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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)
(22-03-2019, 01:51 PM)Raj355407 Wrote: bahut hi sundar update hai

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(22-03-2019, 01:52 PM)Raj355407 Wrote: writing style bahut hi mast hai

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(22-03-2019, 05:14 PM)Roslila628 Wrote: Bahut sandar

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Update 22

Isse ke sath hum ghar pohoch jata hue.
Or bike khadi karkar jab ghar me ghusta hue to.
Main fir
Mala bua ke face par pareshani ke bhav dekhta hue.
Or mala bua jo bolti hai me usse shocked ho jata hue.

Chalo chalte hai sunaina ki taraf.............

Ab aageeee.

Or us locket ki roshni bohot tezz hone lagti hai. Or usme itni garmi nikal ne lagti hai ki jin gundo ne sunaina ko pakad rakha tha or jo gunde sunaina ke gale me hath ( hand) daal rahe the.
Vo teeno kuch hii samay me jal kar ( puri terha se jal jana) rakh jo jate hai.
Samne sirf haddiya padi dekhai deti hai.

Or us roshni ki bajase saari ladkiya achanak behosh ho jati hai.

Or saare gundo ki gand buri terha fat jati hai. Un ki gand se dua nikalne lagta hai.
Or vo sochne lagte hai achanak yeh kya ho gaya.

Or bohot tezz tezz hawaye (air) chalne lagti hai.
Pure jungle me channata ho jata hai.

Or us jungle ka manjhar bohot hii bhayanak ho jata hai.

Or inko ek bohot hi bhayanak aawaz sunai deti hai.

Or samne sher ( tiger ( yeh bhagwam wala tiger nahi hai bhai iska raaj bhi raj lok me pata chalega )
Bohot tezz garajte hue dikai deta hai.

Or us sher ki garajna se pura jungle kaap jata hai.

Vahi

Or aise hii sham ( evening) ho jati hai or nishant or un sabke log us jungle me ghusne ki kosis karte hai magar vo log 
Us jungle me ghuss nahi pate kiuki vo bhayanak awaaz unko bhi sunai deti hai.
Un logo ki bhi phat jati hai.
Fir 
Bhi kosis karke nishant or unke log us jungle me ghusne ki kosis karte hai or under ghuste hii dubara jungle ke bahar aa jate hai matlab ander ghuss nahi pate

Vahi

Sunaina ka rang ( colour) ek dam kala ( black) pad jata hai.
Or vo sher ( tiger) sunaina ke pass chala jata hai.
Or sunaina us tiger par baith ( sir) jati hai

Or vo sher or tezz garajne lagta hai.

Vo gunde jo sunaina ka balatkar karna chahate the.
Vo sab puri tarha se pagal ho jate hai.
Or unko kuch shamaj nahi ata yeh kya hua.
Ab un sab ghundo ko apna hii balatkar ka der lagte lagta hai.
Apni mout ka der lagne lagta hai.

Inko aisa lagta hai jaise mahakali un gundo ko marne aai ho. ( Magar yeh koi mahakali nahi hai yeh sab us locket ke bajase hai.)

Or saare gunde bhagne ki kosis karte hai.

Magar jaise hii vo gunde bhagne lagte hai.

To saare ped ( tree) un sab gundo ko pakad lete hai.
Or vo bhag nahi pate
Or vo sher ( tiger) aage badne lagta hai.

Tabi 
un sab gundo me se kuch apna roop badalne lagte hai. Or jis ped ne unko pakad rakha tha us ped ( tree) ko jala dete hai.

Or apne asli rakshas roop me aa jate hai.

Yeh bohot hii bhayanak rakshas the.

Vase hii sunaina us sher se niche utar jati hai or vo sher .
Tezz dahar ke sath un gundo ko marne lagta hai.
Jo gunde ko ped ( tree) ne pakad rakha tha.
Or vo sher ( tiger) sab gundo ko kacha chaba jata hai.

Bas us sab gundo ki chekne ki awaaze sunai de rehi hoti hai.

Jo rakshas bhag rahe the vo bhagte hue sunaina par vaar karne lagte hai.
Apni shaktiyo se.

Magar unka ek bhi vaar sunaina par koi asar nahi kar pa raha tha.
Yeh dekhte hi saare rakshas shocked ho jate hai.
Ki un rakshas ki saari shaktiya is ladki ka kuch bhi nahi bhigar pa rahi hai.

Or sunaina ke taraf se ek awaz sunai de rahi hoti hai. 

Ayi giri nandini, nandhitha medhini,
Viswa vinodhini nandanuthe,
Girivara vindhya sirodhi nivasini,
Vishnu Vilasini Jishnu nuthe,
Bhagawathi hey sithi kanda kudumbini,
Bhoori kudumbini bhoori kruthe,
Jaya Jaya He rakshas mardini , Ramya Kapardini Shaila Suthe...?........


Or jo rakshas leader tha vo apni or saare rakshas milkar apni Puri shaktiyo se ek kawaj ka nirman kar lete hai.

Or raskshas leader apne guru ko bulane lagta hai.

Or jaise hii 
Un rakshas ka guru samne us locket ko dekhta hai.
Bohot ghabra jata hai 
Or pura sarir kapne lagta hai usko kuch yaad aa jata hai.
Yaad : bhadr kaal lochanam
pisach, rakshas sarv vinashnam.
Jata kata sharv bhayanakam .
Aasur sarv vinashanam.
Kapal kaal shovanam.
Malika prachand kaalakam
Mahakaal .mahakaal
Or rakshas guru vaha se gayab hone lagta hai.
Tabi
Rakshas leader apne guru ka leg pakad leta hai.

Rakshas leader ( apne guru se ) : guru ji hame bacha lo yeh khon a gaya jis par hamari koi bhi shaktiyo kaam nahi kar rahi.

Rakshas guru ki gand phati hue thi unke muh se ek bhi word nahi nikal raha tha.
Fir bhi rakshas guru bolta hai.

Rakshas guru ( rakshas leader se ) : bhan chod per ( leg) chor mera 
Chor mera per ( leg) mere abhi din pure nahi hue hai.

Rakshas leader : guru jii khon hai yeh.

Guru ji : vo...... Voooo locket dekhta tune uske gale me 
Pata bhi hai kya hai us locket me.
Or kisne diya tha.
Yeh locket.

Rakshas leader : kya hai gurujii us locket me or kisne diya tha vo locket.

Vahi
Sunaina apne hath ( hand) me trishul ka avahan karti hai or us kawaj par phek deti hai kuch hii jhatke me wo kawaj tut jata hai.
Yeh dekh us rakshas guru ki gand se tatti nikalne lagti hai.

Or rakshas guru us rakshas leader ko dusre leg se ek lath marta hai or rakshas leader samne ja girta hai.

Or vaha se gayab hone lagta hai.
Or jate jate rakshas leader se bolta hai 

Rakshas guru : madar chod to suspense me hii mar.

Rakshas leader ko shamaj me hii nahi ata ki jis rakshas guru ne pure shetan lok ko sabse shakti shali banaya.
Jinki shaktiya apar thi jiske aamne koi tik nahi pata vo rakshas guru is locket se ghabra gaya.

Rakshas leader ( mann me) : bhanchod is locket me aisa kya hai.
rakshas guru ki bhi tatti nikal gayi is locket ko dekte hii.
Mere sath kiya hoga.
Is bhanchod robert ne kha fasa diya.
Agar jaan bachi na to is madar chod robert ki gand phar duga.

Tabi
Sunaina un sab rakshas ke samne aa jati hai.
Or uske hath ( hand ) me trishul hota hai.

Or fir ek aawaaz aane lagti hai.

Maharani to bangla tu rati bhavani prano ki raksha karne wali to purn maharani.
Namo namo namo nama.
Shakal jagat tere gon gave yog muni sab dhiyan lagave.
Kaal roop me aao mata ab dukh mujhse saha nahi jata.
Dusto ka shangaar karo maa 
Rakshas shakti ka vinash karo maa.
Jai jai jai ambe mahakali jai durge maa shera vali.

Or piche se sher aakar sare rakshas ko mout ke ghat utar deta hai.

