, 2 sinners and 2 troubled souls that have so much common between them. Until then take care."

The address was written below. Rahul put the letter in his pocket after reading it.

Salim:"So what was written in it? You'll et me live right?"

Rahul:"According to this letter you are S O L and J W F."

Salim:"What does that mean?"

Rahul:"Shit out of luck and jolly well fucked!" His knife came down hard on the fingers of Salim's left hand. For the next few minutes the place was buzzing with screams of Salim as Rahul cut all his fingers, than his hands, both his legs and finally his arms. Unbelievably even after going through so much pain and on his last breathes, Salim started laughing again.

Rahul:"What's so funny?"

Salim:"You should be thankful to me. At least I gave your bitch a good time before killing her." He said that and started laughing again.

Rahul:"You think that's funny? Here let me give you a bigger smiley face." He said that and put both his hands inside Salim's mouth and started to rip open his mouth. Soon both sides of Salim's mouth started to bleed and the wounds only got deeper until he broke his jaw into 2 pieces. Finally Salim was put out of his misery as he died more horribly than any of his victims.

Later that night when Rahul came out of the shower and he saw the mirror there was one only person standing in the mirror. An animal was standing there laughing like a maniac..........
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Rahul was not surprised to find out that the man who destroyed his life lived in one of the most expensive villa's in the city. While he was was on his way to meet with his destiny, questions started forming in his mind. Why he did this to him? Why did he let him live if he hated him so much? Why did he save him yesterday? Then his mind drifted towards Kalpana and soon hatred overpowered his curiosity. "Whoever he is and no matter why he did this to me, I'll make him suffer the pain he inflicted upon me." He told himself. The security guard on the entrance of the villa let him in and told him Mr.X is waiting for him. "So he's hiding his real identity from everyone........interesting." Rahul couldn't help but think to himself. Once Rahul was inside the house he soon discovered that nobody else is inside the house. The villa was even more impressively decorated from the inside. Finally on the second floor of the house he found the mysterious Mr.X sitting on a sofa in the drawing room.

Mr.X:"Finally the beast that I created is in front of my eyes again. You must be feeling honored. It's not easy to meet your creator after all."

Rahul:"Cut the crap already. Before this beast rips you into pieces, tell me why you did this to me? Why didn't you just kill me that day? Answer me you asshole!" Mr.X:"You're so pathetic that it makes me sick. You have lost everything already. From your pride to even the love of your life. All you have left are a limited number of breaths which I have counted carefully. Why do you want to lose these as well? Give up already and I might spare this excuse of a life that u have"

Rahul:"You're a fool if you think it's over between us. You started this but now I'll end it when I will rip your fucking heart out of your chest and eat it while it's still beating."

Mr.X:"Its good to hunt a prey down when he is giving a stiff competition. Do whatever is in your power. Only one of us can win and you don't even have a reason to win. I on the other hand will win no matter what the outcome will be. Infact in a way I have already won."

Rahul:"What's the Goddamn reason !!!" He shouted, "Before I kill you, I want to know why you did this to me? What did I ever do to you?"

Mr.X:"Now that's a million dollar question isn't it? But I'm afraid you'll have to find the answer on your own. You can kill me now if you want to but than you wouldn't know why your whole life was ripped inside out. The reason will die with me."

Rahul:"Enough games already. Tell me you son of a bitch why you did it? How can you justify what you did?"

Mr.X:"Justify? Nobody can justify their sins but trust me, you are just as much a sinner as I am. Both of us are going to rot in hell sooner of later. Atleast I had a reason for my actions but you can't even say that for yourself. I'll give you the same hint as I gave you the last time. Maybe this time around you'll spend your time trying to figure out the reason rather than wasting your time trying to find me. Remember this, Be it a rock or a grain of sand, in water they sink as the same. Just remember one thing, even if you will manage to find out the reason, your life will be even more miserable than it is now. So maybe it's better to just kill me now and satisfy your thirst for revenge. Who knows, maybe you'll start a normal life all over again."

Rahul:"I'm not asking you for any advice you piece of shit! What life are you talking about? The life that you destroyed already? How can it get any miserable than it already is? What I'm living now is not a life, It's worse than death. As an ex-cop I have seen all kind of scumbags in my life but none of them come close to what you did. If you hate me so much then why didn't you just kill me? What did Kalpana do to deserve what you did? What about my son who wasn't even born? WHY WHY WHYYYYY" He punched him so hard on his mouth that Mr.X fell on the floor. His upper lip got cut and blood started coming out from the cut. Slowly he got back on his feet.

