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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)
Update 48


mujhe kuch bhi shamaj me nahi aya
Or abhi mujhe is baare me nahi sochna hai or na hii puchna hai.

Abhi mujhe apni mom or dad se milna hai.

Or sunaina gate ki bell bajati hai.

Tabi rinky gate kholti hai.

Ab aageee..........

Rinky : mera bacha a gaya.

Sunaina rinky ko dekhte hii rote hue gale laga leti hai.

Sunaina ( rote hue ) : mujhe maaf kardo mom ki meri bajase apko itna kuch jhelna pada.
Mujhe lagta hai ki mein kabi achi beti nahi ban pai
Agar achi beti hoti to us din apko kabi chorkar nahi jati.
Or apko itna dukh nahi jhelna padta.
Rinky sunaina se alag hokar sunaina ke ashu pohochte hue bolti hai.

Rinky : tuze aisa kiu lagta hai sunaina ki tu meri achi beti nahi hai.
Teri jaise beti to kismat walo ko milti hai .
Or jo hona hota hai vo kisi ke bas mein nahi hota sunaina.

Vahi
Suresh piche se aate hue.

Suresh ( sunaina se ) : jo apne mom and dad ko itna pyaar karti hai or tera pyaar hii itna tha ki vo rakshas hamara kuch nahi bigar paye.
Or un rakshas ne hum dono se maafi bhi magi.

Jaise hii sunaina suresh ko dekhti hai to apni mom rinky ko chodkar suresh ke gale lag jati hai.

Sunaina ( rote hue ) : I AM SORRY DAD

Suresh : sorry kis baat ka beta.
Or hum thik hai to ab rona band kar.

Rinky jab sunaina ko dekhti ki sunaina abhi bhi ro rahi hai to rinky sunaina ka mann divert karne ke liye mazak me bolti hai.

Rinky ( sunaina se ) : aare aare apne dad ko dekha to apni mom ko chor diya.
Kahi tu apne dad se jyda pyaar to nahi karti or mujhse kam pyaar to nahi karti.

Suresh masti karte hue.
Kiuki suresh ko bhi pata tha ki rinky mazak me bol rahi hai.

Suresh ( haste hue ) : rinky tume kiu itni mirchi lag rahi hai.
Agar meri beti mujhe sabse jyada pyaar karti hai. To

Rinky ( jhoote gusse me ) : haa haa pata hai rakho apni beti ko apne pass aap to aise bol rahe ho jaise sunaina to mujhse kam pyaar karti hai.

Sunaina rinky ko apne pass late hue
Dono ke gale lag jati hai.

Sunaina ( dono se pyaar se ) : mein aap dono se barabar pyaar karti hue.kiuki u r my best mom and dad in the world

Rinky masti karte hue.

Rinky ( sunaina se ) : to fir bichara rohan ka ab kya hoga.
Ab to rohan gaya kaam se (Yeh baat rinky ne sochte hue kahi )


Yeh baat sunakar locket bhi thoda mayus ho jata hai.

Sunaina ( niche garden karke sharmate hue ) : maa aap bhi naa
Mein rohan se bhi bohot pyaar karti hue.

Or yeh baat sunkar locket bhi khuss se khudne lagta hai or idhar udhar hilte hue chamakne lagta hai.

Rinky : meri beti rohan ka naam sunkar sharmati bhi hai.

Dekh kese tera locket teri baat sunakar chamak raha hai or dance bhi kar raha hai.

Or sunaina locket par nazar dalti hai to vo sahi mein yeh sab kar raha hota hai.

Magar udhar suresh pareshan hokar


Suresh ( mann me ) : kya mein sunaina ko btao ki rohan hii mahakaal hai.
Bta hii deta hu kiuki sunaina bhi kabi koi baat nahi chupati or ek bar ka sach lakho jhoot se upar hota hai.
Ab faisla sunaina ko karna hai ki vo yeh jaan kar ki rohan hii mahakaal hai tab bhi usse pyaar karna chahati hai ya nahi.
Kiuki mujhe vo mahakaal bohot hii khatarnak shaks lagta hai.
Kiuki jaise hii un rakshas ne mahakaal ka naam sunna tha kaise thar thar kaap rahe the.
Aisa dubara na ho uske liye mujhe sunaina se baat karni hii hogi


Suresh ( pareshan hokar ) : sunaina mujhe tumko ek baat batani hai rohan ke baare me
Or hum yaha kese aaye us baare mein bhi.

