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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)
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(This post was last modified: 30-03-2019, 08:04 PM by Rohan1234. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Update 29
Sonam : I LOVE YOU RAHUL rahul : I LOVE YOU TOO MERI JAAN. Or fir dono tyaar hokar nikal jate hai sonam ke ghar ke tarf....... Aab aaageeee..... Or rahul jaise hii sonam ke ghar pohochta hai. Itna bada ghar dekhkar haairan ho jata hai. Kiuki sonam ka ghar bohot bada tha. Bohot saare gaurd or naukar the. Kiuki sonam ke papa rishabh yaha ke sabse bade business man main se ek the. Rahul : sonam tum to bohot bade ghar mein rehti ho. Kafi ameer bhi lagti ho. Fir tumne mujhse pyaar kiu kiya . Main to ek middle class family se hue. Sonam : pyaar kabi middle class family ko dekhkar nahi hota. Mere lover jii Pyaar to do atmao se hota hai. Or yeh pyaar kabi amir ya garib nahi dekhta. Rahul : fir bhi. Sonam rahul ke gale mein apne dono hath dalkar. Sonam : kabi bhi insaan pyaar ko nahi chunta hamesha pyaar insaan ko chunta hai. Jaise tume chuna pyaar ne mere liye. Pyaar to vo hota hai. Jisko tum pyaar karte ho usko tum pyaar ki had tak chahana chahate ho. Bepanha usko pyaar karna chahate ho. Isliye to bhagwaan bhi pyaar ke age apne ghutne tek dete hai. Koi bhi insaan chahe vo kitna bhi shaktishali kiu na ho jae. Magar pyaar ke age hamesha haar hii jata hai. Kiuki duniya ka sabse shaktishali agar koi hatyaar hai to vo pyaar hai. Jo log hazaro saal tapasya karte hai. Us bhakti or us pyaar ke bas mein hii to akar mahadev bhi vardan de dete hai. Jabki mahadev ko sab pata hota hai ki jai shaks us vardan ko dur upyaog karega magar fir bhi bhagwan usko vardan dete hai pata hai kiu. Rahul : kiu jab mahadev ko pata hai ki is vardan se vinash hii hoga fir kiu mahadev aisa vardan dete hai. Sonam ( muskurate hue ) : kiuki pyaar ke bajase Us shaks ne itne saal jab tak vo tapasya kar raha tha. Utne saal us shaks ne bas apne mahadev ko hii yaad kiya. Bas apne dil or dimak mein bas mahadev ka hii naam liya. Yahi to pyaar hota hai. Yaha bhagwaan bhi us pyaar main mohit hokar vardan de dete hai. Isliye writer ne bhi hamari kahani ka naam Pyaar ki had paar rakha hai. Rahul : kya tum sach mein Mike pyaar ki had paar tak mujhse pyaar karti hi. Sonam apne face par shikan lake. Sonam : koi sakh. Or rahul na mein garden hila deta hai. Fir Dono sonam ke ghar mein ghusne lagte hai. Or guard gate khol deta hai. Or hum ander chale gaye. Or ander wala gate aunty ne khola. Rani : are beta a gaye. Rahul : namaste aunty. Rani : namaste beta. Sonam tum kha gae thi or rahul ko pane papa ke room mein le jao. Sonam : chalo rahul Fir sonam rishabh ke kamre mein rahul ko le jati hai. Sonam : papa yeh rahul hai. Rishabh : are beta aao betho Rahul rishabh uncle ke side mein beth jata hai. Rahul : namaste uncle. Ab aapki tabiyat kaise hai. Rishabh : ab toh kaafi thik hoon . Tum nahi hote to shayad mein jinda nahi hota. Rahul : are uncle aise kiu bol rahe hai. Vaise main to sirf aapko hospital lekar gaya tha. Apko to doctor ne bachaya hai. Rishabh : lekin tum hospital nahi le jate to doctor kese bachata muje. Rahul : vo sab choriye uncle. Ab aap thik hai. Yahi bohot badi baat hai. Rishabh : or batao beta tum kya karte ho. Rahul : uncle abhi maine abc college mein addmission karwaya hai. Rishabh : is college mein to sonam ne bhi addmission karaya hai. Rishabh sonam se puchte hue. Kiu sonam Or sonam haa mein apni garden hila deti hai. Rishabh : ab tum dono to ek hii college