Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute

[sarit11]

The original unwanted houseguest ( collected)

https://xossipy.com/showthread.php?tid=12074

As the name say so, is there any resemblance to our thread.

[kamdev99008]

The original unwanted houseguest ( collected)

https://xossipy.com/showthread.php?tid=12074

As the name say so, is there any resemblance to our thread.

this story is totally different .................
another story.....written on literotica............

no resemblances except title

[Theflash]

Manasi
I think you have found the way to kill the readers with anticipation.
Full marks to you on that.

Just kidding
Please start soon

[manasi]

@ xx30
I appreciate your laboured homework. I could enrich my knowledge.
I don't find much to dis-agree with your views. Your cordial approach has overwhelmed me, in particular, the suggestion for a new beginning.
Thank you. I decline, as I have no interest to be in lime light.

At this point I stress only one thing. This particular story is not written for sexual gratification. Though, there were plenty opportunity, the author has carefully avoided vivid description of sexual mating which is uncharacteristic to the erotic stories devoted to sex. Human minds are heavily conditioned. All communal riots are best examples of conditioned minds. I request you to look at the story with free mind, free from conditions of cuckold sex.

Your input could not provide enough information to declare this story as an absolute fiction. So, I will continue to justify the protagonist in real life, avoiding fresh humiliation and raw sex.

Look forward for your well thought deliberations in future also.

[manasi]

Manasi
I think you have found the way to kill the readers with anticipation.
Full marks to you on that.

Just kidding
Please start soon

Thank you for your continual encouragement.  Sorry for keeping you all waiting. I promise to start by Oct 2020. Early start depends on my home front and progress in research. I am struggling to logically justify two incidents. Hope to find ways to veer around.

[xx30]

@ xx30
I appreciate your laboured homework. I could enrich my knowledge.
I don't find much to dis-agree with your views. Your cordial approach has overwhelmed me, in particular, the suggestion for a new beginning.
Thank you. I decline, as I have no interest to be in lime light.

At this point I stress only one thing. This particular story is not written for sexual gratification. Though, there were plenty opportunity, the author has carefully avoided vivid description of sexual mating which is uncharacteristic to the erotic stories devoted to sex. Human minds are heavily conditioned. All communal riots are best examples of conditioned minds. I request you to look at the story with free mind, free from conditions of cuckold sex.

Your input could not provide enough information to declare this story as an absolute fiction. So, I will continue to justify the protagonist in real life, avoiding fresh humiliation and raw sex.

Look forward for your well thought deliberations in future also.

I didn't have to do any homework as I've been reading erotic stories online for many years  but yeah the photo editing part took some time (5 minutes). Now coming to the point, on what basis you're saying that it is based on real-life events and not fiction, do you have experienced something similar in your life, are you a cuckolded husband or a wife who turned her husband into a cuckold, but these arguments are becoming useless now, you know when I first visited your thread and read your comment I thought you've mistaken it for real but now I realize you're doing it intentionally to create a hype like those horror storytellers who claim it to have happened in real life. Well, what can I say in that case, go ahead.

[Theflash]

I didn't have to do any homework as I've been reading erotic stories online for many years  but yeah the photo editing part took some time (5 minutes). Now coming to the point, on what basis you're saying that it is based on real-life events and not fiction, do you have experienced something similar in your life, are you a cuckolded husband or a wife who turned her husband into a cuckold, but these arguments are becoming useless now, you know when I first visited your thread and read your comment I thought you've mistaken it for real but now I realize you're doing it intentionally to create a hype like those horror storytellers who claim it to have happened in real life. Well, what can I say in that case, go ahead.

Chill out man 

Xossipy is filled with stories that are so so so boring 
dull
humdrum
lifeless
monotonous
mundane
stodgy
tedious
tiring 
That's it i cannot find more synonyms to that word. 

