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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)
#81
bhai holi special hi dedo
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(18-03-2019, 10:12 PM)Raj355407 Wrote: बहुत ही मस्त अपडेट है।
ये तीनो में जो चटपटी बातें हो रही है वो बहुत ही अच्छा लग रहा है

Thanks for supporting bhai
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2.Pyar ki had paar
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(18-03-2019, 10:25 PM)Raj355407 Wrote: पायल की जो बैंड बजाई है दोनों बहनों ने मिल कर वो पढके मजा आ गया

Thanks for supporting bhai
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2.Pyar ki had paar
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(19-03-2019, 11:22 PM)Raj355407 Wrote: waiting for more update

Bhai abhi post karta hu 


Thoda kaam me fas gaya tha
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(19-03-2019, 11:47 PM)Yuvi2890 Wrote: Bhut hi vdia uodate bhai mja aa gaya hacking wala update bhut hi vdia aage dekhte kya hoga

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(20-03-2019, 10:54 AM)Raj355407 Wrote: bhai holi special hi dedo

Bilkul bhai abhi deta hu update


Holi special me do update deta hu
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Update 19


              Mega update

Nisha : haa ruchi koi plan banana padega.

Fir dono aise hii baat karte hue niche aa jati hai kiuki unko school jo jana tha.

Vahi.....

Rahul ke kaamre me

Aab aageeeeee

Rahul bohot khus tha ki vo sonam se milega.
Tabi
Piche se payal tyaar hokar aati hai
Rahul ke kamre me
Payal dekhne me aaj bohot khubsurat lag rahi hoti hai
Or aaj payal ne salwar ( suit) pehna hota  hai.
Or usme bohot hii cute & hot lag rahi hoti hai......
Rahul  payal ko dekhne me hii kho jata hai....
Rahul ko aise ghurte dekh payal thoda sarmajati hai.
Or
Tabi
Payal ko apna first kiss yaad aa jata hai.
Jab usne rahul ke sath kiya tha.
Or sharam se paani paani hone lagti hai.
Or payal bhi kho jati hai rahul ki neeli aakho me.
Tabi
Piche se
Mala ( bua) aa jati hai.
Or mala bua bolti hai.
Mala bua : jaldi se niche aa jao niche khana ready hai.
Isse ke sath dono harbara kar bolte hai.
Maa , bua aap kab aai
Is par mala bua bolti hai.
Mala bua ( dono se) : vo kaam thoda jaldi khatam ho gaya isliye jaldi aa gai.

Rahul : bua vese aap gai kha thi apne hame bataya bhi nahi tha ki kha ja rahi ho.
Tabi
Payal bolti hai

Payal : haa maa apne bataya bhi nahi tha.

Mala bua : vo thoda kaam tha na to apne friend ke pass. Gai thi.
Dono acha bolte hai.
Or mala bua niche chali jati hai.

Fir payal rahul se bolti hai.

Payal ( rahul se) : rahul vo ladki hai na jiske papa ko humne bachaya tha na kya naam tha us ladki ka
Haa sonam
Uska aaj birthday hai
Me jab form submit kar rahi thi to mane
Date of birth deki thi.

Rahul to bohot khus ho jata hai.

Rahul : payal fir to hume kuch karna chahiye. Kiuki abhi vo apne papa ke accident se ghusri hai.
Shayad bohot udas ho.

Payal : haa magar kya
           Bechari ladki to bohot achi hai.
Or usse uske papa ke dukh se bhi nikal na chahiye.

Rahul : payal ek kaam karo usko coffee shop me bulao.
Baki me dekh luga
Usko call kar lena.

Payal : magar mere pass to number nahi hai.

Rahul : abhi uski mummy ka call aya tha aaj dinner ke pass liye par mane kaal (tomorrow ) ke liye bol diya tha.

Us number par call karke baat kar lo.

Fir mein payal ko wo number deta hue jiss number par mujhe call aya tha.

Payal sonam se call karke usse baat karne lagti hai.

Or main niche aa jata hu
Or niche ate hue me bhi ek call karta hue.

Apne dosto ( ram ) ko

Rahul : hello

Ram : kya baat hai badi jaldi tuje meri yaad aa gai. Acha bta tujhe kuch kaam tha kya.

Rahul : haa yaar tujhe mera ek kaam karna hai.

Fir me ram ko saara plan bta deta hue or aise hii thodi baat karke

Phone cut kar deta hue. Or break fast ke liye chair par baith jaya hue.
Or tabi payal aa jati hai.

Or vo bhi breakfast karne lagti hai.

Tabi
Mala bua  : beta college me addmission to karwa liya hoga.
To college kabse jana hai.

Tabi
Payal bolti hai.

Payal : haa maa admission to ho gaya hai.
Or college 45 days ke baad start hoga.

Tabi
Payal rahul se bolti hai.

Payal : rahul 10 baje ke liye bola hai.

Or main haa me gardan ( neck) hila deta hue.
Or chori der baad
Nisha & ruchi school ke liye nikal jati hai.
Or vahi
Mahakaal ki news ane lagti hai ki

Kese usne un gundo ko mara or jo sab vaha hua batane lagte hai.

Tabi

Mala bua bolti hai.

Mala bua : lagta hai ye mahakaal bohot khatarnak hai tum bachkar rehna thik hai.

Or payal & rahul haa me sir hila dete hai.

Or aise hii baat thori der tak karte hai.

Or 10 bajne wale hote hai to main or payal bike me baith kar nikal jate hai coffee shop ki taraf ....