Sunaina niche garden karke

Sunaina : mujhe pata hai aap kya batana chahate ho.
Yahi ki rohan hii mahakaal hai.
Or kaal ne aapko bachaya hai.

Is baar rinky or suresh shocked hokar

Rinky : par tum kese pata chala yeh sab.

Tabi
Tiger : vo mom humne bataya tha sunaina ko

Tabi sunaina tiger ko gusse se dekhte hai.

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : mein apni mom or dad se kuch nahi chupati to tume jhooth bolne ki jaruraat nahi hai.

Sunaina : mom dad mujhe yeh sab is locket ne bataya tha.

Rinky : is locket ne kese bataya tumko
Or yeh ladka khon hai kahi yahi to rohan nahi hai.

Fir
Rinky ( tiger se ) : rohan beta mujhe khussi hue ki aaj tum sunaina ko mil gaye nahi to yeh bichari tumari yaad mein hamesha locket ko hii rohan shamaj kar usse baat karti rehti hai.
Ab sunaina ko chorkar mat jana

Sunaina ( mann me ) : yeh kya ho raha hai jo bhi tiger ko dekhta hai rohan hii shamaj leta hai.
Vaha roma ne tiger ko rohan shamaj liya
Or idhar mom ne

Sunaina : mom yeh to pata nahi is locket ne kese bataya .
Or mom yeh rohan nahi hai.
Yeh tiger hai.

Tiger rinky or suresh ko pakar kar apne gale laga leta hai.

Tiger ( rote hue ) : nice to meet u mom
My name is tiger
T silent baki sab voilent.

Rinky suresh or sunaina shocked ho jate hai ki is harkat par
Ki tiger ne apna introductions rote hue kiu diya.

Sunaina : tiger tum kiu ro rahe ho.
Or rote hue kiu apna introduction de rahe ho.

Tiger apna sir khujate hue.

Tiger ( sunaina se ) : vo kya hai na sister jab apko rote hue dekha to mujhe bhi rona aa gaya tha .
Us time meine apni aap ko control kar liya tha.
Par jab mera time aya mom or dad se baat karne kaa to meine bhi apni acting shuru kar di rone ki.

Sunaina : to kya mein us time rone ki acting kar rahi thi.

Tiger : sister mujhe kya pata.

Yeh baat sunkar sunaina gusse mein tiger ki pitai karne liye liye hath utati hai.
Tabi tiger rinky or suresh se alag hokar.
Bhag ne lagta hai.
Tiger bhagte hue
Tiger : sorry sister mein mazak kar raha tha.

Tabi

Rinky ( gusse me ) : khon ho tum
Or tumne mujhe mom kese bola mein sirf sunaina ki mom hu
Shamjhe
Or yeh rote hue english bolne ki acting kiu ki.

Kahi tum sunaina ke dusare boyfriend to nahi ho
Jaise sunaina tumse has ke baat kar rahi hai isse to aise hii lagta hai.

Suresh ( sunaina se ) : beta kya tiger tumara boyfriend  hai jo tum isko yaha ghar par laai ho .
Beta ab rohan ka kya hoga.


Sunaina apne sir par hand rakhte hue.

Sunaina ( dono se ) : yeh dekho mere mom or dad ko inko pata hai mein rohan se pyaar karti hue fir bhi puch rahe hai ki yeh tiger mera boyfriend hai ki nahi.

Sunaina : dad yeh tiger mere bache ki tarha hai.

Suresh shocked hokar

Suresh : bacha matlab yeh tiger tumara bacha hai.