All have almost similar plot like
 1)high class women low class men 
 2)innocent female devious male
 3)brother - sister, mother-son, DIL - FIL, interfaith, cuckold husband, cuckold son ETC
 I cannot recall more types
And all have plots or consequences which are senseless
For instance
 1)only females are cheating 
2) husbands dick are smaller than lovers
 3) husband is always working so wife is lonely loses self control dealing with domineering womanizer servant/driver whatever he is and I have thought a lot in my past that if that servant or driver is also working in this household than by similar situation his wife must be cheating too.
4)most of the time female is young like below 25-30 and male is 50-60,I mean like what the fuck why don't the female leads fuck their fathers
5) cheaters are never caught
 6) if you leave out few stories than when they are caught either husband turns into cuckold or story is abruptly stopped
  7) spelling mistakes, grammatical errors.                                
 8)i am not sure but I think 45% completed stories have same thing in  common other 40%stories are never completed only 15% are worth calling a sexstories coz they have a DIFFERENT or GOOD PLOT and it includes SEX.
 9) and I too have been reading stories from many years then it was no big deal but now just reading the titles is enough to know what that stories is.
 10) even these stories which contains no theme are restarted, or have been continued by various others 
 11) look at the comments in those stories merely 3 to 5 sentences are noticeable if you are lucky or its just Update?
12) just try to post constructive criticism or your thoughts same way as you have done here on those stories the authors get angry, childish on the other hand atleast fewer writers which by sensible definition can be atleast called writers like manasi, krish999, nefws, devil mercy, kamdev99008 and other have mature conversation with readers.

There are lot of points but I think you get the idea. 

So atleast we can enjoy a sexstory which is Sex within the Story and in addition to that 
1)proper grammar no spelling mistakes                       2)completed story
3)maybe new or different plot
4)Which has aftermath of the story and i believe this is the vital reason breville and manasi have written there stories coz the prequel didn't include any ending or aftermath. 

So lets encourage the writer bro 
No hard feelings 

And to the writer please carry on

[kamdev99008]

Chill out man 

Xossipy is filled with stories that are so so so boring 
dull
humdrum
lifeless
monotonous
mundane
stodgy
tedious
tiring 
That's it i cannot find more synonyms to that word. 

All have almost similar plot like
 1)high class women low class men 
 2)innocent female devious male
 3)brother - sister, mother-son, DIL - FIL, interfaith, cuckold husband, cuckold son ETC
 I cannot recall more types
And all have plots or consequences which are senseless
For instance
 1)only females are cheating 
2) husbands dick are smaller than lovers
 3) husband is always working so wife is lonely loses self control dealing with domineering womanizer servant/driver whatever he is and I have thought a lot in my past that if that servant or driver is also working in this household than by similar situation his wife must be cheating too.
4)most of the time female is young like below 25-30 and male is 50-60,I mean like what the fuck why don't the female leads fuck their fathers
5) cheaters are never caught
 6) if you leave out few stories than when they are caught either husband turns into cuckold or story is abruptly stopped
  7) spelling mistakes, grammatical errors.                                
 8)i am not sure but I think 45% completed stories have same thing in  common other 40%stories are never completed only 15% are worth calling a sexstories coz they have a DIFFERENT or GOOD PLOT and it includes SEX.
 9) and I too have been reading stories from many years then it was no big deal but now just reading the titles is enough to know what that stories is.
 10) even these stories which contains no theme are restarted, or have been continued by various others 
 11) look at the comments in those stories merely 3 to 5 sentences are noticeable if you are lucky or its just Update?
12) just try to post constructive criticism or your thoughts same way as you have done here on those stories the authors get angry, childish on the other hand atleast fewer writers which by sensible definition can be atleast called writers like manasi, krish999, nefws, devil mercy, kamdev99008 and other have mature conversation with readers.

There are lot of points but I think you get the idea. 

So atleast we can enjoy a sexstory which is Sex within the Story and in addition to that 
1)proper grammar no spelling mistakes                       2)completed story
3)maybe new or different plot
4)Which has aftermath of the story and i believe this is the vital reason breville and manasi have written there stories coz the prequel didn't include any ending or aftermath. 

