[Rangabaashyam]

Wonderful update and twist. Is that two security at arjun house. What is there for Razia. Fingers crossed.

[kamdev99008]

great............... unexpected twist

may be something fishy.............. not a simple betrayal sescapade

[xbiilove]

I suspect some blackmail or act of arjun business enemies. Nijum and dev are dangerous psychopath and acting in front of the family? Waiting for more details to unfold. Great narration.

[Test07]

What a twist... Keep going

[Kamalesh Nathan]

Super hot thriller

[bobby]

nice update

[Ajay4321234]

Good twist keep updating

[Uday]

Chill bro nothing to take serious enjoy sex 

As Salman says outsiders and raakeeya parties ne  apko aur in logo ko itna ched kar diya hai ki  originality bhool gaye ho thats y we kicked them outsiders out

If any facts disturbs u I'm sorry

Lastly I want to write story on one guy named Mohammad cuckold small girl Ayesha to his assistant  Abu bakar how to open thread bro can u help me plz

Bro
Thanks for understanding and nothing personnel. I like your attitude.

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That's all, good luck

[axma55]

Nice update, waiting for next update .

[Uday]

nice twist 
heard, read and saw three some ( one lady two men or one man two ladies )
Now four some, it must be hell of a time for Mariam or heaven...waiting eagerly to know

[worldlover]

nice twist 
heard, read and saw three some ( one lady two men or one man two ladies )
Now four some, it must be hell of a time for Mariam or heaven...waiting eagerly to know

Not foursome, it was fivesome. There was already four men plus Mariam. They told her beforehand that they were going to post her video on internet and defame her. She choose to save her family not her reputation. Will that make it a heavenly experience for a normal housewife? Hope we will see...

[kamdev99008]

Not foursome, it was fivesome. There was already four men plus Mariam. They told her beforehand that they were going to post her video on internet and defame her. She choose to save her family not her reputation. Will that make it a heavenly experience for a normal housewife? Hope we will see...

exactly nothing is entertaining ....... but everything is disturbing ...........................
betrayal of binisha, ditching of brothers, conspiracy f mother and her allies (champa & maybe watchmen too)
and now ............blackmailing of mariam

[kamdev99008]

waiting eagerly for the next update

[Uday]

exactly nothing is entertaining ....... but everything is disturbing ...........................
betrayal of binisha, ditching of brothers, conspiracy f mother and her allies (champa & maybe watchmen too)
and now ............blackmailing of mariam

:) :) while watching the old Indian movies always use to wonder why all the problems for the HERO of the movie like he use to have a physically disabled sister or sister getting bangd or father hostage with the the villain, no money, no parents, orphaned in childhood etc..etc...still end up watching the movie till the end as the hero comes out of all difficulties and hurdles and end with a good note....that's entertaining when you come out of the theater triumphant 
here now mariam...don't know may be Banisha's videos ( like nude bath, self satisfying and fucking with Arjun ) are doing rounds on internet courtesy Nokul & Dev which ultimately lead her to succumb to thier demands as well the mother in law to protect the family name as they are Zamindari family...
lot of unanswered questions....
definitely Arjun...the warrior will come out with flying colours, now wondering who is the Krishna who supports, guides, advises and shows the right path to Arjun...may be the lawyer because of getting hurt for the things happened to his family &/ his wife Mariam

the author didn't keep his promise of giving two updates D:) D:)

BRO GIVE SOME BIG UPDATE PLEASE

[paamu_buss]

wow... Twists... One big update

[kamdev99008]

:) :) while watching the old Indian movies always use to wonder why all the problems for the HERO of the movie like he use to have a physically disabled sister or sister getting banged or father hostage with the the villain, no money, no parents, orphaned in childhood etc..etc...still end up watching the movie till the end as the hero comes out of all difficulties and hurdles and end with a good note....that's entertaining when you come out of the theater triumphant 
here now mariam...don't know may be Banisha's videos ( like nude bath, self satisfying and fucking with Arjun ) are doing rounds on internet courtesy Nokul & Dev which ultimately lead her to succumb to thier demands as well the mother in law to protect the family name as they are Zamindari family...
lot of unanswered questions....
definitely Arjun...the warrior will come out with flying colours, now wondering who is the Krishna who supports, guides, advises and shows the right path to Arjun...may be the lawyer because of getting hurt for the things happened to his family &/ his wife Mariam

the author didn't keep his promise of giving two updates D:) D:)

BRO GIVE SOME BIG UPDATE PLEASE

ha ha ha ha 
good example.................
to became a hero...........you must have a lot of problems

[Ajay4321234]

yr):
Keep going

[axma55]

Waiting, please post next update.

