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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)
(18-04-2019, 11:03 PM)Raj355407 Wrote: sainiko ke jajbe ko salaam

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(18-04-2019, 11:04 PM)Raj355407 Wrote: ab sunaina kya karti hai ye dekhana hai...
kyo ki vo loket phek kar aa gai hai

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(19-04-2019, 03:27 PM)Raj355407 Wrote: desh me itna kuchh ho raha hai or hero gaya hai ghumne.... so sad....
use aakar desh ki raksha karni chahiye....

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Update 41


Aadmi : dharti mata mujhe garv hai ki mein is desh mein paida hua
Magar dukh hai ki in janvaro se apki raksha nahi kar paya.

Sunaina behad gusse mein

Sunaina :

Ab aagee..

Nishant ( sunaina se )  : beti chalo yaha se hum inse jeet nahi sakte
Yeh rakshas lag rahe hai.

Sunaina ( behad gusse me ) : koi hamare dharti mara par atyachar kargega or hum der kar bhag jaeye.

Sunaina nishant ko hilate hue.

Sunaina : hum bhartiyo ne der kar bhagna nahi shikha nishant uncle
Datt kar ladna shika hai.
Kya aap yeh chahate hai ki hum bhag jae
Agar hum aaj bhag gae to yeh logh hamari dharti mata ko gulam bana lege
Or mein apne mom dad ke katilo ko kese jane de sakti hu.

Sahil ( sunaina se ) : tumari baat bilkul thik hai magar hum inse kese lade

Tabi
Vaha
Rakshas chakra tyaar ho jata hai.
Or ghumte hue puri aarmy ko khatam karne lagta hai.

Har aarmy wale apni aantim saash tak ladte hue veer gati ko prapt hone lagte hai
Or ek gana ghungunane lagte hai

Jis awaaz ko sunaina bhi sunti hai.

Gana :
कर चले हम फ़िदा जान-ओ-तन साथियों
अब तुम्हारे हवाले वतन साथियों       

साँस थमती गई नब्ज़ जमती गई
फिर भी बढ़ते कदम को न रुकने दिया
कट गये सर हमारे तो कुछ ग़म नहीं
सर हिमालय का हमने न झुकने दिया
मरते मरते रहा बाँकापन साथियों, अब तुम्हारे ...

ज़िंदा रहने के मौसम बहुत हैं मगर
जान देने की रुत रोज़ आती नहीं
हुस्न और इश्क़ दोनों को रुसवा करे
वो जवानी जो खूँ में नहाती नहीं
बाँध लो अपने सर पर कफ़न साथियों, अब तुम्हारे ...

राह क़ुर्बानियों की न वीरान हो
तुम सजाते ही रहना नये क़ाफ़िले
फ़तह का जश्न इस जश्न के बाद है
ज़िंदगी मौत से मिल रही है गले
आज धरती बनी है दुल्हन साथियों, अब तुम्हारे ...

खींच दो अपने खूँ से ज़मीं पर लकीर
इस तरफ़ आने पाये न रावण कोई
तोड़ दो हाथ अगर हाथ उठने लगे
छूने पाये न सीता का दामन कोई
राम भी तुम तुम्हीं लक्ष्मण साथियों, अब तुम्हारे ...


Yeh gana sunkar sunaina pagal si hokar behad gusse mein bolti hai.

Sunaina ( sahil se ) : sahil mujhe tumse yeh ummid nahi thi mujhe laga tha tum ek sache desh bhakt ho.
Magar tum to kamzor nikale

Sunaina sahil ko kuch aarmy walo like died body dikate hue bolti hai.

Sunaina ( sahil se ) : tumse jyada to yeh acha hai ki kamse kaam veer gati ko prapt hokar desh ke kaam to a rahe hai.
Magar tum bujdil ki tarha bhagkar yaha se jana chahate ho.
Mujhe bohot dukh ho raha hai ki maine tume apna dost banaya

Sunaina ( sahil se ) : aisa dost jo apne desh ko bachane ka chorkar yaha se bhagkar jana chahata hai.
Agar tum yaha se bhag bhi gaye to kya hoga
Kya tum in desh 2 se bach jaoge.