Aaj bhi payal mere se chipak kar baithi hue thi.
Or
Aaj mane bolne ka soch hii liya
Or bike par hii payal se bola

Rahul : payal tu mujhse itna chipak kar kiu baith ti hai.

Tabi
Payal meri baat puri hone se bolta pehle bolti hai.
Payal : tujhe kuch problem hai.
Haa mujhe lagta hai tujhe kuch problem hai.
Main tumko aachi nahi lagti.
Jabi to mujh se door jane ki baat kar rahe ho.
Mujh se door jana chahate ho bolo na.

Rahul ( mann me) : BC yeh kya drama hai mane to bas itna hii pucha ki mere se itna chipak kar kiu baithi hai.

Bhar log dekhege to kya kahege

Magar isne to itna lamba chora bhasaan suna diya or kharcha pani lekar mujh par chad gai
Puri sonali didi ki tarha banti chali jaa rahi hai.
Bhagwaan bacha le mujhe.........
Or agar mane or kuch bola to or koi bhasaan suna degi isliye chup rehne me hii acha hee
Magar abhi kya Bolu.

Payal nam aakho se.

Payal : bolo na ab bolte kiu nahi.

Rahul : payal vo........vo........vo...

Payal : bol na rahul bol.

Rahul : vo tumare hath ( hand) me vo ring hai na vo mujhe chub rahi thi isliye bol raha tha.
Ki thoda apna hath ( hand) piche kar lo.

Payal khus hokar

Payal : to aise bolo na....

Fir hum coffee shop pohoch gaye....

Or mane dekha ki sonam coffee shop ke bhar hii khadi thi.
Or mujhe dekhkar bohot khuss lag rahi thi......

Main me subha hii is coffee shop me ek table book kar diya tha. Or aaj coffee shop me bahot kam hii log the....

Ham jakar jaha maine table book ki thi vaha par baith gaye.
Mere ek taraf payal baith gayi or dusari taraf sonam thi.

Or payal ne waiter ko 3 coffee ka order de diya. Main ne waiter ko ishara kar diya .
Jo subha cake .Ka order diya tha wo lane ke liye kaha. Apne dost ram se bolkar sara plan kar diya tha.

Magar sonam mujhe hii dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Payal : sonam baat kar ab chup kyu hai .
Ab to tumare papa bhi thik hai. To thoda khus ho jao.

Rahul : haa sonam tum kuch pareshan lag rahi ho bolo koi baat hai.

Sonam ( udas hokar ) : kuch nahi


Rahul : muze nahi lagta kuch to baat hai kya meri vajase problem hai.

Sonam : nahi nahi

Payal : rahul sonam ko tumse kuch puchna hai mujhe phone par bol rahi thi.

Rahul : kya puchna hai ( kya baat ho sakti hai iske papa bhi thik hoge subha sonam ki mummy ne bataya tha.)

Sonam : main bolati hu.

Payal : haa puch lee koi madad ki jarurat hai to rahul madad kar dega.

Rahul : haa pucho na sonam kya puchna hai.

Sonam tezi se saas lete hue or uska dil bohot  tez dharak raha tha.

Sonam : kya tumari kohi .....

Rahul : kya meri
koi books chahiye hai kya.

Sonam : kya tumari kohi GF hai

Payal ( gusse me) : kya pucha tune.

Rahul : payal usko apni baat to puri karne do.

Rahul ( sonam se) : meri kohi GF nahi hai.

Sonam : kyu kabi koi mili nahi

Rahul : muze gf banane me kohi interest nahi hai.


Sonam : aisa kiu kahi khas vaja

Rahul ( mann me) : Yeh puchna kya chahati hai. Hum ek dusare ko to thik se jante bhi nahi bas pehli bar kal dekha hai vo bhi iske papa ke accident me.

Payal ( mann me) : yeh kalmuhi mere  rahul se puchna kya chahati hai.

Or payal gusse me sonam ko dekh rahi thi.

Rahul : pahale tum batao ki tumne yeh sawal kyu puch rahi ho.

Meri bat sunkar payal ke face pe chamak aa gayi.

Sonam : muzu tum bohot ache lagte ho
              I LOVE YOU RAHUL.

Payal buri tarha se shocked
Main bhi shocked.


Chalo chalte hai sunaina ke pass............

Fir sahil ke papa jo bolte hai use sunkar sahil ke tote,( parrot), panchi, kauye ( crow) sab ood jate hai.
Or shocked or sharam se lal sab kuch ho jata hai....,...................



Nishant ( mushkurate hue) : tujhe bohot pata hai ki vo innocent hai. Kahi tum usse pasand to nahi karne lage.
Beta me bhi khufiya agency ka cheif hue saari khabar rakhta hu.

Is baat par sahil sharmane lagta hai.

Or rahi baat detail ki to haame pata to hona chahiye ki yeh kha rehti hai or khon hai.

Sahil ( mann me) : kya me sach me sunaina ko pasand karne laga hue .
Magar itni jaldi kese......
Or iski vo nili eyes kitni badi hai or khubsurat bhi.
Or itni intelligent  hai ki pucho mat
Or har problem kitni jaldi solve kar deti hai.
Uska dil kitna saaf hai or har kisi ki madad karne ko tyaar ho jati hai.
Vo kisi or ke liye itna kar sakti hai to apno ke liye kitna karegi.
Mere liye kitna karegi jab me usko 
Apne pyaar ka izar karuga.

Tabi
Nishant : sahil kha kho gaya.

Sahil harbarate hue.

Sahil : kuch nahi dad.

Tabi
Piche se ek aadmi  nishant se bolta hai.

