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(26-08-2021, 02:36 PM)Royalkingfire Wrote: Thank you , yes voh minor changes main jarur karunga
Actually mujhe bhi madhuri ka character glamorous laga that's y voh change kiya then uss time family man web series aayi thi usme suchitra nam ka wife ka character tha joh mujhe relate hone laga but Priyamani ke jyada pics available na hone ke karan kabhi dal nahi paya then maine uss nam ko suchita kar diya aur ek boht passionate reader hain @saravaroman unhone suchita ko as Anushka Shetty and namrta ko priyanka jain present karne ko kaha , that time maine kiya bhi
Filhal mujhe namrta as a namrta he imagine hoti hain ek alag jagah banai hain usne
Starting period main arya ambekar acchi lagti thi then priyanka jain bad me namrta ka character mujhe preksha rana pe boht imagine hone laga abhi bhi hota hain aur glamourous imagine karna ho jaise ke safar ke ending main tab Rakul preet ka imagine huva :)
Depends upon situation
Ab ye readers ke upar hain ki unko kon imagine hota hain ek reader ne bataya uski friend ka nam namrta hain toh voh imagine hoti hain , ek ne bataya tha ki uske office me namrta nam ki sundar ladki kam karti hain voh imagine hoti hain
Mujhe family me aisa kuch pasand nahi but ek reader ko uski behan imagine hoti hain
Aur me bas namrta ko likhne ka kam karta hu baki readers ka imagination 
Bilkul sahi kaha aapane.Aapne Namrata ka character linga hi itana hi mast hain ke har kisi ko usame unka crush mehsoos hota hain. 
Mujhe toh namrata kabhi kabhi ketaki mategaonkar,vaidehi parashurami main dikhati hain.
Now eagerly waiting for next episode. yr):
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Bahut bdiya update .... brother...and welcome back....to wo Anjan shaks Das sir hai...bada tharki buddha hai....lgta hai ab agla no. Namrata ka lgne wala hai.....Das sir isse chhodne wale nhi....dekhte hai Das sir iske saath kaisa khel khelta hai.....
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(26-08-2021, 10:43 PM)raja shri Wrote: Bahut bdiya update .... brother...and welcome back....to wo Anjan shaks Das sir hai...bada tharki buddha hai....lgta hai ab agla no. Namrata ka lgne wala hai.....Das sir isse chhodne wale nhi....dekhte hai Das sir iske saath kaisa khel khelta hai.....
Thank you brother  keep supporting
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(25-08-2021, 12:43 PM)Royalkingfire Wrote: Thank you bhai aise he sath jude rahiye
(25-08-2021, 11:17 PM)Anvesharonny Wrote: Brilliant comeback post brother.the encounter scene between Namrata and Das were just wowww,jyada kuch baatchit nahi lekin mohoul garam kar diya Das ke havbhav aur expression se aur Namrata ke sundarata ka varnan to bahot badhiya tha.
Bas ek cheez mujhe khataki ke agar Namrata wo buddha aadami kon Hain ye pata nahi hota to aur maja aa jata,kyunki Namrata ko ab das ke intetion ka thoda andaza lag gaya hain agar ye na hota to Jo das karata wo Namrata ke liye surprise hota jaise Birju encouter main hua.Anyways aage kya hota hain ye dekhna bahot interesting hoga.
Das to ab dance pe chance maarega.
Byw I am reading your story once again and found that in update 4 Namrata ke mom naam Madhuri type hua instead of Suchita.
Eagerly waiting for next episode,Stay safe keep rcking. yr):
This is an amazing observation and I couldn’t have imagined it this deep. But just to follow it up, I believe that Namrata is such an innocent and submissive character that even if she knew what his teacher is up t, she wouldn’t be able to say no to any of his advances makes it more kinky and erotic. Despite knowing that her teacher is a pervert, she continue to do as he says and pleases him to his hearts desire. her submissive nature and her teacher’s sexual advances towards her knowing she won’t say a word o anyone is next level eroticism.
Cant wait to see how Mr Das manipulate Namrata and uses her as his personal submissive doll.
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(27-08-2021, 08:14 PM)rehanboy16 Wrote: This is an amazing observation and I couldn’t have imagined it this deep. But just to follow it up, I believe that Namrata is such an innocent and submissive character that even if she knew what his teacher is up t, she wouldn’t be able to say no to any of his advances makes it more kinky and erotic. Despite knowing that her teacher is a pervert, she continue to do as he says and pleases him to his hearts desire. her submissive nature and her teacher’s sexual advances towards her knowing she won’t say a word o anyone is next level eroticism.
