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rahul dyna ka naam sunkar chock gaya tha
or uski kahani or shaktiya ka varnan sunkar bhi hairan tha
rahul ( mann me) : to kya dyna sach me rohan ki badi bhan hai prerna ne to kaha tha ki dyna rohan se shadi karna chahati thi
Ye kaise ho sakta hai agar dyna rohan ki badi bhan hai to vo rohan se shadi kese kar sakti hai
RAHUL
tabi ek aawaaz aae jisse sunkar rahul fir hairaan ho gaya
rahul ne piche palat kar dekha
Ab aageee
Vahi mayavi lok me is lok ki jo maharaani ban gayi thi matlab dyna apne bade or bohot khubsuraat kamre me khuss hoti hai dyna ka aaj khussi ka thikana nahi rehta or dyna baar baar apna chehara ( face ) mirror me dekh rahi hoti hai
dyna ( mann me face dekhte hue ) : mein khubsuraat to lag rahi hue na nahi nahi mujhe thoda or khubsuraat lagna hoga sabse pehle me multani mitti ka lep apne sarir par lagaugi jisse mera sarir or nikhar jaega or sundhar ho jaega
dyna apne kapre dekhte hue
dyna ( mann me ) : mein khonse kapre pehne jisse mere khubsuraati par chaar chand lag jae ab mujhe soch shamaj kar bahar nikalna padega kahibusko yeh na lage mein me kaise kapre or apne ghehane ( saaj ne savarne ka saman ) pehan rakhe hai
dyna bohot saare kapre pehan kar try karti hai magar usko koi bhi kapre shamaj nahi hate haar kapre pehan kar dyna ko yeh lagta hai ki mein isme achi nahi lagugi
or nirash hokar apne bed par baith jati hai
tabi ek ladki dorati hue dyna ke pass aati hai yeh dyna ki bohot achi dost hai to mein isko abhi sakhi hii likhuga
ladki ( jhumti hue ): dyna ek bohot hii subh or yeh kaho ki bohot acha samachar hai
dyna jaise hii apni dost apni sakhi ko dekhti hai vobjaldi se hii usko pakad kar apne bed par baitha leti hai or apne kapre dikhate hue bolti hai
dyna nirash man se : sakhi mujhe samaj nahi aa raha ki mein khonse kapre pehanu or khonse kapre na pehanu
sakhi dyna ke kande par hath rakhte hue : in sab bato ko choro sakhi tume pata hai is mayavi lok mein khon aya hai
dyna nirash maan se : mujhe pata hai is mayavi lok me rahul aa chuka hai
sakhi hairaan hokar : tume pata hai fir bhi tum nirash ho tume to khuss hona chahiye ki rahul mayavilok me aa chuka hai
dyna pareshan hokar idhar udhar ghumte hue : kaise khuss ho jau shakhi mujhe samajh me nahi aa raha ki mein ab khon se kapre pehan kar bahar jaya karu kiuki rahul mayavi lok me aa chuka hai or
dyna nirasha or khushi ke mile jude bhav lekar : mein yeh nahi chahati ki rahul meri khoobsurati ko dekhkar mohit na ho
mein to yeh chahati hue ki rahul mujhe dekhte hii mohit ho jae
or itna mohit ho jae ki
Dyna jhumte hue khayalo me rahul ko dekhte hue : vo mere samne aakar mujhe kahe dyna tum bohot bohot bohot khubsuraat ho mein ne aise or itni khubsuraat ladki nahi dekhi mein tume dekhte hii pyaar karne laga hue kya tum mera pyaar ko accept karogi or mein rahul se kahu haa rahul mein bhi tumse bohot pyaar karti hue
dyna sakhi ke pass aakar pareshan mann se : or ab mujhe bohot soch shamaj kar tyaar hona hoga sajna hoga sawarna hoga kya pata kab rahul ki nazar mere upar padh jae
sakhi : tume kese pata chala ki rahul mayavilok me aa chuka hai
dyna mushkurate hue : dyna aise hii nahi itne vishal lok mayavilok ki maharani ban gayi hai jo bhi shaks is mayavi lok mein kadam rakhta hai mujhe pehle se hii gyaat ho jata hai chahe vo koi devta ho ya koi mayavi chahe vo manav ho ya gandharv chahe vo asur ho ya rakshak
sakhi : agar rahul ne tume pyaar ka izhar nahi kiya or tume pyaar karne se mana kar diya to
dyna yeh baat sunkar ek dam se behad gussa ho jati hai or apni sakhi ka gala pakar leti hai dyna ke gussa se dyna ki akho me se aag nikalne lagti hai or usse uski vo sakhi jalne lag jati hai
