Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)

[Rohan1234]

Aab Bhai yaha par char jagah ka jikar hoga

Pehla dharti me reh rahe insaan jis jagah ko me (dharti lok ) kahuga
Dusra patal yaha aasur rehte hai.. ....jis jagah ko me (patal lok ) kahuga
Tishri jaha hamare hero ka jaha dharti se pehle janam hua tha magar kisi karan vash use dubara punar janam lena pada us jagah ko me (raaj log ) kahuga..............
Or jaha bhagwaan rehte h us jagah ko (bhagwaan lok) kahuga.


Patal lok characters
Is lok me main 4 aasur ka raaj chalta hai. Or 

ek un aasuro ki bhan hai.

Or ek aasur guru hai.

Baki uski sena (soldiers) vahera hai.

Ab chalte hai. Introduction ke taraf
Aasurraj ( ye Patal lok ka raja hai.). Maha shaktishali jiski shakti ki koi seema (ye koi ladki nahi hai.) Nahi hai. Maha vidvansh Kari hai ye
danvasur( ye aasurraj ka dusra Bhai hai.)
kamasur ( ye aasurraj ka tisra Bhai hai )
kutrasur (ye aasurraj ka 4 bhai hai.
Prerna ( ye Charo Bhai ki ekloti bhai hai).

In pacho ko kuch vardan prapt hai. Vo samay ane par pata chal jaega.....

Or ek aasurguru hai ( ye aasuro ke guru hai.)

Bhai characters koi shamaj Na aae ho to bta Dena......


New characters (hero family)

Rahul : hamare story ka hero
Age : 19 years
Colour : blue eyes ( nili aakh)

(Ye apni bua ke pass rehta hai. kiu ye bhi age ki story me pata chal jaega.)

Or boxing me bhi best hai or padai me bhi bohot acha hai jyadatar jim karna or jogging karna pasand hai or dekhne me bohot handsome lagta hai or bohot attractive bhi...

Mala : ye rahul ki bua hai 
Age : 35 years
Colour : simple and attractive
Or ek dum slim hai.
( Ye housewife hai or ghr par hii rehti hai or apne sabhi beti or rahul se bohot pyaar karti hai)

Mohan : ye rahul ke phufa hai 
Age : 38 years
Look : simple & fair

or kaam ( work) ke silsile me bahar hii rehte hai or bohot kaam ghr ate hai.

Payal : ye rahul ki bhan hai ( mala bua ki beti) 
Age : 19
Colour : ek daam dhood ki tarha gora
Figure : ek dam jabardast & khubsurat

dil ki bohot saaf hai or rahul ki same age ki hai 
magar inki ek problem hai ki ye jyda tar padai me ghusi rehti hai. Or hamesha class me top karti hai...
Ek or baat hai isme vo aage pata chal jaegi.

Ruchi or nisha : ye bhi rahul ki choti bhan hai (mala bua ki beti) 
Age : 18 hai dono ki
Colour : bohot jyada attractive 

Vese dono ki age mai sirf 1 ( one) minute ka farak hai isliye ye twins hai..

Or ek or baat ye dono bohot hii natkhat (setan ) hai magar apne bhai rahul ki haar baat manti hai

Dekhne me bohot hiii cute ek dam pari ki tarha hai....

Hamesha mazak karti rehti hai...


New characters of heroine 
Heroine - sunaina
age 19
Height 5.8 
Figure jabardast
Colour - blue eyes
Very cute girl and very modern magar ek khaas baat hai isme ye IT ( information technology ) ke bhi baap hai 

Father - suresh 
Age - 40 
Height - 5.10
Magar abhi bhi young lagte hai or inka chota sa khudka business hai 
Mother - rinky 
Age -38
Colour - fair & attractive 
Ye house wife hain.
Or apni family se bohot pyaar karti hi.

[Rohan1234]

Update 8


Patal lok

Aasur guru : ek raasta hai ..
Vo hai mahadev ( mahakaal)

Kamasur : vo hamari madad nahi karege apko pata hai aasur guru kiuki .................

Aasur guru : muje pata hai.
Magar prerna ki to madad karege naa.....
Kiuki.................
Ab aagee.....

Aasurraj : magar prerna ( charo assuro ki ek louti bhan ) firse hamare raste me aa gai to

Aasur guru : aisa nahi hoga.

Fir aasur guru unke kaan ( ear) me kuch bolte hai 
Jise sunkar dono aasur ke chehre ke bhav badalne lagte hai
Or unke chehre par karilana muskurahat aa jati hai.
Or dono aasur ( kamasur or aasurraaj ) chal dete hai prerna ke kaksh ( kamre) ki or 
Vahi dusri or 

Ek ladki apne kaksh (kamre) me kisi yaad me ro (carry) rahi hoti hai.
Or vo ladki bade masumiyaat ke sath bol rahi hoti hai.
Ladki : kitna intzaar karna padega tumara tum kab aaoge 
Ab to mere ashu ( tear) bhi sukh gaye hai ro ro kar.
Mujhe to ye bhi nahi pata ki tum kha ho.
Tumara punar janam kha hua hai.
Dev lok me hua hai
Ya jinn lok me hua hai.
Ya pari lok me hua hai
Ya dharti lok me hua hai.
Me is kaksh ( kamare) se bhar bhi nahi jaa sakti bhaiya ne mujhe itne saalo se kaksh ( kamre ) me band jo kar rakh ha hai..

Ab tum nahi aye to me mirityu ( dead ya merna) ki god me sona (sleep) pasand karugi. Kiuki ab mere se or intzaar nahi hoga.
Kitne saal bit gaye tumara intzaar karte hue

Din bhar bhatakte rante hain armaan tujhe milne ko,
Na yeh dil thehrta hai na tere intezaar rukhta hai,
Kin lafzo main likhu main apne intezaar ko tumein,
Din raat din raat ki bechaini hai, yeh aath pehar ka rona hai,
Asar bure hai furkat main, maloom nahi kya kar baithu.

Fir
Vo ladki apne pyaar ko yaad karte hue...

Mahadev ki murti ki or jaane lagti hai 
Tabi 
Piche se dono aasur jate hai 
Or aasuraaj bolta hai.

Aasuraaj : bhan prerna tere liye khus khabri hai ..
Prerna ( dono aasur se ) : itna kast ( pareshan ) pahucha kar tumara jii nahi bhara 
Itna jurm to devki mata par b bhi nahi kiya hoga us kansh ne jitna atyaachar tumne mere upar kiya hai.
Or ab bhi jee nahi bhara ,
Jo dubara mujh par atyaachar karne aa gaye 
Tumne to mere pyaar tak mujse chiin liya hai.,
Abhi bhi koi kasar reh gai hai to vo bhi pura kar lo 
Magar tum mujse kabi bhi us talvaar or us locket ka raaj nahi jaan sakte..
Or vo kha hai vo bhi nahi..
Vo sirf mere pyaar ki hai.
Chahe tum meri ab jaan bhi le lo..
Kiuki ab jeene se kya fyda kiuki mera mera pyaar to mere pass hai nahi...