Aadmi ( nishant se) : sir abhi khabar aai hai ki desh 2  me bohot bada dhamaka hua hai or puri building ? kuch minute me hii khatam ho gai.

News me bataya gaya hai ki usme Karin 500 antankwadi the par unke boss ka koi pata nahi chal paya hai.

Nishant ( aadmi se) : thik hai or pata lagao koi or information mile to shayad ye vahi hai jisne hamare computer ko hacked kiya tha.

Mujhe puri information chahiye.

Aadmi ( nishant se) : ok sir me puri kosis karuga or hamare ghufiya logh is kaam me lage hue hai.

Or vo aadmi apne kaam me lag jata hai

Nishant fir sahil se bolta hai ki chal mujhe bhi ghar ke liye nikar na hai.

Thodi der rukh me bhi tere sath ghar ki taraf chalta hue.

Or kuch ghate tak sahil ke papa kuch kaam or baat karte hai
Tabi kisi ka call par baate karte hai or uske baad nikal jate hai.
Ghar ki taraf.

Rastee me 

Nishant car me baithe hue sahil se puchta hai.

Nishant ( sahil se) : beta mujhe btao us sunaina ke baare me sab kuch.

Fir sahil saari baat apne papa ko bta deta hai ki kese sahil sunaina se mila.
Kese usne college ka server hack karke roma ki madad ki.
Or kese traffic signal hack karke un ladko ko hospital pochaya.

Uske piche ke karan ( bajaya) bhi  or roma ke bare me bhi.

Nishant kuch sochne lagta hai fir sahil se bolta hai.

Nushant ( sahil se) : thik hai beta ab tum jao or ghar bhi aa gaya hai. Hum baad me baat karege .
Abhi mujhe kuch kaam hai.

Or sahil apne ghar nikal jata hai 
Or apne room me chala jata hai.

Or apne room me jate hii sahil bed par let jata hai.
Or sunaina ke bare me sochne lagta hai.
Sahil ( mann me) : kya sach me main sunaina ko like karne laga hu. Papa ne aisa kiu kaha ki me sunaina ki like karta hue.

Jab papa ne sunaina ko mamuli ladki kaha jab mujh itna gussa kiu aya.

Mein kal hii sunaina ko apne pyaar ka izar karuga.
Or aise hii sahil sunaina ke baare me sochte hue kab so ( sleep) jata hai pata hii nahi chalta.

Vahi........

Ek shaks apni chair par baitha hota hai

Tabi dusara shaks bhagte hue ata hai or us baithe hue shaks ke pass ata hai.

Or vo shaks 2 bahot ghabraya hua hota hai.

Shaks 2 ( shaks 1 se) : robert sir gajab ho gaya.

Robert : kya ho gaya or jo kaam mane karne ke liye diya  us kaam ka kya hua.

Ghabrate hue shaks 2  bolta hai.

Shaks 2 : vahi to batane me yaha aya hue.

Robert : itna ghabra kiu raha hai.

Shaks 2 : robert sir jo hacking boss ne ki thi or us hacking me jo boss ne protocol banaye the 
Kisi ne usse tor diye or yahi nahi jaha se humne hacking ki thi.
Achanak 
Us building me dhamaka hua or hamare saare aadmi mare gae.

Robert puri tarah se shocked ho jata hai.

Robert : kyaaaaa.

Shaks 2 : haa sir me bhi hairaan hue ki aisa kese ho sakta hai.

Ek thandi saas lekar robat bolta hai.

Robert : dekh peter tere ko koi galat femi hue hogi.

Peter : robert sir mujhe koi galat femi nahi hue hai.

Robert gusse me

Robert : aabe saale tuje pata hai na vo hacking boss ne ki thi or us hacking ko to puri duniya ka koi bhi desh nahi tor paya.
To is desh me khon aa gaya

 jisne yeh karnama kar diya.

Peter : mujhe pata nahi.
Vahi pata lagane ki kosis kar raha hue.

Tabi piche se ek or shaks bhagte hue ata hai.

Shaks robert se bolta hai.

Shaks ( robert se) : sir gazab ho gaya.
                                  Sir gazab ho gaya.

Robert : pata hai muze bhanchod dimak mat kha or yeh bata ki us aaurat  ka kya hua.
Shaks : sir apko kese pata chala .

Robert ( shaks se ) : abhi abhi pater ne bataya ki kisi ne pehli baar hamara hacking protocol thoda hai.

Shaks : kyaaaaaaa 
    Boss ka hacking protocol duniya ka koi bhi desh nahi tor paya.

Robert gusse me 

Robert ( shaks se ) : abe tu kiu hairaan hai yeh bata ki us aauraat ka kya hua.

Robert ko gusse me dekhkar us shaks ki gand phat jati hai.

Vo shaks or jyada ghabra jata hai.

Shaks ( darte hue ) : Robert sir vo....

Robert : ab batayega bhi tuje pata hai agar vo kaam nahi hua to boss hamari gand fad dege or usko kha fekege vo mujhe bhi nahi pata.

Shaks : Robert sir hum us aauraat ko nahi pakad paye.

Robert gusse me

Robert ( shaks se) : ab teri gand me kisne danda de diya.

Shaks : sir vaha kou mahakaal aa gaya tha jisne hamare saare aadmiyo ko khatam kar diya.

Robort kuch sochte hue.

Robert : ye vahi mahakaal hai na jisne sung lee lu ko mara tha.

Shaks : haa sir ye vahi mahakaal hai.

Robert : saare gundo ko bol do or pata lagao us mahakaal or us hacker ke bare me jisne boss ka protocol tor diya or yeh kaam jaldi hona chahiye.

