09-06-2020, 08:42 AM
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Adultery Wardi wali ki dastan-haivaniyat
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11-06-2020, 08:33 PM
Update 16
Morning me Mahak alarm ke bajne tak aise hi nude soti rahti hai isvakt 6 bajne ko the alarm pichle 30 minute se baj rahi thi Aakhir Mahak gahri sukun bhari nind se jagti hai mahak apni aankhein kholti hai or ek najar apne nude khubsurat sharir per padti hai Use night me huyi ghatna ke bare me kuch kuch yad aane lagta hai mahak sabkuch bilkul dhula dhula sa yad aata hai use ye yad aa raha tha ki kisi mard ne night me usko vo sukh diya jiski use jarurat thi Per use us vykti ka face yad nahi tha kyonki jab tak Nishant usko sharirik sukh de raha tha tab tak mahak ne maje se aankhe ek bar bhi nahi kholi kyonki us vakt sexpower dose se mahak ke andar havas ka lava bahut adhik badh raha tha Aakhir Mahak bed per uthakar baith jati hai or night ki ghtna ko yad karne lagti per us shaks ka chehra bilkul bhi yaad nahi Per ab jaise hi mahak baithti hai to hai to uska jism ki skin khichne lagti hai or fir se mahak apne jism par najar dalti hai to usko white jel ki parat si jami dikhti bade bade boobs or unki ghatiyon me kamar janghon per or chut per virya ki parat jami hui thi Mahak hath se us jami hui parat ko halka sa hatakar dekhti hai to use samjhte der nahi lagi ki ye kisi mard ka virya hai Mahak soch me pad jati hai aakhir kon aaya hoga night me or aaya to use pata kyo nahi chala Dusri taraf mahak ko darwaja khula dikhta hai thoda sa darwaja khula hua tha Mahak khidkiyon ki taraf bhi najar doudati hai to sabhi khidkiyon band thi achanak mahak ke dimag me Nishant ka nam bhi sujhta hai Mahak-(kahi nishant to nahi aaya night me) Per dusre hi pal mahak sochne lagti hai Mahak-(nahi nishant nahi ho sakta wo chota bhai hai mera) Per fir se pichli night ki ghatna yad aati hai jab Nishant mahak ke kamre ke bahar muth mar raha tha Mahak ko ab yakin ho chala tha ki ho na ho vo Nishant hi tha mahak soch me padi huyi thi ki room ke bahar kisi ke kadmo ki aahat sunai deti mahak apni halat dekh kar dar jati hai or aise hi nangi hi washroom ki taraf bhag jati hai Mahak washroom me jakar aayne me apne aapko dekhti hai Or ek angdai leti hai jisse mahak ke boobs ubhar kar tarbuj se lag rahe the Mahak dhyan ab apne bade bade stan per jata hai jisse mahak ko apne jism par gurur hone lagta hai Mahak ko life me pahli bar apne sexy jism par abhiman ho raha tha ho bhi kyon na mahak thi bhi bahut khubsurat bilkul devlok ki rati ki bhati apsara bilkul kaam ki devi lag rahi thi Mahak apne boobs ko apne hatho se jor jor se press karne lagti hai Or apne hi ek boobs ko pakad kar ucha karti hai isvakt Mahak ka stan bilkul muh tak aa rahe the pata nahi mahak ko kya sujhti hai vo apne ek nipple ko muh me khichkar chusne lagti hai Mahak ko apne hi boobs chusne me aanand ki prapti ho rahi thi Mahak ab aakhen band kar ke lagatar apne hi boobs chusti rahti hai aise hi dusre boobs ko bhi chusne lagti hai Isi tarah kafi der tak boobs chusti rahti hai per room me phone ki ring lagatar 5min se bajti ja rahi thi jisse mahak hosh me aati hai or sharm se dub jati hai aaj use sharm aa rahi thi ki usko ye kya hota ja raha hai kyo vo apne aap ko control kyo nahi rakh pa rahi Mahak jaldi se nahati hai apne jism se us shaks ke Nishant ke virya ko ache se saf karti hai or nangi hi room me entry karti hai use darwaja khula dikhai