sakhi dyna ki aakho se nikalne wali se tadapne lag jati hai
sakhi tadapte hue : sakhi yeh kya kar rahi ho choro mujhe dard ho raha hai
dyna gusse me gala dabate hue : tu bataegi mujhe ki rahul mujh se pyaar karega ki nahi
sakhi tadapte hue dabi awaaz me : sakhi mein yeh nahi bol rahi ki rahul tumse pyaar ka izhar nahi karega
dyna yeh sunkar sakhi ko chor deti hai
dyna thoda kam gusse me : sakhi tum bolna kya chahati ho
sakhi thodi der rukhkar Tezz Tezz sashe lete hue : rahul tumse pyaar karta hai ki nahi yeh to mein nahi bata sakhti ya usko apne punar janam ka khus yaad hai ki nahi yeh bhi me nahi bata sakti hai mein. Yeh jarur bata sakti hue ki rahul yaha kiu or kis karan aya hai
dyna gusse me : kiss karan aya hai fir rahul yaha mujhe is mayavi lok se bhagane
sakhi : yeh bhi mujhe nahi pata magar yaha rahul apne astitv ki talash me aya hai
rahul Rohan or Sunaina ki prem kahani janne yaha aya hai
or
yeh bolkar dyna ki sakhi chup ho jati hai
dyna apni sakhi ko dekhte hue halke gusse me : or kya sakhi
sakhi : or usne dristi ke fehale logo ke mann me atanak ko door karne yaha aya hai kya pata vo dristi ko maar bhi de
sakhi haste hue : magar mujhe nahi lagta ki vo dristi ko maar paega kiuki na to uske pass mayavi shakti hai or na hii usko uske pass koi aise shakti hai jisse vo dristi jaise mayavi ko maar sake vo to sirf ek sadharan manav ki tarha hai
usko to ki chota se bacha bhi apni maya se dara kar bhaga sakta hai
dyna gusse me : agar rahul mere liye nahi aya to rahul ko mere hatho marna hoga me rahul ko nahi chorugi
sakhi haste hue : are shakhi tum kiu marogi us rahul ko isse tumari maharani hone ke naam par daag lag sakta hai ki ek maharani rahul jaise chote manav jo mayavishakti kya sahi se ladna bhi nahi janta use maha mayavilok ki maharani dyna ne usse mar diya
dyna : tum rahul ko nahi janti sakhi vo rohan hai vo rohan jisne
sakhi beech me hii apni bat katte hue
sakhi haste hue : dyna vo yeh nahi janta ki vo khon hai are vo khud apni astitv ki talash me yaha aya hai jab usko apne rohan hone ka ashsas hoga jab tak dristi kab ka usko mar chuka hoga
dyna dukhi hokar : magar me rahul ko marne kaise de sakti hue mein rahul se pyaar karti hue
sakhi halke gusse me : agar rahul tumse pyaar karta to vo tume us dibbe me ked nahi karta jisme to itne salo se band thi
agar rahul tumse pyaar karta to vo apni bhan se tumko nahi mitvata
agar rahul tumse pyaar karta to rahul apni bhan se door rehne ki dhamki nahi deta
dyna jawab dete hue : ho sakta hai ki rahul ko mere bare me kuch pata na ho is bajase rahul ne aise kiya ho
sakhi : ha mann sakte hai magar Rohan ne jo tume us dibbe me band kiya kya ab usko apni astitv ka malum nahi tha
agar rohan tumse pyaar karta to kya vo Sunaina ke kehne par tumse shadi karne se mana karta
dyna yeh baat sunkar chup ho jati hai
sakhi : sach to yeh hai ki Rohan ne tumse kabhi pyaar hii nahi kiya vo bas tumse pyaar ka dikhava karta raha or jab rohan ko Sunaina mil gae to usne tumse shadi karne se mana kar diya
dyna ke mann me sakhi ne pratisod ki bhavna bharka di thi
dyna : tum sahi bol rahi ho sakti ab dekhna me rahul ko nahi chorugi usko marna hoga
sakhi : dyna rahul jarur marega
Dyna : rahul itni asani se nahi mar sakta sakhi tume rahul ke janam ki katha nahi pata yeh baat sirf rahul ki asli maa or uski choti bhan janti hai
Rahul ki asli maa ka to pata nahi ki abhi tak kaha hai or rahul ek nakli maa ko hii apni asli maa shamaj raha hai
or rahul ki masi vo abhi kaha hai yeh mujhe nahi pata
sakhi : rahul ke janam ka kya rehasya ( raaz ) hai