Sunaina ( gusse se ) : nahi tum fir gulam ban jaoge
Tum mujhse pyaar karte ho tum pyaar ka bhi matlab jante ho
Ki pyaar kya hota hai.
Pyaar vo hota hai ki tum uske liye kuch bhi par sakte ho
Chahe vo kisi bhi halat mein ho
Kabi usko chorkar nahi jata
Jaise mein rohan se pyaar karti hu
Dilo jaan se chahati hue
Meine rohan ko dekha nahi hai fir bhi mujhe himmat milti hai
Or mujhe is locket ki madad se rohan mujhe batata hai ki sunaina mein tumare sath hu
Tumari har musibaat mein

Mein tume kuch nahi hone duga.

Or sunaina locket dekhne lagti hai magar sunaina ko gale mein vo locket nahi milta

Or sunaina bohot ghabra jati hai.

Sunaina ( ghabrate hue ) : mera locket kha gaya vo to hamesha mere gale mein rehta hai.


Fir sunaina ko yaad ata hai ki sunaina ne khud hii us locket ko apne gale se nikal kar fek diya tha.

Or jaise hii sunaina ko vo baat yaad ati hai

To sunaina bohot ghabra jati hai.
Or rone lagti hai

Sunaina ( rote hue ) : mein bohot matlabi hue rohan meine tumare locket ko fek diya
Tumare pyaar ko fek diya
Mujhe maaf kar do rohan
Mujhe maaf kar do
Maine bohot matlabi hue

Or is samay sunaina ki atma tak rone lag jati hai.

Tabi
Ek aag ka gola sunaina ko lagne wala hota hai

Tabi
Sahil ( chillate hue ) : sunainaaa bacho

Or sahil sunaina ko dhakka dekar khud us aag ke gole ke beech mein a jata hai .
Or vo aag ka gola jaise hii sahil ko lagta hai

Sahil ki ek tezz dard bhari cheekh nikal jati hai

Jis cheekh ko sunte hii sunaina ghabra jati hai

Sunaina ( sahil se ) : yeh kya kiya tumne sahil
Vo aag ka gola mujhe lagne wala tha tumne mujhe bachane ke liye khud us aag ke gole ke beech me kiu aa gae.
Kiu sahil kiu

Sahil ( dard se ) : sunaina tumara rohan ke liye pyaar dekhkar aaj mujhe bhi shamaj aa gaya ki pyaar to vo hota hai jo tumne rohan se liya hai.

Bina dekhe pyaar kiya hai tumne rohan se
Or itna pyaar to shayad mein bhi nahi kar sakta tha tumse jitna pyaar tumne kiya hai rohan se
Shayad tum mere liye nahi bani ho sunaina
Tum rohan ke liye bani ho
Hamesha khuss rehna sunaina

Sahil ( dard se ) : mujhe khusi hai ki maine us ladki se pyaar kiya jisme desh prem ki bhawna hai.
Meine to bas apne pyaar ka kartavye nibhaya hai
Jisse tumme yeh na lage ki mein tumari dosti ke kabil nahi tha.

Sunaina ( rote hue ) : tum mere sache dost ho sahil
Mein tume kuch nahi hone dugi
Mein abhi tum ko hospital lekar jati hu.

Or sahil ki aise halat dekhkar nishant bhi rone lagta hai.

Or sunaina sahil ko utane lagti hai.

Tabi
Piche se ek aadmi sunaina ka hand pakad leta hai.

Sunaina (us aadmi se ) : tumne mera hand kiu pakra hai.

Nishant ( aadmi se ) kamlesh choro sunaina ka hand
Tumne sunaina ka hand kiu pakra hai.

Kamlesh : isko hamare robert sir kabse dhoondh rahe the aaj mein isko robert sir ko shop hii duga.

Or kamlesh hasne lagta hai.

Nishant shocked hote hue bolta hai.

