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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)
(01-05-2019, 06:34 PM)Raj355407 Wrote: update ka intazaar hai

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(01-05-2019, 08:17 PM)Devil51 Wrote: Waiting for update bro

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(02-05-2019, 10:36 PM)Mkthakur Wrote: Update bro
Aap ki kahani bahot hi achhi hai please update de

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Update 46

Fir sunaina apni ek eye brow upar karke locket se puchti hai.

Flashback
Sunaina ke mom dad yaha kese aae.

Ab aageee.......

Jaise hii vo rakshas rinky ka blouse fadne ke liye apna hand age badate hai.

Tabi

Samne vaha ek shaks khada ho jata hai.

Or us shaks ko dekhte hii vo rakshas apna hand piche kar lete hai.

Us shaks ka bhi poora sarir dhaka hua hota hai.

Mahaveer ( us shaks se ) : khon hai be tu.

Or vo shaks apni garden un kapdo se bahar nikalta hai.

Or mahaveer hairaan ho jata hai.

Mahaveer : kaal hu yaha par.

Kaal : haa mein

Mahaveer : matlab agar tu yaha hai to rohan bhi yaha hoga.

Kaal : haa rohan bhi yahi hai.
Jisko tera abhi peter dhoondne gaya hai.

Mahaveer pura shocked hokar bolta hai.

Mahaveer : matlab rohan hiii mahakaal hai.
Vo mahakaal jisse pura sehtan lok thar thar kapta hai.
Or jisne pure sehtan lok ko ek jhatke mein hii khatam kar diya tha.
Or jisse pura patal lok dehsaat mein tha.

Kaal : haa yeh vahi mahakaal .
Jiska ant hii aramb hai.

Or kaal rinky ko uski saari deta hai.
Magar rinky to koi putla bani hue thi.
Rohan ka naam sunte hii.

Rinky ( kaal se ) : kya yeh vahi rohan hai.
Jisse meri beti sunaina pyaar karti hai.

Kaal : haa yeh vahi rohan hai.
Tabi

Suresh : or yeh rohan hii mahakaal hai iska kya matlab hai.

Kaal : iska matlab yeh hai ki jisse tumari beti pyaar karti hai .
Vahi
Kaalo ka bhi kaal hai vo

Jisko pura raaj lok mahakaal ke naam se janta hai.
Or baki ke dusman bhi mahakaal ke naam se kapne lagte hai.
Or apna sir jhuka lete hai.
Jo ke raaz hai jiska ant hi hua hai ek naya itihas ka arabh karne ke liye.

Jabki tumari beti sunaina usko rohan ke naam se janti hai.

Is baar dono rinky or suresh shoked hoker

Suresh : matlab rohan hii mahakaal hai.
Jisko sunaina bachpan se pyaar karti hai.
Or jisko sunaina dilo jaan se chahati hai.

Kaal : bachpan se nahi punaar janam se .


Rinky or suresh to sadme
Mein the hii

Or un rakshasho ko jab pata chalta hai ki yeh vahi mahakaal hai jisne rakshas lok ko khatam kar diya tha.
To unki to vo khof nak nazara yaad  kar kar hiii unki atma bahar ane lagti hai.
Or vo mout ka tandav jisse sab ki rooh tak kaap gae thi vo baat yaad aa jati hai.

Rinky (kaal se ) : ek baar sunaina ne jab TV mein mahakaal ki news sunni thi to mujh se bola tha ki
Maa mein is mahakaal ko janti hue.
Pata nahi kiu magar mahakaal ko dekhkar yeh mehsus hota hai.

Rinky ( rote hue ) : magar us pagli ko kya pata tha ki vo jis mahakaal ko dekh rahi hai vo vahi rohan hai jiske pyaar ke liye vo bohot tersi hai.
Or yeh punar janam ka kya matlab hai.

Kaal : vo sab aapko mein baat mein bata duga.