Rinky (rote hue ): beta tum maa kab bani or yeh to tumari hii umar ka lag raha hai .

Rinky sunaina ko hilate hue.

Rinky : sach bata sunaina kahi tune.

Yeh baat sunkar tiger gusse me.

Tiger ( gusse me ) : kesi baat kar rahi ho aap
Yeh meri mata hai mein inka boyfriend kese ho sakta hu.
Or apko sharam ani chahiye aisi baat karte hue.

Gusse mein bhi tiger mann me

Tiger ( mann me ) : mein boyfriend to sirf us ladki ( roma ) ka hii banuga.

Sunaina gusse me

Sunaina : tiger kesi baat kar rahe ho tum mom se yahi sanskar hai tumare ki tum apne se bado se aise baat karo.

Tiger ko apni bhool ka abhas hota hai.

To tiger niche garden karte hue.

Tiger : sorry sister
Agli baar aisi galti nahi hogi.

Sunaina ( halke gusse me ) : or kabi honi bhi nahi chahiye aisi galti tiger.
Tume respect karni chahiye sab logo ki or mere mom dad ki bhi.

Tiger rinky se hand jorkar maafi magte hue.

Tiger ( rinky se ) : sorry mom
Mein dubara kabi aisa nahi boluga.

Rinky ( gusse me tiger se ) : mujhe dubara mom bola na to tere daath ( teeth ) tod dugi.
Mein mom sirf sunaina ki hu teri nahi

Sunaina : mom tiger ko rohan ne bheja hai.
Yaha rehne ko or aap sab ki dekhbal or suraksha karne ko.

Rinky or suresh ko dubara ek bada jhatka lagta hai.

Rinky : kya tu rohan se mil chuki hai.

Sunaina haa mein garden hila deti hai.

Rinky : par kese.

Fir sunaina desh 2 ki saari baat bta deti hai.

Yeh baat sunakar suresh or rinky bohot ghabra jate hai.
Tabi


Sorry dosto mein abhi kisi kaam me phasa hua hu.
Magar fir bhi ek chota sa update de diya.
Update regular de duga but small.
Or agar bada update chahiye to 2 ya 3 din wait karna hoga.
Yeh apko sochna hai
Small update chahiye
Ya do teen din wait karke bada update.


Keep support bhaiyo.
Abhi jitna likha utna post kar diya.
1.Life ke full maze 
2.Pyar ki had paar
3.Pyaarki ekanokhi kahani
                                                   
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bahut hi entertaining update hai
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Read my story
A story of 7 female friends with different plot of everyone.
Pehle ye xossip site par likh raha tha par stroy ke mid me wo site band hone ki wajah se yaha us story ko dubara short me likhna pada.
Pad kar apna feedback de story ka link neeche hai.

https://xossipy.com/thread-1191.html?hig...in+village

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Pics add kare to aur jada maza aae story padne me pics story ko sajeev kar deti hai.
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waiting for update
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bhai ab to update de do...
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(05-05-2019, 10:48 PM)Raj355407 Wrote: bahut hi entertaining update hai

Thanks for supporting bhai
1.Life ke full maze 
2.Pyar ki had paar
3.Pyaarki ekanokhi kahani
                                                   
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(06-05-2019, 03:52 PM)Logan555 Wrote: Read my story
A story of 7 female friends with different plot of everyone.
Pehle ye xossip site par likh raha tha par stroy ke mid me wo site band hone ki wajah se yaha us story ko dubara short me likhna pada.
Pad kar apna feedback de story ka link neeche hai.

https://xossipy.com/thread-1191.html?hig...in+village

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Bilkul bhai jaise hii time milta hai mein apki story padhta hue
1.Life ke full maze 
2.Pyar ki had paar
3.Pyaarki ekanokhi kahani
                                                   
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(06-05-2019, 03:52 PM)Logan555 Wrote: Read my story
A story of 7 female friends with different plot of everyone.
Pehle ye xossip site par likh raha tha par stroy ke mid me wo site band hone ki wajah se yaha us story ko dubara short me likhna pada.
Pad kar apna feedback de story ka link neeche hai.

https://xossipy.com/thread-1191.html?hig...in+village

[Image: Pics-Art-02-26-03-20-13.jpg]

Bilkul bhai jaise hii time milta hai mein apki story padhta hue
1.Life ke full maze 
2.Pyar ki had paar
3.Pyaarki ekanokhi kahani
                                                   
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(06-05-2019, 03:53 PM)Logan555 Wrote: Pics add kare to aur jada maza aae story padne me pics story ko sajeev kar deti hai.