Or sunaina vo trishul us rakshas leader ke seene par mar deti hai
Or issi ke sath saare rakshas mar jate hai.

Magar sunaina ka gussa tha ki kam hone ka naam hii nahi le raha tha.
Vo dhiree dhiree saare jungle ko aag lagane lag jati hai.

Tabi
Vo sher ( tiger) ek roop dharan karta hai or sunaina se bolta hai.

Tiger : mata sab rakshas mar gae hai kirpiya karke apne gusse ko sant karo.

Magar sunaina ko to kuch sunai hii nahi de raha tha.
Dubara
Tiger : mata yeh bichara jungle to masoom hai. Isko mat ujaro.

Vahi
Bhagwaan lok me

Mata parvati : mahadev sunaina ko rokiye nahi to yeh puri duniya ka anat ho jaega kiuki 
Jaha katle aam macha hai vaha mahakaal khada hai jab vo sampaan hoga vahi bachega
Jiska pyaar anat hoga
Dusro ke prati prem bhao anat hoga.
Jiske ander karuna anant hogi.
Pyaar ki had paar anat hogi.
Jiska nischal prem anant hoga.
Jis ko dusro ke dard ke shamne apna dard kam lagega us dard ke samne uska pyaar anant hoga.
Kiuki ant hii to aaramb hai.

Jisse sunaina . Apne dard ko bhul kar usko un ladkiyo ka dard anant laga.
Jinko un rakshas ne pakad rakha tha.

Mahadev : me kya kar sakta hue priye me apni putri ko kese rokhu .
Mujhe kuch shamaj me nahi aa raha.

Mata parvati : sunaina ko sirf rohan hii rok sakta hai .
Magar uski atma to................................................

Mahadev : magar vo rohan to.................

Mata parvati : to ab kya kare prabhu.

Tabi
Mahadev bolte hai.

Mahadev : ek rasta hai.

Or mahadev us locket ko jo sunaina ke gale me tha usko niche gira dete hai.

Vahi 
Dharti lok me

Jaise hii sunaina ki nazar us locket par padti hai.
Vo bohot tez rone ( carry) lagti hai.
Uske rona ( carry) bhi anat tha.
Apne rohan ke khone ka dard bhi anant tha.
Apne rohan ko aag me jalte dekhkar uska dard bhi anant tha.
Or sunaina locket ko apne gale se laga leti hai.
Ab uska pyaar bhi anant tha.
Apne rohan ko aag me jalte dekhkar uske ander ki karuna bhi anant thi.

Or usko kuch yaad ane lagta hai

Jab
Rohan aag me jal raha tha.
To vo kuch bol raha tha.
Rohan : hame is sansaar ( duniya) ki raksha karni hai.
Apne pyaar ki raksha karni hai.
Baba ( mahadev) ke vardaan ki raksha karni hai.
Agar mere jane ke baad agar tum roi ( carry) ya...................

Mein vapas jarur auga apne pyaar liye vapas aauga.
Baba ( mahadev) ke vardan ke liye vapas aauga.
Kya tume me kabi chor kar jaa sakta hue.

Sunaina : nahi kabi nahi.

Rohan : mera to sirf sarir hii jal raha hai.
Magar hamara pyar to dil se hai.
Ja har same tumare seene me dharkata rahega.
Hamara pyaar to atma se hai.
Jo duniya ka koi bhi nahi cheen sakta.

Vada karo sunaina jab tak hum dubara nahi mil jate .
Tum apna dhyan rakhogi 
Baba ( mahadev) ke vardan ko kabi tutne nahi dogi.
Kabi apni aapko taklif nahi dogi .
Or hamesha sabse pyaar karogi.
Or...................................
Vada karo sunaina 
Vada karo.

Sunaina : me vada karti hue
Me vada karti hue.

Tabi vo yaad khatam ho jati hai.

Or sunaina bohot tezz bolti hai.

Sunaina : rohaaaaan

Or ussi ke sath sunaina behosh ho jati hai.

Or vo tiger vaha se chala jata hai.

Vahi 
Mahakaal ka bhi dil tadap jata hai.
Sunaina ka yeh pyaar dekhkar.
Magar vo is jungle me nahi ata.

Vahi
Or pure jungle me charo taraf hariyaari hone lagti hai.
Jo dirashye abhi bohot khatarnak tha.

Uski sundarta bohot bad jati hai .
Or
Vo andera jungle jugno ki roshni se chamakne lagta hai.

Vahi
Nishant apne logo ke sath jungle me ghuss jata hai.

Or saari ladkiyo or vaha pade saare gundo ke died sarir ko dekhkar hairaan ho jata hai.

Or jungle ke andere me un lago ko rakshas ke sarir nahi dikhai dete
( Agar dikai dete to unki rooh bhi kaap jati kiuki vo itne bhayanak the ki koi ek baar dekh le to vahi beshosh ho jae.)

Ek aadmi nishant se 
Aadmi : yaha kya hua hoga . Jis jungle me hum ghuss nahi paye.
Jo jungle itna khatarnak lag raha tha .
An iski sundarta utni hii man mohak lag rahi hai.
Jab ki abhi raat hai
Fir bhi.
Fir nishant ke sab log ( agent) vaha par beshosh padi ladkiyo par paani dal kar uttate hai.

Or jaise hii nishant roma ke upar paani dalta hai.
Roma uthate hii sunaina chilane lagti hai............
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वाकई बहुत ही शानदार updateहै।
क्या जो कवच था वो टूट गया है ।
क्योंकि दानव राज भी पृथ्वी पर नहीं आ सकता था।
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(22-03-2019, 11:13 PM)Raj355407 Wrote: वाकई बहुत ही शानदार updateहै।
क्या जो कवच था वो टूट गया है ।
क्योंकि दानव राज भी पृथ्वी पर नहीं आ सकता था।

Bhai yeh rakshas hai 


Danav raj to aasur hai.

Us kawaj ko kuch nahi hua hai


Rakshas ki bhi bohot badi kahani hai jo raajlok me pata chalegi
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Bhai apne kya Desibees pe bhi lithte ho
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(23-03-2019, 09:04 AM)Killer boy Wrote: Bhai apne kya Desibees pe bhi lithte ho

Ha bhai


Magar aap kisi dusari side ka naam aise comment me nahi likh sakte 

Kiuki dusare side ka naam likhne ka matlab hota hai ki aap us side ko yaha promote kar rahe ho.

Isse apko problem ho sakti hai.


Agar apko koi bhi aisi baat karni hai to aap persanal msg me kar sakte ho.


Its my suggestion bhai 
Mera batana kartavye tha to meine bata diya



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Update 23

Mega update

Fir nishant ke sab log ( agent) vaha par beshosh padi ladkiyo par paani dal kar uttate hai.

Or jaise hii nishant roma ke upar paani dalta hai.
Roma uthate hii sunaina chilane lagti hai............

Aab aagee..............

Or bhag kar sunaina ko dhudne lagti hai.
Or
Tabi 
Roma ko sunaina samne dikai deti hai.
Or sunaina ko dekhte hii roma sunaina ke pass chali jati hai.

Or pani chidakkar sunaina ko utane lagti hai.

Or jaise hii sunaina utti hai.
To
Sunaina tezz tezz rohan chilane lagti hai.
Sunaina : rohaan
Rohaan
Shayad abhi bhi sunaina us dard ko mehsus kar rahi jo rohan ke jane se usko ho raha tha.
Apne pyaar ko khone ka dard 
Apne ko aag me jalte hue dekhne ka dard.
Or pir rone lagti hai.

Pir roma sunaina ko thoda samalti hai.
Or thodi der baad sunaina shant ho gati hai.
Kiuki vo apne dard ko kisi ko baya nahi karni karna chahati thi.
Apne dard ko dil me dabaye dusro ko dard ko kam karna chahati thi.
Apne rohan ki baato ko yaad karna chahati.
Rohan ke liye sabko pyaar batna chahati thi.
Or apne hath ( hand) me locket dekhti hai 
To sunaina us locket ko tezz tezz chumne lagti hai.
Fir 
Apne gale me dal leti hai.