padta hai jo mahak ko yaad tha ki usne night me darwaja ache se band kiya tha phir us shaks ne darwaza kaise khola Uske jahan me ek baat or aati hai ki maine darwaja band kiya tha iska matlab vo shaks pahle se hi andar tha or vo mujhe is roop me........ohhh no ye nahi ho sakta Mahak ko lagbhag Nishant per hi shaq tha mahak darwaja band karti hai or towel se sharir pochkar almari se black colour ki bra penty ka set nikalkar pahanti hai Mahak ke jism me pichle 2,3 week se bahut change aa gaya tha uski sabhi bra bahut tight thi uske boobs bahar ki taraf aajad hone ko betab ho rahe the Mahak aaj wardi nagi pahnti hai balki pink shirt or blue jeans pahanti hai Mahak in kapdo me kayamat lag rahi thi Mahak apne kapde pahankar gun ko pichhe pant me shirt ke niche chupa leti hai is vakt mahak khubsurat lag rahi thi Phir Mahak apne phone per najar dalti hai usme rajesh ki ek missed call or ramlal ki five missed call thi Mahak ke chehre par dono ke number dekhkar smile aa jati hai per Mahak ramlal ko call nahi karti balki rajesh ko call laga deti hai Rajesh-good morning Mahak ji Mahak-good morning Rajesh-(hadbadate huye wo aksar Mahak se baat karte waqt jhijakta tha) vo maine is liye call kiya tha ki mera or umesk ka Fridayday ka joining later aaya hai Mahak-(tenstion me pad jati hai) Mahak koi baat nahi tum dono Friday ko joining kar lena tab tak mai sambhalti hu Rajesh-vaise mera liye koi kaam hoto bolo Mahak-ha hai Rajesh-kya Mahak-tum batao Rajesh-(sochte huye) coffee Mahak-are tum to mere bina bole hi pahchan gaye ki mai kya chahti hu Rajesh-ha Mahak ji pata nahi mai aapki aawaj se hi pata laga leta hu ki aapke man me kya chal raha hai Mahak-(apne nichle hot ko katte huye)sachchi Rajesh-ji Mahak-to phir aa jao coffee per milte hai Rajesh-ji bilkul Mahak-tum kaha ho is vakt Rajesh-duty per Mahak-to sham ko mile Rajesh-ji bilkul Mahak-thik hai byy apna khayal rakhna Rajesh-aap bhi apna khayal rakhna Mahak-ok Or phone cut jata hai mahak ko Rajesh se baat karke bahut khusi milti hai Mahak kafi der tak Rajesh ke bare mein sochti hai Mahak-(mujhe Rajesh acha kyo lagta hai kahi mujhe pyar...) Itna hi sochti hai or uske face per muskan aa jati hai or sharm se najre jhuka leti hai Phir mahak ek massage likhti hai or Mahak apne room se bahar nikalti hai shidhiyon per Mahak nishant mil jata hai vo mahak ko dekhkar apne chehre per kutil muskan lata hai uski smile ko dekhkar Mahak ko pakka yakin ho jata hai Mahak vaha se apne chehre par gussa late huye nikal jati hain Navya piche se mahak ko aawaj deti hai Navya-di ruko Mahak-rukte huye kya hai bittu Navya-di khana khalo Mahak-bittu aaj time nahi hai mujhe ek important case solve karna hai isliye jana hoga Navya-(Mahak ko jyada force nahi karti)ok di byy Mahak-byy bittu or mahak Nikal jati hai Mahak ke dimag me kuch to khatarnak chal raha tha Mahak sakshi ke ghar pahuch jati hai mahak door bell bajati hai to sakshi hi door oper karti kyonki sakshi ki maa mandir gayi thi Sakshi-aao mahak Mahak-anti kaha hai Sakshi-mandir gayi hai Mahak-tumhe maine massage me bataya tha vo sab saman ready hai Sakshi-ha per isme khatra hai Mahak-ye karna jaruri hai agar aisa nahi kiya to shantikant aise hi aajad ghumta phirega Sakshi-thik hai to mission shantikant shuru kare ha Mahak-hun Or Mahak or sakshi dono andar kamre me pahuch jati hai andar pahuch kar sakshi Mahak ko lahnga choli pahanne ko deti hai or mahak un kapdo ko pahan leti hai Mahak in