Bhai teen teen side par update dena padta hai isliye har side par photo dalna thoda muskil hota hai
1.Life ke full maze 
2.Pyar ki had paar
3.Pyaarki ekanokhi kahani
                                                   
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(07-05-2019, 03:27 AM)Raj355407 Wrote: waiting for update

Update posting
1.Life ke full maze 
2.Pyar ki had paar
3.Pyaarki ekanokhi kahani
                                                   
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(08-05-2019, 12:01 AM)Raj355407 Wrote: bhai ab to update de do...

Sorry for delay raj bhai update posting
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Update 49


Rinky : par kese.

Fir sunaina desh 2 ki saari baat bta deti hai.

Yeh baat sunakar suresh or rinky bohot ghabra jate hai.
Tabi

Ab aageee.............

Rinky ( ghabrate hue ) : sunaina tuze kuch hua to nahi

Or rinky sunaina ko dekhne lagti hai ki sunaina ko kahi chot to nahi lagi.

Sunaina : mom mein thik hu.
Mujhe kuch nahi hua hai.

Rinky : sunaina tu chup reh pehle mujhe dekhne de.

Fir jab rinky sunaina ko ache se check kar leti hai.
Tab jakar rinky ki pareshani door hoti hai.

Rinky ( sunaina se ) : tu is tiger se bol de ki mujh se door rahe  ( yeh baat rinky ne muh fulate hue kaha )

Sunaina : mom tiger ko ek baar maaf kar do
Shayad iska koi karan hoga jisse bajase tiger ne apko aisa kaha.

Rinky fir bhi muh fulaye hue.

Rinky : yeh sab mujhe nahi pata.

Sunaina : tiger ab tume hii mom ko manana padega.

Tiger haa mein apni garden hilata hai.

Or kuch sochne lagta hai.

Tiger ( mann me ) : ab mom ko kese manau.
Tabi tiger ko ek idea ata hai.

Or tiger apne magic se har jagah sorry ke ballon bhar deta hai.

Or rinky ka face apni taraf kar leta hai.
Or gana gane lagta hai.

Tiger ( bade pyaar se ) : meri pyaari mom maan bhi jao
Ab to gussa choro
Mein tiger hu tiger hii rahuga ab to kuch bolo
Apko hasana aapko manana yahi hai mera kaam
Ek baar galti maaf kardo meri pyari mom

Rinky dubara apna face dusari taraf kar leti hai.

Tiger bacho ki tarha bohot saare balloon rinky ki taraf aage karte hue .
Or kuch sorry ke balloon upar udate hue.

Meri pyaari mom maan jao na please
Ab to gussa choro.
Mein tiger huu tiger hii rahuga
Ek baar kuch to bolo.


Rinky : tiger mein nahi manne wali tu kuch bhi kar le.

Tiger : please mom ek baar maaf kardo na galti to bacho se hii hoti hai.
Kya mein apke itne bhi kabil nahi ki aap meri ek galti maaf kar sako.

Tiger ko jab lagta hai ki rinky nahi maan rahi to tiger udas ho jata hai.

Tiger ki yeh udasi sunaina ko achi nahi lagti.

Sunaina ( rinky se ) : mom ab maan bhi jao dekho na tiger apko kabse mana raha hai.

Rinky ( muh banate hue ) : meine to sirf mazak kiya tha to tiger ne aisa kiu kaha ki mujhe sharam ani chahiye.

Is baar tiger rote hue rinky ke leg par gir jata hai.