Vahi

Nishant bolta hai.
Nishant : yaha kya hua tha.

Tabi
Ek ladki nishant ko sab bta deti hai.

Uske baad roma bolti hai.

Roma : jab vo gunde sunaina ke gale me hath ( hand) dal rahe the to ek tezz roshni chamakne lagti hai.
Uske bad kya hua hame nahi pata.

Nishant : raat bohot ho chuki hai tum sab ladkiya hamare head quater me rukh jao.
Or kal subha hum tumare ghar valo ko call karke uske pass chor dege.

Nishant sunaina se bolta hai.

Nishant : beti sunaina tum bohot bahadur ho tumne in ladkiyo ki jaan bacha kar bohot acha kaam kiya hai.
Ab tum bhi apne ghar ki taraf nikalo
Yeh mera khass aadmi hai tume tumare ghar chor dega.

Roma ( sunaina see) : ab me kya karu meri mummy to bohot pareshan hogi.
kitni der ho gai or raat bhi ho gayi hai

Sunaina ( roma se) : tu ek kaam kar apne ghar phone kar or bol de ki tu mere ghar hai.
Or subha vapas chale gana 
Isse tumari mummy jyada pareshan nahi hogi.
Or tumari mummy puchegi ki kiu rukhi hai vaha.
To bol dena ki koi project ka kaam tha 
College ka.

Roma : thik hai.

Or sab us jungle se nikal jate hai.

Or sab ladkiya head qater nikal jati hai.
Or sunaina roma ghar ki taraf.

Rastee me sunaina roma se.

Sunaina : roma mein kya kahugi ghar par.

Tabi roma bolti hai.

Roma : sunaina ek idea hai tu bol dena ki kuch saman lena tha isliye roma ke sath thi.
Or abhi itni bhi raat nahi hue hai.

Sunaina : thik hai. Vase tu vaha us jungle me kese pohochi.

Roma : mein kuch saman lene bahar aai thi.
Fir ghar jane ke liye bus stand par khadi thi.
Ki achanak ek van aai or usne mujhe kapad liya.

Roma : or tu kese pohochi is jungle mein

Sunaina : yab mane teri aawaz suni to mane us van ka picha kiya or vaha pohoch jayi.

Roma : vase yeh rohan khon hai.
Or tu uska naam lekar itna roo ( carry ) kiu rahi thi.

Is baat par sunaina chup ho jati hai or kuch nahi bolti.
Kiuki vo khud abhi tak rohan se nahi mili thi.

Roma : bolna kahi tera boyfriend to nahi.

Is baat par sunaina thoda sharmane lagti hai.
Or roma shamaj jati hai.
Roma : bas bas ab jyada sarmane ki jarurat nahi hai.
Acha ek baar milva to de rohan se

Is par sunaina fir udas ho jati hai

Sunaina : main nahi janti ki abhi rohan kaha hai.

Roma ko sunaina ka utra hua face acha nahi lagta.
Roma ( mann me ) shayad isliye yeh ro ( carry ) rahi thi. Sunaina ko hasane ke liye kuch to karna padega.

Tabi roma bolti hai.

Roma ( haste hue) : sunaina vase bohot dum hai rohan jiju me jisne itni khatarnak hacker or ek dum hot maal ko apne jaal me phasane ki himmat ki hai.
Or fasa bhi liya.
Ab to muze bhi pyaar ho gaya hai rohan jiju se
jab vo muzse milega na to ek baar me bhi try jarur karugi
kya pata mujh se bhi pat ( set) ho gae


Is baat par sunaina roma ko marne lagti hai.
Sunaina : rohan sirf or sirf mera hai. 

Roma : Ooe suniana rohan jarur tera hoga par jiju to mera hai.
Ek line to jarur marugi.

Fir sunaina apna muh bana leti hai.

Roma : are baba mein to mazak kar rahi thi.
Tu itni khatarnak hai to mere jija ji kitne kharnak hoga. 
Me tuze hii nahi shamal pati to apne jija jii ko kese shamalugi.

Is baat par sunaina hasne lagti hai.

Fir roma dubara bolti hai.

Roma : vase saali bhi aadhi garwali hoti hai.
Ek try nahi to pareshan karna to banta hai.

Sunaina ( aakhe gol gol ghumate hue) : jitna pareshan karna hai kar lena apne jiju ki sali jii.
Roma fir se

Roma : vase rohan jiju bhi hot hai kya.

Sunaina : tu kya karegi yeh jaan kar.

Roma : me soch rahi thi ki agar jiju hot or handsame hue to line to jarur marugi 

Sunaina : tu fir shuru hogai.

Roma : sunaina bas ek or last baat.

Sunaina : bolo

Roma : sunaina kya jiju ne tume pehele kabi kiss kiya hai 

Sunaina : ab tu mar khaegi 
Roma : meri pyari chukunder apne pyar ke bareme sunkar ghuss bhi karti hai.

Sunaina : tu nahi sudarne wali.

Or thodi der ke bad 

Sunaina ( us aadmi se) : bhaiya bas yahi rok do.
Mere ghar aa gaya hai.
Fir roma or sunaina vahi utar jati jati hai.

Or sunaina 
Apne ghar me jese hii ghusti hai
Or sunaina thoda ghabra jati hai...

Chalo chalte hai hero ke pass.

Fir mala bua ke chehre par pareshani bhav dekhta hai

Or 
Maine socha kal to main puch nahi paya tha magar aaj to puch hii luga.

Rahul ( mala bua se ) : bua aap kuch pareshan lag rahi ho kya baat hai.

Mala bua ( mann me) : isko abhi vo baat nahi bta sakti faltu me ye bhi pareshan ho jaega.

Mala bua : vo hum bhabhi ( rahul ki maa) ke pass ja rahe hai.
Tum sab jaldi se tyaar ho jao.

Tabi 
Piche se nisha & ruchi bhi aa jati hai school se

Neha ( mala bua se) : maa hum sonali didi ke yaha ja rahe hai.

Mala bua : haa mera bacha jaldi se ready ho ja.

Or nisha & ruchi yeh sunkar nachne lagti hai.
Nisha : oyee balle balle
Ruchi : aye shava shava.

Or dono bhag kar tyar hone apne room me chali jati hai.

Rahul ko apne ghar jane ka naam sunkar vo manjhar yaad aa jata hai.
Jiske bajese sonali ne rahul ko hostel bheja tha.

Or uske aakh ( eyes) me aashu aa jate hai.

Yeh chiz payal dekh leti hai.
Or payal uske paas jakar ko apne gale se laga leti hai.
Kiuki payal ko bhi pata tha ki rahul ke aakh me aashu kiu aae hai.

Payal : rahul agar tujhe nahi jana to mat ja .
Or mujhe bhi nahi jaana .
Me tere sath yahi rukhti hue.

Rahul apne aashu poch leta hai
Or payal se alag hokar bolta hai.

Rahul : asi koi baat nahi hai payal.

Payal : jhooth mat bol tujhe pata hai ki to mujhse jhoot nahi bol sakta.

Rahul : kya me kal aa sakta hue.

Payal : thik hai main bhi tere sath kal chalugi ab to khus ho ja.

Rahul : payal tum sab jao me kaal aa jauga raat tak mujhe kuch kaam hai.

Payal : to me bhi rukhti hue na tere sath mere rukhne me koi problem hai.

Rahul payal ke gale me hath dalkar

Rahul : plzzz didu meri baat maan lo na 

Payal ( mann me) : ab me isko akela kese chodu.

Tabi 
Prerna vaha aa jati hai or payal se bolti hai.

( Yeh awaz sirf payal ko sunai deti hai)

Prerna : payal tu rahul ki tension mat kar or yeh kal aa jaega abhi isko akela rehne ki jarurat hai.
Jab tak me isko shamhaal lugi 
Me hue iske pass

Payal : magar mujhe pehle aapse bohot saari baate karni hai.

Prerna : payal vo sab baad me kar lena or vishwas karo mera rahul ko kuch nahi hoga.

Payal pata nahi kiu prerna ki baat par vishwas kar leti hai.