Agar boss ko thoda sa bhi pata chala to tume pata hai hamare sath kya hoga.

Robert : Peter tum us hacker ka pata lagao or mahaveer tum us mahakaal ka pata lagao.
Saalo tum dono rakshas ho tumare pas itne shaktiya bhi hai unko bhi use kar lo.
Unko kya gand me dalo ge.

Or dono mahaveer or peter nikal jate hai or chal dete hai india ki taraf.

Vahi
Robert : duniya ka koi insaan nahi bana jo hamari hacking tor sake.

Fir kuch sochte hue.

Robert : kahi isme us insaan ka hath ( hand) to nahi.
Fir robert thoda sa muskura deta hai.

Or ek call karta hai.

Robert : hello rakshas leader 

Fir vo usse kuch baat karke phone cut kar deta hai.

Vahi

Sunaina..............


Bhai update bohot jaldi type kiya hai kiuki mere pass time nahi tha to spelling nahi check ki.
Or fever bhi hai.
Itne din se update nahi diya tha to aaj mane mega update de diya shayad isse un sab update ki kasar puri ho jae.

Ab subha hiii dekhuga.

Update agar aapko acha lage to comment me jarur batana.
Like , comment or vote karo agar yeh story pasand aae to.
Apna review jarur Dena.
1.Life ke full maze 
2.Pyar ki had paar
3.Pyaarki ekanokhi kahani
                                                   
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Update 20


Kal raat me mega update ke sath aaj chota sa update bhi de dita 

Or ek call karta hai.

Robert : hello rakshas leader 

Fir vo usse kuch baat karke phone cut kar deta hai.

Vahi

Sunaina..............

Ab aageeeeee.............

Jab sunaina nishant ke office se bhar nikalti hai.
Or bhar nikalti hai.

Raaste me
Sunaina ko kisi ladki ki jor jor se cheekne ki awaz kano me sunai padi.........

Jaise hi sunaina ne awaz ki disha me nazar doudayi to sunaina ko kuch bhi nahi dikha.......
To sunaina ne socha shayad hacking rokne ki tension ke kaaran mere kaan baj rahe hai........
Thodi der me phir se wahi chillane ki awaz sunaina ki kaano par paadi to sunaina ko confirmed ho gaya ki kuch to baat hai.

Tabhi mujhe ek van me ek ladki jhakti nazar aayi jise koi khich kar kisi ne turant ander kar liya...
Or sunaina ne jaldi se apni scooty us van ki taraf dourane lagi.

Or 
Car jakar ek jungle me bani building par rukh gai.

Or usme se ek aadmi us car me se us ladki ko nikal kar..

Upar le jane laga.
Or sunaina ko us ladki ka muh nahi dekh paya.
Or dekhti hai ki us building me bohot saare gunde hote hai.
Jo guns liye khade hote hai.
Or sunaina yeh dekhkar shocked ho jati hai.
Ki is jungle ki building me itne saare gunde kya kar rahe hai.
Kya is sab ke bareme security officer ko nahi pata, forests department ko nahi pata.
Jab 
Vo aadmi us ladki ko le ja rahe hote hai to
Vo ladki bohot ro ( carry) rahi hoti hai.
Or usko lagta hai ki koi uski is lachari ko nahi sun raha.

Or aadmi 
Us ladki ko gasitte hue us ladki ko building me le jata hai.

Sunaina ( mann me) : ab me kya karu kese bachau us ladki ko kya nishant uncle ko call karu.
Ya security officer ko call karu
Agar security officer ko call kiya to shayad ho sakta hai ki vo bhi in logo se mile ho.
Itne saare log yaha guns ke sath hai or security officer ko pata na ho aisa ho nahi sakta.

Nishant uncle ko hii call karti hue.

Or sunaina Nishant uncle ko call karne lag jati hai.
Vahi call par

Nishant : hello

Sunaina : uncle me sunaina

Nishant : khon sunaina

Sunaina : uncle mujhe itni jaldi bhool jae jisne us hacking ko roka tha.

Nishant : ha ha beta bolo kese phone kiya.

Sunaina nishant ko puri baat bta deti hai.

Nishant : beta tum ghabrana maat me abhi kuch logo ko vaha bhejta hue.

Sunaina : uncle jaldi karo.

Nishant : beta thoda to time lagega.

Sunaina : thik hai uncle par jaldi ane ki kosis karna.

Tabi
Sunaina dekhti hai building se bohot saari ladkiya niche aa rahi hai.

Sab ladkiya ro ( carry) rahi hai.

Sunaina ( mann me ) : lagta hai in ladkiyo ko kahi or le jaya ja raha hai.
Ab me kya karu nishant uncle ko ane me abhi kuch time hai.

Ab kya karu 
Yeh log in sab ladkiyo ka kya karege mujhe bhi nahi pata.

Lagta hai mujhe us gagets ko istemaal karna hii hoga.
Magar vo abhi tyaar nahi hai.
Kya karu.

Fir
Sunaina sochti hai jo hoga dekha jaiga magar me un ladkiyo ko jarur bachaugi.

Tabi
Sunaina apne bag se koi chiz nikalti hai or uska button on karti hai.

Jese 
Hii button on hota hai 
Tabi vo chiz aakar lene lagta hai.

Or ek robot samne khada ho jata hai.

Tabi
Sunaina robot se

Sunaina : tume in sab logo ko rokna hoga

Robat haa me gardan hila deta hai.

Or robot un sab lago ke samne aa jata hai.

