Adultery A Sexy Lactating Housewife And Some Ugly Low Class Men

[Lollobionda]

I haven't read anything you wrote and thank god for that. There's something really creepy about a guy whose looking for "LOGIC" and "higher LEVEL" (whatever that means) from a fucking erotica that ones supposed to jerk off to. And before you tell me, you only read stories that requires LOGIC and Higher Level let me remind your basement dwelling ass that not everybody does. 

I know this story is silly, absurd. That's the point of THIS story. There are boring, elongated, romantic, r*pe, adultery or incest fantasies that are Super realistic but are boring af cuz they take million years to get to the point or shall i say the good bits cuz the moronic writers and readers of those stories think they're writing the next Shakespeare piece or smth. No they're not. Those LOGIC and Higher Level stories are retarded cuz they are taking themselves too seriously and approaching the subject matter as if its winning the next Nobel in literature. It sincerely looks pathetic. You're writing material that people are gonna read and shag to and then go to sleep. That's why porn films don't have emmy award winning storylines you imbecile! Cuz that's not the point, the point is to visually create the sexual fantasies that people have for stimulation. For stories it's doing the same thing in text form.

This story is a lactation fantasy of an amateur writer. Every update has some level of action in it. Because it's approaching the material how its supposed to. It's not trying to be an award winning drama or best selling novel because it's not. Anybody who expects that seriously needs to get out more, meet more people, get a life and recheck their priorities. Cuz an adult functioning brain is supposed to realize all this is just people writing and reading their absurd fantasies and fetishes. Cuz it can no way be realistically written that a high class woman would breastfeed low class people. If you're trying to make something as absurd as that into smth realistic, You're the moron in here.
There's a long running popular story called Odbhut Amazing or Bina Roy's Hot Adventures or Suhil's Mom etc. Same story mainly written in bangla and then translated to english as well because of how popular it was; it was the most absurd shit ever written. That's why it was so good! Every update was enticing, like what's the next over the top absurd thing that's Bina roy or her son and the servant gonna do to her or make her do. It knew what it was and reveled in it, that's why it was so popular, long running and succesful. It didn't take itself seriously. Neither does this story take itself seriously. You do, thats your problem. Not the writer's... 

Thanks for letting me vent and the ted talk. Now you said it's upto the writer to continue writing or stopping. It's the only genius thing i read in your comment. So how about that? Let the writer do his thing and you fuck off! Or even better write your realistic LOGIC and Higher Level story where an elite housewife goes around breastfeeding low class beggars with the gritty realism of a war documentary and show us how its done. Huh? How about that? 

Hey Lactator, 
watch out, you "ass with ears!"
that you are not neither;

the speaker 
nor the guardian
or the author's lawyer...

no one gives you the right to judge me and call me names like that.

Get lost and go fuck yourself, you trash of a human being.

I clearly addressed the author of this story DIRECTLY and wrote my thought processes and not to such 
creatures as you with inferiority complexes.

So, SHUT UP YOUR FACE !!!

[Lactator]

Hey Lactator, 
watch out, you "ass with ears!"
that you are not neither;

the speaker 
nor the guardian
or the author's lawyer...

no one gives you the right to judge me and call me names like that.

Get lost and go fuck yourself, you trash of a human being.

I clearly addressed the author of this story DIRECTLY and wrote my thought processes and not to such 
creatures as you with inferiority complexes.

So, SHUT UP YOUR FACE !!!

Lol! Who gives you the right to direct the story then you imbecile! I'm an Advocate of this story and i can whoop your ass from here to Kingdom come if needed to get your moronic ass out of here. You're the brain dead moron whose ruining the fun for all the other readers who are enjoying the story. So yes! I can and will judge your basement dwelling ass and call you the appropriate names you deserve. As for inferiority complex,  i get that it's a slow week for you and you’ve recently learned this word and are excited to use it; but learn the proper use of a word before using it. You're simply embarassing yourself with every new reply. It was funny ngl! But now its just pathetic. Go back to your hole and cry some more.

[Papa Makichu]

...............

[tweeny_fory]

fucking hot man
now its grandpas turn to drink the milk

[hornyfromchennai]

Pls continue this hot story, very eagerly waiting for your updates

[Herbiee]

Waiting For Deepa.!!

[Herbiee]

I would like to say one thing at this point.
I want back my dearest Deepa and her lovely big milky boobs.
Really you some guys are delaying Deepa's next updates dude. Comment positively if you like it or ignore it if you don’t like it. You have a lot of stories out there. Choose your favorite and read on. don’t make author confused.
Mr.Writer, you know one thing. Your story has received a lot of positive comments so far. That means most of the readers in this thread support you, they love your story, and they are still waiting for the rest of your story. Why  your attention on some bad comments and bothered about it ?? Wide open your eyes and look at the responses of others who loves your story. What the hell are you gonna answer them? please update your next episode. that’s the answer for them. You should respect your supporters. if you respect them, please continue your upcoming updates with your style.

[Sudharani2821983]

Bro plz update I can't wait to drain my cum

[blackdesk]

its fantasy world. some nuts have forgotten that. please go someplace else, let us read this super erotic story pleas.

[Lactator]

Update the story brother

[Wtf99]

Oh my God!  This story is so good. How the hell did i not read this before!? Please continue updating the story. I think breastfeeding the old grandpa would be the hottest update of this story yet!!! Please give us an update today

[NavelPlay]

PLEASE DON'T STOP WRITING THE STORY BECAUSE OF SOME HATERS WHO DO NOT LIKE IT AS THEY CAN'T EVEN CREATE A STORY LIKE THIS.
PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY AS HOW YOU WERE CONTINUING IT.
WE'RE WAITING TO SEE AN AWESOME UPDATE COME FROM YOU BRO.

AND TO THE HATERS:
IF YOU CAN'T MAKE OR CREATE ANY STORY, PLEASE DO NOT INTERRUPT IF OTHER IS DOING THAT. IF YOU CAN MAKE YOUR OWN, JUST SHOW IT UP OR STOP RIGHT THERE FROM STOPPING OTHERS TO DO SOMETHING,,,,, AS SIMPLE LIKE A-B-C

[The_Rock]

Bro what happened... We are waiting.. Plz continue..

[Lactator]

Update the story dude!  Why are you delaying it for so long!?

[Jhonsena]

Please update this story......

[Lactator]

This story truly is abandoned. Isn't it? What a shame....

[Yampag]

Yes, indeed.. unfortunate..that the writer is not responding.. though his maiden attempt is very promising and atleast I have expected that.. after this story he will try another one also.. coz he has shown such metal.. but due to some irresponsible readers he put this story in shelves.. My only request him to forgive them and again try to focus on this story.. if you feel after reading some comments that where you can improve...than try for the implementation and neglect the rubbish comments and move ahead.. you will definitely improve in your next story.. but don't pay attention to bullshits.. it's your story and you are free to write as per your ideas..concepts.. it is indeed difficult to write an erotic story.. and I am saluting each n every writes here for your hard endeavour to entertain the readers.. I also like few stories which suits my taste.. but that does not mean that I write rubbish comments for them.. if I don't like.. I simply take an exit from that story.. but kudos to all writers of this forum... thank you..

[ronylol]

We are waiting..

[Playboysuperx]

edited...

[The_Rock]

Budha... Aur baki sare garib baccho ka to socho... Bechare bhukhe hi mar jaye ge.. Agar story bandh ho gyi to...
Plz continue _/\_