23-09-2021, 02:56 PM
Keep Going. Suberb updates and writing skills. Waiting for more updates
Madhu and Tushar
23-09-2021, 04:07 PM
Story is going in a great way, bro.. Really appreciate your effort and time put on this.. clp); 
Just wanna tell that, try to shorten the sex scene lengths between Madhu and Tushar now as the reader's focus should be on Madhu with other male characters now.. And also, like I asked before, please don't make her husband fully aware of what all she does behind his back.. It only boosts the hotness when the husband is not a willing partner in his wife's cheating.. Because if he knew whats happening and still allows her, then it isn't much different from all those stupid cuckold stories out there.. So please keep these in mind..
Waiting to read more and more from you.. yr):
Just wanna tell that, try to shorten the sex scene lengths between Madhu and Tushar now as the reader's focus should be on Madhu with other male characters now.. And also, like I asked before, please don't make her husband fully aware of what all she does behind his back.. It only boosts the hotness when the husband is not a willing partner in his wife's cheating.. Because if he knew whats happening and still allows her, then it isn't much different from all those stupid cuckold stories out there.. So please keep these in mind..
Waiting to read more and more from you.. yr):
23-09-2021, 05:07 PM
WOW AWSOME NARRATION ONE OF THE BEST STORY IN THIS SITE
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24-09-2021, 12:42 AM
Marvelous writing, let her husband not aware of the situation as it can take away the spiceness of the scene. Let her be bit authoritive and enjoy. Waiting for the next update
24-09-2021, 06:54 AM
It is also little strange that she is handled roughly and her husband did not find any bite marks in her body. Also, fucking her daily and most of time without condom, she is not bothered about safe period or getting pregnant.
24-09-2021, 07:54 PM
Thanks for your comments and hope you enjoy the updates
Looking for your suggestions and comments and lots of reivew and replies
Looking for your suggestions and comments and lots of reivew and replies
24-09-2021, 08:52 PM
Wonderful.. Was expecting a group bang from all friends. Hope it happen soon. All of them make her drink their juices and tear her holes.
24-09-2021, 09:17 PM
Superb
Hope they take a video of her and blackmail to use her as they wanted.
Hope they take a video of her and blackmail to use her as they wanted.
24-09-2021, 11:32 PM
25-09-2021, 02:20 AM
Bro.... What an update!.. 
You really know what you're writing..
The beginning of including other boys was bit jumpy, but was really enjoyable.. And I know its not the real treat yet...
Waiting with baited breath for the next update.. And I hope you're doing fine too.. :shy:
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You really know what you're writing..
The beginning of including other boys was bit jumpy, but was really enjoyable.. And I know its not the real treat yet...
Waiting with baited breath for the next update.. And I hope you're doing fine too.. :shy:
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25-09-2021, 06:36 AM
Now five men other than husband have kissed and two fucked. When Arun and Ravi going to get chance. Very interesting writing. Soon she will be slut of all five.
25-09-2021, 01:36 PM
This story is getting hotter and naughtier... Poor Madhu... And Tushar is being a awesome mind player.
Very hot, please continue with the updates
Very hot, please continue with the updates
25-09-2021, 11:36 PM
Bro, please comment each day if you're gonna post an update or not.. We will happily wait for it that night or just when you post it later..
26-09-2021, 12:45 AM
Keep cumming.! 
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