Misc. Erotica Lazzaton ki Rah par

[rajeshsarhadi]

bahut khub

[neha2]

very hott

[Ghosthunter]

devar bhabhi relation in adult story has become very mundane.

[Sheeba Batool]

Bohat achi story hai..
Wese zyada writers to Maine parha nahi but jitna bhi parha hai us k mutabik Pinkbaby and RajeshSarhadi ji are best writers..
In ki stories aisi Hain k agar in par movies direct ki jayen to chha jayen!
Aik aik lafz aur situation ka bohat acha khayal rakhte hain ye writers.. aur apne readers ka bhi
All the best to both of you in future

[Sheeba Batool]

Waiting for next update

[Sheeba Batool]

Please story lambi chalaiyega aise hi achi quality ke sath... Aur update bhi detective rehyega.
Kyun k is story k jesi achi stories bohat Kam hoti Hain.

[seansean007]

As a reader it's disappointing to see the direction of the story.Would have preferred if the story was centred around a single female.
As someone who has been a writer himself,I appreciate your efforts and taking up some of your precious time to keep up the flow of the story on a regular basis.
Thanks.

[Mafiadon]

Brother,your writing skills and quality is incomparable.As a blind fan of you,I always want your story to be on the top list.And honestly I really have not got much pleasure from this update.As a high profile adult cheating story,this kind of s*** encounter between devar and bhabhi is a mere lackluster.I hope your next update will be a blockbuster.wish best luck of you.

[Mafiadon]

As a reader it's disappointing to see the direction of the story.Would have preferred if the story was centred around a single female.
As someone who has been a writer himself,I appreciate your efforts and taking up some of your precious time to keep up the flow  of the story on a regular basis.
Thanks.

Brother,you are also my another most favorite writer.I request you to restart your great story Anita sing or start a new story.

[Sheeba Batool]

Pinkbaby ji next update kab hogi?

I m waiting...

[Parizad Flyer]

Pinky dear people here like you because of your unique ideas and most sensual and erotic sex encounters. This devar bhabi shagging is mostly common in these sites which is definitely not your style. Hope you understand my words

[arahan90]

please make her fuck my making her a ***** bride...she is enforced to put mangalsutra and sindoor and when her husband comes she forgets to clean sindoor and should make some excuse why she have put it there

[Bhaiya Ji95]

The administration is the main problem.They don't seem to be trustworthy at all.They are encouraging copy paste here.Many stories are being copy pasted from Literotica which is a slap in the face of those writers who put in so much effort,time and energy in writing those stories.I raised this issue in one of the threads where the thread starter is hell bent in copying as many stories from Literotica as possible.His excuse?He is copy pasting those stories to attract those writers here.What nonsense.which writer will be attracted to a site where some one else is copy pasting his stories.This is not a way to popularise this site.The admins should prevent copy pasting to encourage writers to come up with new stories or continue a story written by them only.

Good Morning,

Aapko is site mei dekhkar accha laga...

Aapki stories waakai adbhut hoti hai...

Dekhiye,
is site ko start hue kuch hi samay hua hai... thoda time dena to banta hai... Copy Paste ke khilaaf mai bhi hoon. Par shayad site chalane walon ki khud ki koi planning hogi.

A Good story is always a good story afterall. And everybody appreciates it. And I have full confidence on you that you can again create awesome magic here too.

Just like Swati's life with paralysed husband --- from where original writer stopped.

Man!! I must and I will admit... again and again.... It was hell of a story... Awesome... Splendid... or any other word just won't do the justification for describing that story.. It was Just Wow!!

And also this site is too creating it's space in other readers and writers heart.

At least you can give a shot!

Huge fan of you.

Take Care 

[rajeshsarhadi]

Thanks for the honour.I appreciate you for not forgetting me as a writer.I would have loved to write something, however this site doesn't excite me as much as Xossip used to.

it takes time to get responses, you are a good writer, do continue your story here. And moreover the site is under developing stage so without contribution of new stories it will take more time to progress further.

[Vicky007]

The administration is the main problem.They don't seem to be trustworthy at all.They are encouraging copy paste here.Many stories are being copy pasted from Literotica which is a slap in the face of those writers who put in so much effort,time and energy in writing those stories.I raised this issue in one of the threads where the thread starter is hell bent in copying as many stories from Literotica as possible.His excuse?He is copy pasting those stories to attract those writers here.What nonsense.which writer will be attracted to a site where some one else is copy pasting his stories.This is not a way to popularise this site.The admins should prevent copy pasting to encourage writers to come up with new stories or continue a story written by them only.

I am quite agree with you.It really needs a lot of time, hard works,skills and patience to write a story.And if any one copies these stories without the consent of the original writers is really regrettable  and also a crime.So I request the administration  to monitor this matter strictly from now.And I request you to start writing again.We will always remain with you.

[pinkbaby]

Every writer should submit his / her efforts here.

As long as copy pasted stories are concerned, I feel that those are being copied here to be available again bcoz those stories were really good but were gone with the wind bcoz of closure of xossip.

In this case I don't think that copying of those older stories should be discouraged but the person should at least acknowledge it and should mention the name of original writer.

Similarly if someone finds some good stuff at some other site he shoulld also be allowed to bring it here mentioning it openly that he is copying it just for the entertainment of other members.


What the other senior writers and members say about this.





Pinkbaby

[hirarandi]

Dear Pink baby

Bht kamal story likhi hai. Apki hr story ki tarah ye story b kamyab ja rahi hai. Next update ka intazaaar rahay ga.

[hfmwife]

Brother,please make an encounter between Fiza and Babu so that Fiza will come to know the difference between her husband and Babu.

[poonam saxena]

Waiting

[RajV]

Please story lambi chalaiyega aise hi achi quality ke sath... Aur update bhi detective rehyega.
Kyun k is story k jesi achi stories bohat Kam hoti Hain.

Bilkul sahi comment,aram aram se machalte arman ko likhna bahut mushkil hai,per utna hee mazedar