Aasuraaj katilana muskurahat ke sath bolta hai.

Aasuraaj : mere ladli bhan tere jeene ka fyda hai , 
Or me tere se us talvaar or locket ke baare me janne nahi aya hu.
Or jo mane tum par jo aatyachaar kiye bhai.
Uske liye hume maaf kar do.
Or me to tumare liye khuskhabri lekar aya hu.
Us ladke ka janam aaj se 17 saal pehle dharti lok me kabka ho chuka hai.

Abhi hame aasur guru ne bataya hai.

Prerna ( khusi se) : sach bhaiya ( or prerna khusi se jhumne lagti hai)
Fir 
Dubara achanak se rone lagti hai.
Prerna apne dono bhaiyo se bolti hai.
Prerna : muje kiu bta rahe ho isme tumara koi sharyantr ( shajish ) to nahi kiuki tumne .............?.....................
Or usne apna sarir tyaag diya.

Kamasur : bhan hame maaf kar do magar hame tumara dukh nahi dekha gaya isliye humne aasurguru se pata lagane ke liye kaha ( jhoot ). 

Prerna : fir me abhi darti lok jati hu.

Aasuraaj (mann me) : bol to ase rahi hai jaise us kawaj ( shield ) ko torkar dharti lok pahuch jaegi.
Us shield ko torna itna asaan hota to mujhe itne samay ke liye apni shaktiya nahi gavani parti.

Or isko manane ke ke liye itne papad bhi na belne padte.

Fir aasuraaj prerna se bolta hai.

Aasuraaj : nahi ja sakti kiuki vo kawaj ( shield) jo uske ..................... Se bani hai 
Vo hame dharti lok nahi jane degi.

Prerna ( udas hokar ) : vo shield to koi bhi nahi tor sakta.

Kamasur : haa ye to hai.
Magar ek shaks hai jo tume vo shield torne ke bare me bta sakta hai..

Prerna ( khus hokar) : kon hai vo bhaiya.

Aasuraaj : mahadev 

Prerna : vo hame nahi batayege..

Kamasur : fir hum ab kar bhi kya sakta hai.
Chalo bhai.
Or dono aasur bhar aa jate hai.

Kamasur ( aasuraaj se) : humne aasurguru ke kehne par prerna ke mann me us kawaj ( shield) torne ka beej to daal diya.
Magar kya vo usme kaamyaab hogi..

Aasuraaj : dekhte hai kya hota hai.

Vahi prerna
Apne dono bhai ( aasuraaj or kamasur ) ke jane ke baad.

apne kaksh ( kamre) ka darvaja sahi se band kar leti hai.
Or mahadev bhagwaan ki murti ke paas jakar unke charno me baith jati hai.

Or prerna mahadev bhagwaan se bolti hai
..............

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[Rohan1234]

Update 9 


Vahi prerna
Apne dono bhai ( aasuraaj or kamasur ) ke jane ke baad.

apne kaksh ( kamre) ka darvaja sahi se band kar leti hai.
Or mahadev bhagwaan ki murti ke paas jakar unke charno me baith jati hai.

Or prerna mahadev bhagwaan se bolti hai

Ab aagee..........

Prerna ( mahadev se ) : baba prakat hoiye aaj aapko prakat hona hi hoga.
Mujhe Apne pyaar se milane ke liye aapko ana hii hoga 
AAP apni putri Ko Aisa rota hua kese dekh sakte hai.
Baba ( mahadev) prakat hoi ye 

Thodi der intazaar karne ke Baad bhi kuch nahi hota to fir prerna bolti hai..

Prerna ( Mahadev se) : itne kator mat baniye baba mere apne bhaiya ne to mujse mere pyaar Ko chin liye tha.

Abhi muje pata chala hai ke mere pyaar ka janam dharti lok me bahot samay pehle ho chuka hai.
Kamse kaam aap to apni is putri par reham kariye..
Meri puri zindagi to bas rohan ( Rahul ka punar janam ka Naam) par suru hoti hai or rohan par khatam.
Ek asha ki kiran muje dikhai di hai..
Meri madad karo baba..

Mane saari zindagi bas aapki bhakti ki hai. Or apne pyaar Rohan ko yaad kiya hai.

Jabse vo gaya hai bas intzaar kar rahi hu ab mujh se intzaar nahi hota ..

Ise ke sath prerna bohot dard ke sath rone lagti hai..

Acha aap meri baat nahi sunoge thik hai 
Fir aap 
Apni putri ko marta hua dekho kiuki me rohan ke bina jii nahi sakti..

Or fir 
Prerna apni shaktiyo se tirishul ka dyaan karti hai.
Or trishul uske haath ( hand) me aa jata hai.
Or 
Jese hii vo trishul ko apne pet ( stomach) 
Me marne wali hoti hai.

Tabi 
Usse kuch yaad aa jata hai.

Or achanak prerna trishul ko phek dati hai.

Me mar bhi nahi sakti baba
mane rohan se vada kiya tha ki me us talvar ki raksha karugi...

Ab me kya karu babaaaa....

Tabi uski mann me uski didi ( sunaina ) ka gana yaad aa jata hai...

Or vo us gane ( song) ko mahadev ke charno me jakar gane lagti hai.

Bohot dard ke sath...

Baba tere charno ki ,
Agar dhool jo mil jaye , sach kehti hu bas meri taqdir badal jae,
Sunte hai tere rehmat din raat barasti hai,
Is daya ke sagar se, ek boond jo mil jae,
Mere pyaar rohan se mila do na,
Meri zindagi sawar jae, ab intzaar na hota hai,
Meri madad karo baba,
Yeh mann baba Chanchal hai, isse kese mai samjav,
Jitna isse sham jau utna machal jae,
Pyaar to logo ko jeena shikata hai,
Mere rohan se mila do na, ab mujhse sawar na ho paye,
Baba tere charno ki dhool jo mil jaye,
Ye nis chal prem hai, yeh baba lalach nahi is me, rohan hai meri zindagi ek baar mila do na, to meri zindagi sawar jae,
Didi ( sunaina) ko to milaya tha mujhe bhi mila do naa, apni putri par reham karo baba, aapki putri khus ho jae.

Isse ke sath prerna behosh ho jati hai.
Tabi ek tezz Roshni samne chamkne lagti hai.
Or vo dheere - dheere ek akar lene lagti hai.
Or samne mahadev or Parvati mata prakat ho jati hai,

Mahadev ( prerna se) : utto putri 

Tabi prerna siskte hue mahadev or mata parvati ko dekhne lagti hai 
or mata parvati ke gale lag jati hai,

Mata parvati ( prerna se) : sunaina ki tarha tere maan me bhi rohan ke liye bina lalach ka prem hai.
Putri bol tuje kya chahiye.
Mere se tera ye dard dekha nahi gaya..
Isliye mahadev ke sath me bhi aa gai..
Bol putri tujhe kya chahiye 

Mahadev ( prerna se) : haa putri bol sunaina meri sabse pyaari putri hai vese hii tu bhi to hai,
Aaj tujhe jo bhi chahiye bol putri..