kapdo me ek dam basti ki hi ladki lag rahi thi jisme vo kayamat dha rahi thi Sakshi maha ka desi shrangar karti hai jisme usko koi pahchan na paye url=https://imgbb.com/][/url] Sakshi-wahh ACP Mahak ab tumhe koi nahi pahchan sakta ki tum ek security officer wali ho Mahak-to chale acp sakshi Sakshi-ji bilkul Or dono sakshi ki car se basti ki taraf ravana ho jati hai Darasal Mahak shantikant ko pakad ne se pahle ye pata karna chahti thi ki shantikant us basti me jalim singh ke yaha chupa hai ya nahi or ye tabhi mumkin tha jab Mahak khud ya koi jasus vaha jakar pata kare isliye Mahak khudne ye jimma liya tha Mahak or sakshi basti se kuch 500 miter dur gadi rokti hai or vaha se ek khilona ki tokri kharid leti or Mahak thodi dur utarkar sankri gali me ghus jati hai Sakshi apni car vahi se ghuma leti hai apne thane ki taraf Mahak is sankri gali se sidhe basti me jalim singh ke adde ke samne main road per pahuch jati hai Mahak se khilone bechna shuru karti hai or alag language use karti hui aage badhti hai Mahak-ae maiya khilone lelo saste khilone ache khilone tanik dekhi kitne ache khilone ba ae tau khilone lelo apne bacho ke liye Basti me sabhi log Mahak ki aawaj ki taraf dekhte hai sab ki najre Mahak ki bal khati jawani ko matakti gand or patli kamar ko ghur rahe the Mahak ke boobs ko kha jane wali najro se dekh rahe the omg gif Mahak ke is hot avtaar per sab ki budhe jawan bache sab Mahak ko ghur rahe the yaha tak ladis bhi sab Mahak ko ghur rahi thi ya phir ye kahe jal rahi thi Mahak thi hi itni khubsurat sabhi budhe jawan Mahak ki taraf badhte hai or Mahak ko gher lete hai Ek bacha Mahak ki taraf city bajata hai mahak bache ki is harkat per chouk jati hai to ek budda Mahak ki kamar per chikoti katte huye bolta hai Mahak-(dard se kamar per masalte huye)ahhhhh kya chahte ho tau Budda-kitne bade khilone ba tere pas Mahak bhi budde ko do took jawab me aise hi answer deti hai Mahak-tau tera pair kabra me latak rahe hai tere kaha se chote bache honge is budhape me jo khilone ke bare me puch raha hai Budda Mahak ke is jawab se sharm se najar jhuka leta hai Isvakt mahak koi nahi pahchan sakta tha us basti me Mahak aage badhti hai or jalim singh ke ghar ke saamne se hoke gujar rahi thi vaha Mahak ko ek gunda type 53 sal ka insan kafi der se mahak ko ghure ja raha tha Yeh koi or nahi khud jalim apne aadmiyon ke sath khada tha basti ke sabhi log ki najar pahle to is scene per atki Hui thi par jab jalim unki taraf aakh dikhata hai to sab apna apna kam karne lag jate hai Jalim-ae ladki idhar aao udhar kaha ja rahi ho Mahak jalim singh ko pahchan jati hai uski file ko pahle hi read kar chuki thi mahak Mahak-boliye sab aapko bhi khilone chaiye Jalim-ha mujhe bhi khilone chaiye Mahak jalim singh ki najro ka picha karti hai to Mahak sharm se pani pani ho jati hai kyoki jalim Mahak ki jawani ko tad raha tha vo Mahak ke bhari bhari boobs or patli kamar ko ghur raha tha Jalim apne aadmiyon ko vaha se jane ka ishara karta hai or mahak ki taraf badhta hai Jalim-tum is kadi dhup me aise kyo ghumti ho Mahak-kya sab is papi pet ke liye ghumna padta hai agar aise ghar baith jaungi to kaise pet bharega Jalim-agar tumhe aaj se aise galiyo me ghumna na pade to Mahak-kya sahab kyo hamari garibi ka majak banate ho Jalim-sach kah raha hu aaj se tum mere farmhouse per rahna Mahak-farmhouse per Jalim singh mahak ke kafi najdik piche ki taraf aa gaya tha or mahak ke badan ki khusbu le raha tha Jalim-ha