[Wanton]

bahut bahut shandar aur lajawab tharika se likha shuro kya aapne bhai

[Udaybhanu]

bahut bahut shandar aur lajawab tharika se likha shuro kya aapne bhai

Thank you bhai

[vikya76]

SUPERB BHAI... IS LOCKDOWN MEIN AAP KA HI SAHARA HAI

[Udaybhanu]

SUPERB BHAI... IS LOCKDOWN MEIN AAP KA HI SAHARA HAI

Arey bhai bahat sare writer hai mere se bhi achhe wo story bhi try karo. Aur bhagwan kare jaldi lockdown hatey aur situation thik ho.

[Udaybhanu]

 Update 3.......



Kall.u ko ushke samne hi Raghunath pit raha tha aur Shyam ki chhikhe pura ilaka gunz raha tha.



Kallu....... Maalik chhod dijiye maalik galati ho gayi hai humse maalik chhod dijiye.


Kallu ki koi bhi baat Raghunath sun nahi raha tha aur Raghunath ko ek thappad lagata hai aur kehta hai........ Chhod du tere bete ko ushe dikhaunga ki mere bete pe haath uthane ka kya matlab hota hai.


Tabhi Raghunath ke aadmi log laxmi ko utha ke leke aajate hai. Laxmi apne baap aur bhai ka haalat dekh kar daar jaati hai aur kehti hai....... Maalik ye kya hai aap mere bhai aur baapu ko kyu maar rahe ho.


Raghunath........ Arey tera bhai teri bahat izzat karta hai tere bhai aur baap ke liye tu kya kar sakti hai.


Laxmi....... Kuchh bhi karungi maalik chhod dijiye unhe.


Raghunath......... Agar tu apna saree khol degi to tere bhai ko chhod dunga.


Laxmi ye sunke ushka hosh udh jaati hai....... Ye kya keh rahe ho maalik.


Raghunath....... Sach bol raha hu nahi maar maar ke jaan le lunga dono ki.


Laxmi darr ke maare apna saree khol deti hai. Aur Raghunath Shyam ka haath aur pair khol deta hai lekin ushme taqat hi nahi tha ki wo kuchh kar paaye wo muhbke bal zameen me pada hua tha aur ro raha tha.


Shyam haath jod te Raghunath se kehta hai........ Maalik chhod do meri behen ko. Wo abhi bachchi hai.


Raghunath laxmi ka badan ki wor dekhte huye kehta hai...... Ye kaha se bachchi hai, ye to kafi badi ho gayi hai.




Raghunath........ Chal ab apna blouse aur petticoat ko bhi khol degi to 3 lakh rupaye bhi dunga jisse tu apne MAA ka ilaz karwa sakti hai. Agar natak karegi to teri MAA mar jaaegi, soch le.


Laxmi rote huye........ Maalik me sab karungi mere pariwar ko bacha lijiye.


Kallu...... Nahi beti nahi yehi log hai jinhone Padma ki eshi halat kiye hai beti ye log koi madat nahi karenge.


Laxmi ye sunte hi thapad mar deti hai Raghunath ko. Wohi dur khadi Rambha bolti hai......... Ye bhi apne baap aur bhai jaisi hai ishko bhi sabakh sikhaiye nahi to gaon me hamari kya izzat rahegi.


Raghunath wohi sabke samne Laxmi ka kapde faad deta hai aur Laxmi apne baap aur bhai ke samne hi nangi khadi thi wo apne sarir ko apne haathon se dhakne lagti hai lekin Raghunath wohi par hi Laxmi ko niche leta deta hai aur apna chhota sa Lulli bahar nikalta hai jo ki 4 inch ka tha aur bahat patla bhi wo sabke samne hi Laxmi ka balatkar kar deta hai. Laxmi wohi zameen par pade ro rahi thi.


Shyam apna sarir ka sara taqat milake ek akhri baar Raghunath ko marne uthta hai lekin Raghunath apne aadmi se banduk leke sidha hi Shyam ko goli maar deta hai.