mein padoge. Rahul : jii uncle Fir aise hii 5 minute baat hoti hai. Fir Rahul : uncle ab mujhe chalna chahiye abhi mujhe apne gaon ( village ) bhi nikal na hai. Rishabh : aise kese beta kamse kam dinner to karke jao. Rahul : uncle mein late ho jaoga agli baar akar jarur dinner karuga. Rishabh : thik hai beta. Fir rahul rishabh uncle ke kamre se nikal jata hai. Or samne do aunty ko dekta hai. Ek to rani aunty ( sonam ki mom ) hoti hai. Dusari seema aunty ( yeh vahi aunty thi jisko rahul ne bachaya tha. Jab unke samne truck aa gaya tha or jinke piche vo gunde pade the ) Rahul seema aunty ko dekhte hii shocked ho jata hai. Rahul ( seema se ) aunty aap yaha or aap thik to hai na. Pehle to seema aunty rahul ko dekhte hii vo bhi shocked ho jati hai Fir Seema aunty : haa beta mein thik hu. Agar tum nahi ate to vo gunde mujhe mar hii dete. Rahul : aunty vase vo gunde apke piche kiu pade the. Tabi Rani aunty : tum dono ek dusare ko jante ho. Fir seema aunty rani aunty ko saari baat bta deti hai. Us accident or un gundo wali bhi. Rani aunty : beta tum to hamesha sabki madad karte ho. Bohot ache insaan ho tum. Rani ( seema se ) : seema pata hai isne hii unki ( rishabh ) ki bhi jaan bachai thi. Fir rani aunty bhi seema ko saari baat bata deti hai. Us hospital vali. Rahul firse Rahul : aunty vase vo gunde apke piche kiu pade the. Seema aunty ( rahul se ) : vo sab choro beta tum to bohot nek or ache insaan lagte ho kabhi ana mere ghar bhi Dinner par. Rahul : jarur aunty acha ab mein chalta hu. Rani : beta dinner to karte jao. Rahul : aunty fir kabi abhi mujhe jana hoga. Agli baar pakka dinner karuga. Rani : thik hai beta magar agli baar dinner kiye bina jane nahi dugi. Rahul : thik hai aunty. Or fir rahul rani aunty ka aashirwaad leta hai. Rani : hamesha khuss raho beta. Fir Rahul jab seema aunty ke per ( foot ) chukar aashirbad lene lagta hai. To Achanak se Rahul ke shirt ke upar ke button khul jate hai. Or rahul ka seena ( chest) dikai dene lagta hai. Or seema aunty ki nazar rahul ke seene ( chest ) par jaise hii padti hai. Puri tarha shocked ho jati hai. Seema (shocked hokar bolti hai.) : Yeh tumare chest par mahakaal ki tasveer kese hai. Rahul : vo aunty pata nahi kabi kawar yeh tasveer dikai dene lagti hai to kabhi kawar gayab ho jati hai. Mujhe aaj tak shamaj mein nahi aya is tasveer ke bare mein ki yeh achanak kiu dikai dene lagti hai. Fir kaha gayab ho jati hai. Rahul ki baat sunkar Seema aunty ko to jese saap ( snake ) hii sung gaya tha. Vo ek dum putla ban gayi thi. Uske aage vo kuch bol hii nahi payi. Or rahul seema aunty ka aashirwaad lekar rahul nikal jata hai . Ghar ke bahar Or bike par bethkar apne ghar ki taraf nikal jata hai. Tabi Seema aunty achanak se uttati hai. Or bhagte hue Rohaan rohan chillane lagti hai. Or jab tak seema bahar ati hai Jab tak rahul nikal jata hai. Yeh dekhkar rani aunty bhi shocked ho jati hai. Ki seema ne achanak rohan ka naam kiu liya. Or rani aunty bhi seema aunty ke piche bhagti hai. Or seema aunty vahi baith kar bas rohan rohan chillati rehti hai. Or rani aunty unko shamlate hue pehle sofe par baith ti hai. Fir rani aunty seema aunty se bolti hai Rani : seema tune rohan ka naam kiu liya itne saalo baad or rohan kha hai. Seema ( rote hue ) : rani yeh rahul hii mera rohan hai. Mera bhanja Meri bhan reema ka beta. Rani puri tarha shocked hokar. Rani : kyaa Seema : main to pehle hii shamaj gai thi jab rahul ne muhje bachaya tha. Kiuki uski speed itni tezz thi ki vo sirf rohan ke alawa kisi ki nahi ho sakti Magar muje puri tarha se vishwas nahi tha. Magar jab abhi muje