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Honestly, we don't get paid for writing in this forum. Instead we want to get our remuneration in another form. Those are, good comments, Repu, Rate Star etc. I'm not just saying this on my behalf, rather, speaking on behalf of rest of the other writers, who spend their precious time writing here, just to give you pleasure. If they get appropriate encouraging comments, I am sure all the writers will be more enthusiastic to write updates.
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Pl. langauge and dilog Hindi me Rkho To aur mja aayega.
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Also, have the dialogue be in Hinglish rather English. It'll sound more natural and kinky. And you can prolong an update by simply giving more explicit details about the breastfeeding scenes. Like when birju was squeezing one breast and drinking from another Deeps arched her back, backwards and let her head fall backwards as well, closing her eyes, breathing loudly she felt as if this old man would suckle the life out of her. Give mire details as to how she feels when this toothless old guy sucks on her nipples, vigorously clawing and drinking from her breasts. Or how he's squeezing her breasts and give more details like how he's holding them in his palms, trying the feels the heavy weight of her soft breasts. The softness coupled with the weird heaviness of her milk filled tits made him even more erect and hungry etc. That way you don't need to constantly move the plot forward because the details are gonna increase the size of the updates enough to satiate the readers.
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Please continue the story
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Excellent story plz continue
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Wow... Still no update huh
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Dude...all i wanna say is I WANNA STUDY YOUR BRAINCELLS TO TRY AND FIGURE OUT YOU WRITE SEXY STUFF LIKE THIS!! Honestly if you keep this up i can see this story becoming one of those classic stories people request for resubmitting in other forums, copying or writing with their own twist. I can guarantee if you keep up with the theme you're going for without ruining it with rushed sex this is gonna turn into an instant classic with a loyal following. I really like it that you're turning Deepa into a lactating godmother sort of character instead of a whore. Because sluts Are cheap and easy to write. But writing naive kinky characters who are when facing awkward situations react even more awkwardly is hot af. For example if Deepa turns into a lactating breast feeder for all low class men while thinking she's DOING a service for humanity while the low class ugly old men are coming to fill their bellies with delicious milk and play with her massive soft titties, it'll create that perfect juxtaposition for kinky lactation fantasy erotica!! Turn deepa into a wet nurse for the ugly poor old buddhas. But not a whore. It'll keep things interesting. Maybe she'll only have sex with birju so that readers who want sex don't get bored. But with other characters she'll stay a wet nursing godmother sort of character and they'll find new schemes to find ways so that they can drink her delicious milk and play with her breasts. I also like the size of the update. Please keep this quality and give us another mind blowing update. I also thank you for not abruptly ending the update. I hate those kinds of updates that feel unfinished.
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"You are kind hearted madam" is enough for Deepa to open her boobs and legs for the other men.