Prerna mata Parvati ke gale se hatkar 
Rote hue mahadev or mata parvati ke charno me gir jati hai 
Or tezz tezz rone lagti hai..

Mata parvati : putri ab rona band karo nahi to rohan ke dil par kya guzregi pata hai tuje 
Rohan to bas tumara or sunaina ka hai or kisi ka nahi ho sakta

Prerna rote hue mata Parvati se bolti hai
Bohot masumiyaat ke sath.

Prerna : me kya karu maa ye ashu rukhte hii nahi mujhe mere pyaar rohan se milna hai maaaa .

Mahadev ( prerna se) : magar beti agar tu dharti lok rohan se milne gai to tujhe kuch dard bhi jhelne padege.
Jo me nahi chahata ki meri putri vo dard jhele...
Isliye me tere se milne nahi aa raha tha..

Prerna : baba me har dard jhelne ke liye tyaar hu bas mujhe rohan se mila dijiye..

Mahadev : soch lo kiuki me nahi chahata ki tum us dard se guzro.

Prerna : mane soch liya hai baba rohan se door rehne ka dard jhelne se acha hai uske pass rehkar dard jhelu 
Kamse kaam mujhe ye khusi to hogi ki mera pyaar mere sath hai.
Fir 
mujhe duniya ka har dard bhi kaam lagega.
Mahadev kuch or bhi bolne wale hote hai
Tabi 
mata parvati mahadev se bolti hai.
Mata parvati ( Mahadev se ) : prabhu baat maan jaege na mujh se meri putri ka dard ab or nahi dekha jata or ab aap kuch nahi bolege..

Mahadev ( prerna se) : putri agar tumne faisla kar hii liya hai to thik hai.
Magar
tum usko jab tak dikai nahi de sakti jab tak jab tak vo................Usse nahi mil jati..

Or 
Jab tak tum apni shaktiyo ka istemaal bhi nahi kar sakti jab tak.......................................,.hai.

Fir Prerna khusi se jhumne lagti hai.

Fir 
Prerna mata parvati se badi masumiyaat se puchti hai

Prerna ( mata parvati se sarmate me): maa itne varsh (saal) guzar gaye hai kahi me unke samne me buriya (old) to nahi lagugi na..

Mata Parvati ( haste hue) : nahi putri aisa nahi hoga tum sab usse umar ki ho jaogi 
Jis umar ka rohan ( Rahul) hai.

Mahadev ( prerna se) : tume mera ek kaam bhi karna hoga dharti lok Jakar 

Prerna : kya mahadev 

Fir Mahadev Prerna ke kaan me kuch bolte hai.
Mata parvati ( prerna se) : putri tumne itna acha gana ( song) gakar mujhe or Mahadev ko bohot khus kiya hai or tumne hum dono se kuch maga hii nahi or me kuch bhi nahi sunugi 
bol na putri 
Tujhe kya chahiye Mahadev or mujhse
Agar tumne nahi maga to mujhe or mahadev ko acha nahi lagega..

Prerna : maa or baba aap se me samay ane par mang Lugo.... Plzzzz

Mahadev ( prerna se ) : thik hai putri.
Or hamesha khus raho...

Or fir mahadev or mata Parvati vaha se chale jate hai..

Vahi darti lok me

[Rohan1234]

Update 10


Chalo ab chalte hai dharti lok ki taraf.....

Jab me college pahochta hu to un ladko ko dekhkar hairaan ho jata hu.....

Ab aagee.....................

Samne se teen ladke aa rahe hote hai 
Un ladko ne jaise hii muje dekha bhagte hue mere gale lag gaye..

Rahul un ladko se 

Rahul : tum yaha kese 

Ladka 1 : bhai tu jabse hostel se gaya hai hamara bhi mann nahi laga...
( Bhai rahul mala bua ke ghar me rahne se pehale hostal me rehta tha. Uske baad vo mala bua ke pass aa gaya. Ye baat Age ke update me pata chalegi.. )
Tabi 

Ladka 2 : fir jese hii hamara college khatam hua hum is college me admission ke liye aa gaye..

Ladka 3 : magar bhai tu yaha kese 

Rahul ( un ladko se) : bhai hostel se jane ke baad me apni bua ke paas rahane aa gaya tha. 
Or yaha college me admission ke liye aya hu.
Tabi 
Teeno ladke ek sath bolte hai fir to maza aa gaya kiuki hum bhi isi college me admission ke liye aae hai.

Achanak se payal bolti hai 

Payal ( rahul se) : rahul yeh kon hai..

Rahul ( payal se) : payal yeh mere dost hai.

Payal ( rahul se) : Mane to kabhi nahi dekha inko 
Tabi ladki 1 bolta hai.

Ladka 1 : Rahul ye payal hai na teri bhan 

Or rahul haa me sir ( head) hila deta hai.

Tabi ladka 2 bolta hai

Ladka 2 : payal didi aap hame nahi janti magar hum apko jante hai rahul bohot tarif karta tha payal didi or sonali didi ( yeh bhi rahul ki bhan hai. Jab mein rahul ki maa ka character btauga jab pata chal jaega) ki 

Apni tarif sunkar payal khus ho jati hai.

Tabi ladka 3 bolta hai.

Ladka 3 : payal didi hum rahul ke hostel ke friend hai.

Tabi payal bolti hai 

Payal ( teeno se) : acha vese tum sabka naam kya hai.

Ladka 1 : mera naam ram hai.
Ladka 2 : mera naam sohan hai.
Ladka 3 : mera naam mohan hai.

Payal (teeno ladko se) : well nice to meet you.
Fir rahul or teeno me kuch bate hone lagti hai.
Fir payal bolti hai.

Payal : hame form bharne nikalna chahiye nahi to addmissio closed ho jaye.

Fir 
Sab Jane lagte hai form bharne ke liye
Fir
Achanak
Payal bolti hai me to pen lana bhul gayi
Tabi teeno ladke bolte hai hum bhi pen lana bhul gaye.

Tabi 

Rahul bolta hai me abhi bhar jakar stationery se pen kharid kar lata hu.
Jab tak tum form lo 

Or chaaro haa me sir ( head) hila deti hai.

Or Rahul apne documents bhi payal ko dekar bhar stationery ke liye nikal jata hai.
Pen lene..

Jeese hii Rahul pen lekar stationery se nikalta hai.
To dekta hai samne logo ki bohot bhir lagi hue hoti hai.
( ab Me rahul ko mein kahuga) 
Main ne bhi jakar dekha. Or jaise hii maine dekha meri halat kharab ho gai...

Main ne dekha ek aadmi khoon se lath path pada hua hai or sab log Tamasha dekh rahe the. 
Main unke pass gaya or sarko uthakar apne god main rakha.
Sir ( head) se bohot khoon nikal raha tha.

Main : yaha par ek aadmi pada hua hai or aap log khade khade tamasha dekh raahe ho.
Aadmi 1 : dekho hum kisi jamele main nahi padna chante security officer ke jamele main padna nahi hame.

