Adultery Journey of innocent wife madhu
Thats it guys v wont get any further story
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wow.. super hot story.. loved it.. eagerly waiting for the next
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I hope that's the end of this story guys....
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The writer might return or may not return. I wanted to register my thought honestly.

This is not one of those stories that is carefully thought and crafted.

It has its moments and feels good only as long as the reading flow is uninterrupted which makes regular updates important for this story.

With long gaps, the logic holes are pretty much visible and the scenes with Kabali and the story setting seems very forced rather than naturally inducing.

These kind of moment based stories need to continue to the momentum because unlike skillfully crafted stories, the kinky episodes are it's strengths and it has to be continuous.

Nevertheless, if the story continues please remember to update frequently else it is better left discontinued as this story is not engaging with longer gaps and the plot holes feel awkward
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what makes the delay of such stories I never understand, they start coloring our hair in half they leave us,, at least they won't even address their viewers for the delay .. only this happens with great stories only. come back from your hardcore viewer
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ohmising the update... update soon please...
your girl is not your property!.. why do you stop your girl from sitting on my lap facing me and getting lost looking deep in to my eyes... FREE HER..Right Now..
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eagerly waiting to know what is next..
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(06-05-2021, 01:59 PM)Mgaya Wrote: Kabali... Ye wala angel thoda tedha hai... Mr X wale pe mast development ho raha hai.. kabali bahot fast age badh raha hai...pata nai pedha kon khayega yahan

it is difficult to believe that Madhu is that naïve and agrees to act as a strangers wife
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(17-06-2021, 07:21 PM)Dreamybuzz Wrote: it is difficult to believe that Madhu is that naïve and agrees to act as a strangers wife

Story right,  everything happens
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Nothing matters, coz there is no update since 20 days
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(17-06-2021, 08:44 PM)y2klak Wrote: Nothing matters, coz there is no update since 20 days

True. But author seems logging in from time to time.
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Eagerly waited but disappointed cos of discontinuation
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Do something..she has started her role as Kabali’s poor wife.
Kabali should take advantage of this opportunity.
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please update brother .. missing madhu
your girl is not your property!.. why do you stop your girl from sitting on my lap facing me and getting lost looking deep in to my eyes... FREE HER..Right Now..
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waiting for the nest part bro.. please share the update
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Super story waiting for update
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waiting for update
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Don't nagging guys.i don't Know why author doing like this .he's come to visit this website frequently but not sure why he didn't update eventhough didn't say anything here
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8 minutes ago author visited this website
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(06-08-2021, 05:08 PM)Joshua Wrote: 8 minutes ago author visited this website

oh, at least if Author say he will update after XX days/weeks.... no need to follow up. 

Now Author just ignoring. Looks story over for now.  Nice while it lasted.... Exclamation
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