Or ussi ke piche sunaina bhi aa jati hai.

Tabi
Sunaina ( gundo se) : un sab ladkiyo ko Chor do nahi to acha nahi hoga.

Yeh robot tume nahi chorega.

Tabi

Gunda 1 : khon hai to or yaha kese aai.

Gunda 2 : agar aa hii gayi hai to isko bhi pakad lo 
Isko bhi hum boss ke pass le gaege.

Gunda 3 : nahi taar isko hum boss ke pass nahi dege.
Isko to hum apne pass rakhege dekh kitna mast maal hai.
Isko ragarne me maza ata aaega.

Gunda 4 : ha bhai sach kaha tune dekh ek dam doodh jesa colour hai isko dekhte hii me garam hone laga hue.

Sunaina ( gusse me) : tum aadmi bas ladkiyo ko havas ki hii nazar se dekhte ho.
Or unko kuchalna chahate ho.
Aaj tum sab maroge or kisi or ladkiyo par apni gandi nazar dalne ki kosis nahi karoge.

Sunaina robot se bolti hai maaro in sab ko.

Robot apne haath ( hand) ko shape change karke apne hath ( hand) ko gun bana leta hai.

Or vo gunde bhi un sabke liye tyaar ho jate hai or vo sab ek professional killer bhi the or sab 
Achanak se chup jate hai.
Koi ped ( tree) par chup jata hai to koi van ke piche chup jate hai.

Or robot ko abhi bhi sunaina ne sahi tarike se tyaar nahi tha 
To isliye vo idhar udhar firing karne lag jata hai.

Tabi
Ped ( tree) ke
Upar se ek aadmi us robot par khud jata hai. 
Or baki gunde us robot par firing kar dete hai.

Or yeh baat vo robert shamaj nahi pata kuchi der me uske purje dhile ho jate hai.

Or kuch hii der me vo khatam ho jata hai.

Or us robot ke saare purje alag ho jate hai.

Tabi

Gunda 1 ( sunaina se) : yeh kis ko pakad kar laai hai yeh to do minute bhi tik nahi paya.

Gunda 2 ( gusse me) : ab to me yahi iska in sab ladkiyo ke samne bich jungle me ek ek karke iska balatkar karege.

Gunda 3 : haa agar isme bohot aag hai aaj iski saari aag thandi kar duga.
Bohot der se mera lund machal raha hai.
Or sab gunde sunaina ko pakad lete hai.

Or bich jungle me sab ladkiyo ke samne sunaina ko lita dete hai.

Tabi 
Un ladkiyo me se ek ladki un gundo se bolti hai.

Ladki : please sunaina ko chor do bhagwaan se daro
Bhagwan tumko kabi maaf nahi karega

Tabi
Sunaina us ladki ko dekhte hii shocked ho jati hai.

Kiuki vo ladki or koi nahi roma thi jise vo van me daal kar building me le ja rahe the.

Gunda ( roma se ) : tujhe bhi apna yaha balatkar karvane hai kyaa.
Chup chap vahi kadi reh nahi to aaj hum is ladki ka balatkar to karege hii sath me teri bhi gand phad kar char kar dege apne lund se.

Roma ( gusse me) : tumari mout itni bhayanak hogi ki tumari rooh bhi kaap jaegi.
Or tum tadap tadap kar maroge.

Gunda 2 : khon karega humko tu maregi.

Or saare gunde tezz tezz hasne lagte hai.

Gunda 3 : isko bhi pakad lo pehele is ladki ( sunaina) ka balatkar karege pir aaj is ladki ( roma) ko bhi chodege.

Or sab gundo ne sunaina ko to pakad to rakha hii tha.

Tabi
Gunda leader : sunaina ke gale me hath ( hand) dal kar jese hii uske kapade ko phadne ke liye hath ( hand) dalta hai

Vese hii sunaina ke muh se kuch nikal jata hai bohot tez
Sunaina : rohaaaaaaan
Babaaaaaaaaa


Bhai aaj holi special par do update diye hai 

Ek mega update or normal update

Maze karo


Raj bhai asha karta hu ki apko yeh holi special update pasand aaega.
Apke liye hii meine do update diye hai.


Bhai itni mehnat karni padti hai update likhne me magar comment jyada nahi ate to thoda acha nahi lagta  isliye update late deta hu 

Mujhe pata hai is side par sab jyada tar adult story hii pasand karte hai.

Anyway enjoy friends

Keep comment

Sabko meri taraf se 

Happy holi
1.Life ke full maze 
2.Pyar ki had paar
3.Pyaarki ekanokhi kahani
                                                   
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Boht acha likh rhay ho
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Bhut vdia update bhai mja aa gaya
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(20-03-2019, 10:46 PM)Athra jutt Wrote: Boht acha likh rhay ho



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1.Life ke full maze 
2.Pyar ki had paar
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(21-03-2019, 12:00 AM)Yuvi2890 Wrote: Bhut vdia update bhai mja aa gaya

Thanks for supporting bhai.


And happy holi
1.Life ke full maze 
2.Pyar ki had paar
3.Pyaarki ekanokhi kahani
                                                   
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first of all happy holi....
update bahut hi rochak the ...
ab lag raha hai ki kuchh dhamakedar hone vala hai....
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waiting for more update
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(21-03-2019, 12:49 AM)Raj355407 Wrote: first of all happy holi....
update bahut hi rochak the ...
ab lag raha hai ki kuchh dhamakedar hone vala hai....

