[Damian]

oh!! Untimely ending.Brother please start a new story soon.

[Parizad Flyer]

Pink baby ager ye story khatam karni hi this to khatam karnay se pehly babu or Junaid ka aneela k samnay collision to karwatay

[3XXX]

Brother,you have ended this story too quickly.I hope you will start another interfaith story very soon.

[BIMBO]

mujhe bahut niraasha huee hai kyonki aapane achaanak is mahaan kahaanee ko samaapt kar diya hai. mujhe aasha hai ki aap bahut jaldi se ek aur naee kahaanee shuroo karenge.

[Romi]

pink bhai, please let us know when you will start a new story like the last one.

[Fanfunda]

main bahut niraash hoon. aap is kahaanee ko bahut bada bana sakate hain.
mujhe ummeed hai ki aap bahut jaldi ek naee kahaanee likhana shuroo karenge

[KareenaKapoorLover]

Dear friends

Nothing compelled me to stop yar

Actually yeh story hi short thi itna hi iska theme tha, is sy ziada barhawa dety to kahani ka maza na rahta,

Isi ly isko isky normal end pr hi finish kya hai.


Koi nai story ky ly suggestions dain.


Pinkbaby

Bhai sahi kiya aapne .. unnecessarily story ko khichne se story boaring ho jati... Bar bar allena aur babu ke sex encounter to dikha nhi sakte na....??

Aab Koi new kinky se se Story ka intejar hai bro like your stories on xossip.

[LENNY]

Brother,I have been really disappointed because I hoped that you would make an encounter between Fiza and babu.Now I am waiting to read your next super hot story.

[Introvert]

Oh!pink aap is kahaani khatam kar dhiya! agale kahaani jaldi se shuro kar dijiye

[Aurora]

yah kahaanee bahut hee hot aur kaamuk hai lekin aapane ise achaanak samaapt kar diya hai. phir aap agalee kahaanee kab shuroo karenge?

[RajV]

Agar aur bedha dete to bhee mza ata dost....ab nayee theme ka wait

[poonam saxena]

Bad news.....aise umeed nahi thi aapse......ise end nahi khete hai.....ise story ko close karna bolte h sahi boli na............
Or pink baby jese writer se yhe umeed nahi karti thi main...
Koi baat nahi aap ek new ideas ke sath jaldi hi new story denge apne readers ko yhe asha karti hu................

[pinkbaby]

hy friends







itni dhairon mohabbat ka buhat buhat thanks


i know my friends really love me

and what i feel

i am really unable to pay them back for their love.


hopefully will meet you again soon with a new story

or may be with the continuation of some in complete story.




love you all



pinkbaby

[Ajay4321234]

Great Story..
Unexpected End..
But that is good..
Fiza ko Alina ko lekar story aage badhai ja sakti thi..
Lekin aapne acha kiya jo aap apni theme par hi story khatm ki..
Jyda character ghusa kar complicate nhi kiya..
Once again Hats Off for you..
PinkBaby..

[sunwin]

Pinkbaby bhai years back.. I and many others had requested you for a sequel of Dr Sana (ajab di pyas)

It would be the most awsommee thing in this world

[Raghu]

oh pink bhai,aap to mujhe bahut nirash kar diya.koi bat nahi lazzaton ki Rah par tarah aur ek kahaani shuro kar dijiye bhai

[valour]

pink bhai agale kahaani kab aaega? agale kahaani ko hero uncut hona chahieye

[Kartik69]

pink bhai is kahaani ko second part Fiza,babu aur malik ke beach mien shuro kar do,Aleena a aur junaid ko foreign tour mien bhej do

[Wanton]

pink bhai is kahaani ko second part Fiza,babu aur malik ke beach mien shuro kar do,Aleena a aur junaid ko foreign tour mien bhej do

wah! bahut badhiya idea! pink bhai is idea ko apply kar do na,

[neha2]

Pinkbaby bhai years back.. I and many others had requested you for a sequel of Dr Sana (ajab di pyas)

It would be the most awsommee thing in this world

dis would be great