Aadmi 2 : or nahi toh kiya kon security officer ke chakkar katega.

Main : agar yaha par aapke apne pade hote toh phir bhi aise hii bolte. Kam se kam ambulance toh bula lete. Main bhi kinne bol raha hu.

Main uthkar taxi rukvaya or unko ghod main uthakar taxi mein Dala or unke sir ( head) ko apne ghod mein rakhkar taxi vala ko kaha.

Main : bhaiya hospital chalo 

Taxi vala hospital ki taraf bad gaya karib 10 minute main hum hospital pohoch gaye.

Vahi dusari taraf........

Payal mera intzaar kar rahi thi.
Fir payal raam se bolti hai.

Payal ( ram se) : ye rahul abhi tak kiu nahi aya 
Ram ( payal se) : payal didi use pen nahi mil raha hoga aa jaega.

Payal : addmission ka time khatam ho raha hai. Ab me kha se lau pen. 
Yeh rahul bhi na pata nahi kha chala gaya hoga pen lene.

Tabi
Ek ladki bolti hai 
Piche se 

Ladki (payal se) : shayad aapko pen chahiye ye lijiye 
Fir 
Payal us ladki ko thanks bolti hai.
Or payal form bhar deti 
Rahul ka bhi..
Tabi 
Us ladki ka phone bajne lagta hai. 
Jisne payal ko pen diya tha.
Or vo ladki phone ko utta ti hai.

Or ladki jo sunti hai vo sunte hii shocked ho jati hai.
Or form ko vahi chor kar bhag jati hai.
Payal bolti hai.
Isko kya hua ye phone chorkar kiu bhag gai.
Fir 
Payal uska ladki ka form bhi jama karwane lagti hai. Admission ke liye

Or payal ram se bolti hai 
Payal (ram se) : main bhar jakar dekhti hu tum mera bhi form jama karwa dena.
Pata nahi kiu mujhe ghabrahat ho rahi hai.
Or payal college ke gate ki taraf jane lagti hai.
Vahi dusree taraf.......
Main taxi vale bhaiya se

Main : bhaiya jara strecter le lana

Taxi vala ander chala gaya or strecher le aya. Inko strecher main dalkar ander le aya. Main reception ke pas chala gaya.

Main : .Suniye jara doctor ko bhulana inka accident hua hai.

Receptionist : accident phir to yeh security officer case hai. Pehle security officer ko bulaiye.

Main : are aap pehle ilaz toh shuru karo.

Receptionist : dekhiye yaha ki rule hai ki aise cases main pehle security officer ayega phir ilaz hoga.

Main ( ghusse se) : ajib aurat hai aap yaha inki jaan ja rahi hai. Aapko rule ki padi huyi hai. Agar inko kuch ho gaya toh.

Receptionist : woh hum nahi jante pehle security officer ayegi phir ilaz hoga.

Tabhi doctor a jati hai.
Doctor : kya ho raha hai yaha.

Main : dekhiye madam inka accident huya hai or kafi khoon nikal chuka hai.
Main inko kaha ki ilaz shuru karo lekin inko toh bas security officer ko bulane ki padi huyi hai.
Doctor aadmi ke pass jakar dekhti 

Doctor : are yeh toh Rishabh hai yaha ke bade business. Ward boy jaldi se inko OT mein lekar chalo.
Phir woh log inko OT main lekar gaye. Doctor mujhe bola.

Doctor : dekho iska bohot khoon beh chuka hai toh khoon ki jarurat pad sakta hai.
Tumara blood group kya hai.
Main : jii mujhe malum nahi 
Doctor : nurse iska blood group check karo dekho ki o hai ki nahi.

Main nurse ke sath ek kamare main chala gaya 
Tabi 
Mujhe ek awaaz sunai dii
Tum usse blood nahi de sakte .
Agar tumne usse blood diya to vo jal ( fire) kar rakh ho jaega.
( Pata nahi kiu mane vo baat sun li or nurse ko rok liya.)

Mein kya karu main blood nahi de sakta.

Payal ko bol do vo de sakti hai. Blood

Mane fatafat payal ko call kiya 
Fir 
Bhar aa gaya.
Doctor ( nurse se) : kya hua blood match hua.
Nurse ( doctor se) : doctor isne blood check nahi karne diya.

Doctor ( mujse) : tum kese insaan ho abhi bol rahe the ki vo mar jaege or ab blood check nahi karwa rahe.
Agar inko 30 minute me blood nahi mila to ye mar (dead) ho jaege.

Tabhi samne se ek aurat bhagti huyi aa rahi thi. Or uske piche ek ladki thi.

Jaise hii maine us ladki ko dekha meri duniya tham gayi................

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Update 11


Doctor ( mujse) : tum kese insaan ho abhi bol rahe the ki vo mar jaege or ab blood check nahi karwa rahe.
Agar inko 30 minute me blood nahi mila to ye mar (dead) ho jaege.

Tabhi samne se ek aurat bhagti huyi aa rahi thi. Or uske piche ek ladki thi.

Jaise hii maine us ladki ko dekha meri duniya tham gayi................

Ab ageee.........

Jaise hii maine us ladki ko dekha meri duniya tham gayi. Kya asman se pari utar aya kya. Hassen or khubsurat dekhne se hi lagta hai fursat se banaya gaya hai.
Jabh woh mere samne a gayi toh main uske roop main hii kho gaya. Uske behte asu dekhkar mera dil ro pada. Main uske pass jakar khada ho gaya or meri muh se nikal gaya.

Main : aap roye maat sab thik ho jayega.

Woh ladki meri taraf dekha or dekhte hii uske asu rukh gaye. Meri ankho mein nami chaya huya tha. Woh mujhe kuch der dekhi pir nazre jhuka li. 
Tabhi doctor bahar aye

Aurat : komal ji abhi woh kese hai.

Doctor : agar jald hii unne blood nahi mila to unka bachna na munkin hai.

Ladki : papa mar jaege
Mujhe chor ke chale jaege. Or tez tez rone lagi.

Tabi
Auraat ( doctor se) : komal ji aap mera blood le liye.

Ab doctor ko me komal kahuga.

Komal : aap me se kisi ka bhi blood Rishab jii ke blood se match nahi ho raha hai. Unke pass bass 10 minute hai.
Humne blood bank se baat ki magar vaha se blood ane me time lagega.

Or agar hume argent blood nahi mila to...

Tabi piche se payal bhagte hue aati hai.
Or 
Rahul ko dekhte hii bohot ghabra or der jati hai. Kiuki uske pure kapde blood se latpat hote hai.

Payal bohot dard me tezz tezz rote hue rahul se bolti hai.

Payal ( rahul se) : tujhe kya ho gaya tu thik to hai na tu to pen lene gaya tha ye sab kese ho gaya me sonali didi ko kya bolugi ki me apna vada nahi nibha paye.
Tera thik se khayal nahi rakh paye. 

Rahul payal ko ase dard me dekhta to uske bhi asu nikal jate.