Nishant ( kamlesh se ) : tum robert ke aadmi ho iska matlab jo sunaina ne bola tha ki koi us hacker ka jasus hai vo tum the



 
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बहुत ही दुखदायी है।।।
साहिल मर रहा है।।।।
सुनैना मुसीबत में है।।।
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लाजवाब update है
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कमलेश ही वो गद्दार है जो सारी सूचना पहुचाता था।।।।
उसे आसान मौत मत देना जो देश से गद्दारी करे।।।
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ab inka kaun help karega ....
kyonki loket to vo phenk kar aa gai hai...
kya anjaam hoga inka....
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(20-04-2019, 01:57 AM)Raj355407 Wrote: बहुत ही दुखदायी है।।।
साहिल मर रहा है।।।।
सुनैना मुसीबत में है।।।

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(20-04-2019, 01:57 AM)Raj355407 Wrote: लाजवाब update है

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(20-04-2019, 01:59 AM)Raj355407 Wrote: कमलेश ही वो गद्दार है जो सारी सूचना पहुचाता था।।।।
उसे आसान मौत मत देना जो देश से गद्दारी करे।।।

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(20-04-2019, 03:12 PM)Raj355407 Wrote: ab inka kaun help karega ....
kyonki loket to vo phenk kar aa gai hai...
kya anjaam hoga inka....

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Update 42

Nishant ( kamlesh se ) : tum robert ke aadmi ho iska matlab jo sunaina ne bola tha ki koi us hacker ka jasus hai vo tum the

Ab aageee...

Kamlesh ( mushkurate hue ) : haa mein hii vo shaks tha jisne pure server ki information dusare desh mein pohichai thi.
Or pura server hack bhi karvaya tha

Kamlesh ( sunaina ki taraf dekhte hue ) : magar is ladki ( sunaina ) ne mera sara plan fail kar diya

Kamesh ( mushkurate hue ) : ab mein sunaina ko robert ko dekar mein unka dil jeet luga jisse mein robert sir ka khas aadmi ban saku

Sunaina ( kamlesh se ) : kamine tune bohot badi galti ki hai mera hand pakadkar

Kamlesh ( rakshaso se ) : pakad lo in sab ko or gasitkar lekar chalo robert sir ke pass

Or sab rakshas nishant or unke sathi ko pakad leta hai

Or ghasitkar robert ke pass le jate hai.

Or rakshas chakra dheere dheere sab logo ko khatam karta hua aage badne lagta hai

Kamlesh ( robert se ) : sir yeh hii hai sunaina jisne us hacking server ko thoda tha.

Robert ( kamlesh se ) : wah kamlesh tum ne to mera kaam hii asan kar diya
Tum sunaina ko yaha le aaye.
Or yeh baki logh khon hai

Kamlesh ( robert se ): sir yeh nishant hai hamare ghufiya agency ka chief or yeh baki sab is nishant ke agent.

Nishant ( chillate hue ) : saale kutte dhokebaaz jis desh ne tuze sahara diya ussi desh ke sine ( chest ) par vaar kiya .

Kamlesh ( haste hue ) : tune abhi mera dhoka dekha kaha hai abhi to bohot kuch hona hai .
Tu muz par chilla raha hai.
Chilla or chilla
Aaj tera murder karke mein is desh par kabza karuga
Koi hume nahi rokh sakta

Sunaina ( chillate hue ) : , tu is desh par kabza karne ka sapna chor de.
Tu kabi is desh par kabza nahi kar payega.

Robert ( sunaina se ) : tune hamare boss ka server thoda hai.
To tu koi mamuli ladki nahi ho sakti jaldi bta khon hai tu.

Sunaina ( robert se ) : mein teri mout hu kamine agar tu apni zindagi bachana hai to bhag ja yaha se nahi to tuze absos hoga ki tune aisa karke koi galti to nahi kardi.

Tabi vaha peter aa jata hai.

Peter ( robert se ) : sir yeh rahi vo auraat ( seema ) jisko aap pakadna chahate the.

Peter ( pareshan hokar ) : Magar sir mujhe  aapko kuch baat batani hai.

Robert : peter vo sab baad me batana idhar loa us aauraat ko

Seema ( chillate hue ) : chorde mujhe kamine chor de
Mein tuze kuch nahi btaugi chahe tu meri jaan bhi lee le.