Laxmi....... Me tujhe chhodungi nahi Raghunath mere ye shraap hai ki jaise tune sirf maze ke liye mere pariwar ka naash kar diya bilkul bese hi tere pariwar ka bhi naash ho jaaega. Tu bhi tadpega apne bahu, beti aur biwi ke liye lekin tujhe kabhi Shanti nahi milegi.


Ye sunte hi Raghunath ka gussa itna badh jaata hai ki wo Laxmi ko bhi goli maar deta hai jisse Kallu ko aankho ke samne hi ushka Jawan beta aur beti dono mar chuke the.


Rambha tabhi 3 laakh rupaye laake Kallu ke samne rek deti hai.



Rambha....... Ye le Kallu 3 lakh rupaye ja aapni biwi ko bacha le.Hamshe takarane ka yehi natiza hota hai agar teri beti ko tu pehle hi leke aajta to tera beta nahi marta tujhe kya lagta hai mera pati aur beta yaha gaon ke kitne aurton ka izzat luta hai lekin koi tere pariwar jaisa nahi tha.


Ye kehta hua Rambha Kallu ka rashi khol deti hai to Kallu paisa leke sidha hospital bhagta hai.


Hospital me.........


Doctor....... Sorry aap bahat late ho gaaye hai paiso ke bina me operation nahi kar sakta tha aur ab patient mar chuki hai ab me kuchh nahi kar Sakta.



Ek hi din me Kallu ka pura pariwar khatam ho chuka tha ushka jeene ki umeed khatam ho chuki thi. Kallu apne Biwi,beta aur beti ka antim sanskar karta hai aur security officer bhi har baar ki tarah ish baar bhi baat ko daba deti hai.




Kallu ab puri tarah se tut chuka tha ab ushko jeene ki chah khatam ho chuki thi aur jiye kiske liye jo bhi tha Kallu ka wo ushka pariwar tha. Ab wo pariwar nahi raha Raghunath ka ahankar ne Kallu jaise ek aam aadmi ka sab kuchh loot liya tha. Raghunath kuchh nahi maze se apna life ji raha tha wohi Kallu apne family ke barbadi pe ro raha tha. 



After 1 year.........



Kallu sab kuchh chhod deta hai ushe hosh hi nahi tha sharab pike raste me sabko gaali dena chalu kr deta hai. Ghar a khet sab kuchh bech deta hai aur gaon ke bahar ek chhota sa jhopda bana ke rehta hai. Nahana aur daant ka brush karna to bhul hi gaya tha jiske wajah se ushke muh aur sarir se bahat jyada badbu aane laga hai wo itna Zyada ganda ho chuka tha ki ush par ab makhi bin binane lagi hai ushka daant pura kala pila ho chuka tha kyunki hamesha ya to tambakhu khata tha ya to sharab pita tha. Ab wo pura barbaad ho chuka hai. Ab ushka pehnawa bhi badal chuka hai kapde dhul mitti se gande rehte the kyunki wo sarab pikey hamesha raste me pada hua rehta tha. Ab ushka koi dost nahi tha ushke padosi bhi ab ushse dur bhagte hai. Wo sirf ek lungi aur shirt pehen ke ghumta rehta hai jo jagah jagah se fat chuka tha. Pure sarir par baal hi baal tha dadhi muchh sab badh chuke the ek pagal bhikhari lagta tha wo aur ushke ek bhikhariyo ka gang bhi tha jo gaon ki aurat logo ko dekh ke gandi gandi baatein karte the. Kyunki wo baatein hi kar sakte the kisiko paa to nahi sakte the. Aur Kallu unlogo ka bada dost ban gaya tha kyunki wo bhi unlogo ke saath baith kar kabhi kabhi bhikh bhi maangta tha aur gaon ki aurton ko galat nazar se dekhta tha aur jaake sasti randi chodta tha.