Rahul ( payal se) : payal muje kuch nahi hua hai dekho me thik hu

Fir jab payal rahul ko thik se dekhti hai.

Jab usko yakin ho jata hai. Ki rahul thik hai usse kuch nahi hua hai.
Jab jakar payal chup hoti hai.

Magar payal ke ashu abhi bhi nikal rahe the kiuki payal kabhi bhi rahul ko asi halat me nahi dekh sakti thi.

Fir 
Payal ( rahul se) : tu thik hai to yaha hospital kiu aya

Fir 
Rahul payal ko puri baat bata deta hai.

Fir 
Payal ( doctor se) : aap mera blood le lo

Komal : blood check karne ke liye nurse ko bolti hai.

Rahul ( doctor se) : doctor blood check karne ka time nahi hai payal ke blood se vo thik ho jae ge 
mera vishwas kijiye.
Doctor jaldi se payal ka blood lekar.
Rishab ji ko chada dete hai.
Blood chadate hii Rishab ji ki heart beet badne lagti hai.

Nurse bhar bhagte hue 

Ladki nurse ko aise bhagte hue dekhti hai to bolti hai
Ladki ( nurse se) : kya hua papa thik to hai na.
Nusre ( ladki se) : blood chadate hii us aadmi ki heart beet bohot tezz ho gai hai agar unki heart beet normal nahi hue to hum kuch nahi kar payege.

Ladki ( nurse se) : plzz mere papa ko bacha lo 
Plzzz bacha lo.
Rahul se us ladki ka dard nahi dekha gaya.
Or Rahul us ladki ke pass jakar bolta hai.
Rahul ( ladki se) : mujh par vishwas hai na to rona band karo tumare papa ko puch nahi hoga. Plzz
Vo ladki rahul ko hii dekhe jaa rahi thi.
Usko vishwas ho raha tha ki ye ladka uske papa ko kuch nahi hone dega.
Or vo ladki haa me sir ( hila ) deti hai.

Tabi 
Pata nahi kiu achanak 

Rahul bhagte hue OT me chala jata hai.
Or unka hand pakad leta hai.

Or Rishab ji ki thodi der me heart beet normal hone lagti hai.
Tabi doctor (komal ji) rahul se bolti hai.
Tum ander kese aae
Achanak
Jab doctor ( komal) dekhti hai ki Rishab ji ki heart beet normal hone lagi hai.
Or kuch der me heart beet normal ho jati hai.
To
rahul bhar aa jata hai.
Doctor komal bhi bhar aakar us aurat se bolti hai.

Doctor komal ( auraat se) : rani ji rishab ji ab thik hai.
Magar ye kese hua mujhe nahi pata.
Bas dekha ki us ladke ne rishab ji ka hand pakda or unki heart beet normal ho gaye.

Payal blood dekar jese hi bhar aakar us ladki ko dekhti hai to pechan jati hai. ( Kiuki ye vahi ladki hai jisne payal ko pen diya tha. Or apna form chor kar bhag gai thi)
Payal ( ladki se) : sonam ( naam usne form me dekh liya tha ) woh thik hai.

Doctor komal : par ye sab hua kese

Rani : subha tehel ne nikle the par uske baad pata nahi.

Sonam : hum mil sakte hai kya.

Komal doctor : sonam beta abhi nahi subha main cabin mein sift kar dege uske baad mil sakte hai.

Rani : thanks komal ji.

Komal : are thanks mujhe nahi is ladke ko dijiye jisne rishab jijko yaha laye or is ladki ne unne khoon bhi diya ( payal ki taraf ishara karte hua).

Rani : tum dono ka bohot bohot dhanyabaad

Main : dhanyabaad ki koi jaruraat nahi hai. Yeh to mera or payal ka farz tha.
He na payal 
Or payal haa me sir ( head) hila deti hai.

Or tabi rahul ke dost bhi aa jate hai 

Or sohan bolta hai.

Sohan ( payal se) : payal didi addmission ki sari formalities puri ho gai hai or us ladki ka bhi form jama karne ki bhi formalities puri kar di hai.

Magar aap 
Achanak se vaha se kiu chali gai thi

Rahul ( mann me) : ye lo BC sabko ek ek karke baat bta te raho.
Fir 
payal un teeno ko bhi saari baat bta deti hai.
Rani rahul or payal ke pass jakar bolti hai.

Rani ( dono se) : pir bhi aaj kal kaha sab lagh apna farz nibhate hai.

Doctor komal : acha ab me chalta hu.

Main ( rani aunty se) : acha aunty ab me chalta hoon.

Rani : are aise kese tumara naam kya hai.

Main : rahul

Rani : tum kha rehte ho.
Tabi

Payal : hum .....................address me rehte hai.
Payal ( aunty se) : acha aunty hum chalte hai.

Rani : aise kaise unse ( Rishab ji) milkar toh jao.

Rahul jab time dekhta hai to usse kuch yaad aa jata hai.

Rahul ( mann me) : mane to Ruchi & nisha ko shopping ke liye kaha tha.

Main ( rani aunty se) : nahi aunty mujhe jaruri kaam hai. Hame jaldi nikalna hoga.

Rani : pir tumara number de jao.unko agar baat karni hue toh.

Main : thik ha aunty

Rani : sonam beta number lelo

Sonam: jii maa

Pir main or payal or mere dost un sabko namsten bol kar or me sonam ko ek Baar dekh kar bahar aa gaya.

Taxi wala abhi tak bahar khada tha maine taxi karke college ki taraf chal diya kiuki bike to vahi khadi thi.
Or apne dosto ko bhi apne ghar jane ke liye bol diya or vo bhi nikal gaye the apne ghr ki or.

Main : payal in kapdo ka kya karu ghar par kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye faltu ka pareshan hoge

Payal : ek kaam karte hai. Mall me chalte hai vahi kapde kharid kar change kar lena
Or in kapdo ko fek dena.

Main : thik hai

Main taxi wale se bolta hu

Main : Taxi wale bhaiya pehle taxi kisi mall me rok dena fir college ki taraf le jana.

Taxi wala haa me sir hilata hai.
Fir 
Hum mall se kapde change or do gift bhi le liye apni bhan ke liye kiuki mujhe pata tha late hone ke bajase dono gussa hogi.

Fir 
Me college pohoch gaya kiuki meri bike to college me hiii thi or
Fir me bike me baith kar nikal gaya ghr ki taraf..
Or jab me ghr pahocha to 
Hairaan ho gaya.
Main ( maan me) : kahi bua ko kuch pata to nahi chal gaya.
Lagta hai ab tu gaya kaam se....

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Update 12 


Hairaan ho gaya.
Main ( maan me) : kahi bua ko kuch pata to nahi chal gaya.
Lagta hai ab tu gaya kaam se....

Mala bua harbarakar bolti hai 

Mala bua ( Rahul se) : ku......... Kuch nahi beta
Vo kya hai na muje kuch kaam hai isliye muje bhar jana hai.
Kal subha tak aaa jaugi..

