19-09-2021, 03:45 PM
I have posted enough updates for weekend and need inputs and lots of comments
Please do write back with your feedback and your thoughts
Please do write back with your feedback and your thoughts
Madhu and Tushar
19-09-2021, 03:47 PM
Looking ahead for your feedback to encourage new writers like me to give you more stories like this and feel appreciated
19-09-2021, 05:42 PM
its a nine course meal. great writing . you gave real hard effort for these new updates. thank you very much. by the way 'Tushar' some how turning me down. though its your story , your characters, but, but, in my opinion , its losing some of its kinkyness. please dont mind please.
19-09-2021, 11:39 PM
(19-09-2021, 05:42 PM)blackdesk Wrote: its a nine course meal. great writing . you gave real hard effort for these new updates. thank you very much. by the way 'Tushar' some how turning me down. though its your story , your characters, but, but, in my opinion , its losing some of its kinkyness. please dont mind please.
Thanks for the feedback from you bear with me and I am sure you will enjoy it going ahead. Though little disappointed not to find others putting any comments
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21-09-2021, 12:14 AM
Looking ahead for reviews and suggestions so please do take some time to put some comments to help me write and complete the story
21-09-2021, 01:19 AM
If you guys dont like the story i will stop updating as i dont see any review or any suggestions or comments
21-09-2021, 02:45 AM
Hey man don't stop please. It's hard get a good writer here, who write regular updates. . By the way the motorbike riding part is sooooo erotic that I have to use my hand twice. And not only that thunderstorm part also injuries for my health you know. And the readers will give comments , just have faith.
21-09-2021, 04:08 AM
The story is going pretty great, bro.. Don't even think of stopping it please.. But I have a small suggestion to you. That, please avoid using coloured or bold text for the story. Its difficult to read at sometimes (you know.. When our hands are busy and mostly in darkness of our room..) Just use normal black text and it will be comfortable for everyone.
All the very best for the future updates.. <3
All the very best for the future updates.. <3
21-09-2021, 04:45 AM
And one more important request regarding the plot.. Please don't let her share Tushar's incidents with her husband.. (Atleast for now)
There is great fun to read when the husband is unaware of all these happenings of his wife, and those sneaky situations will definitely boost the erotic feel of the story.. Just let him be a husband with no absolute clue of his wife's surroundings for now.. And let Madhu have her fun right behind his back when good situations arise.. (Like inviting Tushar to her home later in the story).
Just my suggestions as a lover of this great story.. The decision is always yours, bro. :shy:
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There is great fun to read when the husband is unaware of all these happenings of his wife, and those sneaky situations will definitely boost the erotic feel of the story.. Just let him be a husband with no absolute clue of his wife's surroundings for now.. And let Madhu have her fun right behind his back when good situations arise.. (Like inviting Tushar to her home later in the story).
Just my suggestions as a lover of this great story.. The decision is always yours, bro. :shy:
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