Mr.X:"Don't worry. I will not do anything to you. If I wanted to, then you wouldn't be standing here today. As for your questions, I have my reasons. I know I have done terrible things but I did them all because of you. Don't act like a saint. You're not the only one who lost everything. I have lost everything as well thanks to you. If you are living for revenge than I too am living to see you suffer everyday like a dog like you should. No your wife and son didn't deserve what happened to them but you don't deserve to have them or any happiness in your life either. Anyway what's the point of telling you these things? It's not as if you ever cared about others. You want to end this? Fine with me but you have only 2 options now. Either kill me right now and avenge the murder of you wife or I'll give you 48 hours and a hint to find out why I did this to you. Don't worry I'm not running away anywhere. If I wanted to, then you would have never even found me out. Now here's the tricky part, if you will not come back here within 48 hours of finding out about why I did this to you than you will never be able to find me out. So how do you want to end it?" Rahul remained silent for a few seconds thinking about what that bastard just said. In the end his curiosity got the better of him.

Rahul:"When I have waited this long than I can wait for a few more hours as well. So what the hint?"

Mr.X:"It's in my name. My real name is Vidyut Singhania. Does the name Singhania ring any bell? Remember Priya Singhania? I bet you will now even if you have forgotten about her. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go somewhere." He said that and left the room but Rahul was standing there like he was paralyzed........

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Chapter 3 : The Right to Live?




Our mind works in mysterious ways. All of us must have experienced the feeling of deja vu in our lives. Why this happens is still a mystery. That's not the only strange phenomena though when it comes to mind. How most of us can shut out even the darkest memories of our lives somewhere in our mind and with time even forget if such things ever happened is equally amazing. Rahul too had shut the chapter of Priya somewhere in his mind and with time he learned to move on with his life. Still we can run as fast as we can but no one can outrun destiny. The demons of his past were finally catching up with him. With tears in his eyes a name came out of his mouth, "Priya....."

It happened only a few years ago but it sure felt as if it happened in another life. His job, Kalpana and than the death of his mother all happened years after Priya left him but it sure wasn't easy forgetting about her. After all who can forget about their first love? He was unlike most youngsters. It must be due to his father and the dream of one day becoming a cop like him that even at young age he was so focused about achieving the goals of his life. Thanks to his hard work he got admission in one of the top colleges in the country. It was there he saw her and ended up losing his focus. She was a stunner when it comes to looks. At 5'8 she was fair skinned and while slim, she had reasonably big bosom and a face to die for. Soon his dreams changed from becoming a cop to one day marrying this angel who took his heart away. It was love at first sight and like they say, there is no fool bigger than the one in love.

After a few days when he recovered his focus, he used it to get near to her. He started by gathering any information he could get about her. Her family only moved back to India a few years ago. Before that his father worked hard for years in an IT company abroad. After saving enough money, his father decided to move back to India and opened his own IT company here. Thanks to his experience and the links he made abroad, his company soon made a name for itself in IT field. At heart Priya's father was a typical Indian and still didn't forget about his background. He didn't wanted his children to get wayward and that along with his love for his country were the reasons why he decided to move back to India. Priya's mother was a house wife and she had a younger brother as well. That was the extent of what he could find about her family. Besides in order to get near to her he needed to know about her rather than her family. He was a good observer as well and soon started noticing her likes and dislikes.

It wasn't that difficult getting into her friends circle as Priya's best friend was his neighbor. Once he become friend with Priya, it didn't took him much time to get close to her using the knowledge he had gathered about her. He was always pampering her and doing everything he can to make her happy. She too started enjoying the extra attention she was getting from him and it wasn't as if she was getting any at home. Her father was too busy in his business and he was just way to strict with her anyway. Her mother was busy ordering her servants and in her kitty parties. Yes her brother surprisingly worshiped her but he was just too young to be considered as a friend. It was different with Rahul though. He was proving out to be the friend she always wanted. What she didn't knew at that time was that he wanted to be more than friends with her. Both their lives turned upside down when he finally expressed his feelings to her. They were friends for a few months now and the more he spend time with her, the more he fell in love with her. From her looks to the way she walked, her fragrance to the way everything brightened up when she was talking were all very enchanting to him. Her birthday was coming up next month and he decided to express his feelings to her that day. He started saving money but still didn't saved enough to buy anything he deemed worth of her. For the first time in his life as asked his father for money and to his delight he hot it as well. He ended up buying a silver necklace for her. On her birthday he managed to take her away from the other friends to a park and after giving her his gift, started confessing his love to her.