Maine bhi kuch jyada nahi bola kiuki muje der lag raha tha ki mala bua ko kuch pata na chal jai ( us accident ke bare me)

Payal kuch bolne vali hoti hai to me usse bhi chup kara deta hu.

Or mala ( bua) kal subha tak ane ka bol kar nikal jai shayad kisi jaldi me thi.
Or main payal se

Main (payal se) : payal tum aaram karo tum thak gai hogi.

Or payal haa me sir ( head) hila deti hai.
Or apne room me chali jati hai.

Ab mein chal deta hu sabse khatarnak room ki taraf maltab apni bhan ( ruchi & Nisha ) ke pass................

Main ( ruchi & nisha) ke kamare me aa gaya dono bed par baithi huyi thi..

Main dono ke pass chala gaya mere pass jate hiii dono bhan ne apna chera dusari taraf kar liya.

Main ne apne kaan pakad kar sorry kaha.

Ruchi : ab ye sab karne ki koi jaruraat nahi hai.

Rahul : kya gussa ho muz par 

Nisha : aap hame apna ek din dene vale the or shopping lejane vale the par aap late ha gae.

Rahul (mann me) : ab inko kya btau ki kiu late ho gaya.

Rahul : ek kaam ki vajase der ho gayi.

Ruchi : kya humse bi jaruri kaam tha.

Rahul : tumse jaruri kohi kaam ho sakta hai kya muze .

Nisha : pir itni der se kyu aaye

Rahul : wo ek shop par jyada samay lag gaya.

Ruchi : aap to college gaye the addmission ke liye pir shop me kya karne gaye the.
Rahul : wo main nahi bata sakta 
Nisha (pyar se) : kya muze bhi nahi

Rahul : main bata nahi sakta haa par dika jarur sakta hu.
Or main ne pocket me se gift ka box nikal kar ek ruchi ko 
Or ek nisha ko de diya.
Nisha : kiske liye liya hai.
Rahul : hai ek pagal ladki uske kiye liya hai.

Ruchi : kya apne apni gf ke liye liya hai.

Rahul : pagal gf ke liye nahi. Haa par ek friend ke liye jaarur liya hai.

Nisha : khon hai wo

Rahul : andaza laga kar deko

Ruchi : kya muje pata hai us friend ke bare me.

Rahul : are haa ek kaam karo main tume uske naam ka first word batata hu pir tum Naam batana.

Nisha ( mann me ) : kahi payal didi ke liye to nahi liya 

Nisha : kya hai 1 word 

Rahul : ek ke naam ka hai "N"
Ek ke naam ka hai "R"

Ruchi & nisha ek sath : kya ye apne mere liye liya hai.

Rahul : tum dono to smart nikali ek zatake me pata laga liya.

Ye sun kar ruchi & nisha mere gale lag gai.

Ruchi & nisha ek sath : thank you bhaiya gift dene ke liye or muze apna friend banane ke liye.

Rahul : chalo ab gift to kholo.

Nisha : haa kholati hu par aaj to mera birthday bhi nahi hai pir ye gift kis khusi me.

Rahul (pyaar se) : apni sabse khubsurat friend banai hai. Kuch to dhamaka hona chahiye hai.
Or abhi hum shopping par bhi chalege.
Pehle gift to kholo

Ruchi : sach me abhi hum shopping par bhi jaege. Or vese gift me kya hai.

Rahul : khol kar dekho.

Dono ne gift khola or dono ek khubsurat se bracelet dekh kar khus ho gayi or mere gale lag gai.

Dono ek sath : thank u bhaiya bohot pyara hai main ise hamesa apne pass rakhugi.

Magar tum se pyara nahi hai. Kiuki meri bhan duniya ki sabse pyari hai.
Or is baat par dono khilkhila kar hasne lagti hai.

Rahul : tum dono haste hue bohot achi lagti ho hamesha haste rehna.
Or thodi setani bhi karte rehna

Dono ek sath : vo to hum abhi kerege hii.

Rahul ko kuch shamaj me nahi ata.

Rahul (dono se ): sirf tum dono ke liye gift laya hu or tum thank u se kaam chala rahi ho.

Ruchi ( mann me) : bhaiya ek baar bol to do. Fir tum dekho hum kya karte hai.

Nisha : pir kya chahiye

Rahul : ek pyari si kiss chaiye 
Or dono ne mere gaalo par kiss ki bochar kar di.

Nisha ( mann me ) : ek baar puchu lip par kiss karne ke liye chalo koi bahane se puch leti hu.

Nisha : bhaiya ab thik bhai ya pir kisi or jaga par bhi chaiye

Ruchi : haa bhaiya btao naa

Rahul : ( main nisha & ruchi ki baat sunkar puri tarha shocked ho gaya baat badalte hue) jaldi tyaar ho jao shopping ke liye Nikal na hai.

Ruchi chalo nisha tyaar hote bhai.
Or nisha & ruchi ek dusare ko dekhte hue khadi ho gai. Main bhi khada ho gaya.

Pir mane jo kabi nahi socha tha vo ruchi & nisha ne kiya.

Dono mere honto par kiss karke bhag gai.

Main to puri tarha shocked ho gaya.

Ye dono ne aisa kiu kiya kahi ruchi & nisha .............................nahi ye kabi nahi ho sakta hai. Muze in dono se baat karni hogi..

Pir me thodi der me normal hone ke baad main bhi shopping ke liye tyaar hone nikal gaya.

Jab tyar hokar me bhar nikala to dono mere samne khadi thi.

Rahul : aisa tumne kiu kiya muze ye pasand nahi aya.

Ruchi ( thoda darte hue) : wo... Woo

Rahul : wo wo kya

Nisha : wo humne socha ki bhan ki taraf se gaalo par kiss kiya or friend ki tara honto par

Rahul ( thoda gusse me) : par muze ye pasand nahi aya. Dubara aisa mat karna.

Nisha ( udas hote hue ) : sorry, hum aisa dubara kabi nahi karege.

Rahul : thik hai ab has do tumara chehara udass acha nahi lagta.

Or pir me dono behno ko gudghudi karne lagta..
Fir
Ruchi & nisha phir normal ho gaye or hasne lage.
Rahul : mere pyari bhan aise hii haste rehna udas tum bilkul bhi achi nahi lagti..

Pir me shopping me nikal ne se pahale payal ke pass chala gaya batane ke liye.


Magar vo bhi chalne ki zid karne lagi. Magar mane kamzoori ( blood dane ke bajase) ka bol kar shamjane ki bohot kosis ki par nahi mani shayad aaj ki baat ko yaad karke ghabra gai hogi.

Fir 
Mane usko pahle kuch juice pilaya
Jisse jyada kamzoori na lage

Ab ruchi & nisha ko kese shamjao vo to mere sath akele jana chahati thi. Shopping ke liye.

Fir mane ruchi & nisha ko bhi shamjaya payal ke chalne ka bol kar .
Pahele to nahi mani magar baad me maan gai.
Or mala bua to bhar gai thi to isliye mane ghar ko lock kiya or chal pade shopping ki or

Hum taxi se nikale kiuki bike se to jaa nahi sakte the.

