Revathi - An angel

[Steven Rajaa]

Raj first fuck to be sowmya, then revathy mom and finally revathi.

[revathi47]

Few months before

“Anyone inside”, suddenly they heard a voice and they came back to senses and separated each other.
 
Ragav came out asking revathi to adjust her sari.
 
I need to take a passport size photo, I was calling for almost 5 minutes but I didn’t get any response, I thought no one inside and about to leave, said the person who was waiting outside.
 
Sorry sir, I was stuck in a work and didn’t hear you, give me 2 minutes, I will arrange the lightings and we can take photo, ragav said and turned to go inside but revathi too came out from that room.
The guy gave a lusty look at revathi from top to bottom, so now I understand what you are busy with, he said with a naughty smile.
 
Ragav gave an embarrassing look and went inside to arrange to take photo.
 
That guy looked at revathi with lust filled eyes, he walked closer to her and said in low tone, next time close the door and do your romance.
 
She gave a shocking look.
 
I think If I come 10 to 15 minutes late, he would have undressed you and I would have seen your naked beauty, he said in husky voice.
 
Did you saw us, she asked in low voice.
Yes, I was watching you for past 10 minutes, he said with a wink.
Then why you shouted, you could have wait and watched for some more time, she too said with a naughty smile.
 
Hmmm, I thought so but I don’t want to embarrass you.
Thank you so much, you are a nice gentleman,
Sorry madam for disturbing you in your hot moment, he said with a kinky smile.
Hmmm, its ok sir, she said with a blushing smile.
Will you continue once I go?
 Maybe yes, she said in a husky voice.
 
I like your curves, he placed his hand in her hips and gave a squeeze.
She gave a seductive smile and looked outside to see if anyone there, the road was empty and there was no one out and she turned around to see what ragav was doing, he was busy in setting up things to take photo and not watching here.
 
Seems your bra is out of your blouse, that guy told moving his hand from her hips to her back.
Sss, hmmm, revathi turned around and gave a kinky smile.
 
You are hot and sexy piece, shall I adjust your bra strap inside your blouse.
No need sir, he likes seeing me in this way, she said with a wink.
 
Hmmm, enjoy…he said placing his fingers in her lips, he rolled his fingers in her lips and she gently bite it and held it between her teeth and gave a sexy look.
 
I need a kiss from this lips madam, they are so sexy.
Hmmm, where should I kiss you?
In my cheek madam.
Hmmm, she looked at him with a naughty smile.
Plssss madam..
She moved closer and placed a kiss in his lips, he looked at her with a shock, this is for your kind and gentle behavior, you could have watched us for long time, you could have watched me getting undressed but you stopped and called us, I owe a deep kiss to you for that, saying this she again placed her lips in his lips and slowly sucked it for a while.
 
Hmmm, enough madam,
Why? Don’t you like the taste of my lips?
 
I liked it a lot madam, but what if your lover comes suddenly from inside, I don’t want to spoil your relationship.
 
Hmmm, you are really great sir, don’t worry he is not my lover, he is my husband’s friend, even if he saw us kissing it’s not a problem, she said with a wink.
 
He was bit shocked to hear that, revathi felt kinky to have fun with stranger, she felt some strange feeling inside that gave her goosebumps when she tell him that he is having romance with her hubbys friend.
 
Really? he asked in a shock.
 
Yes sir, she winked and again kissed him, this is for your good heart sir.
Its ready sir, can you come in, ragav shouted from inside.
 
He departed from her and went inside.
After some time they came out and ragav printed those photos and gave it to him, that guy left waiving bye to her.
 
While leaving he said, “close the door and continue your work” and winked at both of them.
 
Once he left, ragav looked at her apologizingly, sorry revathi, its my mistake..
She gave a naughty look,and walked towards him, are you going to close the door or are you going take photo.
We will take photos revathi, I have a good location in mind, he said and opened his laptop and browsed few folders and opened one.
 
Check these photos and tell me whether you like this location?  
She looked one by one, it looked like a sexy photo shoot of a model, and the background looks like cool forest location, it was greenery all over, there were lot of trees, lawns, there was also a small river like water place.
 