Rahul:"Priya I wanted to say something to you for so long now that if I'll still keep it to myself than I'm afraid that I might die."

Priya:"What is it Rahul and why didn't you told me before? We are friends right and friends don't hide things from one another."

Rahul:"I guess it's not easy confessing such feelings but now I must. Priya I love you and fell in love with you at first sight. Please tell me that you feel that same way about me?" She was just stunned upon hearing that. She remained quite for a few minutes before replying him.

Priya:"I'm sorry Rahul but I never thought about you this way. I always saw you as a friend and maybe even as a brother. Infact you are my best friend. Please lets remain as friends. I don't want to lose my best friend now. Maybe it's better if I just go now. You are coming to the party right? We can talk later."

She was feeling uncomfortable with what he said and just went away from him as fast as she could after saying this. In her panic she ever dropped the necklace there that he gave her as a gift. For the first time in his life he was heart broken. With tears flowing from his eyes he picked up the necklace that he ground. Later that night while cutting her birthday cake Priya noticed that her best friend didn't came to her party. Rahul on the other hand had buried his head in his pillow and kept on crying for hours that night. When the tears finally stopped, his anger slowly took over his sorrow and he thought to himself "How could she break my heart like this? Alright bitch if you don't care about my feelings than I'll make sure that you will pay for playing with my emotions like this.".............

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Once the seed of evil is planted in the mind of a person than only a miracle can stop him from committing sin. Had Rahul used his common sense than he would have realized that there was nothing Priya had done to hurt him. One sided love always ends with an heartbreak sooner or later but like they say, common sense is a sense that is not so common. He was feeling the pain and misery of getting his dreams shattered. Had his love for her been true than he would have wished her well and let her live her life with peace and tried to move on with his as well. Sure it would have not lessen the pain at that time but than only time can heal such wounds. In his eyes and mind she was the devil that first trapped him in her love and than broke his heart. "Maybe she did this to win a bet or maybe that's what these rich assholes do. Make our lives more miserable and than enjoy telling the tales of our misery behind our backs." He thought and spitted away in disgust. The girl that he was thinking about spending the rest of his life with a few days ago was now the devil himself. "Don't worry princesses, I'll teach you a lesson that you will never forget. You will curse the day when you decided to play this sick game with me" He had planned a surprise for her and it wasn't pretty.

He started acting like nothing happened between them. Even Priya was relived. She didn't wanted to lose her best friend. "He's over it already. Maybe it was nothing more than a crush. I hope he'll find someone special one day." She thought and prayed to God for him. A few days later there was a party at one of his friends house. Rahul asked Priya if she would like to go with him? She agreed. He took her to his friend's house on his bike. Once they were inside the house, she was surprised to find out that no one else was there and Rahul had the key to the house.

Priya:"Rahul where is everyone?"

Rahul:"Oh I forgot to tell you. He had something important to take care of so will be a little late. He asked me the favor if I can come a little early and welcome his other guests. We'll just start the party and he'll join us as soon as he can."

Pariya:"Ok."

Rahul:"Let me grab something for you to drink. The others will come anytime now." He said that and walked towards the kitchen. Something was bothering her but she couldn't figured out what? Soon she saw Rahul came back with soft drinks. They started doing chit chat while drinking. A few minutes after she finished her drink, she started feeling drowsey.

Priya:"Rahul.....I don't know what's happening to me? My head is spinning."

Rahul:"You seem exhausted. Wait let me help you out." The next few minutes felt very strange to her. It felt as if everything was happening in a slow motion. She saw Rahul lifting her up in his arms and moving towards a room. Than she was on a bed and Rahul was taking off her clothes. She was high due to the drugged soft drink that he gave her.

Pariya:"Rahul......what are.....you......doing."

Rahul:"You'll find out soon darling." He replied while removing her pants. Within a few seconds she was laying there butt naked. Even in that state of mind she realized what was going on. Tears started rolling out from her eyes. Rahul was naked as well now and applying something on her pussy with his hand. She would have felt the sensation of him oiling up her pussy more if her body was not numb due to drugs. After applying oil to his erect cock he placed it on the cunt of Priya. Somehow with tears flowing from her eyes she begged him to stop.