Or taxi me baithe hii baate karne lage.

Rahul ( ruchi & nisha se) : to tum dono ne soch liya ki kya lena hai

Ruchi : hum sab sath hone se hamara kaam jaldi ho jata hai.

Rahul : main tum dono ke padai ke shaman ke baare me puch raha hue.

Nisha : hum bhi uski hii baat kar rahe hai.

Or nisha ne mera popat kar diya socha tha ki inka pareshan karuga magar magar bhan se kabi koi jeet saka hai.

Or sab hasne lage.

Rahul : muz par has rahi ho , taxi ghar ki taraf ghuma lo

Payal ( ghoor kar) : ghuma kar to dekho to dekho.

Nisha : hum strike karege

Ruchi : woman empower ka jamana hai. Bhaiya.

Rahul ( mann me) : lagta hai shopping ke time bhan bhi dusman ban jati hai. ) Jhoot 

Rahul : ye payal bhi tumare taraf hai jisse me akela pad gaya.

Ruchi : majority carries law, is hisab se chalne me samajdari hai.

Rahul : tum sab ek se badkar ek ho tumse jitna mushkil hii hota hai jab tum sab sath me hoti ho.

Fir aise hii bate chalti rahi.......



Next update me prerna ki entry..... 


Bhai mane agla update bhi aaj hii de diya hai isliye kal update nahi de pauga.

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bahut hi mast story hai

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kamaal ka likhate ho bhai

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waiting for next update

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Update 13


Ruchi : majority carries law, is hisab se chalne me samajdari hai.

Rahul : tum sab ek se badkar ek ho tumse jitna mushkil hii hota hai jab tum sab sath me hoti ho.

Fir aise hii bate chalti rahi.......

Ab aagee

Rahul to konsi shop pe jana hai.

Ruchi : bhaiya ye mall acha lag rahi hai.
Isi par chalte hai.

Nisha : ye mall best hai or main ne pichali bar ek dress select karke raka tha.

Payal : nisha to fast nikali ...

Rahul : ye dono aise hii hai mujhse bol rahi thi ki padai ka saman lena hai or ye dress dekh rahi hai.

Or hum us shop me aa gae
Ye shop bhi badiya thi.
Jab bhi yaha aav to naye dress hi dikate hai.
Tabi to meri bahane hamesha yahi aane ki zidd karti hai.

Or ander aake teeno alag alag hokar shopping karne lagti hai.

Magar is mall me aate hi me akela pad jata hu,
Kiuki sab shopping me lag jati hai.

Me 
Bhi idar bor ho raha tha to socha time pass karne ke liye ladkiyo ko line hii mar lu.

Or me idhar udar ghum kar ladkiyo ko line maarne laga.
Kuch ladki bhi line de rahi thi.

Aise time pass karte huye sabki shopping karva raha tha.

Unko shopping karni thi to main sabko shopping ke liye le aaya,
Par meri bahne bhi dusari ladkiyo jaisi hii thi,
Shop me aate hii muze bhul hii jati hai,
Or shopping karne lagti hai,. 
Ye jhoot hai.
Meri bhan ka mere liye jo pyaar jo hai iski koi kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta.

Lekin abhi to me akela pad gaya.

Aise akele ghumne ki jagah main unko madad karne laga.

Kabhi nisha & ruchi ke pass jata 
Kabi
Payal ke pass jata.

Nisha & ruchi aaj alag alag section me akeli shopping kar rahi thi.

Muze to shamaj hii nahi ata ki khon kab kya karta hai.

Magar me socha ki koi mere bareme nahi sochta mere liye kisine bhi kapde nahi liye hoge...

Fir
Aise hii shopping khatam ho jati hai.
Or me bhar aa jata hue.

Bhar aate hii me kuch dekhta hu to puri terha shocked ho jata hue.
Kabhi ghabra jata hue to kabhi muze bohot gussa ane lagta hai.

Mujhe usko dekhkar koi dirashye yaad ane lagta hai.

Chota Sa Flash back

Auraat ( bhagte hue) : beta me tuze kuch nahi hone dugi or naa hii teri bhan ko mahadev sab thik kar dege. ( Ye baat vo auraat bohot dard ke sath bolti hai.)

Ab mere baad tuje hii apni bhan ka khayal rakhna hai.
Apni bhan ko kabi akela mat chorna tu meri baat manega naa ( vo aauraat bol rahi thi or vo bacha bass apni maa ko dekh raha tha). 
Teri maa tujhse or teri bhan se bohot pyaar karti hai.
Ye yaad rakhna.
Me jinda rahugi ya nahi mujhe nahi pata par mera pyaar hamesha Aashirwad ke roop me tum dono ke sath rahega.
Apni bhan ko hamesha pyaar karna kiuki tere bhano ka pyaar hii teri taqat or kamzoori dono hai.
Tuze hii apni bhan ko har buri shaktiyo se bachana hoga..
Or agar tujhe koi bhi pareshani ho to Mahadev or mata parvati ke pass jana vo ....... Or issi ke sath us auraat ki bohat dard bhari cheek nakati hai aaaaahhhhhh
Aaaahhhhhhh.

( Bhai ye chota sa flashback shamaj nahi aya to bata du ki ye update 1 ka hai jaha par ek auraat apne bache se kuch bol rahi thi.)

Now present 

Jab rahul shop se bahar nikalta hai jo voh dekhta hai.
( Same vasa hii par vaha par ek auraat ke piche bohot sare gunde jeep lekar aa rahe the.)

Jab rahul dekhta hai ki
Ek auraat apne bache ko lekar bhag rahi hai.

Or uske piche bohot sare gunde ko jeep me bhagte hue dekhta hai. 
( Un gundo ke pass machine gun or guns vagera thi.)
Vo auraat bhagte hue road paar kar rahi hoti hai.
Tabi samne ek truck a jata hai or vo aauraat us truck ko dekhte hii ghabra jati hai.
Jese bhii vo truck us auraat ko udane wala hota hai.
Achanak se 
Rahul ke muh se bohot dard bhari cheek nikalti hai.

Rahul : maaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Or uski speed bijali ( light) se bhi tezz ho jati hai.
Or rahul us truck ke bich me aa jata hai or us aaurat ko pakad kar gale laga leta hai.

Or vo truck rahul se takta jata hai.
Jese hii vo truck rahul se takrata hai 
To 
Truck puri tarha se tut fut kar ek ho jata hai.
Ye sab 
Itni achanak hota hai ki sab hairaan ho jate hai.

Or rahul ki teeno bhan to buri tarha socked ho jati hai.
Or payal to jese statue ban jati hai.

Tabi 
Achanak se ek Roshni aa jati hai.
Or ye Roshni itni tezz hoti hai ki vaha par khade kisi ko kuch nahi dikai deta hai.

Siwaye 
Rahul ki teeno bhan ko chorkar.

Or Roshni vaha se gayab ho jati hai

Or samne ek shaks or vo khatarnak awaaz .
Jise sunkar sabki rooh tak kap jati hai...........................