Cant wait to see how Mr Das manipulate Namrata and uses her as his personal submissive doll.
Thank you brother  keep supporting
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(27-08-2021, 08:14 PM)rehanboy16 Wrote: This is an amazing observation and I couldn’t have imagined it this deep. But just to follow it up, I believe that Namrata is such an innocent and submissive character that even if she knew what his teacher is up t, she wouldn’t be able to say no to any of his advances makes it more kinky and erotic. Despite knowing that her teacher is a pervert, she continue to do as he says and pleases him to his hearts desire. her submissive nature and her teacher’s sexual advances towards her knowing she won’t say a word o anyone is next level eroticism.
Cant wait to see how Mr Das manipulate Namrata and uses her as his personal submissive doll. I would like to give my opinion about why Namrata is submissive in nature.From the beginning of the story we see Namrata is very kind person and she has no idea about Birju or savla's intentions.thats the reason she behaved nicely with them which allows them to get close with her and takes advantage of those situations.
And physical encounters happened with namrata were suprising for her.She didn't expected advances of Birju in lift scene.On this situation we see the dilemma of namrata's mind,on one side she wanted to stop advances of Birju and on the other side she was enjoying his manly touches on her body.due to this was unexpected surprising encounter she didn't knew how to react to this situation and Birju successfully seduces her which lead to diwali encounter where Namrata wanted to enjoy those hands on her body once more and that is the reason she submitted herself to birju and same surprising encounter happened with Mishra's bike trip.on the opposite in present situation Namrata knows the nature and intention of the Mr.Das.So she will be careful and cautious while facing Mr Das.If she didn't knew about Mr das nature she would have behaved exactly same as she behaved with Birju or Mishra and followed mr.das instructions blindly.
And even we love to see Namrata becomes pet of mr.das or any other old age person but not with force but with love care and seduction.
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Welcome back with a great re-entry. Good establishment builtup for Namrata College Fresher student's erotic adventures college journey.
I am warning you bro. You are such a great erotic writer and you proved it.
Why do you want suggestions from your fans readers. Sabki choice like dislikes alag gai. Will you murder your independent erotic mind to your readers. Lots of writers had very bad experience to change their stories in-between due to demands of their fans readers. Apni maulikta pe vishwas rakho. Apne sabhi characters pe bharosa rakho. Remember your own choices and decisions. Welcome back. We are very happy. Hope you overcame all your difficulties, hardships to your family, friends, personal life and your career in this pendemic years and economic slowdowns. Take care bro. And keep entertaining us always.
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Great going bro, and thanks a lot for continuing the story ahead
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Update accha hai bhai... Raga k entry ka v wait hae...!
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Great going brother hope das plays dominant throughout
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(30-08-2021, 09:18 AM)themaskeditor Wrote: Great going bro, and thanks a lot for continuing the story ahead
(30-08-2021, 01:22 PM)Jaan Wrote: Update accha hai bhai... Raga k entry ka v wait hae...!
(30-08-2021, 02:13 PM)Bhikhumumbai Wrote: wow. mast update.
Thank you sooo much brothers
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(30-08-2021, 02:47 PM)Hannahji Wrote: Great going brother hope das plays dominant throughout
(30-08-2021, 11:21 PM)Shabaz123 Wrote: Awesome update bhai
Thank you
Keep inspiring
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Great hot update Das vs Kinjal and Namrata.
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Great Update, Das's dominant sex is very hot yr): yr):
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What a great build up,the interaction between Das and Namrata was brilliant,jis tarah se das Namrata ko dekh raha tha aur usi waqt usake mann se nikalane vale vichar aur in sab se anjaan Namrata in sabka aapne bahot ache tarike se varnan kiya.Upar se miss Kinjal ka das ke sath scene bahot badhiya tha aur usi seat pe Namrata ka baithana wah bahot badhiya intefaq tha.
Aur Das ki backstory bhi achi thi jisase Hume pata chala ke wo insaan bhediya kyun ban gaya hain.
Ab das ne to Namrata ko dance rehearsal karane ke liye khali class main bulaya Hain ,dekhte hain ab Das ki agali chaal kya hogi.
Eagerly waiting for new update,ab Raha nahi jata. yr):
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