Payal ( prerna se) : thik hai prerna didi magar jab rahul vaha aaega tab apko har ek baat batani hogi ki aap rahul ko kese janti hai .
Or uske bareme vo sab baat bhi jo apne mujhe sahi se nahi batai thi.
Me aapke bharose rahul ko chor kar ja rahi hu.
Mera bharosa kabhi mat torna nahi to mein kabi bhi
Fir bharasa nahi par paugi.

Prerna : payal vishwas rakho mujh par or rahul ke vaha pohochte hii me tujhe Sab bata dugi ki kese me rahul ko janti hue.

Payal : thik hai prerna di....

Fir 
Prerna chali jati hai.

Fir 
Payal rahul se bolti hai.

Payal : thik hai rahul magar apna khayal rakhna or kaal ( tomorrow) raat tak tu nahi aya to soch lena .
Kiuki sonali didi ko to tujhe pata hai.

Or rahul bhi haa me garden hila deta hai.

Or fir 
Tyaar hokar sab nikal jate hai rahul ki maa ke ghar.
Mala bua payal se puchi hai ki rahul kiu nahi aya 
To payal bol deti hai.
Ki rahul kal aaega usse kuch kaam hai.
Or fir mala bua payal ko kuch nahi bolti.
Or sab ghar se nikal jate hai.

Or rahul ghar me akela hota hai.

Or 
Apne bed par baith kar phone chala raha hota hai.

Tabi 
Prerna ( mann me) : rohan me tumare liye bohot tarsi hu bohot tadpi hue.
Mane tumara bhoot intzaar kiya hai.
Iska badla to tume chukana hii padega.
Tume pershan karke ab bach kar dikana mujh se 
Hahahahahahahahaba.

Fir 
Prerna rahul se bolti hai

Prerna : rahul ab tumara samay aa gaya hai. Ab tume mere sath patal lok chalna hoga.

Rahul ek dumse harbara jata hai.
Or rahul bolta hai.

Rahul : khon hai 
Khon hai.

Or charo taraf dekhne lagta hai.
Magar rahul ko koi nahi dikai deta.

Prerna : tum mujhe dekh nahi sakte kiuki me bhoot hue.
Me tume khane aai hue.

Rahul harbarate hue.

Rahul : booth booth.

Or tezz tezz bolne lagta hai.
Aalto jalato aai bala ko tal tu.
Aalto jalalto aai bala ko tal tu.

Is baat par prerna hasne lagti hai

Prerna ( mann me) : itna to iski bhan bhi nahi ghabrai thi jitna yeh ghabra raha hai.

Tabi
Prerna : me 200 saal se bhuki hue 
Aaj me tume kha jaugi.

Or rahul der ke mare ghar se bahar bhag ne lagta hai.
Or bolne lagta hai.

Rahul : bhanchad yeh booth mere piche kiu pada hai.
Ab iski mane kab gand marli jo mujhe khana chahata hai.
Sala do din se mere sath pata nahi kya kya ho raha hai.
Zindagi bhanchod jhand hii ho gai hai.

Or bike par baith ( sir ) hokar ghar se nikal jata hai.

Vahi
Prerna tezz tezz hasne lagti hai.

Prerna ( mann me) : mujhe we puch rahe ho tumne mera kya bigara hai.
Jese tume nahi pata hai kya bigara hai .
Itne saal tarsaya hai pata tumne mujhe iske liye tume thoda pareshan karna to banta hii hai.
Magar mujhe nahi pata tum itne darpok nikloge ki itni se baat se der jaoge.

(Magar prerna ko kya pata ki rahul kiu gaya hai.:devil::devilSmile

Vahi 
Rahul bike ko road par aise hii chala raha tha 
Karib 20 km par 

Rahul apne dosto ram ko call karta hi

Rahul : hello ram.

Ram : haa bhai kya hua.

Rahul : bhai mujhe na ek laptop chahiye.

Ram par kiu

Rahul : kuch kaam hai.

Ram : thik hai bta tu kha par hai.

Or rahul apna address send kar deta hai.

Or rahul vahi road par ram ka intzaar karne lagta hai.
Kuch samay baad fir ram ka call ata hai.

Ram : bhai koi taxi nahi mil rahi hai. Main laptop kese aau.

Rahul : kese ki car lekar aaja.
Baad me vapas ka diyo.

Ram : thik hai.

Tabi rahul sochta hai jab tak ram aa raha hai tab tak gali me hii ghum leta hu.

Or rahul apni bike vahi khadi karke 
Pedal hii gali me ghumne lag jata hai.

Tabi rahul ko ek bara sa makan dikai deta hai.
Or us makan se kuch awaaze dikai de rahi hoti hai.
Rahul ko kuch garbar lagti hai.

To rahul us ghar ki taraf chal deta hai.

New characters 

Arvind : age 28 saal security officer me IPS ki rank or bohot hii iman daar .
Jiss sehar main aa jaye vaha ke saare local gunde bhag jate hai.
Bohot hii strick officer .
Isi karan puri security officer departments ki naak mein dum kar rakha hai.
Inka manna hai ki.
Pehle gundo ko warning do or dusri baar un criminals ko uda ( maar) do.

Neha : age 19 years arvind ki choti bhan.
Inke mom or dad ke marne ke baad yeh hii pure ghar ko shamalti hai.
Bohot hii achi or sundar hai yeh.

Now back to tha story.

Jaise hii rahul gate ke pass gaya to kuch sun kar rukh jata hai.

Aadmi ( chillaty hue ) : chor de meri bhan ko kamine chor dey usko.

Gunda : sale bhenchod teri waja se hamara caroro ka maal pakra gaya bohot shok hai na imandar banne ka.
Humne tujhe bola tha humse paise lele or hamare sath milja magar nahi tujhko to medal leny hai.

Gunda 2 : aaj is ke samay iss ki bhan ka balatkar karege sab milkar vo bhi puri imandari se sath.
Ab tu batai yo kisne ache se choda teri bhan.
Ab hum bhi medal lege teri bhan ki chut fadkar.

Gunda 3 : IPS arvind main too tujhe jab hii mar deta jab tune hamare boss ka pehle maal pakra tha.
Par mein chup raha kiuki 
Main ek bhai ke samne uss ki bhan ka balatkar karne me maza hii kuch ata hai.

Main tuze rota hua girgirata hua., Bebas , lachar , apahiz, dekhna chahata hu.
Ki har security officer wala yeh yaad rakhe ko humse ulajne ka kya parinam hota hai.

Is arvind ( roty hue) : meri bhan ko chor de please teri dusmani mere sath hai chahe to mujhe mar de par meri bhan ko chor de.

Arvind ek chair par bandha roo raha tha.

Yeh karib 25 log the.
Or ek larki ko nanga kar rahy the.
Uss ka dress phaar rahe the.

Dekhte hii dekhte ladki ko nanga kar diya jata hai.
Us ladki ka jism thora chil jata hai.

Ladki cheekh rahi thi par yeah gundy to bas has rahe the.
Jashan mana rahe the.

Pir sab gunde apne kapre utarte hai.
Or sab nange hokar.

Apna lund hilane lag jate hai.

Arvind or uski bhan bechari roo rahi thi cheekh rahi thi chilla rahi thi.

Tabi 
Ek gunda bolta hai.

Gunda : lund he mera maal teri choot hai kamal sab koi tuze chodega aaj khacha khach karke vaar.

Tabi boss gunda larki ki choot me apna lund dalane hii wala hota hai ki 

Ek joordar awas ke sath door tut ta hai or samne khada larka door jakar girta hai

Tabi
iOS arvind ko ek umeed ki kiran nazar aai 
Par jab arvind dekhta hai ki ek 17 saal ladka hai to 
Pir parshan ho jata hai.
Tabi
Boss gunda bolta hai.

Boss gunda : khon hai be tu.

Rahul us boss gunde ke pass gakar 

Apne hath me thuk lagakar ek tez ki thapad us boss gunde ko marta hai.

Or boss gunda jakar Ips arvind ke pass girta hai. Or admara sa ho jata hai.

Tabi
Rahul bolta hai.

Rahul : dekai nahi de raha ki mein insaan hu.