Kaal ( mahaveer se ) : tune yeh sab karke bohot badi galti kardi re mahaveer ( gusse me )

Mahaveer kaal ke leg par girte hue

Mahaveer ( kaal se ) : mujhe maaf kardo kaal bas ek baar ( yeh baat mahaveer ne girgirate hue kahi ).

Kaal ( mahaveer se ) : tune bohot badi galti kar di mahaveer.

Mahaveer kaal ke leg chumte hue.

Mahaveer : ab mujhe pata chal gaya ki rakshas guru apna boriya bister lekar kaha gayab ho gae.
Mein bhi yaha se gayab ho jao ga.
Bas ek baar mujhe maaf kar do.

Kaal : tum sabko maafi chahiye
To vo maafi to sirf rohan de sakta hai .
Bulau usko.

Rohan ka naam sunte hii sab rakshas kisi bikhari ki tarha kaal se bheekh magne lagte hai.

Sab : hum par daya kar baba
Hum par daya kar baba.
Rohan ke ane se pehle hum.  khud marna pasand karege baba.
Hum par daya kar baba.
Hum ko maaf kar do baba.

Or kaal kisi ki ek bhi baat nahi sunta or ek jhatke mein saare rakshas or mahaveer ko khatam kar deta hai .

(KAAL MAFI NAHI MOUT DETA HAI.)

Mahaveer ( marte hue ) : apne itna upkar kar diya ki rohan ke hatho marne se bacha liya .
Agar hum bach bhi jate to bhi mahakaal ( rohan ) hume kahi se bhi dhoondkar zinda jamin me jhad deta .
Or hamare sir ( head ) ke sath bat ball khelta.
Shayad hamare karam hii aise the jo hume tumare hath se mout mili kaal

Mahaveer rinky or suresh se maafi mangte hue.

Mahaveer : apko humne bohot dhukh diye eske liye maaf kar dena .
Hum mazboor the.
Robert ka hatho.
Or aapki beti sunaina bohot kismat vali hai jo usko rohan mila


Or saare rakshas rinky or suresh se apni is harkat ki maafi mang kar mar jate hai.

Vahi door rohan apni aakh band kare yeh sab dekh raha tha.

Rohan : Sala pata nahi yeh rakshas itna sareef kese ban gaye.
Or sath sath meri tarif bhi kar di.

Vahi sunaina ke ghar me

Kaal ( suresh se ) : jaldi karo hume yaha se jaldi nikalna hoga.

Or kaal suresh ke pass vo bomb laga dekhta hai to usme sirf 1 minute bacha hota hai.
To kaal tezi se us bomb ko nikal deta hai
Is jaldi ke chakkar mein suresh ki watch bhi niche gir jati hai.

Or kaal suresh or rinky ka hath pakad kar

Rahul ke shahar 2 wale farm house mein teleport ho jata hai.

Or sunaina ka ghar bomb ke dhamake se udd jata hai.

Rinky (kaal se ) : yeh kiska bangla hai.

Kaal : , abhi mujhe jana hoga
Aap yaha reh sakti hai
Or yaha aapko koi bhi nukshan nahi pohocha sakta hai.

Rinky : par yeh kiska ghar hai.

Kaal ( mushkurate hue ) : aapke damad rohan ka.
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Update 47


Rinky : par yeh kiska ghar hai.

Kaal ( mushkurate hue ) : aapke damad rohan ka.

Ab aageeeee..

Suresh : par hum yaha kese reh sakte hai

Kaal : kiuki aap sab bhi rohan ke maa or dad hue

Rinky : vo kese

Kaal : kiuki sunaina apki beti jaise hai. To rohan bhi to apka beta jaisa hua na.
Or baaki sab baat bad me abhi mujhe raajlok jana hai.

Or kaal vaha se gayab hokar raajlok chala jata hai.

Rinky kaal se puch or bhi puchne wali thi magar kaal usse pehle vaha se gayab ho jata hai

Rinky ( mann me ) : kaal ne aisa kiu kaha ki sunaina meri beti jaise hai.

