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(03-05-2021, 05:57 PM)revathi47 Wrote: Thanks a lot bro.... I too read your samanta story and amazed by your writing and the effort you put in building up... Collecting relevant photos... Giving teaser... Setting expectations... Also wondered how many languages you know.... Really impressive... I started giving the date when will I update next after reading yours...
Indexing not possible because, I don't have a complete script... I just had a story line and write whatever comes on my mind on any given day....
Thanks again for your appreciation...
Thanks for the kind words, Revathi47 - glad you liked by newbie writings!
got your idea on index - no worries & thanks!
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Nice updates.
This story never disappoints
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(26-04-2021, 08:50 PM)justafantasydear Wrote: Excellent update .. but revethi should fuck raj first...then any other client.
Thanks bro... Yes revathi vs raj will happen first..
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Nice erotic update
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(28-04-2021, 07:36 AM)prrichat85 Wrote: No words to say
Written tooo beautiful
Reading a English story after a long time
Thanks bro
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(29-04-2021, 10:57 PM)ashachinna86 Wrote: Nicely written. Great work revathi
Thank you❤❤
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Few months before
Ragav was shocked to the core when he opened his eyes and see revathi standing there taking heavy breath.
She looked at him; her eyes were filled with naughtiness.
Sorry revathi, I was ….i am not sure…. How this happened, I was lost in thoughts…I am really sorry…I didn’t… ragav was struggling to find words to apologize to her.
She suddenly leaned over him and placed her lips in his lips, she took both his lips inside her lips and lick it with her tongue, ragav tried to push her and get away from her but she held his face tightly and sucked his lips for a while.
You need not say anything ragav, you need not feel guilty for your behavior, I came here to take few pics and learn some basic photography skills, but I got more important work, I need you to recover from your guilty feelings, I need you come out from your loneliness, I only can do that, I will be the medicine to cure your wounds, I can make you come out of your depression, I can make you forget your past love, I can give you the warmth that your priya gave, I can show you the love that priya showed, I will be your priya, I will give everything that priya gave you, forget your guilt and love me like how you loved your priya. She said firmly looking into his eyes.
But you are sathyas fiancé…
I am doing this for Sathya, he loves you so much, he need you to come out from your past life, he will be happy to know if I am the reason for that.
He looked at her with shocking face.
Sathya always used to say, you are an angel to him, he always praise a lot about you, I thought he was exaggerating, but now I realize he was 100% true, you are really a wonderful women revathi. Sathya is really lucky to have you as his wife.
Hmmm, she gave a smile.
Don’t you get angry when I misbehaved with you, I think I behaved liked an animal and turned so violent, he asked in low voice.
Hmmm, still my ass and hips are paining, but I liked it, she said with a wink. What happened? Did you think of priya?
Yes revathi, your warmth, your smell, your breast in my chest all made me remember my happy moments with priya, I am sorry, I wont behave like that again.
Hmmm, its ok da, she said placing a gentle kiss in his cheeks.
He suddenly turned her around and hugged her from behind. Thanks for everything revathi, I am spending my happiest day for almost after 2 years, I get a women’s hug after 2 years, I felt a girls breast in my chest after long time, my heart was filled with feminine fragrance, you are really great revathi, he said gently kissing her shoulders and side neck.
He moved her hairs from her back to front and looked at her milky white back skin, he placed one hand in her back neck and gently smooched it down till the middle of her back where the thin blouse straps holding her blouse. He gently fondled her hips with other hand.
Sss, ragav, what are you doing, it’s giving me tingling effects ragav, she giggled.
He insert his fingers into her blouse straps and pulled her bra straps and now her bra straps were inches above her blouse straps, seeing that it turned him hot, he placed a kiss in her naked back above her bra straps.
Ssss, aaaa, ragavvvv.
Your pink bra is turning me on revathi..he said and moved his lips all over her back,his hand in her hips moved inside and touched her belly.