Tabi sare gunde rahul ko marne lagte hai.

Tabi rahul bolta hai.

Rahul : ek minute 

Gunda : tune mere boss ko kiu mara.

Rahul : bhai thoda apni Gf ke samne so off kar raha tha.
Or tum uska balatkar karna chahate the.

Gunda : dekho aa gaya majno ki aulad apni mehna ko bachane. 

Maro saale ko 

Rahul : ek minute bhai meri marne se pehle ek wish hai.

Gunda 2 : kya wish hai teri.

Rahul : bhai me apni gf ko ek baar kiss karna chahata hue.
Kabi isne mujhe kiss hii nahi karne dii 
Hamesha mujhse shopping hii karwati rehti hai.

Rahul rone ki acting karte hue.

Rahul : dhobi ka kutta shamaj rakha hai isne mujh 
Hamesha mujhe daatte rehti hai.
Bolti hai pehle mere bhai s bhai se puchlo.

IPS ARVIND or neha KO TO kuch shamaj hii nahi aa raha tha ki yeh neha ka boyfriend kaha se aa gaya.
Dono shocked the.

Rahul : kya ek kiss ke liye bhi iske bhai se puchna padega tumi log batao.

Gunda 3: bhai meri bhi ek gf hai usne bhi mujhe dhobi ka kutta shamaj rakha hai.
Vo bhi hamesha mujhse shopping karwati hai.
Or mujhe ek kiss bhi nahi karti thi
Yeh saari ladkiya matlabi hoti hai.

Bhai me tere sath hue.
Ya jeele apni jindagi.
Or iski kiss.

Rahul us aadmi ke pass jakar 

Rahul : thank u bhai.
Tabi.
Dusra gunda bolta hai.

Gunda : uske baad me iski choot phaduga.
Hahahahaha

Rahul us gunde ko ek thapad marta hai
Us gunde se bolta hai.

Rahul : abe bin aalo ke began .
Bina sabji ke chawal.
Jab do bade baat kar rahe ho to bache beech me nahi bolte.

Tabi sab gunde rahul ko firse marne wale hote hai
Rahul us gunde se bolta hai jisne rahul ko kiss karne ko bola tha.
Rahul : gunda bhai kya mujhe ek kiss nahi mil sakti.
Uske bad mujhe maar dena.
Please gunde bhai.
Tum meri feeling ko shamaj sakte ho.
Aakhir tum bhi to kutte ho.

Vo gunda : kyaa kaha.

Rahul : mera matlab hai dhobi ke kutte.
Gf wale.
Gunda : bhai pehle isko ek kiss karne do fir isko mar dena.

Rahul : thanku bhai thanku.
Apka yeh ehsaan raha mujh par kabi muka mila to isko jarur chukauga.

Fir rahul neha ke pass jata hai.
Or uske upar apni shirt daal deta hai.

Gunda : yeh kya kar raha hai.

Rahul : mujhe sirf kiss karna hai.
Kabi sab to apko hii karna hai to isliye mane is ladki par apni shirt dal di jisse mere gunde bhai ke maal par meri niyat naa kharab ho jae.

Gunda 2 : thik hai jaldi kar abhi hume is arvind ko bhi tapkana hai.

Fir rahul neha ko jeise hii kiss karne ke liye badta hai.
Uske aakh me aashu or vo dard dekhta hai.
Jo kisi ladki ko apna balatkar hote hue hota hai.
Rahul ka dil bhi tut jata hai.
Or rahul neha ke aashu poch deta hai.

Or sab gunde rahul ko dekh rahe hote hai.

Tabi rahul un gunndo se bolta hai.

Rahul : bhai aise mat dekho mujhe saram aa rahi hai kiuki yeh mera first kiss hai.

Gunda : thik hai jaldi kar.

Rahul bhai kya me isko us kamre me kiss kar sakta hue.

Gunda : agar tu isko lekar bhag gaya to.
Or hamare samne kiss karne me tuze kesi saram.

Rahul : bhai ek kaam karo aap meri leg pakad ko gate ko bahar se.
Or vese bhi yeh IPS arvind yaha hai to yeh kaha bhag kar gaegi 

Ips arvind : saale kute mein tuze bhi nahi choruga. Kamine.
Rahul : bhai pehle pakad to lee.

Gunda : thik hai jao re pakad lo iska leg is kamre ke samne se.

Rahul : thanku bhai.

Gunda : yeh thanku kya laga rakha hai.

Rahul : bhai meri ek desire thi ki jo muze mare me usko thanku kahu.

Gunda thik hai jaldi kar.

Fir rahul neha ko kamre me lejata hai or apni ek leg ek gunde ko pakra deta hi.

5 minute ho jate hai.

Tabi 
Gunda 2 bolta hai.

Gunda 2 : abe isko kiss karne gaya hai ki chodne. Itna time kiu laga raha hai.

Rahul : bhai bas ho gaya ek minute bas.

Fir rahul bahar ata hai.

Gunda : kha hai vo ladki 

Rahul : bhai vo sharma rahi hai.

Gunda : maro re is kutte ko.

Rahul : thanku bhai.
Aadi desire to apne puri kar di.
Bas ek dialog ko bolne do.

Tabi gunda 4 bolta hai.

Gunda 4 ( apne hi gunde we) : Bhai time kiu waste kar rahe hai.
Maro isko 
Pata nahi kis khet ka gajar hai.

Rahul : abe chutiye agar tere pass dimak hota to tu gunda nahi hota.
Misaal to sahi diya kar.
Khet ka gajar nahi muli hota hai.

Gunda : jaldi apna dialog bol time nahi hai hamare pass dusre aadmi ko bhi tapkana hai.
Time kharab mat kar 
Hum bhi business man hai.
Bhale hii hamara business inligal hai.
Magar time hamre pass bhi nahi hota.



Rahul ( Ips arvind se ) : bhai bhai tu fikar mat kar iska lund or uska Lund dekhe kidar jisne teri bhan par gandi nazar dali hai.
Bta kya karu uska idhar.

Ips arvind ( chillate hue) : phaaad de inki gand.

Or sare gunde shocked ho jate hai. Kuch pal ke liye.
Tabi ek gunda rod lekar rahul ki taraf aata hai or rahul par war karta hai.

Rahul ne rod pakar liya or us gunde ko laat mari. Or rod lekar tut pada sare gundo par kisi ke hath par rod lagti to kisi ke gand par bas sabke cheekne ki hii awaaz ati.
Rahul ki speed itni tezz thi ki kisi ko kuch shamaj nahi aa raha tha.
Ki kya ho raha hai.

Bas rod kay har war par sab gundo ke chikhy nikal rahi thi.
Or rahul bola raha tha.

Rahul : rod me hai dum ab toduga tumari gand dama dum.
Bohot shok hai mai medal pane ka ab le medal.
Pura hall gundo me chikne or chilane like awaze aa rahi thi.

IPS arvind ney us gundy ko apne upar se se hataya jisko rahul ne admara kar diya tha.
Or apni raasiya ( ropes) kholne laga
Or piche pura to jab tak saara khel khatam ho chuka tha.

Or ips arvind puri tarha shocked ho gaya tha.
Ki yeh kya ho gaya.
Tabi rahul hapte hue ips arvind ke pass ata hai.
Rahul (ips arvind se) : bhai mujhe maaf kar dena jo mane is ladki ko jo halat kaha agar mein aisa nahi karta to shayad is ladki ko koi nushan pohocha sakte the yeh log is liye isko safe karna jaruri tha.

Tabi ips arvind ander kamre me jata hai.
Or apni bhan ko thik or kapre pehne dekhta hai.
Ips arvind : neha tum thik ho na.
Neha : jii bhaiya.

Tabi rahul us boss gunde ka hath ( hand) pakad leta hai or rahul apni aakh band kar leta hai.

Tabi
Ips arvind apni gun se saaro gundo ko maar deta hai.
Or jaise hi ips arvind us boss gunde ke goli marta hai to rahul harbara jata hai.

Ips arvind rahul ke pass jakar
Arvind : tumne in sab gundo ki dhulai ki.