farmhouse idhar apni wife or bache rahte hai Mahak-saheb kya mai aapke bacho ko khilone de sakti hu Bura mat manna saheb per mai apni aadat se majboor hu Jalim-koi bat nahi tum khilone de sakti ho bache andar hai Mahak-dhanyvad saheb Or mahak andar ki taraf badhti hai Mahak charo taraf najar douda rahi thi bahar se ye ghar chota sa purana jarjar lag raha tha or andar se mahal jaisa tha Mahak ki nigahe shantikant ko talash rahi thi per andar ghar ka mahol dekhkar Mahak ko aisa lag raha tha jaise yaha gundo ka nahi devtao ka vas ho Mahak jalim ke bacho ko khilone dekar bahar aati hai Jalim-chale ab farmhouse per Mahak kisi soch me dubi hui dekhkar jalim fir se bolta hai Jalim kya hua ladki ghar pasand nahi aaya Mahak-aaya na saheb bahut sundar ekdam badka mahal jaisa Jalim-(haste huye)ye to kuch bhi nahi mera farmhouse isse bhi bada hai jaha tum rahne wali ho Mahak-sach saheb Mahak jalim ki nigahon ko uski lalchi najroko jo is vakt boobs or patli kamar par jami hui thi Jalim-aapne aapka naam nahi bataya Mahak-(apna naam chupate huye)ji champa Jalim-to chale champa ji Mahak-ha chalo saheb Jalim or Mahak car me baithte hai or farmhouse ki taraf chal dete hai mahak ki dhadkan badhi hui thi kyoki mahak Jalim ki lalsa ko bhali bhati janti thi Udhar collage me Nishant apne phone me Mahak ki nude photo ko dekh raha tha jisko shantikant ka beta chupke se mahak ki tasviro ko dekh leta hai or apne man me khush ho jata hai Nishant ke hath se phone chinkar uske side me baith jata hai Nishant uski is harkat per bilkul bhi gussa nahi hota or baitha rahta hai Shivam-abe oyy ye to... Nishant-ha bahan hai meri Shivam-kya mal hai yaar tere maje ho gaye Nishant-nahi yaar abhi aisa kuch nahi hua Shivam-kyo be itna kuch to dekh liya or kar liya phir aisa kyu bol raha hai Nishant-are yar tumne jo dawai di thi usse yaha tak pahuch gaya per aage kuch karne ki himmat nahi hui Shivam-tenstion na le tum yaha tak pahuch gaye ye bahut hai ab aage ka rasta ham khud apni marji se tay karenge Nishant-matlab Shivam-matlab ye ki aage ye picture vo kam karengi jo tum vaha tak pahuch kar bhi nahi kar paye Nishant-matlab blackmailing Shivam-ha bhai blackmailing isse acha mouka or nahi ho sakta Nishant-mujhe bahut dar lagta hai us hitler se Shivam-tu tenstion na le ye tera dost us teri attitude wali bahan ko tere niche lekar aayega Nishant-tu sach bol raha hai Shivam-ha bhai tu ab dekhta ja mai kya karta hu Or shivam ke chehre per kutil muskan aajati hai Darasal shivam ne nishant ko itna bigad diya tha ki vo apni bahan ko chodne ki bat usse karne laga tha Udhar jalim or Mahak farmhouse pahuch jate hai Mahak itna bada farmhouse jo do hisso me bata hua tha usko dekhkar shouk ho jati hai Mahak-wahh saheb itna bada farmhouse ye aapka hai Jalim-ha re champa ye mera hai per ab se ye tera ho jayega Mahak-mai samjhi nahi saheb Jalim-tum sab samjh jaogi thodi der me ab andar chalo mai farmhouse dikhata hu Mahak jalim singh ki baate sunkar dar rahi thi phir bhi vah darte huye jalim ke piche jati hai or dusri taraf ke farmhouse ke bare me puchti hai Mahak-ye saheb us taraf itne aadmi kyo khade hai Jalim-champa udhar se mai business karta hu or idhar me rahta hu tumhe us taraf se koi matlab nahi hai Mahak-ji thik hai saheb Mahak samjh jati hai ho na ho yahi shantikant ko chupa rakha hoga Ab Mahak or jalim bade se hole me khade the jaha charo or sishe hi sishe the jo charo or se parde lage huye the Or hole me sofe or