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2.Pyar ki had paar
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(21-03-2019, 04:34 PM)Raj355407 Wrote: waiting for more update

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Update 21


Tabi
Gunda leader : sunaina ke gale me hath ( hand) dal kar jese hii uske kapade ko phadne ke liye hath ( hand) dalta hai

Vese hii sunaina ke muh se kuch nikal jata hai bohot tez
Sunaina : rohaaaaaaan
Babaaaaaaaaa

Chalo chalte hai. Hero ki taraf..........

Payal shocked
Rahul shocked

Rahul ( sonam se ) : yeh to Mere liye achi bat hai. Par main kabi GF nahi banane vala.

Sonam : kyu .kya main buri hu.

Rahul : tum bohot achi ladki ho. Tumare nature acha hai. Tum dikne me khubsurat ho, shamjdar bhi lagti ho.

Sonam : pir bhi main tume pasand nahi hu .
Kyu ? 

Payal ( gusse me) : tume shamaj nahi aa raha kya rahul ne mana kiya.

Rahul : payal chup ho jao.

Rahul ( sonam se) : kyu ki main ek ladki se pyar karta hu. Or vo bhi muze pyar karti hai.
Par usne ek ghatna ke baad muz par vishwaas nahi kiya or muze chor diya ( yeh pyaar wali baat apko jab pata chalegi jab rahul ka hostal wala flashback shuru hoga)
Isliye main ne decided kiya hai ki main kabhi kisi ladki ke sath sirf friendship ke alawa kuch nahi sochuga pyaar to bilkul hii nahi.

Meri baat sunkar payal gussa bhi thi. Or khus bhi
Gussa isliye ki pehle rahul kisi or se pyaar karta tha. Or khus isliye ki maine sonam ko mana kar diya.

Sonam ( udas hokar ) : kohi nahi muze acha laga ki tum ne zut bolkar mera dil nahi dukaya.
Or mera galat istemal nahi kiya.
Muze acha laga ki tum ne muze sach sach bata diya.

Thodi der ham chup chap baite rahe . Pir sonam ne chupi thodi.

Sonam : kam se kam ham friend to rah sakte hai.

Rahul : haa, ham hamesha friend rahege.

Sonam : thanks.

Rahul : abhi thanks ke liye samay hai.

Sonam : kyu

Payal ( thoda gusse me) : kiuki abhi tak coffee nahi aayi hai.

Payal ki bate sunkar ham hasne lage mahol thoda sa halka ho gaya.
Par sonam bahar se hasne ka natak kar rahi thi.
Or under se ...................mera dil bhi sonam ki tarha tuta hua tha. Jo aaj or jada tut gaya.

Sonam : abhi tak coffee nahi aayi.

Rahul : aaa jayegi.

Rahul : wo dekho waiter aa raha hai.

Payal mera plan shamaj gai ki me sonam ka birthday manana chahata hue.

Payal ko yeh acha laga ki mane sonam ko mana . Kar diya.
Isliye pir mazak me payal bolti hai.
Jisse sonam ko koi dukh na pahoche or sanam thoda khus ho jaye.

Payal : par ye waiter ke hath ( hand) me to cake hai.
Hamne to coffee order ki thi.

Sanam shamaj jati hai or pir bhi anjaan banne ka natak karti hai.

Sonam ( mann me) : aaj mera birthday hai or aaj mere pyar ka aant ho gaya.
Ek taraf lag raha hai ki cake mere liye aaye.
Or dusari taraf lag raha hai ki waiter cake fake de.

Sonam : shayad kisi ka birthday hai.

Waiter hamare taraf aa raha tha.

Payal muzhse isharo me puch rahi thi ki kya main ne order kiya hai.

Rahul ne isharo me payal ko haa kaha.

Waiter hamare table pe cake rak kar chala gaya.
Sonam or payal cake ki taraf dekhne lagi.

Sonam ka dil jo mere vajase tut gaya tha.
Wo kam se kam cake dekh kar fir se jud jaye.
Cake ke upar sonam ka naam likha tha.
Cake par 17 candle lage huye the.

Fir sonam ne cake ki taraf dekha fir meri taraf .
Main sonam ki taraf dekh kar smile kar di . Sonam shamaj gayi ki cake main ne order kiya hai.

Rahul : happy birthday sonam 
Or sonam ke sath handshake kuya.

Rahul (mann me) : agar muze pata hota ki sonam muze propose karne vali hai to main yaha aata bhi nahi.
Magar pata nahi kyu dil ko bohot sakun milta hai. Sonam ko dekhkar.
Aisa lagta hai ki me barso sa pyaar karta hue sonam se.
Magar jo us ladki ne mere sath kiya uske baad me ab fir pyaar nahi kar pauga.

Sonam : thanks.

Sonam ( mann me) : ek taraf mera dil thoda or dusari Taraf mera birthday mana kar muze khusiya de rahe ho.
Tumare isi nature se muze.................................................................................. Aaj meri maa or papa ke siwa kisi ne muze birthday wish nahi kiya . Meri maa or papa ke baad tum pahele ho jisne muze wish kiya.
Tum ek taraf muze kahate ho ki hum friend rahege or ek taraf tum muze itni khusiya dete ho.

Sonam : tume kese pata chala ki aaj mera birhthday hai.

Rahul : payal ne jab tumara form jama kar rahi thi to usne tumari date of birth dekh liya tha.

Sonam : to is tara pata chala tume ( meri choti choti bato ka dyan rakate ho or kahate ho ki main tumse pyaar nahi kar sakta. )

Payal : haa maine hii rahul ko bataya tha ki tumara birthday hai.
Or kuch plan bana raha tha.
Par yeh cake order ke bareme muze kuch pata nahi tha.