Rahul ( apna sir ( head) ghujate hue): nahi bhai vo to bas hath ( hand) saaf kar raha tha.

Arvind : tumne jo bhi kiya mere liye kiya tum to fariste ban kar aae ho mere liye.
Yeh kehte hue arvind roo pada or rahul ko apne gale se laga liya.
Arvind : aaj tumne ney meri hii nahi meri bhan ki bhi jaan bachai hai uski izaat lutne se bachai hai.
Ek bhai kay liye uss 1000 mout sey bura dard kya ho sakta hai.
Apni bhan ki apne samne izzat lutati dekhna.

Aaj tumne uss bhai ko bachaya hai.
Aaj se yeh arvind zindagi me kabi kisk ke pairo ke niche nahi gira .
Aaj yeh arvind tera qrazdar ho gaya.

Yeh arvind apni jaan dekar bhi tera yeh karz nhi utar sakt.

Rahul : bhai mujhe bhi pata hai ki dard kya hota hai.
Apni bhan ko na bacha pane ka dard.
Yeh dard duniya ke har dard se bada dard hota hai.
Or aisa karke mujhe paap ka bhagidari mat banao tum to mere bhai jese hai.
Koi apne chote bhai ke bhi per (leg) parta hai kya.

Arvind : tu bhai nahi tu to bhai se bhi badkar hai. Mere liye 

Fir
Arvind : jaldi kar hame jaha se nikalna hai.
Fir 
Or arvind apne aakh uchi karkar bolta hai.
Tu sach me mazak hii kar rahaa tha na tu meri bhan ka bf nahi hai na.

Rahul : bhai sach me mazak tha teri is gun ki kasam.

Arvind : jaldi kar hame yaha se nikalna hai.

Rahul : arvind bhai aap ja rahe ho. Aap ka bhai wala kaam ho gaya lekin security officer wala kaam khon karega.

Arvind : kar to diya in sabko maar kar.
Rahul : agar tu security officer wala kaam karta to is boss ko pakar kar information nikalta
Tujhe
Pata hai yeh mafia ke log hai ho is desh me atnakwaad felane aai the.
Par tune is boss ghunde ko tapka diya.

Gussa insan ka sabase bada dushman hota hai gusse ke sath kuch dimak bhi lagaya kar bhai.

Yeh sun kar IPS arvind rahul ko ghoor ghoor kar dekhta hai.
Arvind : tumari age kitni hai.

Rahul ( aakhe gol gol ghumate hue ) : 19 magar 20 ka ho jauga 5 month 45 days or 5 hours me.

Yeh sunkar ips arvind chup ho jata hai.

Rahul : chal koi naa.... tension mat le 
Tera kaam maine kar diya
Jab tu apni bhan ke pass gaya tha too mane is boss gunde ko darakar sab kuch puch kiya tha 
Tabi tune fire kar diya.

Ips arvind : kya bataya usne.

Rahul : yahi ki iss ghar me 500 core ke guns and drugs hai.
( Maine yeh baat nahi batai ki yaha par karib 1000 core rupees bhi hai.kiuki agar bata deta to yeh bewakoof saara paise sarkar ke hawale kar deta or usme se kuch lalchi log us paise ko dakar jate ya kha jate or sas bhi nahi lete)

Yeh sunkar Ips arvind harbara jata hai or idhar udar dekhne lagta hai.

Vaise hii me mouka dekhkar bohot tezz bhag kar un paise ko utta kar vaha se gayab ho jata hue.
Or jaha mane ram ko milne ke liye bulya tha vaha pohoch jata hu.........




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Yeh sunkar Ips arvind harbara jata hai or idhar udar dekhne lagta hai.

Vaise hii me mouka dekhkar bohot tezz bhag kar un paise ko utta kar vaha se gayab ho jata hue.
Or jaha mane ram ko milne ke liye bulya tha vaha pohoch jata hu.........

Ab aageee......

Jaise hii mein vaha phochta hu
Mere teeno dost vahi khade hote hai.

Tabi

Ram ( rahul se) : abe kha reh gaya tha
Kabse tera intzaar kar rahe hai.

Rahul ( ram se) : abe mane tuze bulaya tha tu to puri mandali lekar aa gaya.

Tabi.

Mohan bolta hai.

Mohan : kya hum tere dost nahi hai tuze to hamari yaad hii nahi aati.

Rahul ( teeno se) : tum sab to meri jaan ho or bhai bhi.
Jinno ne hamesha mera har kadam par sath diya hai.

Shayam : bas bas ab yeh bata ki tune laptop kiu magvaya.
Vo bhi abhi itni jaldi.
Koi bhi taxi nahi mil rahi thi to ek car rent par lekar ana pada.

Rahul : chal tu car bhi lekar aa gaya yeh kaam tune bariya kiya.

Mohan ( mohan aakh ki eyebrow uchi karte hue ) : car bhi lekar a gaya se tera kya matlab hai.
Kahi tu kisi ko kidnap to nahi karne wala.

Shayam : ha bhai pehle hii bata de 

Rahul mazak karte hue.

Rahul : kya tum meri dosti ke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte.

Ram : bhai teri dosti ke liye to hum apni jaan bhi de sakte hai .
Ek tu hii to tha jisne hum anath ko apni dosti ke kabil shamjha or hume padne ke liye apni pocket money se paise deta raha or shahara bhi diya.
Or tu hostel me nahi raha ek jhopri ( slum , juggi) me rehkar us hostel ke bhi paise bachakar hamari school ki fees me laga deta tha.

Or hame is kabil banaya ki hum apne per ( leg) par khade ho sake .
Kisi dusre ke aage hum bhik na mage....
Nahi to hum kahi road par bhikh mang rahe hote......
Ya kisi ke shoes saaf kar rahe hote.


Or isse ke sath teeno ke aakho me ashu aa jate hai.

Rahul ( nam aakho se ) : kabi tum apne aap ko anath mat kehna 
Nahi to tum mera mara muh dekhoge.
Or vo paise mane tume nahi apne bhai ko diye the.
Kya tum mere bhai nahi ho.

Shyam : bhai agli baar hum kabi tume anath nahi kahege or tum bhi agli baar kabi aisa mat kehna .
Hum tere jaise dost ko kho nahi sakte
Or tu to hamare bhai se bhi badkar hai.
Or tere nahi to hum kuch bhi kar sakte hai.

Rahul : to tum mera ek kaam karo.

Ram : bhai hukum karo.

Rahul saare boriya apne dosto ko de deta hai.

Ram : in sab boriyo me kya hai.

Rahul : in sab boriyo me 1000 caror rupees hai.

Teeno ek sath shocked ho jate hai.

Teeno ek sath : kyaaaaa.

Fir
Rahul unko saari baat bta deta hai.

Teeno ek sath : bhai tuze to kuch nahi hua na kya zarurat thi yeh sab karne ki agar vo gunde tere ko kuch kar dete to.

Rahul : bhai vo sab chor or meri baat sun.
In paiso ko tu is car me dal or apne ghar leja ( yeh teeno ek hii kamre me rahte hai rent par)
Or ek new company ki rajistration kara rohan ke naam se or company ka naam me kal batauga.
Or jo bhi document banane hai vo bana 
Or kal me tujhe miluga.
Or un saare document par sign kar duga.

Shyam : bhai rohan ke naam se registration kiu tera naam to rahul hai. Na

Rahul : vo sab bad me batauga.

Ram :magar bhai itne sare paise hum yeh sab kese karege.

Rahul : mujhe tum par pura vishwas hai.

Or teeno dost haa me sir ( head) hila dete hai.

Fir rahul ram se laptop lekar apne teeno dosto ko bhej deta hai.
Or rahul bike me baith kar nikal jata hai.

Apne ghar ki or

Raste me

Rahul ( mann me) : ye mere sath kya ho raha hai me kese kisi ke mann ki baat pad sakta hu kisi ke hath ( hand) ko pakad kar 

Or achanak mere bhagne ki speed itni tezz kese ho gai. Mana ki main roz jogging karta hue or ezcercis bhi karta hue.
Magar pehle to aise nahi hua.