So lets encourage the writer bro 
No hard feelings 

And to the writer please carry on

AGREE
we are here for entertainment..........seeking a complete logical story.....
be it real or fantasy...........it doesn't matter 

i am not interested in reading..........bloody fucktales consisting endless fucking

[milfomaniak]

I have been following this story very long time. I think cuckold story should have full of erotic suspense, humiliatiion with confusion, both wife and lover are sex maniac and dominant, suspensful strategy to fool husband. I found only this story to have all this. If you have not these characterisitics in your story then I think there is no entetainment in cuckold story. I also personally tried to write but failed. what I experienced that it needs lot brain storming to make it more erotic that it hits your sexual part of brain so dangerously only if you like cuckold story.

I think manasi also thinking like original writer who put all these characterisitics in this epic story.

[Theflash]

I think manasi also thinking like original writer who put all these characterisitics in this epic story.

May be she is thinking like original writer 

Or 

May be not coz this writer did stated that enough humiliation had been done


I just wish that there should be chaos.

[kamdev99008]

I Think this story is not a mandatory cuckold tale..........

except intro by original writer who left the story unfinished ............no where cuckoldery indicated
neither in title............nor in the theme

leave the grammatical or dictionary definations behind
in practice.....cuckoldery is willing acceptance of spouse's betrayal/adultery
but manu never accepted

manasi can move forward this story as........betrayal and payback tale
and
i'm sure........this story will be a great erotic thriller on completion

waiting eagerly for updates ....with fingefs crossed

[milfomaniak]

if husband accept that her wife adultery, then there is no entertainment. Usually we get attract to forbidden things. Husband knows wife having affair but husband don't accept it and could not anything, alongside wife knowing that husband can't do anything against her and she can do anything. I think that's the begining of adventure how wife control her husband like there is nothing happening, everything is fine. But everyday wife confuse her husband by doing something with her lover. Hubby get confuse again and again but at the end of day hubby become postive by seeing wife behaviour or wife says something that convince hubby, she lovers her husband.

I think it would be more entertainment if hubby's mind get chaos. Many things happening around him but all incidents are happening oposite side of the door. In this side hubby get confused. when door opens he confuse more. wife like to make her hubby's mind chaos for 24 hrs or 2 days and then again wife convince or show something hubby that hubby completely forgot what happend last 2 or 3 days. But next day again confusion begins with indirect humiliation.

This needs very good story plot. Mind game is very dangerous game but also too much entetainment. I think kavita is very clever. she control both her lover and husband. Because one of the chapter in this story, prem tells manu that if you obey my order, I will tell u about ur wife what was she planning after I came here. kavita also took pill before her lover came to her house but manu never got any clue until it becomes late. I think kavita plans all the things and implement it by prem. kavita like sex very much and for that she can do anything. but she chose to do not to leave her husband beacuse of many reasons and making her husband mind like that whatever happening do not look at it because I love you.

Also research shows that women mind is very complex, many women cheat her hubby due to money, sex. It's hard to understand kavita's mind. and original writer did it very successfully.

[xx30]