Sonam : yeh cake rahul ne order kiya hai

Payal : haaa.

Sonam : fir se thanks rahul. ( Dekho payal ke bajaye tume mera birthday manaane ki jada fikar thi)

Payal : thanks ko maro goli pahale cake kat lo nahi to thodi der me candle gayab ho jayegi.
Sonam ne candle buza di .
Humne sonam ko birthday wish kiya 
Pir sonam ne cake cut kar diya.
Sonam ne payal ko cake khilaya.

Rahul : muze kab khilogi.

Fir
Sonam ne muze bhi cake khilaya or main ne sonam ko.
Jab main sonam ko cake khila raha tha.
Tab sonam ne apni aakhe ( eyes) band kar li.
Or mera hand se cake aise kha rahi thi ki iske bad wo khana khana chor degi.

Uske face ko dekhkar bhi yahi lag raha tha ki wo is pal ko dil se mahsus karna chahati hai.

Cake khane ke baad sonam ke aakho ( eyes) me chamak aa gayi uske face pe ronak thi.
Aisa lag raha tha ki use sab kuch mil gaya.

Payal : yeh tera birthday gift hai.

Sonam : thanks , vaise iske kya jarurat thi.

Payal 
Achanak se pata nahi kya bol deti hai.

Sonam : tu chup chap le, yeh rahul ki pasand hai. ( Payal ne sonam ko chidane ke liye aisa kaha).

Sonam : thanks ( rahul tum.....)

Fir main ne sonam ka hand pakad liya. 
Sonam meri taraf dekhne lagi ki main kya karne wala hue.

Payal bhi sochne lagi ki main kya karne wala hue.

Sonam ki aakhe to bohot kuch baya kar rahi thi. Ki wo kya soch rahi hai.
Maine jaldi se apne pocket se ek watch nikal Karen sonam ke hand pe laga di.
Fir main ne hand chor diya.

Sonam ko laga ki main hand pakad kar........................................

Payal ko pata tha ki main ne sonam ke liye watch li hai.
Agar main sonam ko watch nahi deta to payal muze pareshan karti or watch dene se sonam ab mere bare me kya sochegi . is baat se main der raha tha.
Kahi yeh fir se.....................

Sonam watch ko dekhne lagi sonam ko watch pasand aayi
Payal bhi watch dekhne lagi.

Sonam ne payal se nazar bachakar watch ko kiss kar liya .
Main sonam ke taraf dekhne laga


Sonam meri taraf dekh kar sharma gai.

Rahul ( mann me) : yeh maine kya kiya watch dene se to sonam..............

Muze kuch sochna hoga
Kahi yeh kuch galat na shamaj le.

Sonam : yeh to bohot sunder watch hai.

Payal : aakhir li kis ke bhai ne hai. ( Payal yeh bat bol kar sonam ko bata rahi thi ki rahul kya hai.
Sonam rahul ke liye nahi bani hai)

Tabi
Payal dekhti hai ki cake khane ke time uske upar kuch cake gir gaya tha.
Jisse uske kapade gande ho gaye the.


To vo rahul ko bolkar.
Apne kapade saaf karne coffee shop ke washroom me chali gayi.

Ab table par sirf sonam or rahul the
Sonam kabi meri taraf dekh rahi thi to kabi cake ko.

Fir
Pata nahi kiu
Maine ( rahul) ne cake ka tukada utakar sonam ki taraf badaya.
Sonam khus ho gai ki use main dubara cake khila raha hue.

Or
Sonam ne khusi ke sath cake kha liya.

Sonam : thanks rahul.

Rahul : sirf thanks , party chahiye ( sonam se picha chudane ke liye mere dimag me ek idea aaya)

Sonam : kal dungi party jab tum kal mere ghar aaoge. Mummy or papa se milne.

Rahul : party sirf muze chahiye. Party me sirf main or tum hoge.

Sonam : payal kiu nahi vo bhi to meri friend hai

Rahul : main party me tume pyaar karke birthday gift dena chahata hu.

Sonam : main kuch shamaji nahi.

Rahul : jaise tumne mere liye hue gift ko pyaar kiya vaise.

Sonam meri baat par sharma jati hai.

Rahul : kya muze ek din ke liye pyaar karne dogi ( muze pata tha ki is baat se sonam ko bura lagega main usse chudai ke liye bol raha tha.
Or aise bolne se sonam ko acha nahi lagega or sonam muze bhul jaegi)

Sonam : main kaise.......
Tumne to kaha ki .........
Main tumari Gf nahi hu........
Fir kaise........

Rahul : kya pyaar karne ke liye gf banaya jana jaruri hai.
Kya ek friend ki tara nahi kar sakte.

Sonam : agar tum mere Bf hote to main mana nahi karti....

Rahul : to kal ke liye main tumara bf ban jata hue. Or tum ek din ke liye.meri gf ban jao.

Sonam : tum pagal ho gaye ho .
Main aisa kese ........
Tum mere pyaar ka mazak uda rahe ho.

Rahul : tum khud socho agar thodi der pahale main tume haa kiya hota to tum meri gf hoti 
Pir kal tumare sath pyaar karke bol deta ki ab hum break up karte hai.
To fir.

Sonam : par main.....................

Rahul : main bas ek din ke liye tume gf banakar pyar karna chahata hue......

Agar tum bhi yahi chahati ho to kal watch pahan kar yahi coffee shop me aana same time nahi to watch fek dena.

