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One of the best updates I ever read brother...... just amazing piece of writing... clp); clp); clp); clp); clp); clp); :)
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Superb hot update bhai....aakhir chudai ho hi gai namrata ki....ab aage gaand ka seel watchman se khulwaiye....aur phir gangbang
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Teen bar read karne ke bad bhi aisa lagta hai kuch miss ho raha hai
Story likhna aur story me apne aapko duba dena alag alag bat hai
Wonderful update bolne me bhi aisa mahsus ho raha ki bahut kam tariff hai
Bas itna kahungi likhte rahiye likhte rahiye
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Was Busy in some work so couldnt read last week's update so decided to read last two update in once to reply you.
The Safar Saga had ups and down.After the blockbuster Diwali episode readers were eagerly waiting to know what going to happen next who will enjoy Sweet sanskari namrata?
Episode started with calm before the storm then encounter of Suchita happened with bhikari which some readers liked it some didn't liked it.i was one of them who didn't like suchita doing sex with stranger.Because it was hard to imagine sex without proper build up and seduction.
Then Comes the best part of the story Namrata and Mishra ji's encounter.The scooty trip was icing on the cake the way you described the condition of namrata and Mishra during the trip was sensational.The way you described the seduction of namu's boobs and her expression with those pics were just outstanding.That was the best part of the Safar saga in my opinion.Then comes the climax which most readers wanted the fuck session between Namrata and Mishra it was excuted beautifully.Then comes the biggest twist weather Namrata is sanskari virgin girl or chalakh lombadi?it was just brilliant.i will talk about that on next post.
Overall Safar saga was beautifully written it had everything seduction,plot twist ,wonderful location.just wanna say keep writing.
Stay Safe,Kudos to your Writing skills.
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And talking about future prospect of the story I will share what I think what's going to happen in the story.
In my opinion Namu is not sweet,sansakri Jo wo dikhati Hain.Wo apani pyas buzane Ke Liye sharfi hone ka Nayak karake logo ko attract karake apani kamvasana buzati Hain.
She all ready lost her virginity but how and to whom she have lost the virginity it's interesting point. Because it was quite evident that Mishra didn't took her virginity.So then question arises who took her virginity??
I hope it happen between Her college-college duration and that person can be college peon,Her tution teacher or someone else that person should be middle aged one like birju,savala.
And I hope you will describe her seduction in details like her first kiss,first touch on her boobs by a men etc etc.
And talking about suchita I have all ready predicted that namrata might not be the daughter of Sanjay that's why he conspired with birju to seduce her.
Pehla prediction to sahi nikala ab dekhate Hain aage Kya hota Hain??
Next part of the story is about secret behind namrata's birth but I hope you also write how namrata lost her virginity?! After all namrata is the heroine of the story so focus should be on namrata.
Eagerly waiting for the next part of the story.