bed or bahut sari sharab ki botle rakhi huyi thi Jalim jakar ek sofe par baith jata hai or champa se bolta hai Jalim-are champa tum bhi aao yaha sofe per baitho dekho kitna aaramdayak hai Mahak jalim ke irade samjh rahi thi fir bhi vo jalim ke side wale sofe per jakar baith jati hai jalim halke se mahak ki taraf khisakta hai kyonki jalim ki sabse badi kamjori jawan ladkiya thi or is vakt jalim ki kamjori Mahak bani huyi thi JalI'm ek hath Mahak ke kandhe par rakh deta hai hath ka adhiktar bhar sofe per tha or halke se mahak ke kandhe ko sahlata hai Mahak ke kandhe par gair mard ka hath lagte hi use shiran si hoti hai jalim apna dusra hath se mahak ke hath ko pakad kar ungliyan sahlane lagta hai Mahak jalim ke irade samjh rahi thi Mahak-ye kya kar rahe ho saheb Jalim-is ghar ki malkin banane ki koshish kar raha hu bolo banogi na Mahak-nahi saheb hamko nahi banna kono malkin halkin hame dar lag raha hai Jalim-tum darogi to kaise kaam chalega Mahak kuch jawab nahi dete ban raha tha isliye Mahak chup pad jati hai mahak ki chuppi jalim ka hosla badha deti hai Jalim apna hath Mahak ke hath se hatakar Mahak ki Kamar per rakh deta hai or kamar ko sahlane lagta hai Mahak ki aakhen band ho jati hai or halke se siskiyan nikal Jati haI Mahak-ahhhhhhhhhnahiisahebbbbb Jalim apne dusre hath se mahak ki gardan ko apni taraf khichta hai mahak ki aakhen pahle se hi band thi usko jab jalim apne garm hoth Mahak ke hoth per tika deta hai to Mahak apni aakhe kholkar jhatpatane lagti hai Per ek old age budha mahak jaisi garm khun wali ladki ke hoth chus raha tha Mahak ab apna control khoye jarahi thi mahak kisi bhi mard ke chune se bahut jaldi control kho deti thi or Mahak isvakt bhi apna control kho rahi thi Jalim apna hath sarkakar mahak ke boobs per rakh deta hai or dhire dhire dabane lagta hai Mahak aahe bhar rahi thi Mahak-ahhhhhhhhhhjohhhhhhhhhh Jalim apna hath niche Mahak ki chut per lejakar chut ko masalne lagta hai Mahak ab puri tarah sex ki garmi me jalne lagti hai Jalim thodi der Mahak ki chut ko masalne ke baad Mahak ko chod deta hai Ab Mahak ke andar aag itni badh chuki thi ki ab or rukna namumkin tha mahak ke liye Isliye Mahak mard ke liye tadap rahi thi Mahak jalim ki taraf dekh rahi thi jalim apne kapde utarne me laga hua tha jalim apna kapde utar deta hai isvakt Mahak ki najro ke samne jalim ka 5inch ka land khada hua tha jiski sabhi nashe Mahak ko dikhai pad rahi thi Jalim sofe ki taraf badhta hai or mahak ki side me baithkar kiss karne lagta hai Mahak ab phir se hawas ki garmi me dub jati hai isvakt Mahak ko kaise bhi apne sharir ki pyaas bujhani thi Jalim Mahak ki kamar me hath dalkar Mahak ke lahnge ka nada khol deta hai or lahnge ko khichkar alag kar deta hai Aaj Mahak is mission ko bhulkar Hawas ki aag ko bujhane me lagi huyi thi Jalim ke samne Mahak ki black panty thi jiskI elastic ko pakad kar jalim khichne lagta hai Mahak bhi apni gand utha kar panty utarne me jalim ka sath deti hai Mahak ki chut jalim ke samne thi jis per halke bal the jalim us per hath ghumata hai jisse Mahak siskariyan phut padti hai Mahak-shhhhhhahhhhhsahhhebbbb Mahak ki is ada per jalim fida ho jata hai or mahak ko sofe par halka sa jhuka kar choli ki doori khich deta hai or Mahak ke jism choli ke sath sath bra bhi alag kar deta hai Or khud letkar Mahak ko apne uper jhukakar Mahak ke boobs chusne lag jata hai Mahak bhi ab apne boobs ko maje se jalim ko dudh pite bache ki tarah chusa rahi