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awesome narration keep going bro
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very hot updatea,give another long update today and take break
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Amzing bro hubby ko cuck bnado to or maza ayega
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Hi All,
First of all, thank you for your comments. I encoutage only by these comments.
Appreciate if you comment about your real idea of the story without just posting nice, superb, awesome.
Since, the comments - nice, superb, awesome are just words, not feelings.
Thanks for your ideas
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write erotic episode ph conversation through video calls between shalini and ahamed and make huby to accept the reality slowly.
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This story narrating very new concept with erotic well please update more
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Update please and please don't fuck Shalini quick
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your story is very hit.give some long cobversation uodates between shalini abdul
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waiting for another long update from u
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New & very interesting concept of nexus between business and politics....Let see if she can fulfill her dream to become chief minister or not....or lost everything and become a pawn in the game of power politics.
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Please update the story.. Story concept is really good.. Make slow seduction of shalini..don't try complicate things between shalini and her husband..also please describe the age and personality of other characters.. In politics there are more old aged peoples on top level.. So make them horny for shalini..don't make shalini character as submissive.. Keep her attitude like that.. Also not blackmail type thing..
You can add party type incident, dance, yoga like event also..
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Excellent narration... Good story build up... Let's she whose beg shalini warms first . ... If possible pls add pics
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Logged back after a very long time to comment here. Excellent story line, never seen anyone coming up with these type of ideas. Waiting for the update eagerly bro
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In politics, there are many who dream about becoming CM and few succeed, now Shalini also in this race. The goal that Shalini set for herself, This Journey could be challenging or almost impossible. Let's see to what extent she goes to make dreams come true.
BTW Excellent story narration. yr):