Is baat par rinky ko rona aa jata hai ki kahi yeh baat sach hue to
Isliye rinky suresh se

Rinky ( suresh se rote hue  ) : kaal ne aisa kiu kaha ki sunaina meri beti jaise hai.
Mein sunaina ko bohot bohot pyaar karti hue.

Rinky suresh ke gale lag kar

Rinky ( behad rote hue ) : suresh sunaina hamari beti hai na.
Bolo na suresh
Sunaina hamari beti hai na.

Suresh ( mann me ) : ab rinky ko kese batau ki sunaina hamari beti nahi hai.
Sunaina to mujhe  piche jeep ki seet par me mili thi.
Or hamari beti to mari hue paida hue thi.
Agar yeh sach rinky ko pata chala to pata nahi rinky kya kar le.
Mujhe yeh sach rinky se chupana hii hoga.
Nahi to rinky kuch bhi kar sakti hai.
Shayad apni jaan na lele.
Kiuki rinky ka jo sunaina se lagav hai uska mein kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta.
Hamesha rinky sunaina ki tension karti rehti hai.
Nahi nahi yeh sach rinky ko kabi nahi pata chalna chahiye.

Suresh ( rinky se ) : rinky rona band karo Sunaina hamari hii beti hai.
Shayad kaal ke muh se galti se nikal gaya hoga.
Ki sunaina hamari beti jaise hai.


Rinky ( rote hue ) : tum sach bol rahe ho na suresh sunaina hamari beti hai na.

Suresh rinky ke ashu pohochte hue.

Suresh : haa rinky sunaina hamari hii beti hai.
Or tume aisa kiu laga ki sunaina hamari beti nahi hai.
Tumne to sunaina ko bachpan se pala hai.
Or itna pyaar se bada kiya hai.

Suresh ( rinky se puchte hue ) : Tumne kabi laga ki sunaina hamari beti nahi hai.

Rinky : nahi kabi nahi.
Sunaina to meri jaan hai.
Or mera sab kuch
Mein kabi sunaina ke bina nahi reh paugi suresh.

Suresh : isliye to hamare damad rohan ne hume yaha bheja hai jisse tum hamesha apni beti ke sath reh sako.
Hume to khuss hona chahiye ki rohan hamari beti ko itna chahata hai.
Or hume bhi.

Rinky masoom se sakal banakar.

Rinky : hume kese suresh.

Suresh rinky ke gaal sehlate hue.

Suresh : kiuki rohan ko pata hai ki jaise sunaina hamari jaan hai vaise hii hum bhi sunaina ki jaan hai .
Or rohan kabi bhi sunaina ko dukh me nahi dekh sakta tha.
Isliye to hume bachane ke liye rohan ne kaal ko bheja tha.


Rinky : haa yeh baat to sahi hai. Agar kaal nahi ata to vo rakshas hume mar dalte.
Or yeh dukh shayad sunaina bhi nahi seh pati
Or   sunaina ko khon bhi  shamalta.
Isliye shayad rohan ne kaal ko bhej diya hume bachane ke liye.
Magar suresh hum apne damad ke ghar me kese reh sakte hai.

Suresh : yeh baat to tum sahi bol rahi ho rinky ki koi bhi maa baap apni beti ke ghar me kese reh sakta hai.
Hume is baare mein sunaina se baat karege.

Rinky : magar ko shaktiya or vo rakshas .
Or vo mahakaal yeh sab kya hai suresh mujhe kuch bhi shamaj nahi aya.
Or agar rohan hii mahakaal hai to vo sunaina se itna door kiu hai.
Humse sunaina ka hath kiu nahi  mangne ata.
Agar rohan bhi sunaina se itna pyaar karta hai to.
Or bhi bohot saare sawal hai jinke jawab mujhe nahi pata.