thi Or dusre hath se jalim Mahak ke boobs ko daba raha tha Mahak-ahhhhsahebbbbappppbadeeeeejalim ho Jalim hasta hai or mahak ke boobs per jor se kat deta hai or Mahak chilla uthti hai Mahak-nahiiiiiiiiiisahebbbbb Jalim ke katne se mahak ko hosh aata hai or is hawas ke khel se bahar nikalna chahti thi per is hawas ke khel se nikalna mumkin nahi tha phir bhi mahak ko ek idea aata hai Mahak jalim ke pairo ki taraf badhti hai or jalim ke 5inch lund ko hath se pakad kar sahlana shuru kar deti hai Mahak ke hatho ki garmi se jalim aahe bharne lagta hai Jalim-ahhhh champa darling ahhhhaise hi Mahak ke jalim ke lund sahlane se jyada der ruk nahi pata or 5 minute ke ander hi jhad jata hai mahak samjh pati tab tak tir kaman se nikal chuka tha or sara virya ki barish Mahak ke chehre per ho gayi thi Mahak ko ghin aane lagti hai or apna chehra khud ki panty se hi puch leti hai or pata nahi mahak ko kya sujhta hai apni panty ko jalim ke chehre per fek deti hai Per jalim hosh me nahi tha shayad is umar me jhadne ke baad vo nind ke aaghosh me chala gaya tha Mahak jalim ko hilakar dekhti hai per vo gahri nind me chala gaya tha Mahak jaldi se apne kapde pahankar dusre farmhouse ke pedo me chupkar najar doudati hai to use shantikant dikh jata hai mahak isvakt hi shantikant ka khatm karna chahti thi par abhi Mahak kuch bhi taiyari me nahi aayi thi Mahak vaha se nikalna hi thik samjhti hai or jalim ko shaq na ho isliye gaurd se apne ghar jane ki bolti hai Mahak-gaurd bhaiya hamra ek kaam kar doge Gaurd-bolo kya karna hai Mahak-bhaiya vo saheb so gaye the isliye mai apne ghar ko ja rahi hu saheb ko bol dena Gaurd-thik hai mai bol dunga Mahak vaha se nikal jati hai or sakshi ko call karke bula leti hai kuch 15 minute me sakshi Mahak ke pas aajati hai isvakt 11baj rahe Mahak or sakshi dono sakshi ke ghar ki taraf nikal padti Kya shantikant ka ant najdik aa gaya hai Aakhir Mahak kaise karegi shantikant ka ant Or kya kya karna padega Mahak ko apni life me Janne ke liye waiting for next update
12-06-2020, 02:58 PM
(11-06-2020, 10:34 PM)Shabaz123 Wrote: Great mind blowing update bro.....Thanks bhai ek aap hi hai update aane per comments karte ho lagta hai kisi ko bhi kahani pasand nahi aa rahi hai dil se dhanyawad bro
12-06-2020, 04:16 PM
update hi itna slow hai ki koi comment karke kare bhi kya
12-06-2020, 04:23 PM
Omprakash Meenaji, aap ki security officerwali story hit hai. Aap bas story ko poori karna. Rahaa update toh aap doosre lazy weiters ki compare men aap bahot hee organized hai. Aur aapka samyam aur tehezeeb kaabil e taarif hai. Aap ki jagah koi aur writer hotaa toh apnaa aapaa kho detaa. Ek aap hee xosiipy writer hai jo lady cop ka erotic genre bahot achchha likh rahe ho.
Sirf ek suggestions hai, aap erotic scene ke saath khelo: Jaise aur Readers ne aap ko bataayaa ki aap erotic scene men bahot kanjoosaai karte ho. Bhai dil khol ke aap ke erotic scenes ke saath khelo. Aap ke erotic scenes men bahot scope hai. Apna famous writer Royalkingfire "Bas karo" Namrata ki story men scene ko kya erotic seduction detaa hai. Rajkumar ki Budha Tailor aur Watchman ki story men erotic scene ko bahot kheltaa hai. Yeh sirf nain Reference de rahaa hoon.Aap bhi kheliye. Itna jaldi Mahek ke bhai ja aur zalim sing ka paani (ejecilation) itna jaldi mat nikaliye. Aur aap ke paas bahot talent hai. All the best. Main aap ki story ki shuruaat se hee aap ka fan hun. Krupyaa story adhuri mat chjodna please....