Priya:"Please don't do this. You will never be able to forgive yourself. Please listen t...AHHHHHH" Her hymen was broken and she was no longer a virgin. Even after getting drugged, she felt the pain. It was the pain of getting bangd both physically and emotionally by the friend that she trusted more than anyone else in the world. Blood was dripping from her pussy as Rahul started fucking her ruthlessly. He was throwing all sort of obscenities at her as well. Calling her bitch, whore, worse than a prostitute among other things. No one came to her rescue. There was no mercy or shame in his eyes for what he was doing. He wasn't even looking like the Rahul that she knew. An animal was instead on top of her pumping his dick inside her. Finally he cummed inside her pussy and took out his dick once it was limp. The effect of drugs still didn't wear off completely. She just lay there in shame as he left the room. Her pussy was hurting like hell. It felt as if someone ripped it apart with a hot knife. To her horror he returned a few minutes later and he had an hard on. Getting bangd for the second time might not have hurt as much as the first time but the trauma that she went through was as severe as the first time if not more. A few hours later when the effect of the drugs veined off, he gave her a few pain killers. She took them but refused to go back with him. She didn't say a single word to him about what he did and went away after taking a cab. That was the last time he ever saw her. Whatever happened to her afterwards was a mystery to him but one which he never bothered about finding out. He was just so glad that he didn't have to face her ever again.

Years later there was a body laying on the bed again and tears were flowing like river from the eyes. The demons from his past finally came back to haunt him. "Please forgive me Kalpana. You paid for my sins. You didn't deserve to die like that. It should have been me. Oh God what have I done? Why didn't he kill me as well that day? Why?"..........

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It was as if the rest of the world didn't existed anymore for both of them. They were standing facing each other and nothing else mattered anymore. Vidyut was the first to break the ice.

Vidyut:"So you come back in less than 24 hours. Didn't took you that long to figure all out."

Rahul:"No I still didn't figured all out. Why Vidyut WHY? Why the hell you did this to Kalpana? How did she deserved any of that?"

Vidyut:"She didn't but you deserve each and every second of the pain that you suffered when all of that happened to her. Did Priya deserved what you did to her? DID SHE?"

Rahul:"I am ashamed of myself for what I did to Priya. I was young and a fool to did that to her. Blinded by anger I ended up doing things that I'll never forgive myself for but can you justify the way you made Kalpana suffered for my sins?"

Vidyut:"Neither of us can justify our actions but atleast I did this all to avenge Priya. What's your excuse?"

Rahul:"Did I killed Priya? How can you justify yourself by saying you did this all to avenge Priya? You even killed my unborn son." Tears came out of Rahul's eyes while saying that. Maybe there was still a heart beating inside the monster.

Vidyut:"Remember what I said? Be it a rock or a grain of sand, in water they sink as the same. You didn't even bothered knowing about what happened to Priya did you?"

Rahul:"No I didn't. I was afraid what will happen to me if she'll tell anyone and once I realized the gravity of my mistake, I was just too ashamed of myself to face her."

Vidyut:"Well in that case let me tell you what happened to Priya afterwards. She didn't told anyone what you did but she was not the same person anymore. I never saw her smile anymore. I feel as if she stopped trusting everyone. Even her friends stopped coming around after a while when she was not even talking with them. She didn't talked with anyone apart form her family and even that was not that often. It's not easy living your life in fear and that was exactly what she was going through until one day she just gave up. I will never forget her body hanging up from the ceiling. I was the first one who saw her lifeless body hanging from the ceiling. You can't even imagine the trauma all of us went through. My parents adored her and for me she was everything. My father didn't let the security officer do her post mortem. After her death nothing was the same anymore. My mother died soon as well due to heart attack. She spend the last days of her life so miserably that in a way her death was more like a relief to her. My father was not the same man anymore. In trying to escape the grief he ended up becoming a alcoholic. As for me, I don't know what would have happened to me if I hadn't found out Priya's diary. I read who you bangd her you son of a bitch and I read why she died. She was thinking about suicide anyway but when she found out that she's pregnant that was it." He become quite after saying that. Maybe it still pained him after all those years. Rahul was just crying miserably. He never realized that his one mistake could end up destroying the lives of so many.

Vidyut:"You may still see it as one mistake and compared to what I did to you it might not seem as extreme as my actions but it sure did destroyed the lives of everyone I loved and cared. Anyone else would have been destroyed as well but not me. I lived the rest of my life planning and waiting for the right moment to take my revenge. I waited until I knew that your wife was pregnant. I did everything knowing fully well the consequences of my actions and trust me I'm not ashamed of myself."

