15-07-2021, 09:55 PM
awesome narration keep going bro
Adultery North Politics - The game behind politics
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15-07-2021, 09:55 PM
awesome narration keep going bro
15-07-2021, 11:36 PM
very hot updatea,give another long update today and take break
16-07-2021, 08:08 AM
Amzing bro hubby ko cuck bnado to or maza ayega
16-07-2021, 08:30 AM
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Hi All,
First of all, thank you for your comments. I encoutage only by these comments. Appreciate if you comment about your real idea of the story without just posting nice, superb, awesome. Since, the comments - nice, superb, awesome are just words, not feelings. Thanks for your ideas
16-07-2021, 10:21 AM
write erotic episode ph conversation through video calls between shalini and ahamed and make huby to accept the reality slowly.
17-07-2021, 01:10 AM
(15-07-2021, 08:12 PM)ab123456123456 Wrote: It's obvious to have doubts that his wife would be taking an interest in someone else/having an affair because of his poor sexual performance.
17-07-2021, 12:45 PM
This story narrating very new concept with erotic well please update more
17-07-2021, 12:52 PM
Update please and please don't fuck Shalini quick
17-07-2021, 04:33 PM
your story is very hit.give some long cobversation uodates between shalini abdul
17-07-2021, 05:27 PM
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Obviously, don't get her fucked quickly....... Let there be some flirting, teasing (the way she did to Yousuf), sexually arousing, strong sexual tension between two people in this story.
Make her to think should she cheat her husband or not? Eventually, she is not completely sexually satisfied in marital life, But raj still loves her.
Shalini said that," she does not want to cheat him." It's means definitely she will.....
By the way, the hotel incident would be called cheating.... Let's see how long she faithful to him.
18-07-2021, 06:16 AM
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Lovely comments and will energize me to build up a good story.
As you are aware, i am far from India since early childhood, so not a clear and good idea about Indian politics and culture much. hope if you have any idea you may share to create a realistic story. Looking for your ideas about the story/ narration/ new ideas.... STAY SAFE
18-07-2021, 01:19 PM
waiting for another long update from u
18-07-2021, 03:35 PM
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18-07-2021, 04:07 PM
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New & very interesting concept of nexus between business and politics....Let see if she can fulfill her dream to become chief minister or not....or lost everything and become a pawn in the game of power politics.
18-07-2021, 11:51 PM
Please update the story.. Story concept is really good.. Make slow seduction of shalini..don't try complicate things between shalini and her husband..also please describe the age and personality of other characters.. In politics there are more old aged peoples on top level.. So make them horny for shalini..don't make shalini character as submissive.. Keep her attitude like that.. Also not blackmail type thing..
You can add party type incident, dance, yoga like event also..
19-07-2021, 09:55 AM
(18-07-2021, 11:51 PM)Sush44 Wrote: Please update the story.. Story concept is really good.. Make slow seduction of shalini..don't try complicate things between shalini and her husband..also please describe the age and personality of other characters.. In politics there are more old aged peoples on top level.. So make them horny for shalini..don't make shalini character as submissive.. Keep her attitude like that.. Also not blackmail type thing.. Thanks for comment. will update once i received sufficient comments/ ideas
19-07-2021, 08:07 PM
when us update
21-07-2021, 06:33 AM
Excellent narration... Good story build up... Let's she whose beg shalini warms first . ... If possible pls add pics
21-07-2021, 06:40 AM
Logged back after a very long time to comment here. Excellent story line, never seen anyone coming up with these type of ideas. Waiting for the update eagerly bro
21-07-2021, 10:06 AM
In politics, there are many who dream about becoming CM and few succeed, now Shalini also in this race. The goal that Shalini set for herself, This Journey could be challenging or almost impossible. Let's see to what extent she goes to make dreams come true.
BTW Excellent story narration. |
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