Robert  seema ko ek thapad marte hai jisse seema door jakar sunaina ke pass girte hai .

Robert ( seema se ) : agar tu mujhe us ladke ke bareme nahi bataegi to tu aaj jarur meregi.

Robert seema se :
Apne choro taraf nazre ghumakar dekh yaha tuze yaha koi nahi aa sakta bachane.

Or jald hii yeh pura desh khatam ho jaega or hamare kabze mein hoga


Or seema charo taraf nazre ghumakar dekti hai

To seema ka dil bhi dehal jata hai kiuki charo taraf hahakar macha hota hai
Or mayasur apni shaktiyo se sab jagah tabahii macha deta hai
Or rakshas chakra har masum logo ko khatam karne wala hota hai.

Or yeh sab itni tezzi se ho raha hota hai ki kisi ko kuch shamaj nahi aa raha hota hai .

Tabi seema ki nazar sunaina par padti hai or sunaina ko dekhkar puri tarha shocked ho jati hai.

Seema ( sunaina se ) : sonam beti tu yaha tum to rahul ke sath gai thi na life ke full maze thread par.

Sunaina bhi sonam naam sunkar shocked ho jati hai.

Sunaina ( seema se ) : khon sonam aunty mein to sunaina hu
Sunaina

Seema bhi puri tarha shocked hote hue bolti hai .

Seema : tum sunaina ho

Sunaina : haa aunty mein sunaina hu

Seema : iska matlab tum zinda ho par tum to pull se niche gir gai thi na.

Sunaina ( mann mein ) : aaj mere sath yeh kya ho raha hai .
Bilkul shamaj nahi aa raha aaj to mujhe jatke par jhatke mil rahe hai.

Sunaina : mein pull se niche gir gai thi isse apka kya matlab hai.

Jaise hii seema kuch bolne wali hoti hai

Tabi

Robert ( dono se ) : lagta hai tum dono mujhe kuch nahi bataoge.

Tabi
Robert peter se bolta hai khatam kar do in dono ko hum us ladke ko baad me dhoodh lege.

Robert ( mann me ) : yeh mahaveer abhi tak aya kiu nahi.

Or jaise hii peter sunaina ko apni talvaar se marne wala hota hai.
Tabi
Sunaina achanak se chillate hue bolti hai.

Sunaina ( chillate hue ) : rohaan rohaan

Or vaise hii peter ko koi takkar marta hai
Or peter urta hua bohot door jakar girta hai ....



Bhai aaj bohot thak gaya hu isliye update nahi de raha tha par apne itne comment kiye to ek bohot chota se update de diya .

Next update mein yeh sara scene bhi khatam ho jaega
Or kal ek maha mega update de duga


Or pyaar ki had paar chapter 1 bhi complete ho jaega .




Pyaar ki had par - family loves forever

Chapter 1 : introduction of rahul and sunaina  family character , entry of mahakaal , entry of patal lok charector , sunaina ke locket ka raaz created , sunaina ki hacking  , rahul confusion ki mein khon hu , prerna ki entry , sunaina ko rohan ki ek jhalak.
End of first chapter
Chapter 1 : total 43 update

Chapter 2 : rahul ka mahakaal se samna , mahakaal ka raaz , rohan sach aakhir rohan khon hai ,  sunaina or rohan ka love affection , sunaina hacking continue ,  entry of kaal , sunaina ke locket ka raaz continue , entry of bhagwaan lok , rahul ka business , or end of 22 saal flashback update 1 ka , rahul or sunaina ke janam ki story , 

Baki chapters badme ..


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bhai chota hai lekin achchha laga...
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Super .....keep it up..
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waiting for mega update
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Bhai update bahot hi achhi thi
Next update ka wait karenge...
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(20-04-2019, 04:35 PM)Raj355407 Wrote: bhai chota hai lekin achchha laga...

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(20-04-2019, 10:14 PM)sexxy neha Wrote: Super .....keep it up..

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(21-04-2019, 02:37 PM)Raj355407 Wrote: waiting for mega update

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