Or bachpan se mere sarir me itni garmi kiu hai.
Jo normal insaan se bohot jyada hoti hai.
Iska kya raaz hai.

Or jab me behosh ho gaya tha to me sab ki awaaz sun sakta tha.
Ki kese meri bhan mujhe behosh dekhte hii pagal si ho gai thi.

Or payal mujhe thodi se bhi takleef me dekhti hai to jeena hii chor deti hai.
Jaise unke ander se kisi ne atma hii nikal lii ho 
Jaise duniya ka sara dard payal ke sarir me a gaya ho.
Jaise payal mere bina jeena hii nahi chahati ho.
Jaise payal ki dharkane meri dharkano se judi ho mere man ki har baat pad leti hai.
Me payal se kuch chupa bhi nahi pata.

Or nisha or ruchi bahar se chahe jitna hii hasti ho magar mujhe takleef me dekhkar unka dil bhi rone lagta hai
Yaha tak ki
Nisha ne apni gun tak utta li thi apne aap ko khatam karne ke liye.

Magar mein kuch kar nahi paa raha tha.
Apna sarir ek minute ke liye bhi nahi hila pa raha tha. 
Aisa lag raha tha ki mere sarir se meri atma nikal gai ho.

Mera dil jarur ro raha tha.
Apni bhano ka pyar dekhkar magar me us time apne aap ko bohot lachar mahsus kar raha tha.
Or main apni bhano ke liye kuch kar bhi nahi pa raha tha.

Or vo mahakaal kha se aa gaya tha.
Or yeh prerna haa yahi naam bataya tha usne.
Vo kese mere baare me itna janti hai.
Kya prerna ne jo meri bhano ko bataya tha vo sach tha.

Meri bhan mujhe us nazar se kese dekh sakti hai.
Main to uska bhai hu.
Or meri bhan mujhe kiss kese kar sakti hai.
Unke kiss me main itna kho kiu gaya tha.

Kya vo havas thi ya pyaar tha.
Magar vo to meri bhan hai.

Or prerna ne meri bhano ko iske liye mana kiu nahi kiya.

Or prerna ne meri bhano ko puri baat bhi nahi batai mere bare main ( rahul).

Or yeh sapne kiu ate the mujhko bachpan me bhi ate the.
Or vo auraat khon hai 
Or vo auraat mahadev ka naam kiu le rahi thi.
Kya vo meri maa thi.
To me jinke pass rehta hu.
Vo khon hai.
Or yeh sunaina khon hai.
Itne saare sawal hai or mujhe ek bhi sawal ka jawab nahi mila.
Kese pata lagau in sawal ke jawab
kya prerna sab kuch janti hai
Kya prerna mujhe kuch batayegi.

Rahul ( mann me ) : ek try karke dekhta hu prerna se kya pata kuch pata chal jae.

Vahi 
Prerna soch rahi thi ki rahul abhi tak aya kiu nahi.

Tabi
Prerna ko bike ki awaz aati hai or prerna shamaj jati hai ki rahul aa gaya hai.

Or prerna rahul ko darane or pareshan karne ka pura plan bana leti hai.

( Bhai ab yaha thodi rahul ki bhi acting dekh lo)

Jese hii rahul ghar me ghusta hai.

Or ghabrane ki acting karta hai.
Jaise usko kuch pata hii nahi.

Or rahul prerna se bolta hai.

Rahul : bhootni wali aunty apko mujhe khana hai to kha jao.
Par mere pyaar ko mujhse mat cheeno.

Rahul ki baat par prerna shocked ho jati hai.

Prerna ( gusse me) : me bhootni wali aunty nahi hu.

Prerna ( mann me ) : yeh kesa dharti lok hai iski bhan ne mujhe yamraj wali didi bana diya or isne mujhe bootni wali aunty bana diya 
Or log pata nahi mujhe kya kya bana dege.
Lagta hai sare experiments mere upar hii hone wale hai.
Bhagwan kha fas gai me.
Yaha me apna pyaar pane aai thi or usse ne mujhe aunty bana diya.
Kya ab me aunty lagne lagi hu kya.

Rahul : to aap khon ho aap ne hii to kaha tha ki aap bhoot ho to mere liye booth wali aunty hii to hue na.

Prerna ( behad gusse me ) : me booth nahi hu mera naam prerna hai.

( Dusri acting kiuki jab rahul behosh hua tha usse pata chal gaya tha ki prerna usse pyaar karti hai.)

Rahul socked hone ki acting karte hue.

Rahul : prerna tum yaha.

Ab prerna fir shocked ho jati hai.

Prerna ( mann me) : yeh ho kya raha hai mere sath me isko pareshan karne wali thi magar yeh to mujhe hii pareshan kar raha hai.

Prerna : tum mujhe jante ho.

Rahul rone ki acting karte hue bolta hai.

Rahul : prerna tum muze bhool gae apne pyaar ko bhool jae.
Hamare pyaar ko bhool gai.
Kiu prerna kiu.
Kya mere pyaar me koi kami thi.
Jo tum mujhe bhool jae.

Prerna ( naam aakho se ) : nahi rohan me tume kese bhool sakti hue.
Tumare pyaar ko kese bhul sakti hue.
Jis din me tume bhool gae na vo mera antim din hoga.

Rahul : tum jhoot bol rahi ho prerna tum mujhe bhool gai ho.

Isliye tum mujhe khana chahati thi.
Or tum apne bhoot or bhootni dosto ko bhi lekar aa gai jisse vo bhi mujhe kacha kha jae pura chaba jae bina mirch masale ke.

Prerna : me kisi ko nahi lekar aai rohan sacchi me tumse jhoot kiu bolugi.

Rahul : to yeh kya hai.

Or rahul laptop open karta hai or usme internet se ek bhoot wala vedio dekha deta hai.
Jisme bohot sare bhooto ki gang hoti hai or usme se bohot daravni awaaz aa rahi hoti hai.

Prerna yeh dekhkar puri tarha shocked ho jati hai.

Prerna sochne lagti hai kahi yeh sab booth uske bhaiya ne to nahi bheje rahul ko marne ke liye.

Prerna ka sara sarir kap kapane lagti hai.
Uske vo tasveer yaad aa jati hai jab rohan aag me jal raha tha.
Prerna ko lagne lagta hai ki kahi yeh sab booth milkar rahul ko na mar de.
Kiuki rahul abhi us shakti se shampaan nahi tha.
Jisse vo sab ka anat kar sake.
Jisse vo anant ban sake.

Prerna jaldi se rahul ke pass aa jati hai.

Or rahul ko pakad leti hai.
Prerna rote hue bolti hai.

Prerna ( un bootho se ) : mere rohan ko chor do.
Mere rohan ko chor do.

Or apni shaktiyo ka istemaal karne lagti hai magar vo yaha dharti lok me apni shaktiyo ka istemal nahi kar pati

Or prerna ko mahadev ki baat yaad aa jati hai. Ki prerna jab tak dikai nahi deti tab tak vo apni shaktiyo ka istemaal nahi kar sakti.

Fir prerna tezz tezz bolne lagti hai.

Prerna : rohaaan , rohaaan.

Rahul to yeh sunkar shocked ho jata hai ki yeh kya hua.

Achanak prerna itna rone kiu lagi.

Rahul ka pura plan kharab ho jata hai.
Kiuki rahul to bas thoda dara kar prerna se apne sawalo ka jawab janna chahata tha.

Magar yaha situation change ho jati hai.
Fir 

Rahul us laptop ko band kar deta hai.

Rahul prerna ko pakad kar apne gale laga leta hai.

Rahul : prerna kuch nahi hua hai.
Shant ho jao.
Please shant ho jao.

Prerna rote hue.

Prerna : nahi rohan jab tak tum vo talvar nahi le lete.

Tab tak tum mere bhaiyo ko nahi maar sakte.
Jab tak mere bhai tume nukshan pohochene ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai.
Mane tume kuch nahi hone dugi.

Rahul : prerna vo sirf ek tasveer thi. Jisse me tume thoda darana chahata tha.
Or kuch nahi.
Shant ho jao.
Or sabse badi shakti koi talvar ya kisi chiz me nahi hoti 

Sabse badi shakti to pyaar me hoti h 
Vishwas me hoti hai.
Or jab tak mere pass vo shakti hai.
Jab tak mujhe kuch nahi ho sakta.