dyna : yeh baat mujhe bhi sahi se nahi pata kiuki me us dibbe me band thi magar itna jarur pata hai ki mein rahul ko nahi chodugi ki rahul ka yeh janam bhi khatam kar dugi
sakhi : acha dyna us dibbe ka kya hua
dyna : us dibbe ko mein parpt nahi kar payi
sakhi tention me : agar vo dibba divya me sama gaya to fir hum us dibbe ko kabhi prapt nahi kar payege
dyna gusse me haste hue : aise kabi nahi ho sakta kiu vo dibba sonam ke pass tha or vo divya me samahit karne jaa hii rahi thi ki
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx ( dyna ne kuch bataya ) vo sonam us jagha pohoch gae jaha se aaj tak koi nahi lout paya or sonam ka bhi yahi hoga vo vaha se kabhi vapis nahi aa paegi siwa ek shaks ko chorkar
sakhi khus hokar : kya vo shaks tum thi
dyna : nahi sakhi vo shaks mein nahi MAHAKAAL tha
SAKHI KUCH SOCHTE HUE : mahakaal magar kaise
dyna : yeh to mujhe bhi nahi pata bas itna pata hai ki us lok me se koi bhi bhahar nahi nikal sakta us lok me kya hota hai kya nahi yeh bhi nahi pata ek baar us lok ke baare me jaane ke liye ek asur ne kosis ki thi vo bohot shakti shali bhi tha magar vo bhi vaha se kabi bahar nahi aa paya
sakhi : magar vo prerna sonam ko us jagah se nikalne ki kosis jarur karegi
dyna : are vo kya uska bhai aasurraaj bhi chahe to bhi sonam bhar nahi nikal sakti
Sakhi : to mahakaal to yeh kar sakta hai na
dyna : ha mahakaal yeh kar sakta hai magar vo is bajase nahi kar sakta kiuki xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx fir dyna ne apni sakhi ko kuch bataya
sakhi : to iska matlab ba sonam ko koi nahi bacha sakta
Or dono sakhi or dyna tezz tez hasne lag jate hai
sakhi haste hue beech me hii
sakhi : dyna me ek baat to batana bhool hii gae
dyna : kya
sakhi : mein rahul ke sath reh rahi hue rahul ke baare me jaane ke liye ki vo age kya karne wala hai or vo dristi ko kaise marega
dyna khussi se : yeh dekhna dilchasp hoga agar dristi rahul ko mar deta hai to mujhe apne pyaare chota bhai ke khun se apne hath gande nahi karne padege or agar dristi mar jata hai to
Dyna gusse se : rahul ki yeh khud kismat hogi ki vo apni badi bhan ke hatho se marega
fir dono Tezz Tezz hasne lag jate hai
sakhi : dyna mujhe ab chalna hoga kiuki rahul meri raha dekh raha hoga
or uski sakhi vaha se chali jati hai or dyna vahi sajne sawarne me lag jati hai
vahi patal lok me
Prerna bohot ghabrai hue thi or or prerna ka sarir bohot kaap raha tha prerna ko bohot dukh ho raha tha ki usne us dibbe ko sonam ko kiu le jane ko diya jabki prerna ko pata tha ki usm kitni kali shaktiyo ka samavesh hai
ab dekhna yeh hai ki sonam us jagah se vapis aaegi ya nahi
prerna kya kare kya naa kare
tabi prerna ka gate koi khatkhata raha hota hai
prerna( awaaz dekar ) : khon hai
dusari taraf hai : prerna darwaja kholo me hue dushala
yeh dushala asuraaj ki patni thi
or yeh bade ache or sadvicharo vali auraat thi
prerna jaise hii dushala ki awaaz sunti hai turant darwaza khol deti hai
or dushala ander aa jati hai
dushala prerna ka face upar karte hue : kya baat hai nand rani aaj kal tum bhar hii nahi aati aisa lagta hai jaise tumne patal lok se nata hii
prerna udas or ghabrai hue : aise baat nahi hai bhabi bas ab mera bahar rehne ka mann nahi karta
dushala prerna ko udas or ghabrai huedekhti hai to aap puchti hai
dushala Sheetal bhaw se : Prerna akhir baat kya hai tum bohot ghabrai hue ho
prerna apni ghabraat ko kam karne ki kosis karti hue dushala ko dekhti hue bolti hai : nahi bhabhi aise koi baat nahi hai
Dushala prerna ko dekhti hue : apni bhabhi se chupaogi
dushala prerna ko gale lagate hue : meri koi putri nahi hai magar mein ne hamesha tume apni putri mana hai or uski tarha hii tume pyaar dene ki kosis ki hai magar lagta hai ki mein ne jo pyaar diya hai apni nand ko vo kam padh gaya jis bajase aaj meri putri saman nand mujhse apni mann ki baat bhi apni bhabhi ko nahi bata pa rahi hai