This story was written many years back, Indian readers weren't familiar with the words cuckold or wimp back then, that's why the author avoided the use of those words, as he might have thought that readers won't understand them or maybe he himself didn't understand it as we Indians generally have limited vocabulary strength. other writers tried to end the story their way, Mansi will do it her way and doesn't matter whether she turns it into an erotic thriller with manu getting his revenge it will always be a one-sided ending like the other one totally opposite to the flavor of this kind of story and then some other writer will again start a sequel. This type of erotica, though a complete fiction never turns the husband revengeful and always ends with him accepting it and often fathering the children born from this illicit relationship. As I wrote in my previous post that this kind of erotic works was probably created by black people to humiliate whites so in the west, these stories mostly end with the bull winning and the defeated hubby accepting. The original author was smart since it was a copy of western stories he stayed away from ending it or maybe he lost interest (as I stated in my previous post),   whatever the reason was it was just a time pass for him with zero percent reality. These are not that kind of stories that end up in revenge on wife or bull or a divorce or wife coming back to husband or husband moving on after avenging his humiliation and the kind of ending these type of stories usually have ( acceptance of the defeated husband) won't be appreciated by readers. One writer in the Bengali section wrote a similar kind of story ( though the plot was entirely different) but he was smart enough to shift the plot to the UK where a big dark muscular gangster took away an extraordinarily beautiful Bengali wife from her husband. It ended with the conservative wife turning into a sex addict slut and the husband accepting it and agreeing to raise the bastard baby born and the gangster planning to use the wife as a high-class escort for his clients. Most readers rejected it with some even abusing the writer, but he stated that it is a cuckold story and it will end this way.
Since it is a total fiction it is always difficult for the writer to give the right conclusion and also for the readers to digest it. This type of erotica never originated India, it is not an Indian creation so Indians do not have the maturity to absorb this.    That's why I suggested not to waste time behind this fake story and instead create something original.

[manasi]

@XX30

I once again appreciate your views.

I don't deny that Indiansubmale may have been encouraged by some prominent writer and adopted style.

But the story has not been ploted long back. Precisely, it must be dated between 2001 to 2010 and heavily inclined towords 2010. People were using cell phone and SMS. WhatsApp came sometime in 2010. Five day week is in force in some private industries. Shopping malls started functioning. People are going to movie halls and tickets are available. I mean demand for tickets are not so high during weakends . So, it is transition period prior to multiplexes took over from earlier cinema halls.

I congratulate the original author for precisely adopting the time frame even if it turns out to be copied from fantasy story.

Please continue with your feedback.

[bforb]

When there will be update?

[lordrb]

Hi, it is fascinating to note how exciting everybody is analysing, fantasising, assuming whether this really happened or just fanfasy and imagination.

Well, let me state that most of the stuff in the story can happen in life and is happening in a lot of peoples life. I have known atleast a couple people who, one willingly, and another ubwillingly forced in those situations. Except, the humiliations, sadistic behaviour, depravity, and slutty and worish behaviour, most of other things happens in real life.So, you decide whether to finish it taking into consideration what i stated. Good Luck.

[Dhundari]

@XX30

I once again appreciate your views.

I don't deny that Indiansubmale may have been encouraged by some prominent writer and adopted style.

But the story has not been ploted long back. Precisely, it must be dated between 2001 to 2010 and heavily inclined towords 2010. People were using cell phone and SMS. WhatsApp came sometime in 2010. Five day week is in force in some private industries. Shopping malls started functioning. People are going to movie halls and tickets are available. I mean demand for tickets are not so high during weakends . So, it is transition period prior to multiplexes took over from earlier cinema halls.

I congratulate the original author for precisely adopting the time frame even if it turns out to be copied from fantasy story.

Please continue with your feedback.

Hi manasi, any possible date or month... delhi abhi bahut dur lar rahi hai

[manasi]

Hi manasi, any possible date or month... delhi abhi bahut dur lar rahi hai

I promised Oct 2020, and find no reason to miss deadline unless KOVID-19 play havoc.

[Dhundari]

I promised Oct 2020, and find no reason to miss deadline unless KOVID-19 play havoc.

 manasi Patiently waiting

[manasi]

Hi, it is fascinating to note how exciting everybody is analysing, fantasising, assuming whether this really happened or just fanfasy and imagination.

Well, let me state that most of the stuff in the story can happen  in life and is happening in a lot of peoples life. I have known atleast a couple people who, one willingly, and another ubwillingly forced in those situations. Except, the humiliations, sadistic behaviour, depravity, and slutty and worish behaviour, most of other things happens in real life.So, you decide whether to finish it taking into consideration what i stated. Good Luck.

Mind is conditioned.
Life is under compulsions.
If sex is driving force, behavioural aberrations are natural.