rahul ki chest par mahakaal ki tasveer dekhi to mujhe puri tarha vishwaas ho gaya ki yahi rohan hai . Kiuki vo koi maluli tasveer nahi hai vo .............................. Rani ( khuss hokar ) : yeh apne thakur sahab ka pota ( grand son ) hai. Seema haa mein garden hila deti hai. Tabi Rani sonam ko jor jor se awaz lagati hai. Rani : sonam sonam sonam. Or sonam bhagte hue bahar aati hai. Sonam : kyaa hue maa. Rani : beta abhi rahul ko phone kar usko bol ki abhi jaldi se yaha aae. Sonam : kyu maa or kya hua hai. Aap itna pareshan kiu lag rahi ho. Rani : jitna bola hai utna kar or jaldi jaa. Or sonam jaise hii murti hai Tabi Seema ko sonam ke gale mein vo locket dikai deta hai. Seema : sonam tere gale mein yeh locket kese aya. Sonam thoda ghabra jati hai. Or harbarakar bolti hai. Sonam ( harbarate hue ) : kuch nahi aunty yeh to maine bhar se kharida tha. Or jaldi se kamre ki taraf jane lagti hai. Or rani bhi us locket ko dekhti hai to bolti hai. Rani : rukh sonam idhar aa. Sonam : maa mein rahul ko call karti hu. Rani : tuze yaha ane ko bola hai na Or sonam ghabrate hue apni maa ke pass aati hai. Sonam : jii maa Rani : jhuth mat bol sonam jaldi bta. Sonam ( garden niche karte hue ) : maa mein sach bol rahi hue. Seema : beta sach bta de hum tum ko kuch nahi bolege or yeh locket hamara khandani locket hai. Or yeh locket kisi ke pass nahi ho sakta kiuki........... Or vahi seema chup ho jati hai. Sonam : nahi aunty sach me mein jhooth nahi bol rahi. Seema sonam ke pass jakar. Sonam se bade pyaar se bolti hai. Seema : sonam beta dekh mein vada karti hue. Ki koi tuze kuch nahi kahega . Koi baat hai to bta de. Sonam : aunty aap muze se yeh locket to nahi logi na. Or aap vada karti ho jo mein apse magugi vo aap muze dogi Khao meri kasam. Seema : teri kasam beta. Sonam : maa se bhi kaho. Rani : teri kasam. Sonam..... . agar story pasand aae to please like kare
30-03-2019, 06:45 PM
ab story me or maja aa raha hai , kyoki ek ek kar ke raaj khul rahe hai....
30-03-2019, 06:47 PM
ab ye bhi pata chal gaya hai ki vo kiska beta hai....
jab ye baat Rahul ko pata chalegi to kya hoga uska reaction......
30-03-2019, 06:48 PM
ye update bahut hi damdaar hai....
30-03-2019, 09:40 PM
Sandar bahtreen update
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Update 30
Seema : teri kasam beta. Sonam : maa se bhi kaho. Rani : teri kasam. Sonam..... Ab aageee...... Sonam : aise nahi pura bolo ki jo mein magugi vo aap mujhe dogi. Dono ek sath : agar tu muze is locket ke bareme bta dogi ki yeh locket kha se aya. To mein teri kasam khati hu ki jo tu magegi vo mein tuze dugi. Rani : ab ek bhi shawal nahi sonam ab jaldi bta Sonam ( rote hue ) : yeh locket rahul ne mujhe diya hai. Seema aunty : uske pass yeh locket kese aya or usne yeh locket tuze kiu diya. Sonam seema aunty ke gale lagte hue bolti hai. Fir sonam rani or seema ko saari baat bta deti hai. ( Bas chudai ki baat chorkar ) Rani bohot gusse mein. Rani : pata bhi hai tu kya bol rahi hai. Seema aunty : rani tu chup ho jaa beta yeh bata ki rahul ke pass yeh locket kese aya. Sonam : yeh to mujhe bhi nahi pata rahul ne yeh locket mere gale mein daal diya tha. Rani behad gusse mein. Rani : rahul tera kya lagta hai. Pata bhi hai. Tu rahul ke sath pyaar kese kar sakti hai. Ab sonam bhi thoda gusse mein bol deti hai Sonam : mujhe pata hai. Ki vo mera bhai hai. Ab rani or seema dono puri tarha shocked ho jati hai. Rani : tuze pata hai rahul tera bhai hai. Fir bhi tu usse pyaar karti hai. Sonam : haa karti hu. Or hadse jyada pyaar karti hu. Apni jaan se bhi jyada pyaar karti hu. Kiuki