Rahul ( mann me) : chalo sonam ki baat se pata chal gaya ki ab wo muze bhul jayegi.
Or meri di huyi watch bhi fek degi.
Jisse mein usko yaad aao aisi kahi chiz uske pass na ho.
Or main use bar bar ek din ki gf banne ko keh kar yeh dika raha tha ki 
Main sirf sharir ka bhuka hu.
Par ye baat muze pata hai ki me yeh kiu kar raha hue.)

Tabi
Payal bhi aa gai washroom se...........

Or fir
Humne bacha hua cake bhi finish kar liya.

Or 
Main payal ke sath ghar ke liye nikal gaya.

Rastee me....

Rahul ( mann me) : Pata nahi kiu muze pecheni mahsus ho rahi thi .
Jese koi mera naam le raha hai.
Muze yaad kar raha hai.
Khon jo sakta hai.

Mahadev uski madad karna. ( Yeh baat mane dil se kahi)

Tabi


Payal : rahul ek baat puchu.

Rahul : haa pucho.

Payal : tumne kha tha ki tum ek ladki se pyaar karte ho.
Yeh kab hua tha mujhe to pata nahi.

Rahul : jab me hostel me rehta tha .
Jab ki baat hai yeh. Or haa me abhi bhi pyaar karta hue.

Payal ( mann me) : mujhe lagta hai rahul mujhse pyaar nahi karta
Or ab mujhe lagta hai ki vo mujhe ab pyaar nahi karega.
Mujhe is bike se khood kar mar ( dead) jana chahiye kiuki me rahul ke bina nahi jina chahati or rahul mujhse nahi kisi or se pyaar karta hai.
Ek baar pahele puri baat puch leti hue.
Fir faisla karna thik rahega.

Payal : kya main jaan sakti hue ki vo khon thi.

Rahul : main tume batata hue par kisi ko batana mat or sonali didi ko to bilkul bhi nahi.

Payal : nahi bataugi.

Rahul : uska naam divya tha.

Payal : ek baar bataya to tha tumne uska naam jab tum hostel me the. Kya yeh vahi hai.

Rahul : haaa.

Payal ( udas hokar ) : tum ne to kaha tha ki usne tume chor diya tha.

Rahul : haa, shayad use yahi sahi laga.....

Payal meri baat sunkar khus ho gayi..

Payal : to fir tum kisi or ke sath pyar kyu nahi karte jaise sonam ya phir ...................

Rahul : ab kisi or ke sath kaise main pyaar kar sakta hue.

Payal : tum jiske sath shadi karoge.

Rahul : pata nahi ya fir me shadi hii na karu.

Payal achanak se bolti hai.

Payal : tum mere bareme kya sochte ho

Rahul : main shamja nahi.

Payal baat ko shamalte hue.

Payal : mera matlab hai kya tum muze friend nahi samaj the.

Rahul : payal tunme or sonali didi ne mere liye jo kiya hai vo duniya ki koi ladki nahi kar sakti.
Tum or sonali didi to mere liye sab kuch ho.
Duniya ki sabse best friend bhi.

Payal : fir bhi tumne muze nahi bataya divya ke bareme.

Rahul : muze khud nahi pata tha ki muze divya se pyaar ho gaya hai.
To tumko kya batata.
Jab pata chala ki wo muze kitna pyaar karti hai.
To tab tak der ho gayi thi.

Payal ( udas hokar ) : kya tum divya se itna pyaar karte ho.

Rahul : haa divya se me bohot pyaar karta hue 
Par apni sisters se jyada nahi. Or

Payal ( khushokar ) : or

Rahul : meri bhan meri zindagi hai.
Or tum meri bhan ke sath sath meri sabse achi friend bhi to ho.

Payal : sach

Rahul : haa, sach

Payal ne mujhe piche se bohot kas kar gale laga liya.

Payal ( mann me) : rahul ne mujhe sabse acha friend bana liya hai or jald hii muz se pyaar bhi karne lagega. 
Or us kalmuhi divya ko bhul jaega.
Kabi vo divya mujhe mili na to uske to me ache se khabar lugi. Agli baar mere rahul ko dukh pohochane se pehle lakh bar soche gi.

Tabi 
Payal : par tumne birthday ke din sonam ka dil kiu dukaya.

Rahul : mane use sach batakar friend banaya hai.

Payal : thik hai par ab sonam se door rehna.

Rahul : jo hukum mere aaka.

Payal : or muze friend mante ho to sab bataya karo.
Usse tumara mann halka ho gaega.

Rahul : thik hai aage se sab bataya karuga

Payal ( mann me) : are mane to prerna didi se to pucha hii nahi ki vo rahul ko kese janti hai.
Kahi prerna didi bhi to nahi
Nahi nahi yeh nahi ho sakta.................................................
...
Aaj hii unse ache se baat kar lugi or mujhe sonali didi ke pass bhi to jana hai. Nahi to vo bohot gussa hogi.
Kiuki us raat wali baat ko na batakar
Vo mujh par bohot vishwas karti hai.
Me aaj hii jakar unhe ache se bta dugi or shamja bhi dugi jo prerna didi ne bataya tha.

Isse ke sath hum ghar pohoch jata hue.
Or bike khadi karkar jab ghar me ghusta hue to.
Main fir
Mala bua ke face par pareshani ke bhav dekhta hue.
Or mala bua jo bolti hai me usse shocked ho jata hue.

Chalo chalte hai sunaina ki taraf............
1.Life ke full maze 
2.Pyar ki had paar
3.Pyaarki ekanokhi kahani
                                                   
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bahut hi sundar update hai
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writing style bahut hi mast hai
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Bahut sandar
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