Hmmm, enough ragav, its been more than one hour, are you going to take photos or just make romance with me for the whole day, she asked with a kinky smile.
He roamed his hand all over her belly, where is your navel revathi, he asked kissing her earlobes.
Inside ragav.
Why you hide it revathi, I need to see it, I need to feel it, he said sucking her cheeks and side neck.
Hmmm, insert your hand inside my petticoat ragav, it is just inches below, she said in a husky voice.
Are you sure revathi, he asked kissing her shoulder.
Hmmm, yessss, ragav, but don’t go down more than that…
Sure dear, he slowly insert his left hand inside her petticoat and grabbed her navel, his right hand in her shoulder moved her blouse straps down to her arms exposing her bra straps in her shoulder, he rolled his finger around her navel, revathi closed her eyes and slowly started to feel her honey flowing from her pussy, he licked her shoulders with his tongue and sucked it with his lips, he could see her cleavage from that angle, he slowly tried to move her blouse sideways trying to expose larger amount of cleavage, revathi was in heaven, her pussy pipe leaking heavily, his right hand moved down from her shoulder and touched her cleavage.
They both lost in their world, ragav feeling the womanhood after 2 years and revathi with closed eyes, started to breathe heavily, resting her head in his shoulder.
“Anyone inside”, suddenly they heard a voice and they came back to senses and separated each other.
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Amazing amazing words can't explain how good this story simply super super
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Just amazingly hot update. Will she open her legs for Raghav as priya?
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She is giving sex therapy
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09-05-2021, 05:39 PM
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The story is going really good . Thanks mate for the best erotic story. I would like to make a request. Please create a situation, that could be closer to reality (may happen in reality or may not happen ), like how it happened between Revati and her husband’s friend. There was an emotion between the both. There was a reason why Revati had to compromise with the situation. Because she wanted to make the guy come out of his depression and help him out of it. That line was too good. Just don’t make Revati fall for sex. Just a request. But you have been doing really great job to ensure the smooth flow of the story . Kudos to your writing skills
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(09-05-2021, 05:39 PM)PingpongDingdong Wrote: The story is going really good . Thanks mate for the best erotic story. I would like to make a request. Please create a situation, that could be closer to reality (may happen in reality or may not happen ), like how it happened between Revati and her husband’s friend. There was an emotion between the both. There was a reason why Revati had to compromise with the situation. Because she wanted to make the guy come out of his depression and help him out of it. That line was too good. Just don’t make Revati fall for sex. Just a request. But you have been doing really great job to ensure the smooth flow of the story . Kudos to your writing skills
thanks a lot for your appreciation sir, it mean a lot for me. i dont have ragav character in my original plot, but suddenly in a moment, i thought of introducing a new character. I made quite some effort with this ragav chracter, all other characters will try to seduce revathi to take her in their bed, while with raj, revathi will initiate the sexual moments, so i need this ragav charcter to be a mix of both, i need both revathi and ragav to complement each other in taking sexual initiatives in different situations, i also need to built the relationship with ragav and revathi in such a way that it has some diffentiation from revathi and raj's relation. i tried a lot of permutation and combination in designing ragav's character and came up with this situation, it is difficult for me to write, since revathi should give him the feel of priya, should show the love that priya showed him and at the same time, she have to make him forget priya, it took quite some effort to write these updates...
i was really happy reading your words, i could feel all those efforts i put in conveyed to the reader in the same way i expected.
Yes, revathi will not just fall for sex, she will fall for love...
thank you, once again.
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Ragev brought tingling moments in the story, which together with the desires of Raj,
fill this with fulfilling and hot eroticism ...
Maybe you should reduce the sexual relations with parents and in-laws to minimum
in the coming chapters.
Instead (to a limited extent!) integrate other family members, such as brother, sister,
brother-in-law, daughter-in-law.
It makes me much joy to read your story and
it fulfills me ...! ( With what ? I do won't tell you... )
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Wonderful story and narration
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