main rahul ko us dard mein dubara nahi dekh sakti jiss dard se vo abhi bahar nikla hai. Agar maine rahul ko chor diya to is baar vo tut jaega. Or tut kar bikar jaega. Or rahul ke tutne se pehle mein marna pasand karugi. Magar mein rahul ko nahi chor sakti. Rahul ko yeh bhi sach nahi bata sakti ki mein uski bhan hu. Seema : sonam tu kya bol rahi hai. Or rahul kiss dard mein tha. Fir sonam dono ko divya ki saari baat bta deti hai. Seema or rani : kyaaaaa. Seema : sonam chal tu mere sath ek kamare mein mujhe tuzse kuch baat karni hai. Or seema aunty sonam ko ek kamare mein le jati hai. Seema : sonam beta or bhi kuch hai to bta de. Sonam ( apni garden niche karke ) : or kuch nahi hai. Seema : tu jhoot mat bol mein tere bareme sab jan jati hue. Jaldi bata beta or kya baat hai. Sonam : aunty maine rahul ke sath pyaar kiya tha aaj ( chudai ki baat vo sirf seema ko batati hai.) Seema : kyaaaa. Tu pagal to nahi ho gai hai. Pata bhi hai tu kya bol rahi hai. Sonam : main kya karti aunty mujhe rahul ko us dard se bahar nikalna tha jiske karan mujhe yeh sab karna pada. Mujhe maaf kardo aunty Yeh sab karna jaruri tha. Or sunaina seema ke leg par gir jati hai. Or seema ke face par bohot gusse wala expression tha Magar jab sunaina seema ke leg par gir jati hai. To seema ko koi baat yaad aa jati hai Or vo baat yaad ate hii seema ka gussa ek dum se gayab ho jata hai. Seema sunaina ko utate hue. Bolti hai. Seema : beta aise kisi ke leg par nahi girte tune to bohot acha kaam kiya hai. Ab rona band kar Tune koi galat kaam nahi kiya. Mujhe tere upar garv hai ki tu meri bhanji hai. Or seema sonam ke aashu pohoch deti hai. Or sonam ko khada karke seema sonam ko apne gale laga leti hai. Is baar sonam puri tarha shocked ho jati hai. Sonam : mein aapki bhanji yeh kese ho sakta hai. Or meine rahul ke sath pyaar kiya or aap jyada gussa bhi nahi hue Bohot jaldi maan gai. Seema sonam se alag hote hue. Seema ( muskurate hue ) : vo sab baad mein bataugi. Sonam : magar fir bhi yeh kaise ho sakta hai. Or rahul bhi achanak mera bhai kese ban gaya yeh bhi muze abhi tak sahi se shamaj nahi aya tha. Or apne ek or jhatka de diya ki mein aapki bhanji hu. To iska matlab rahul bhi aapka bhanja hai. Seema muskurate hue. Seema : meri bhanji rahul bhi mera bhanja hai. Or tera saga bhai. Or baki sab mein baad mein bataugi. Pehle rahul ko call kar or yaha bula. Or jaise hii sonam rahul ko call karne lagti hai. Tabi Vaha se prerna bolti hai. ( Yeh aawaz sirf rahul or rahul ki sister ko hii sunai de sakti hai jab tak prerna dikai nahi dene lagti.) Prerna : sonam abhi tum rahul ko kuch nahi bta sakti Sonam : par kiu. Prerna : sonam shamjo baat ko agar tum ne rahul ko bata diya ki uski ek masi bhi hai . To usko tume yeh bhi batana padega ki tum bhi uski bhan ho. Or fir rahul tut gaega kiuki vo kabhi nahi chahega ki rahul kabi apni bhan ke sath sex kare Jab tak rahul...................................... nahi ho jata tum usko kuch nahi bta sakti. Ha apni masi se milva sakti ho rahul se magar yeh nahi bata sakti ki seema rahul ki sagi masi hai. Tabi Seema : sonam beta jaldi phone laga na rahul ko Tabi Sonam seema ko prerna ki saari baat bta deti hai. Ki abhi rahul ko yeh nahi pata chalna chahiye ki seema uski sagi masi hai. Kiuki.................. Seema : main kitni abhagan hue ki mein rahul ko yeh bhi nahi bta sakti ki vo mera bhanja hai. Sonam : masi jaldi samay aaega jab usko bhi yeh sachai pata chal jaegi. Seema : aaj se mein yehi rahugi tere pass jab tak rahul ko sab kuch pata nahi chal jata. Or seema or sonam bhar aa jati hai. Seema : rani aaj se