29-09-2021, 08:48 PM
What happens next
Adultery Madhu and Tushar
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29-09-2021, 08:48 PM
What happens next
30-09-2021, 02:44 AM
Waiting to see what happend next bro
01-10-2021, 09:14 PM
Madhu madhu madhu madhu madhuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
03-10-2021, 09:43 PM
Going great. mind-blowing updates. thank you very much. only request kindly use small font. fonts size is hurting eyes.
05-10-2021, 07:36 AM
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Waiting for updates. What is the next plan of Tushar and his friends for madhu.
06-10-2021, 11:29 PM
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06-10-2021, 11:46 PM
Hope you all love this story and keep reading and posting your comments
07-10-2021, 09:10 PM
Thought she would got impregnanted by the boys, but she did not. Are all the boys impotent like her husband.
07-10-2021, 09:13 PM
The last few scenes were not that impressive. Sorry to say.
Bad that her husband did not get doubt on her change and not noticed her body used thoroughly by the students.
10-10-2021, 09:11 PM
Good story, but you should have give a logical end to this. She is enjoying sex with multiple students She is not sexually happy with her husband, but loving him. You can still add few more by making her husband knowing the truth and she getting pregnant with Tushar. Having read the title, i thought she is special for Tushar and bear his child but the end had nothing with the story title.
10-10-2021, 09:24 PM
(10-10-2021, 09:11 PM)Dinesh Raveendran Wrote: Good story, but you should have give a logical end to this. She is enjoying sex with multiple students She is not sexually happy with her husband, but loving him. You can still add few more by making her husband knowing the truth and she getting pregnant with Tushar. Having read the title, i thought she is special for Tushar and bear his child but the end had nothing with the story title. Cant agree more
12-10-2021, 06:58 AM
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Awesome, but it does not looking a complete. Is the husband that fool?
Why the story is named as Madhu and Tushar. Is that because Madhu is made a slut by Tushar? After knowing his plan of getting her laid with other friends, she did not get angry and instead happy. It is only because, she is not getting pleasures from her husband and only these young kids bringing her inner desires out?
12-10-2021, 07:59 PM
Very nice. Write more
13-10-2021, 01:54 AM
I do understand your views and suggestion but I have already put so many thing in this story. I will try to work out but wont happen soon plus would love to see more views and decide if I really wish to continue but I will need theme some change in this.
Sorry If i have disappointed you guys it is difficult to take time and put words however I will think if the story goes beyond 50K views
13-10-2021, 02:02 AM
(27-09-2021, 06:24 AM)Desmond Miles Wrote: Didn't like the forced sex of this update, bro.. You could've easily made Arun or Rahul seduce her while on the process of Massage and Photoshoot instead of all that forcing her by Tushar.. Sorry bro, it wasn't your best update.. But the beginning of this update was going really good though.. Then at the last part, you just hurriedly wrapped up the Photoshoot bit like it meant nothing for this update.. Not heard from you and the views and suggestions from your side. Always looking ahead to hear from you so please do take time and write back in detail
13-10-2021, 02:11 AM
Story is marvelous, I really enjoyed it and it looks complete to me. Try writing an another story bro, you are an awesome writer who has total commitment to the story. Never seen many writers give timely updates
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