VAHA KARLE AAM MACHA HAI JAHA PAR MAHAKAAL KHADA HAI JAB YE SHAMPAAN HOGA VAHI BACHEGA JO ANANT HOGA.....

Us shaks ka sarir puri tarha dhaka hua hota hai bas uski aakhe hii dikai deti hai.

Or saare gundo ki to vahi buri tarha se fat kar chaar ho jati hai.

Gunda 1 bolta hai..

Gunda 1 : ye vahi hai.
Ye vahi hai..

Gunda 2 : abe kya vahi vahi hai laga rakha hai.
Bolega bhi ki kon hai ye.

Gunda 1 : ma......ha..............mahakaal.

Vahi 
Rahul ki Teeno bhan paglo ki tarha bhag kar rahul ke pass aa jati hai.
Is se be khabar ki vaha mahakaal khada hai.
Unko to bas apna bhai rahul hii dikai deta hai.
Teeno Rahul ki dekh kar ro rahi hoti hai..

Vahi.....
Gunda 2 ( ghabrate hue) : to kya karu

vo ek hai or hum 100 usko kutte ki tarha marege...

Gunda 2 : agar hum bhag bhi gai to boss hume mar dege..

Gunda 4 : tu janta hai na hamara boss kon hai..

Or sab apni gun mahakaal ki taraf taan dete hai.

Mahakaal : kaal se to koi bach sakta hai magar mahakaal se............hahahahhahhaha.....

Or achanak se 

Saare gunde goliya mahakaal par chala dete hai.
Tabi
Mahakaal un saari goliyo apni shakti se ron leta hai
Or vo saari goli un gundo ke taraf phek deta hai.
Vaha par bas un gundo ki aahhhh aaahhh ki awaaz ane lagti hai.
Or bhar jo logh ye sab dekh rahe the vo bhag kar sab apne gharo me ghus jate bhai. Or pura road sunsaan ho jata hai.

Or mahakaal ek gunde se jiske pass machine gun hoti hai vo chin leta hai.

Ye dekhte hii saare gunde kutto ki tarah bhagne lagte hai.

Bas vaha ek daravani awaaz sunai deti hai.

VAHA KARLE AAM MACHA HAI JAHA PAR MAHAKAAL KHADA HAI JAB YE SHAMPAAN HOGA VAHI BACHEGA JO ANANT HOGA.....

Hahahahhahhaha

Or mahakaal puri ki puri machine gun un bhaag rahe gundo par chala deta hai..

Vaha par bas goliya idhar se udhar pad rahi hoti hai.
Ye manjhar itna khofnaak tha ki logh ghar se bhar dekhne ki himmat bhi nahi kar pa rahe the
Magar vaha rahul ki teeno bhan ko to jese kuch pata hii nahi tha ki yaha kya ho raha hai
Vo to bas rahul ko dekh kar ro rahi thi.

Or isse ke sath sare gunde kutto ki mout mar jate hai.

Fir vaha se ek tezz roshni aati hai or mahakaal gayab ho jata hai..

Or vaha mahakaal ke ane se pahele jesa thi sab kuch vesa hii ho jata hai.
Matlab sab kuch thik ho jata hai. Jaise vaha kuch hua hii na ho.

Bas us truck or un gundo ki padi hue lash ( dead person) ko chor kar.

Payal rahul ko dekhkar paglo ki tarha rone lagti hai.
Or yahi haal ruchi & nisha ka bhi tha. Par payal se thoda kaam
Payal rahul ka sir ( head) apne god me rakh leti hai.

Or payal rahul se bolti hai.

Payal (rote hue) : betu ( jab payal dard me hoti hai or rahul ko asi halat me dekhti hai tab bolti hai. Bhale hii dono ki age same ho) utt ja kya ho gya hai tere ko agar tu nahi utta na to me bhi jee nahi paugi .

Betuuuuuu uttt jaaa.
Sonali didi ( rahul ki badi bhan) ko kya jawab dugi.
Ye sab kese ho gaya .
Ki me apke betuu ko bacha nahi saki mane apna vada thor diya.
Betuu utt jaa.
Betu utt ja..
Meri baat nahi mane ga tu 

Yeh dekh 
Ruchi & nisha bhi pagalo ki tarha rone lagti hai or bolti hai.

Ruchi : didi ye hamare Karan hua hai naa hum bhaiya ko yaha laate or na yeh sab hota.

Nisha : haa didi ye sab mere bajaye se hua hai.
Hum bhaiya ko kho nahi sakte .
Agar bhaiya ko kuch ho gaya to hum bhi zinda nahi rahega hum bhi mar jaege kiuki hum sabki jaan to bas bhaiya me basti hai.

Ruchi : agar ye sab sonali didi ne dekh liya to vo jinda lash ( dead person) ban jaegi.
Or yeh sab hum nahi dekh payege.
Bhaiya utt jao na..
Bhaiyaa utt jao 

Or nisha bhagte hue thodi dur me padi hue gun ko utane jati hai.

Payal : betu utt ja kiu tadpa raha hee mujhe 
Phir bolte hue payal achanak se chup ho jati hai..

Ruchi : didi bhaiya ko utaao na 
Bhaiya utt kiu nahi rahe hai.

Payal : ruchi chup ho ja mera betu abhi so raha hai use pareshan mat kar nahi to teri pitai karugi..
Betu tu ache se sona ( sleep) haa teri payal tere pass hai.
Dekh teri payal tuje kuch nahi hone degi.
Chahe kuch bhi ha jae..
So jaa betu so jaa u
Or ase hii payal rone lagti hai.

Vahi 
Sare logh bhar aaa jate hai.
Jaise hii nisha gun ko utta kar apne sir ( head ) par rakhti hai..

Ek aadmi bhag kar nisha se vo gun chin leta hai.
Or nisha us aadmi se bolti hai

Nisha : uncle mere bhai ko bacha lo usko kya ho gaya hai.
Nahi to me apne bhai ke bina nahi jee paugi. 
Please uncle bacho lo mere bhai ko

Or tezz tez rone legti hai or payal ki taraf bhagne lagti hai 

Or payal rahul ko dekhte hue behosh ho jati hai..
Ruchi : didi ab apko kya ho gaya 

Jo logh ye manzar dekh rahe the un logo ke bhi aakho me aashu aa jate hai. ( Bhai bhan ke pyaar ko dekh kar).

Ab hum kya kare didi bhi hame chor kar chali gai...

Ab hum kya kare or tezz tezz rone lagti hai..

Tabi ek awaaz ane lagti hai jisse sirf teeno bhan ko hii sunai de pati hai.
( Or vo awaaz kisi or ki nahi balki prerna ki thi..

Pehle to yeh pyaar dekh kar prerna ke bhi aakho me ashu aa jate hai

Fir prerna bolti hai...........



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Or thoda hacking ka bhi maza lege......

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kya rahul or mahakaal ek hi hai

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kya sunaina or Rahul dono judwa hai

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kya rahul or mahakaal ek hi hai

Yeh to abhi suspence hai ki mahakaal khon