Tiger ( rote hue ) : maa mujhe maaf kar do.
Mein bohot bura hu jo meine apse aise bola .
Kiuki sister ( sunaina ) ne mujhe us wakt shahara diya tha jab mein bacha tha or ek jungle ke side mein ro raha tha.
Us time sister ko mera yeh dukh dekha nahi gaya or mujhe apne gale laga liya
Sister ne hii mujhe ek maa ki tarha pala tha.
Or mujhe ache bure ka gyan bhi diya tha.
Isliye mujhe acha nahi laga ki koi mujhe meri mata ka boyfriend kahe jisko mein apni maa se bhi badkar manta hu.
Is bajase mujhe thoda gussa aa gaya.
Kya koi beta  jo sister ki ghod mein soya or yeh sab usse hii seekha.
Kya vo beta kabi unko boyfriend ki nazar se kabi dekhna kya soch bhi sakta hai.

Tiger ki baat sunkar rinky ke mann mein bhi dukh umar jata hai.
Jisko tiger apni maa saman manta hai.
Or ek bate ki tarha itna pyaar karta hai.
Usse bete ko uska hii boyfriend bola.

Rinky tiger ke ashu pohchte hue.
Tiger ko apne gale laga leti hai.

Rinky : galti meri thi tiger mujhe yeh sab pata nahi tha ki tum sunaina ko maa se bhi badkar mante ho or pyaar bhi bohot karte ho.
Magar tiger sunaina to hamesha se mere pass thi to usne tume kab pala.

Tiger : mom vo yaha ki nahi sister ( sunaina ) ke punaar janam ki baat hai.

Tabi sunaina bhi tiger ko apne gale laga leti hai.


Chalo chalte hai hero ki taraf.

Vahi subha

Jaise hii rahul or sab logh car se apne thread pyaar ki had paar me vapas ate hai.
To sab bohot khuss hote hai. Ki unhone life ke full maze mein bohit masti or mazak kiya.

Or sab car se utar jate hai or car apne aap vaha se teleport ho jati hai.
Or sab jane lagte hai sonam ko chorne uske ghar ki or.

Tabi

Nisha : bhaiya aaj to maza aa gaya humne life ke full maze mein bohot masti or dhamal kiya.

Ruchi : haa bhaiya aisi masti hum ghar par bhi karege jab hamara bada ghar hoga.

Rahul ( bohot pyaar se ruchi & nisha se ) : meri pyari bhan khuss hai or ek bhai ko kya chahiye hamesha asi khuss raha karo.
Or haste raha karo.
Meri pyari choti sehtaan bhan

Nisha ( mann me ) : hume or ruchi ko aap chahiye bhaiya or apka pyaar
Aap hii to hamari zindagi ho bhaiya kabi hume chorkar mat jana.
Hum apke bina nahi reh payegi.
I LOVE U SO MUCH BHAIYA.
pata nahi kab apko pata chalega ki hum apse kitna pyaar karti hai.


Or nisha & ruchi khud kar rahul ke gale lag jati hai.

Nisha & ruchi : bohot khuss bhaiya
Or simran or sagar bhaiya ke sath masti katke bohot maza aya.

Nisha ( rahul se ) : hum aap  ko jyada pareshan to nahi karti na.


Rahul : tum to bohot pyari bhan ho jab tum sehtani karti ho to main bhi apne bachpan ko jeene lagta hu
Jo mein shayad nahi jee paya.

Payal , sonali or sonia bhi rahul ko kas kar gale lagate hue.

Sonali : betu ab fir us bachpan ko yaad mat kar or bhul ja un baato ko.
Vo baat hamesha takleef deti hai.
Jisko baar baar yaad kiya jaye.

Payal : haa rahul sonali didi sahi bol rahi hai.

Sonia : tu to hum sab ka sabse pyara bhai hai
Or un baato ko bhool ja

Rahul haa mein sir hilata hai.

Ruchi  ( nam akho se ) :  bhaiya humne apko rula diya.