Wow, it’s really nice ragav, but where is this location.
Its 30km away from here revathi, we can go and take photos here. Also it will be good for you to learn some basics there.
 
Hmmmm,ok,
 
Also check the pose of that model; you need to give poses like that.
she looked at that model, it was sexy photo shoot in variety of costumes, she checked her poses and background and selected few poses that she liked. While browsing one by one she found a photo which was cute and hot at the same time, model was wearing a transparent sari, through which her blouse, breasts and hips were clearly visible, it was really hot, she imagined herself in that sari, she imagined how much viral if will go, if I post a pic like this in my insta, that thought made her hot, she starred at it for a while.
 
Ragav looked at her starring at that photo and smiled to himself.
Do you want wear sari like this, and take photo revathi, he whispered closer to her ears.
 
No ragav, I was just looking at the background.
Don’t lie revathi, I know you are thinking about taking a pic like this and posting in your insta.
She gave a shocking look at him.
 
I know you like uploading sexy photos, if my guess is correct, I think the sexy comments from your followers making you hot.
She couldn’t believe her ears, how did he read my mind.
 
He gently hug her from behind, I have read all the comments of your followers in insta in all your posts, there are quite few sexy comments from your followers commenting about your breasts, hips and even few wrote about your pussy, he said in her ears in husky voice.
 
I want to crush your mangoes revathi..
 
I want to suck your nipples.
 
I want to insert my finger in your pussy
 
I want to pour honey in your navel and suck it.
 
I want to tear your pussy.
 
There are 4 to 5 followers who commented like above from the very first photo you uploaded till the 13th photo that you uploaded yesterday, but you never blocked those guys, I think you enjoy reading those comments, he said kissing all over her cheeks.
No ragav…she said in low voice..
 
Sathya told me that you are hard on bed yesterday night, you ride his cock rigorously yesterday, you are in very hot mood yesterday, I think that is due to those sexy comments that you received for your posts, and he said pressing her hips and licking her cheeks.
 
Hmmmm, ssss, no ragav…
 
Till now you uploaded only decent looking photos, It will be really hot if you post a pic like this, you will get lot more followers and lot more sexy comments, don’t feel shy dear, just do things that gives you excitements, believe me, I will take some real hot photos.
 
But I don’t have transparent sari like this ragav, she said in shaking voice.
We can buy it revathi, there is a female garments shop in this complex, we can get transparent saris there.
 
But ragav…
 
Don’t hesitate revathi, you will really enjoy it..
 
Hmmm, she nodded her head slowly.

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[revathi47]

how to fit my screen to my monitor

[chellaporukki]

Superb, She is behaving like a prostitute with stranger.

[bobby]

Super update

[justafantasydear]

Wow . Such a tease Revathi is !! ... Lovely

[Rockket Raja]

The way she teases does not look like a house wife. She is a real bitch in heat.

[Vicky Viknesh]

This is so hot

[PingpongDingdong]

I am not sure where to start off and how to start off. I really liked your imagination and narrative skills during most of the scenes in the story. But I am not understanding why few random characters are introduced, just like the stranger in the story. This piece has gone totally off board. I don’t understand why would Revati entertain every single person she comes across. Is she going to be portrayed as a slut? I am demeaning the word slut here, but I’m bit confused why do We see such irrelevant characters in the story which doesn’t add weight or any meaning to it. If Revati is being shown as a slut, there’s no point of innocence. Even a woman of free spirit doesn’t entertain every single person she comes across. A driver , A stranger in the studio, The project client , who else more?!!  Because of all of these interim characters, is actually bringing down the story in term of quality. A woman who shares her body just for money doesn’t share feelings at all with her clients. If there’s no emotion, or if Revati is shown as a slut, the exciting factor is lost. I’m sorry to say this. The gripping factor of the story is literally oscillating from highest to the lowest possible. Probably the writer needs some time to think about the plot. Please take your time Mate. But try to put your best not to lose or deviate from the main plot of the story. I felt like you got lost a bit this time. I’m sure you’d make this of a great kind. Please take no offence . We hope the best from you .