kuch din tak mein yahi rahugi tere pass tuze koi problem to nahi hai. Rani : kesi baat kar rahi ho seema Yeh tumara hii to ghar hai. Seema ( sonam ) : sonam beta rahul se muzse ek baar milva to de Kamse kaam usko apne gale to laga lu. Jisse mere dil ko thandak pad jae Or sonam rahul ko call karti hai. Or usse kuch der baat karti hai. Sonam ( seema se ) : masi vo abhi apne ghar se gaon ke liye nikala hai. Or rahul bol raha tha ki jaise hii vo apne gaon se aaiga sabse pehle yaha aaiga. Seema : vese rahul rehta kis ke pass hai. Sonam : rahul apni bua ke pass rehta hai. Or abhi apni maa ke pass gaya hai. Seema : apni maa ke pass didi kya gaon mein rehti hai. Yeh kaise ho sakta hai. Or aaj tak mujhe kabar hii nahi hue. Jara rahul ki family ki photo to dika jara. Or sonam seema ko rahul ki family ki photo dikati hai. Or jisse dekhkar seema ek dum shocked ho jati hai. Seema : yeh khon hai. Sonam : yeh rahul ki maa hai. Or yeh bua. Fir seema kuch soch kar muskurate hue bolti hai. Seema : acha thik hai. Tabi piche se sonam ki choti bahen aa jati hai. Prachi ( rani se ) : maa aaj khane mein kya bana hai. Rani ( prachi se ) : dal chawal Bane hai. Tu jaldi se fresh ho ja Mein khana lagati hue. Fir aise hii sabme baat hoti rehti hai. Or raat ho jati hai. Or seema apne ghar mein call karti hai. Seema : hello. Thakurain : kesi hai beta seema. Seema : mein thik hu maa Thakurain : tu abhi tak kiu nahi aae. Seema : vo maa kya hai na ki mein abhi kuch din rani ke yaha hi rukhne ka soch rahi hu. Tabi piche se kuch awaaze ane lagti hai. Seema : maa yeh aawaz kesi aa rahi hai Thakurain : vo kya hai na seema hamara khandani locket is jewellery wale ne kisi or ko bech diya hai. Humne us locket ko is jewellery wale ko polish ke liye diya tha. To tere papa ( thakur sahab ) us par gussa hai. Or unka gussa bhi khatam nahi ho raha hai. Kiuki tuze pata hai vo locket teri badi behan ( rahul ke asli maa ) ka hai. Ab hamare pass bass uski yeh aakhri nishani thi. Ab lagta hai. Vo bhi kho gai. Is bajase yeh ( thakur sahab ) bohot gussa hai. Seema : maa gussa hone ki koi jaruraat nahi hai Vo locket sonam ke pass hai. Thakurain shocked hokar. Thakurain : kyaaa Or vo locket meri poti ( grand doughter ) ke pass kese aya. Seema : vo sab mein aapko baad mein bataugi. Pehle papa ( thakur sahab ) ko bolo ki jyada gussa na kiya kare nahi to uska blood pressure bad jaega Thakurain : thik hai beta mein thakur sahab ko bata deti hue. Seema : byee maa. Thakurain : byeee beta. Or phone cut jata hai. Or raat hone ke baad sab sone ( sleep ) chale jate hai. Or aaj seema or sonam ek hii kamre mein sote hai. Sonam ( seema se ) : masi ab btao na ki mein rahul ki bhan kese hue. Or aap meri masi kese hai. In saab ke piche kya karan ( bajaye ) hai. Agar aap meri masi hai to mein yaha kiu rehti hue. Seema : batati hue thoda sabar rakh itne saare sawal . Sonam : batao na masi. Seema : yeh sab janne ke liye tuze rahul ke janam ka raaz janna hoga. Ki kitni muskilo ka samna karke didi ( rahul ki asli maa ) ne rahul ko janam diya tha. Sonam : to jaldi batao na. Seeema : aacha sun. Flashback rahul ke janam ki kahani...... Yeh update thoda chota hai kiuki time nahi mil pa raha hai. Jald hii update sahi ane lage ge
01-04-2019, 01:45 AM
Flash back chalu hone vala hai....
ab kai raaj khulenge...
01-04-2019, 01:46 AM
chhota update tha lekin bahut hi achchha hai
01-04-2019, 11:02 PM
Eagerly waiting for next update.
And raise the curtain to so many secrets
02-04-2019, 12:37 AM
waiting
02-04-2019, 02:51 PM
update do bhai
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