Kya tumara pyaar mujhe kuch hone dega.

Prerna : mera pyaar kabi
tume kuch nahi hone dega.
Or agar tume kuch ho gaya to me bhi nahi jeena chahugi
Ab me or pariksha nahi de sakti.
Main parsksha dete dete thak gai hu.
Bas ab mein parisksha nahi de sakti.
Tume dubara nahi kho sakti.

Rahul nam aakho se 

Rahul : parisksha to har pyar karne wale ko deni padti hai kisi na kisi roop me.
Jabi to vo pyaar amar hota hai.
Gulab ke ped ( tree) ko bhi kaato ka dard or pira sehni padti hai.

Or tum mujhe sach kiu nahi bata deti ki me khon hu.
Mera bhano ka kya raaz hai.
Or yeh rohan khon hai.
Or rahul ke mann me jo sawal the vo sab puch leta hai.

Prerna ( mann me) : rahul agar mane tume sab kuch bta diya to uske baad jo tumare mann me sawal aaege main unka ka jawab nahi de paugi kiuki uske jawab mere pass nahi hai.
Tumari asli maa ka sawal.
Raaj lok sa sawal.
Kaal ka sawal.

Or bhi bohot sawal aaege tumare mann me jinke jawab mere pass bhi nahi hai.

Or kabi bhi kisi bhi sawal ka jawab samay se pehle janne ki kosis karoge to vo bas dukh hi degi.
Or kuch nahi.
Tumne sahi kaha agar pyaar kiya hai to dard bhi sehna padta hai.
Kadam kadam par pariksha deni padti hai.
Kiuki har kadi raaj lok se hii to jurti hai.

Fir prerna apne aap ko shant kar leti hai.
Or sara dard apne ander samet lati hai.
Or yeh jahir hii nahi hone deti ki vo kitne dard me hai.

Fir prerna rahul se bolti hai.
Jhooti hasi ke sath.


Prerna : kesi lagi meri acting mujhe pata tha tum bhi acting kar rahe ho or mujhe bewakoof bana rahe ho.

Rahul ( mann me) : Bhanchod isko itna emotional kar diya fir bhi has rahi hai.

Rahul : prerna sach me mujhe sab kuch yaad aa gaya hai.

Prerna : tume sab yaad aa gaya hai to mujhse itne sawal kiu puch rahe the.

Rahul : are main to mazak kar raha tha.
Ki tum dubara bta sako.
To verify ho jae.

Prerna : tume sab yaad aa gaya hai na to btao meri didi ka kya naam hai.

Rahul ( mann me ) : bhanchod ab iski didi khonsi aa gae.
Dimak laga rahul dimak laga.
Haa jo mein raat me sunaina bol raha tha kahi yehi to iski didi nahi hai.
Yahi bol deta hue.
Agar galat hua to koi bahana bana duga.

Rahul fir acting karte hue.

Rahul : prerna tum apni didi ko bhi bhool gai jo tumse kitna pyaar karti hai.
Tumare liye kitna kuch nahi kiya.

Prerna : naam batao naam.

Rahul : sunaina.

Isse ke sath rahul chup ho jata hai.

Prerna ( mann me ) : rahul sunaina ke naam ke bare mein janta hai.
Fir mahadev ne aisa kiu kaha ki rahul abhi kuch nahi janta .

Ab prerna thodi confused ho jati hai.

Jan rahul ko koi jawab nahi milta to vo ghabra jata hai.
Kahi usne galat naam to nahi le liya.

Rahul dubara bolta hai.

Rahul ( prerna se ) prerna mere paas aao na tumne dekhne ke liye meri aakhe bhi taras gai hai.

Prerna : main bhi tumare pass ana chahati hu magar mahadev ne...............

Rahul ( mann me) : BC ab or kitne papad belne padege.

Rahul : mahadev ne tume dikai na dene ke liye kaha tha.
Magar tum baki sab to kar sakti ho na iske liye to mana nahi kiya.

Prerna : baki sab se kya matlab hai. Tumara.

Rahul : matlab pyaar.

Is baat par prerna sharmajati hai.
Magar rahul ko kuch dikai de jab na.

Prerna : acha to tumme sab yaad ha to yeh bhi pata hoga ki mein or sunaina didi to hamesha tumare sath hai.
Tumari bhan ke roop me ( yaha prerna galti kar deti hai )

Rahul ( mann me) : yeh kya chakkar hai yeh meri bhan ke roop me kese ho sakti hai.
Sala dimak kharab ho gaya hai.

Chal apni bhan ka hii koi topic cherta hu jisse kuch pata chale.

Rahul : mujhe pata hai tum meri bhano ke roop me mere sath ho magar sunaina bhi meri bhan ke roop me mere sath hai.

Tabi
Prerna : or nahi to kya or kuch samay ke baad tumara or sunaina ka ek adhbud milan hoga jo kisi ne nahi dekha hoga.
Kiu tume nahi pata 
Kahi tum mujhe bewakoof to nahi bana rahe.

Rahul bohot pyaar se bolta hai.

Rahul : prerna kya tume aisa lagta hai ki main tume bewakoof bana sakta hu.
Main to bas isliye puch raha tha ki ruchi & nisha yeh sab hone nahi degi hum dono ko milne nahi degi.

Prerna : ha ruchi & nisha thodi tezz hai mujhe pata hai kiuki hai to mera hii ek roop na.

Rahul ( mann me) : acha yeh ruchi & nisha prerna ka hii ek roop hai.
Sali yeh kahani hai ya sach samaj me nahi aa raha.

Prerna : kha kho gae.

Tabi.

Rahul ab galti kar deta hai.

Rahul : ruchi & nisha tumara roop kiu or kese hai vo to meri bhan hai to tujhe pyaar kese kar sakti hai.

Prerna ( mann me) : ye kesa sawal puch raha hai kahi yeh mujhe bewakoof to nahi bana raha.

Prerna : bas ab bohot bewakoof bana diya ab main bewakoof nahi banne wali.

Prerna ( ghoorkar dekhte hue ) : bohot tezz ho tum or smart bhi kabi emotional karte ho kabi baato me phasa dete ho

Or prerna rahul ko pakad kar marne lagti hai.

(Rahul ko kuch dikai nahi de raha tha magar prerna ke sarir ko mehsus jarur kar pa raha tha.)

Isliye rahul prerna ko pakad kar kas kar gale laga leta hai or halke se prerna ke gardan par kiss kar deta hai. ( Kiuki rahul ko kuch dikai de jab na isliye jaha muh gaya vahi kiss kar diya )

Or prerna bohot buri tarha sharma jati hai.

Or prerna vaha se gayab hone lagti hai.
Or jate jate rahul se bolti hai.

Prerna : bach kar rehna ruchi & nisha se or agar tumne unka pyaar aacept kiya to dekho kya hoga tumare sath ( yeh baat prerna me rahul ko chidane ke liye kahi)

Or prerna ek tasveer dikati hai.

Or rahul us tasver ko dekhne lagta hai.
Or prerna vaha se gayab ho jati hai.

Rahul us vedio ko dekhkar puri terha shocked ho jata hai.

Rahul kabi itna shocked nahi hua tha jitna aaj ho jata hai.

Rahul ke tote ud jate hai us vedio ko dekhkar.

Or bohot ascharya chakit ho jata hai.
Or bolne lagta hai yeh kya hai.

Chalo dekhte hai rahul konsi vedio dekh raha hai...
1.Life ke full maze 
2.Pyar ki had paar
3.Pyaarki ekanokhi kahani
                                                   
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update to bahut hi shandaar tha ...
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likin ye kya bhai us video me kya tha ?
suspence me hi chhod diya.....
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suspence ka ek alag hi maja hai.....
ab jab tak next update nahi aa jata chain nahi aayega
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prerna se kuchh aisa puchana chahiye jo vo janta hi nahi ho....
jaise ki vo man kI baat kaise jaan gaya ....
uski speed itni tej kaise ho gai
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