Rahul:"Why didn't you killed me?"

Vidyut:"That's a question that even I have asked myself many times. Even after what you did to Priya, she didn't told about you to anyone. So how could I kill you than? Death is nothing more than a relief anyway and I wanted you to feel the pain of seeing the woman you loved suffer in front of your eyes. As long as you'll live, you wont be able to forget it." Than there was silence. All was said and done. This time it was Rahul who broke that silence.

Rahul:"Vidyut I know it's of no use but still I want to apologize to you for all the misery you have suffered because of me. I wish I could have turn back the time and not repeat my mistakes but both of us know that's not possible. I also forgive you for everything you did to me. For every pain I suffered because of you. Trust me even if you were killing me and told me the reason that you did, I would have accepted the death and forgive you. Still I can't forgive you for the pain that Kalpana suffered because of you."

The knife was the same one with which Kalpana was killed mercilessly. As soon as Vidyut saw the butcher's knife he went down on his knees and closed his eyes. He knew it was time to pay for his sins as well. Rahul hit Vidyut on his head with such force that the knife went straight through his skull till his jaw. Blood started pouring out like it was coming out from a fountain and the dead body of Vidyut fell Rahul's feet.

Rahul:"And now...... now, what joy will I have left to live for?" His hand went up in the air once again and as he was about to hit himself with the knife his phone rang. It was of Lavanya. He picked up the phone and started telling her about everything. By the time he finished, both of them were crying.

Rahul:"Lavanya can you honestly just answer one question please?"

Lavanya:"I'll try. What's the question?"

Rahul:"Even though I'm worse than a beast, don't I too have the right to live?"




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[Ramesh_Rocky]

[img=98x16]file:///customavatars/avatar849585_40.gif[/img] Meriaiza 

[b]Vendetta : The Pain Never Ends (Teaser)
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"Can you feel the pain now? How does it feel when you are on the receiving end?"

"Please forgive me. Oh please for God's sake have some mercy. I am sorry please please let me go I can't suffer anymore."

"That must be how all of your victims begged for their lives as well but did you showed any mercy to them?"

"HAHAHA you asshole I was just saying what you wanted to hear. I don't feel any pain and I don't feel sorry for what I did. Thank God that your mother died already otherwise after banging that old cow I would have killed her and eaten her body as well."

"You truly are a sadistic animal. By now I have seen so much in life that I don't know anymore if there is a God but if there is one, than I pray to him that you'll suffer worse than what your victims suffered for the rest of eternity. For know I promise you this, I will make you feel the pain that you have caused to others. You say that you don't feel any pain right? Trust me you will be begging for mercy by the time I'll be done with you and this time you will mean it as well."



In the next few minutes he did things that were far more horrifying than what even that animal could have imagined....

[Ramesh_Rocky]

Kafkaesque-

Great effort Meriaiza bhai. You seem to be a great fan of Korean revenge/slasher flicks. I can sense huge influence of Chan Wook Park's Odlboy here (....Be it a rock or a grain of sand, in water they sink as the same.). Anyway, your Vedentta is a great stuff. I hope the best is yet to come..

[Ramesh_Rocky]

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Originally Posted by sexy0611 View Post
to me vidyut could hav been spared......... nethier of them have any motive of living furthur......

but the end seems a little abrupt if we go by the flow of the story there are just 8-9 updates.......

bake meri bro ur writer u knw better.......


Meriaiza-

He didn't wanted to live anymore. If he wanted to live than he could have gone abroad or even kill Rahul the same day he invaded his house or when Salim and his men were about to kill him. Infact he spared his life twice. A life without any motives, dreams or hope is not a life worth living.

As for the ending, no I don't agree with you. I don't like when writers milk stories just to get more replies/repps/views etc. All the characters in the story are dead and both the main characters have taken their revenge. Would it be right to introduce new characters just stretch the story further? I don't like never ending stories. Last but not least there are 15 updates and not 8-9.
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[Ramesh_Rocky]

friend_just_buddy-

after the revelation of the exact truth behind Vidyut's act, it was predictable that Priya and her family must suffered a lot after that shameful act of Rahul. but still you wrote it wonderfully

jyaadaa nahi likhungaa abhee (varnaa Review me kyaa likhungaa )

wait for my detailed review bro
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