Kallu ka din ka surwat hota tha sarab aur juye se pura din wo jua khelta tha aur raat ko juye ke paise se sasti randiya jo 50 rupaye milti thi unhe chodta tha. Kabhi kabhi to 50 rupye ki randiya bhi ushse chudti nahi thi kyunki ek to itna ganda badbu aata tha ushme se aur ushke saath saath KALLU ke paas ek musal kala lund tha jo 10 inch lamba aur 4 inch mota tha jiski wajah se kai randiya ek baar chudne ke baad kisi aur se chud hi nahi paati thi kyunki bahat dard hota tha unsab Randiyo ko. Wohi kuchh Randiya Kallu ko dekhte hi ushse chudne ke liye tayar ho jaati thi kyunki ek baar chudayi se Kallu unhe wo sukh deta tha jo koi aur unhe nahi de pata tha. Itne badbu ke wabajud ye randiya Kallu ki diwani thi. Ishiliye kabhi kabhi Kallu se chudne ke baad bhi ushse paise nahi leti thi.




Kallu ka din ab eshe hi barbadi me bidta jaa raha tha, ki fir ek din.........








To be continued............

Wait for the next update.

[Mgaya]

Purani tahkuro wali hindi filmon jaisa scene laga...? good going

[Udaybhanu]

Purani tahkuro wali hindi filmon jaisa scene laga...? good going

Thank you

[Blackak.aa]

Bht hi bakwas story ha yeh bhai! Ise mat likho

[Udaybhanu]

Bht hi bakwas story ha yeh bhai! Ise mat likho

Mat padho bhai mei to likhunga jinko pasand hai

[Raghu]

Bahut h shandar aur lajawab update

[Udaybhanu]

Bahut h shandar aur lajawab update

Thank you Raghu

[Basic]

Yaha pe to aurat hi aurat ki dushman hai. Rambha aur Nusrat qasam se bahut hi kharab hai. Nusrat ki shaadi kisi bikhari se karwao phir pata chalega ki garibi kitna ganda shraphota hai.

[Baban]

Chi!!! Kitna ghatiya aadmi hai yeh shaitaan log... Aur unse bhi ghatiya woh aurtein jo in sab ko support kar rahi thi. Ek aurat hokar dusri aurat ke sath aisi atyachaar ko enjoy kar rahi thi. Aurat ke naam pe kalank hai yeh!! Ayr woh namard salaa....... Mard woh nahi jo aurat ka izzat le, balki mard woh hai jo aurat ko izzat de.

Ab un sab shaitaan logo ki ulti gintii jald chalu hogi...
Tik tok tik tok...

[Udaybhanu]

Yaha pe to aurat hi aurat ki dushman hai. Rambha aur Nusrat qasam se bahut hi kharab hai. Nusrat ki shaadi kisi bikhari se karwao phir pata chalega ki garibi kitna ganda shraphota hai.

Ha bhai inko to saza milni hi chahiye aur ye saza hamara hero dega.

Chi!!! Kitna ghatiya aadmi hai yeh shaitaan log... Aur unse bhi ghatiya woh aurtein jo in sab ko support kar rahi thi. Ek aurat hokar dusri aurat ke sath aisi atyachaar ko enjoy kar rahi thi. Aurat ke naam pe kalank hai yeh!! Ayr woh namard salaa....... Mard woh nahi jo aurat ka izzat le, balki mard woh hai jo aurat ko izzat de.

Ab un sab shaitaan logo ki ulti gintii jald chalu hogi...
Tik tok tik tok...

Ye log gareebo ko kida samajhte hai, inko saza hamara hero dega wo bhi gin gin ke.

[Mafiadon]

superb! Fantastic update! Well planned build up

[Udaybhanu]

superb! Fantastic update! Well planned build up

Thank you

[Sam840]

Bhai fantastic update essa lag raha hai sab ankho ke samne ho raha hai movie type please add image and gif

[Udaybhanu]

Bhai fantastic  update essa lag raha hai sab ankho ke samne ho raha hai movie type please add image and gif

Thank you sam840

[Baban]

C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S

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ACHIEVED!

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[Udaybhanu]

C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S

100 REPUTATION

ACHIEVED!

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Thank you Baban bhai