[worldlover]

Betrayals & Sacrifices: Update 9- Twin Life

Afte everyone slept that Thursday night Nokul and Dev was talking to each other while laying on their bed.
D: What a day man, today was so much fun.
N: It was the same for me like every other time. It was special for only you.
D: It was heaven man, heaven. My first anal sex. It was way better than any porn could ever describe. Boudi is so much tighter down there. And don't tell me that you did not enjoy what you did.
N: Of course I enjoyed it, but today everything was about you.You are so much rough with her, yet she asks for more. I don't know if she likes my nice and slow. That's why I tried to be a bit rough today.
D: She likes it with you too. The first time I only got her because she thought I was you. I was just at the right place at the right time.
N: She doesn't say if I am better or you are.
D: I noticed it also. She always changes the topic when I ask her who is better. Once while I was fucking her in the doggy style, I was teasing her not allowing her to climax she was getting desperate to cum. At that time I asked her who does her better among us three brothers. It was an honest slip of toung. I don't know how I mentioned Dada's name. But as soon as I asked that she swiftly got out of her knees shoved me down on the bed. She was so furious like spitting fire saying how dare I try to compare me with her husband. How dare I try to humiliate her husband and all that. I honestly felt bad about that and asked for her forgiveness for the next half an hour. 
N: Ha ha ha. You didn't get to touch her for rest of that day, right?
D: And the next day also.
N: No matter how much we try dada will always be the best at satisfying boudy in bed. You wouldn't believe how wild dada and boudi are on the bed if you don't see for yourself.
D: (Dev was confused) As if you saw? 
N: Yes, I did.
D: What? How? When?
N: Last month. I accidently saw it. I got up in the middle of the night to use the toilet. But you were already in the toilet in this room.I could not control anymore and thought  I would go in the drawing room toilet. After finishing peeing I went to the kitchen to drink some water. On the way to my room I saw that dada - boudi's room was not closed properly. In front of that room I heard some thap thap sounds. I couldn't control my curiosity and tried to see inside the room. What I saw was mindblowing. They were fucking each other like some wild animals. Both of them was  trying to outdo each other. Our soft spoken brother was fucking his wife like a jackhammer. I thought I could get caught if I stay  any longer. So  quickly went to sleep in my room.
D: Wow man you are lucky if you saw that.
N: You aare the reaI lucky one. I wish I could also have anal sex with her. I feel a little jealous.
D: Why did you not ask for anal sex then last week when you won the game? 
N: Because I wanted more. I asked and convinced her to go to the picnic that our group arranged, as my girlfriend this Saturday. She would have to act as my girlfriend in front of my friends.
D: She agreed?
N: She even also got permission from dada and mom to go with me. Dada of course doesn't know that she will be acting as my girlfriend . She has such a good figure that nobody will guess that she is a married woman.

Dev and Nokul was then pulling each other's  legs. After sometime their conversation turned towards their brother's accident earlier that day..
D: Dada is so cool na, Nokul?
N: Yes. He so much brave. But what I admire most about him is that he never loses his cool in front of danger. 
D: That's why I want to become like him.
N: Ha..ha.. ha.You and become like dada? The sun have to rise in the west for it to happen. 
D: Not so funny man. Why can't I become like dada.
N: You are always up to some pranks or other shenanigans.  
D: What to do, it is who I am. I like pranks too much.
N: You are impossible sometimes. Just yesterday you proposed to Radhika in front of her brother, all her and your friends. She was blushing so much. At the end when she was smiling and started to respond, you just laughed and told loudly thay it was just a prank. That was very mean to do that to a girl in front of so many people. 
D: I apolozised to her later na. It was just a bet that shakil challenged me with. The bet was for me to propose to a senior girl. I did it and I won.
N: Yet, you shouldn't have done that. She is one of our clasmate's elder sister. You should have respected that fact. Did you see Ronny's face?  He was furious with you.
D: I feel sorry for that man. But I am not afraid of Ronny. He just walks around with some 4-5 guys and thinks he is strong or some thing. He is always bullying everyone. I am not afraid of any 5.5 feet bully.
N: I don't know. I feel someday your pranks are going to land you in big trouble and drag me along in it. See, I even wear this 0 power glasses so that everyone knows that I am Nokul, not you.
Dev: Whatever man. Forget it. Think about what are you going to do Saturday. A whole day, boudi with you as your gf in front of all your friends.
N: I can't wait for tomorrow to be over and Saturday to come.
D: Ok, sleep now you have test tomorrow. Goodnight.
N: Good night.

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[paamu_buss]

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clp);
yr): super, but feel sad for arjun, nokul enjoy with binisha infront of friends... What kind of mother giving permission to his son? twists excellent