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Great story line, Dil mange more..
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I sincerely hope that Khurram gets atleat now what he wanted from beginning. It's been frustating for him as well for us. Please writer I know your delaying only makes the wait worth it but please let Khurram have first taste of apple before anyone other character gets to her. Khurram deserves every right to deflower her and amke her a woman in true sense.
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Good narration and happy to see that forceful sex is not the essence of the story and that's why it’s different. The progression of Tanvi’s adventure happened based on her wish and lets continue that way. Eroticism developed as she encountered different people be it Slum or Mehta’s house even though slum experiences were more erotic but you being the writer taken this story to a level with controlled manner. Being a reader i would be happy to see more night adventures of Heroine post Sanjoth’s departure. Again your story and would love to read it as its coming! Thank you for taking time out and entertaining us. You rocks and keep going.
Awesomely narrated the situation of each and every person evolved plus trapping of sanjoth by elderly couple is great.
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Amazing story and hot buildup! Waiting for next update.
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What happened to the story ? It's all gone!
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yeah.. All the story got removed. Any reason ??