13-06-2021, 09:54 PM
Thats it guys v wont get any further story
Adultery Journey of innocent wife madhu
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13-06-2021, 11:13 PM
wow.. super hot story.. loved it.. eagerly waiting for the next
15-06-2021, 01:16 AM
The writer might return or may not return. I wanted to register my thought honestly.
This is not one of those stories that is carefully thought and crafted.
It has its moments and feels good only as long as the reading flow is uninterrupted which makes regular updates important for this story.
With long gaps, the logic holes are pretty much visible and the scenes with Kabali and the story setting seems very forced rather than naturally inducing.
These kind of moment based stories need to continue to the momentum because unlike skillfully crafted stories, the kinky episodes are it's strengths and it has to be continuous.
Nevertheless, if the story continues please remember to update frequently else it is better left discontinued as this story is not engaging with longer gaps and the plot holes feel awkward
This is not one of those stories that is carefully thought and crafted.
It has its moments and feels good only as long as the reading flow is uninterrupted which makes regular updates important for this story.
With long gaps, the logic holes are pretty much visible and the scenes with Kabali and the story setting seems very forced rather than naturally inducing.
These kind of moment based stories need to continue to the momentum because unlike skillfully crafted stories, the kinky episodes are it's strengths and it has to be continuous.
Nevertheless, if the story continues please remember to update frequently else it is better left discontinued as this story is not engaging with longer gaps and the plot holes feel awkward
15-06-2021, 01:48 AM
what makes the delay of such stories I never understand, they start coloring our hair in half they leave us,, at least they won't even address their viewers for the delay .. only this happens with great stories only. come back from your hardcore viewer
17-06-2021, 03:18 AM
ohmising the update... update soon please...
your girl is not your property!.. why do you stop your girl from sitting on my lap facing me and getting lost looking deep in to my eyes... FREE HER..Right Now..
17-06-2021, 12:42 PM
eagerly waiting to know what is next..
17-06-2021, 07:21 PM
17-06-2021, 08:00 PM
17-06-2021, 08:44 PM
Nothing matters, coz there is no update since 20 days
20-06-2021, 02:45 PM
22-06-2021, 06:09 PM
Do something..she has started her role as Kabali’s poor wife.
Kabali should take advantage of this opportunity.
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Kabali should take advantage of this opportunity.
30-06-2021, 04:09 AM
please update brother .. missing madhu
your girl is not your property!.. why do you stop your girl from sitting on my lap facing me and getting lost looking deep in to my eyes... FREE HER..Right Now..
25-07-2021, 02:21 AM
waiting for the nest part bro.. please share the update
06-08-2021, 05:07 PM
Don't nagging guys.i don't Know why author doing like this .he's come to visit this website frequently but not sure why he didn't update eventhough didn't say anything here
07-08-2021, 04:53 PM
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