Suresh : rinky jis sawal ka jawab malum na ho to  hume in sab ko samay par chor dena chahiye.
Or in sab ki ab tum tension mat lo.
Tum kuch jyada hii tension le leti ho.
Fir tumari tabiyaat kharab ho jati hai.
Hume abhi yeh sochkar khuss hona  chahiye ki sunaina hamare paas hai or hum sunaina ke pass.
Or hume kya chahiye.


Rinky : aap sahi bol rahe ho
      Magar hamari beti sunaina abhi tak aae kiu nahi.

Suresh : yahi to mein soch raha hu.

Tabi
Roma vaha aa jati hai kaise vo apko pata chal gaya hai.
Or isko baat kya hue vo bhi.

Ki roma ne sunaina ke mom dad ko bata diya tha ki sunaina apne friend ke pass gayi hai.
Or subha tak aaegi.

Or rinky or suresh itni dhakan ke baad sone chale jate hai.

Or roma rinky or suresh ka subha tak khayal rakhti hai.

Flashback end.

Flashback khatam hote hii sunaina ke mann me bohot dukh or gusse or khussi ke mile jule bhaw ane lagte hai.
Dukh is baat ka ki un rakshasho ne rinky ke sath aise harkat ki or gussa is baat ka ki sunaina ko apni mom dad ko chorkar party mein nahi jana chahiye tha.
Or khussi is baat ki un rakshasho ne aisa ganda kaam ke liye mafi mangi

Yeh to pata nahi chala ki unrakshasho ne mafi kiu magi rohan ke der se ya iski or koi bhi baja thi.

Or sunaina us time is baat par gour nahi karti ki vo rinky or suresh ki asli beti nahi hai.

Kiuki rinky ka us dukh or takleef mein hii dekhkar sunaina ka dil rone lagta hai.
Shayad yeh baat sunaina ko baad me yaad aae ki suresh ne mann me kaha tha ki sunaina uski beti nahi hai.

Or sunaina saare dard ko apne ander samet leti hai.
Or sunaina ko is baat ki khussi hoti hai ki rohan bhi sunaina se utna hii pyaar karta hai jitna sunaina rohan se

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : acha yeh kaal khon hai.

Tiger : sister saari baat yahi karogi yaa ander bhi chalogi.

Sunaina : thik hai brother chalo ander.

Or sunaina jaise hii gate bajati hai.

Tabi ek guard side ke camere se puchta hai.

Guard : haa jii kisse milna hai.

Sunaina : mere hii ghar mein mujhse puch rahe ho ki kisse milna hai.

Guard : ooo sorry medam
Mein yaha naya hu isliye pehchan nahi paya
Aap sunaina medam hai na.

Sunaina : jii haa
Magar tumko appoint kisne kiya.

Guard : mujhe nahi pata


Sunaina : fir tum yaha kese.

Guard : mere ek friend ne mujhe yaha job karne ke liye kaha to mein yaha job karne laga

Sunaina : thik hai.
Ab gate kholne ke liye bhi thodi pehchan banao ge kya.

Guard : sorry medam.

Jaise hii gate kholne ke liye gurad utta hai

Vaise hii apne aap gate khul gata hai.

Or sunaina or tiger ke ander jate hii apne aap band ho jata hai.

Guard ( mann me ) : yeh kese hua lagta hai iski technology me abhi tak shamaj nahi paya hu.
Choro mujhe kya.

Sunaina jaise hii samne dekhti hai.


Sunaina ( guard se ) : yeh log khon hai.

Guard : khon medam
Yaha to bas hum 20 guard hai
Or mujhe to koi bhi dikai nahi de raha hai.

Sunaina : sabi guard se
Bhai samne dekho samne.

Sabi guard samne dekhte hai magar unko koi bhi dikai nahi deta.
Sabi guard : mam hum sab ko koi bhi dikai nahi de raha.

