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Hi,
Thanks for the support...
Next part will be uploaded only next month..
Now i have two ways in mind to take the story forward. I have to choose one from it and start writing... If i try to update faster i am afraid that it may ruin the story...
Sorry for the delay...
And mostly i will be switching to storytelling mode from first person narrative...
Need all your support..
Advance Happy Christmas and New year wishes....
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Waiting for your long updates.......
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Hi jananilover, great narrating skills you have ever man. keep it up. thanks for a long update. sure waiting for your next update on next month. thanks once again to give us such a nice story which i liked first part and now the second part from you. keep rocking.
ENJOY THE LIFE AS IT COMES
SJ IRK OBG BPST YJ-DD B2.0 AU
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superb
plz don't let him have her so easy
give him inch by inch
story will end once he fucks her
so plz....
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Every thing is ok...Your writing skill is awesome ... The one thing is missing which I notice ..The role of husband ..
In first part husband role make story more hot as menka start telling lie for her lust
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Becoming the best story with you splendid writing all the way,,??
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HI Hope you will give an update soon
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your existing narrating skills and the current story telling mode is also good..... but you are the creator ..... expecting dabbang episode from you
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Any updates expected this week.
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Hope he will give an update today or tomorrow
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Wowwww ...very hot update
....good narration pls continue
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Is there any chance of updates......
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waiting is going for too long ............. janani lover.....
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I think this month we cannot expect anything ....