[saleem8026]

Nice update

[Dinesh Raveendran]

Great going. She is ready of anything and everything.

[revathi47]

I am not sure where to start off and how to start off. I really liked your imagination and narrative skills during most of the scenes in the story. But I am not understanding why few random characters are introduced, just like the stranger in the story. This piece has gone totally off board. I don’t understand why would Revati entertain every single person she comes across. Is she going to be portrayed as a slut? I am demeaning the word slut here, but I’m bit confused why do We see such irrelevant characters in the story which doesn’t add weight or any meaning to it. If Revati is being shown as a slut, there’s no point of innocence. Even a woman of free spirit doesn’t entertain every single person she comes across. A driver , A stranger in the studio, The project client , who else more?!!  Because of all of these interim characters, is actually bringing down the story in term of quality. A woman who shares her body just for money doesn’t share feelings at all with her clients. If there’s no emotion, or if Revati is shown as a slut, the exciting factor is lost. I’m sorry to say this. The gripping factor of the story is literally oscillating from highest to the lowest possible. Probably the writer needs some time to think about the plot. Please take your time Mate. But try to put your best not to lose or deviate from the main plot of the story. I felt like you got lost a bit this time. I’m sure you’d make this of a great kind. Please take no offence . We hope the best from you .

Thanks for your feedback bro ❤❤
I totally understand your comments... 

I already wrote one more episode with stranger which will come in next update... And after that no more strangers... And will avoid showing revathi as slutty... 

Driver will come through out the story and revathi will not entertain him apart from just teasing him... 

With regard to client as of now I don't have idea of extending his character but yesterday one reader wrote asking for few more scenes with client... Hence I thought of including few more scenes but now seeing your comments i am bit confused.... 

Readers place let me know if you need revathi and client episode.. 

Once again, thanks for your appreciation and feedback...

[Fuckeer]

No revanthi raj or revathi ragav combo super update as soon as possible can't wait here

[Kirthi]

We need client and revathi episode for sure??

[Lollobionda]

I am not sure where to start off and how to start off. I really liked your imagination and narrative skills during most of the scenes in the story. But I am not understanding why few random characters are introduced, just like the stranger in the story. This piece has gone totally off board. I don’t understand why would Revati entertain every single person she comes across. Is she going to be portrayed as a slut? I am demeaning the word slut here, but I’m bit confused why do We see such irrelevant characters in the story which doesn’t add weight or any meaning to it. If Revati is being shown as a slut, there’s no point of innocence. Even a woman of free spirit doesn’t entertain every single person she comes across. A driver , A stranger in the studio, The project client , who else more?!!  Because of all of these interim characters, is actually bringing down the story in term of quality. A woman who shares her body just for money doesn’t share feelings at all with her clients. If there’s no emotion, or if Revati is shown as a slut, the exciting factor is lost. I’m sorry to say this. The gripping factor of the story is literally oscillating from highest to the lowest possible. Probably the writer needs some time to think about the plot. Please take your time Mate. But try to put your best not to lose or deviate from the main plot of the story. I felt like you got lost a bit this time. I’m sure you’d make this of a great kind. Please take no offence . We hope the best from you .

I completely agree with PingpongDingdong on all the chritical points he listed.

I had felt (especially in the last three episodes!) that Revati had gotten lost in a 
one-way street "with no way to turn around" and was looking at every path to get back out of it.

Unless you intend to showcase Revati as a sex object in a showcase for the male world, 
then you should limit these "inflationary" stranger-male characters and stop installing them in the story....

Thanks for your understanding
Lollobionda

[revathi47]

Nice updates.
This story never disappoints

Thank you❤❤

[Vasanthan]

Super write more

[Saravroman]

FanArtic 125 - fan comment

Is there any particular actress you think is closest to how your character Revathi looks, revathi47?

[revathi47]

Hi saravroman - here you go... Priya bhavani shankar... Tamil actress... Looks like revathi

[Givemeextra]

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Readers place let me know if you need revathi and client episode.. 

YEAH, YEAH, YEAH