Sunaina : tumse to puchna hii bekar hai
Mein khud hii inse puch leti hu.
Tum apna kaam karo.

Sunaina un logo ke pass jate hue.

Sunaina ( un logo se ) : ab tum khon ho bhai.
Bade hii azib lag rahe ho.
Or bohot khatarnak bhi.

Tabi unme se ek aadmi sunaina ke gale mein vo locket dekhta hai.

Sabi behad khuss hokar.

Sabi : apka punaar janam ho gaya.
Apko dubara dekhkar hamara jeevan safal ho gaya .

Sunaina fir shocked hokar bolti hai.

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : yeh mere sath ho kya raha hai .
Tum mujhe mata bolte ho.
Or yeh log to or bhi mahan hai bol rahe hai jeevan safal ho gaya.
Mera to dimak kharab ho gaya hai.

Tabi tiger un logo ko gour se dekhta hai.

Tabi tiger shocked hokar un sab se bolta hai.

Tiger : tum yaha par kese.
Kalindi tume yaha kisne bulaya.

Kalindi : rohan ne.

Jab sunaina bhi yeh baat sunti hai to vo bhi shocked ho jati hai.

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : yeh khon hai tiger or tum inko dekhkar shocked kiu hue.

Tiger : sister yeh raajlok ke kuch senik hai or yeh raajlok ka senapati kalindi hai .
Jo apke or apki mom dad ki raksha karne aae hai.
Jisse dubara vo jhatna na ho jo abhi hue thi.
Or apke mom dad ko kuch nahi ho.
Or rohan malikk shayad dubara koi risk nahi lena chahate the isliye shayad unhone kalandi ko bhej diya.
Is mehal ki suraksha ke liye.

Sunaina ( locket se ) : lagta hai mere gusse se tum kuch jyada hii der gaye.
Isliye tumne inko yaha bhej diya ( yeh baat sunaina ne khuss hokar kahi )

Sunaina ( tiger se ) : magar yeh senik un guard ko kiu nahi dikai diye.

Tiger : sister vo ek insaan hai or yeh raajlok ke senik
To un guard ko yeh senik kese dikai de sakte hai.
Yeh senik sirf unko hii dikai de sakte hai jo is dharti lok ka na ho.

Sunaina : par mein to dharti lok ki hii hu or mein insaan bhi hu.

Tiger : kiuki apka relation raajlok or rohan se hai is bajase.
Jis  bhi insaan ka  relation raajlok se hoga yeh senik sirf unko hii dikai dege.

Sunaina : acha thik hai
Magar jo bhi tumne kaha mujhe kuch bhi shamaj me nahi aya
Or abhi mujhe is baare me nahi sochna hai or na hii puchna hai.

Abhi mujhe apni mom or dad se milna hai.

Or sunaina gate ki bell bajati hai.

Tabi rinky gate kholti hai.

Sorry bhaiyo abhi mere relative me kisi ka opration hai.
Jis baja se mujhe vaha jana pada isliye update nahi likh paya tha.
Abhi bhi vahi hu magar thoda time nikal kar ek chota sa update likh diya.
Jyada waiting ke comment dekhte hue

Or rate karte raho bhai jisso mujhe age ki story likhne ka hosla milte rahe 
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superb update hai
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Bro //// pe update kab ayega?
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Dhansu apdate bro
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next update
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Next update
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waiting
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Update bhai
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(03-05-2019, 01:06 AM)Raj355407 Wrote: superb update hai

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(03-05-2019, 01:41 AM)Ak bravo Wrote: Bro //// pe update kab ayega?

Tomorrow aaega
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(03-05-2019, 09:21 PM)Ramkaran sharma Wrote: Dhansu apdate bro

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(04-05-2019, 03:34 PM)Raj355407 Wrote: next update

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(05-05-2019, 03:35 PM)Dhaliwal1469 Wrote: Next update

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(05-05-2019, 08:48 PM)Dhaliwal1469 Wrote: Update bhai

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