Rahul : rulaya nahi hai tumne mujhe yeh bataya hai ki meri bhan mujhse kitna pyaar karti hai.


Vahi sonam ka bhi mann kar raha tha rahul ke gale lagne ka magar abhi sonam apna pyaar rahul ko jahir nahi karna chahati thi sonali , payal or nisha ruchi ke samne.


Isliye sonam rukh jaye.

Magar mann to sonam ka bhi ho raha tha ki ek baar rahul ko gale lagaye.

Tabi
Rahul : are sonam prachi tum bhi jaha aao tum bhi hamari dost ho or sonam or prachi bhi rahul ke pass aa jati hai

Or rahul ko apne gale laga leti hai.

Sonam ( mann me ) : rahul tum hamesha meri har desire puri kar dete ho.
Thank u rahul.
I LOVE U VERY MUCH

fir sab aise hii rahul se alag hoti hai.

Payal : bas bas ab jaldi chalo sonam ko ghar bhi chorna hai.
Or hume apne ghar bhi to nikal na hai.

Or sab sonam le ghar ki taraf dekhte hai to vaha bohot saari security officer sonam ke ghar par hoti hai.
Or logo ki bhir bhi lagi hoti hai.

Yeh dekh sonam or baki sab bhi ghabra jate hai.

Prachi ( sonam se ) : didi yeh sab kya ho raha hai.
Yaha itni bhir kiu hai.
Kahi hamare mom or dad ko to kuch nahi ho gaya.

Sonam : prachi kuch nahi hua hai shayad yaha koi bafa officer aya hoga dad se milne isliye yaha bhir hogi.

Magar sonam ne prachi ko bata to diya tha magar usko bhi kya pata ki yaha kya hua hai.
Jiske karan pata nahi sonam or prachi ko kitna dukh hona baki tha.

Or jaise hii sab logh bhir se age nikalte hai to samne ka nazara dekhkar sab ki rooh tak kaap jati hai.

Kiuki samne saare guard ki lash ( died body ) padi hoti hai.

Jinko bohot hii gandi tarike se kisi ne mar diya hota hai.

Yeh dekh sonam or prachi ki jaan hii nikal jati hai.

Prachi or sonam ( chillate hue ) : maa papa.


Chillate hue ghar me ander ghusne lagti hai.
Or dono ke aakho me aashu aa jate hai.

Magar vaha ke security officer wale sonam or prachi ko ghar me ghusne nahi dete hai.

Or bhir me kuch logh baate kar rahe hote hai.

Shaks 1 : lagta hai kisi ne bohot buri tarha se pure parivaar ko khatam kar diya hai.

Shaks 2 : haa bhai shayad aap sahi bol rahe ho.
Kisi ne shayad purani dusmani nikali hai.
Itne bade aadmi jo the.

Yeh sunkar sonam ko vo baat yaad aa jati hai jab sonam apne maa or papa ko chorkar life ke full maze me ja rahi thi.

Sonam ka dil bohot ghabra raha tha fir bhi seema ne unne sonam ko bhej diya tha.

Tabi


Sorry bhai bilkul bhi time nahi mil raha isliye story likh nahi paa raha hu.


Or meri dusari story me bhi update nahi de paa raha hu.

Meine socha kamse kam ek story me to update dete rahu.

Isliye jitna ho pa raha hai likh raha hu.
1.Life ke full maze 
2.Pyar ki had paar
3.Pyaarki ekanokhi kahani
                                                   
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shandaar update
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sunaina ko jaldee se rohan se mila do
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Bhai update...........
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GOOD GOING CONTINUE 
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Update please
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Update do yaa for story band kar de
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(19-05-2019, 06:38 PM)Devil51 Wrote: Update do yaa for story band kar de

Bhai abhi rohan sir apni personal life me thoda bizi hai is bajase update nahi de pa rahe hai

Kiuki june me unke papers hai
Abhi rohan sir se meri baat huee hai vaise to update june se pehle bhi aa sakte hai agar update nahi aae to  june ke baad hii update aaege

Thoda sabar karo or rohan sir ko support karo
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