12-06-2020, 05:04 PM
(12-06-2020, 04:23 PM)doctor101 Wrote: Omprakash Meenaji, aap ki security officerwali story hit hai. Aap bas story ko poori karna. Rahaa update toh aap doosre lazy weiters ki compare men aap bahot hee organized hai. Aur aapka samyam aur tehezeeb kaabil e taarif hai. Aap ki jagah koi aur writer hotaa toh apnaa aapaa kho detaa. Ek aap hee xosiipy writer hai jo lady cop ka erotic genre bahot achchha likh rahe ho. Mr. doctor aap bhi bahut ache writer ho aapne sikha ki life chote sahar se aage is khani ko bkhubi sambhala Jis vakt us kahani ka writer kahani chodne wala tha tab aapne us kahani ko sambhala Aapke is suggetion ka mai samman karta hu jaise aap chahte hai mai is kahani ko aage vaise hi le jane ki koshish karunga mai update dene me erotic scene ko thoda bada khichne ki koshish karunga Dhanyawad mr. doctor suggetion ke liye
12-06-2020, 09:29 PM
nice update .....
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Main ek sex doll bani..https://xossipy.com/thread-2030.html uncle ne banai meri movie(bdsm).. https://xossipy.com/thread-40694.html
12-06-2020, 11:40 PM
Great.. mind blowing update .. aise e khich k rkho kam. Best story ever
13-06-2020, 09:33 AM
Jabardast update..... Waiting for next update meena ji
13-06-2020, 02:33 PM
Bhai kahani sahi ja ri he bus toda long update do or sex seen ko toda lamba khicho taki maza pura aaye.
Es episode me ram lal ki b help le skte he quki vo b ACP madam ka diwana ban gya he ramlal ko b toda time mahak ke sath mil jata. And Jalim ladkiyo ka business krta he vo ek darinda he usko or crul banao na hi hilane se jhad jaye or so jaye Baki all d best
14-06-2020, 12:24 AM
(12-06-2020, 05:04 PM)Omprakash meena Wrote: Mr. doctor aap bhi bahut ache writer ho aapne sikha ki life chote sahar se aage is khani ko bkhubi sambhala Omprakash ji aap sab ke dilon ko jeetne ke liye itnaa pyaar aur sammaan dete hain. Mujhe bahot achchha lagaa. I am a murderer of Wickedsunnyboi's story Shikha. I disappointed his loyal fans. But let's not talk about it. Lekin aapne aur Bhoglo ne mujhe jo support kiyaa is liye aap ka dil se shukriyaa. Doosra ek suggestions: Mahek is a fearless dabang cop. Is liye action cop sequence men use bilkul kamzor mat bataanaa. Woh apni duty aur desh ke kiye kuchh bhi balidaan dene ke liye taiyaar rahegi. Apni Chanakya niti aur shaan daam dand bhed aur sexual politics vashikaran se dushman ko maat degi. Woh sex ko apnaa ek hathyaar ke roop men istemaal karegi. Dusman ko, Ramlal aur brother ko aisaa lagegaa ki Mahek unki slave ghulaam hai. Magar haqueeqat men Mahek un sabko use karke apna main dushman ko pakadne ki ek maaya-jaal ek shad yantra banna kar maat degi. Aur ek baar Mahek ko sex ka experience ho jaayegaa toh woh khud saamne waale ko sex men exploit karegi. Magar act karegi Innocently. Doosra aapne Raamlal Hawaaldaar joh Dushmanon ke saath meelaa huaa hai. Woh plot bhi exploit karo. Woh plot aap ki story men se security officer station fight with gang ke baad gaayab ho gayaa. Raamlal ke saath bhi khelo. Aap ne security officer station men Mahek jo apne hawaaldaaron se sar dabaana, paanv dabaana. Woh bahot achchha likha aapne. Bro just a suggestion. Aap bahot achchhe likhte ho. Don't change your plots please..... I will always support you.
14-06-2020, 08:14 AM
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14-06-2020, 12:54 PM
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