prerna nam akho se : aise mat kaho bhabhi yeh bhagwan Sakshi hai mein ne bhi hamesha apko ek mata hii shamjha hai kiuki meri mata ke jane ke baad ek apne hii to mujhe ek pata ki tarha pyaar kiya hai or logo se sangarsh karne ki shakti di hai nahi nahi to mein kab ka dum tor deti kiuki mere apne bhaiyo ne mere sath pyaar ka natak karke mere sath hii vishwaas ghat kiya tha magar fir apki shadi bhaiya se ho gaye or apne mujhe itna pyaar diya ki agar mujhe bhawan shiv ji bhi akar kahe ki tume mujh me or apni bhabhi me ek ko chunna hoga to mein hasi khusi apko chunugi
dushala mushkurate hue : to batao prerna tume kya problem hai tum itni ghabrai hue kiu hai kya is dukh ka karan tumare bhai hai ya tum Rohan ko yaad karke dukhi ho
prerna ghabrai hue rote hue : bhabhi meri dukh karan na bhaiya hai na rohan
dushala pareshan hokar : fir kya baat hai prerna
prerna rote hue : mein sonam ko bachana chahati hue bhabhi magar meri shaktiya bhi sonam ko bachane mein koi kaam nahi kar rahi mein apne rehte sonam ko kuch nahi hone de sakti bhabhi
dushala sonam ka naam sunkar hairaan hoti hai ki yeh sonam khon hai jisko prerna bachana chahati hai or sonam khonsi musibaat me hai
dushala pareshan hokar : yeh sonam khon hai prerna pehle mujhe puri baat batao
prerna po uri baat apni bhabhi ko bata deti hai ki kaise prerna dharti lok pohochu kaise rahul se mili or kaise dyna ne us dibbe ko prapt karne ki kosis ki kaise sonam us dibbe ko lekar jaa rahi thi or achanak us car me koi aaina aae kaise sonam us car se khud gae kaise sonam ki koi shakti ka bharav bhar nikalne mein nahi hua or vo yaha aa gae
dushala yeh sab sunkar bohot hairaa. Thi magar aaina naam sunkar sabse jyada hairaan thi
dushala hairaan bhav se : prerna kya yeh vahi dibba hai jisse mahakaal ka janam hua tha or tum ne sach me us car mein aaina naam suna tha.
prerna haa mein garden hila deti hai
yeh baat sunkar dushala or hairaan or pareshan ho jati hai ki us car me aaina thi
dushala ko itna parshan dekhkar prerna fir ghabra jati hai
prerna ghabrate hue : kya hua bhabhi aa itna ghabrae hue kiu ho kya aap aaina ko janti ho
dushala na mein garden hila deti hai
Prerna ghabrae hue : fir apka aina naam sunkar itna ghabrane ka kya karan hai bhabhi
Dushala : yehh naam mein ne apne putra shivjeet se suna hai
prerna : to isme ghabrane ki kya baat hai
fir dushala ne jo kaha vo sunakar prerna ke per tale zamin nikal gae
vahi dharti lok me
rahul ki taraf
sonali bohot khuss thi ki rahul ne itne saare gao walo ki jaan bachai thi sonali ko rahul ki bhan hone par bohot naaz ho raha tha
or ruchi or nisha ko chor kar sab bhan rahul bahaduri par garv kar rahi thi
ruchi or nisha ko to sabko ullo banane mein bohot maza ata tha kiuki yeh dono jyada tar kalpanao ko kahani me pradarshit karne wali ladki thi vo apni baat ko is tarike se pradarsit karti thi ki sab ruchi or nisha ki baato se prabhavit ho jate the or jaldi hii mohit ho jate the
sab bhan rahul bas garv kar rahi thi or ruchi or nisha mann hii man has rahi thi
or ko iska koi abas nahi tha kiuki vo to bas abhi so kar uta tha
aise hii rahul ka apna ghar aa jata tha
or rahul taxi se utar kar apni sabhi bhan ke sath apne ghar ki taraf chal deta jo kuch hii doori par tha
jaise hii rahul ghar ka gate kholta hai
tabi ek shaks rahul ko dekhte hii gusse me bolta hai
shaks rahul se : aa gaye apni bhan ke sath hul charre uda kar apni bhan ka muh kala kar kar
aise ladke ko to jaan se mar dena chahiye jo apni bhan ke sath hii gul charre udata ho agar itni hii aag lagi thi to apna muh kahi bahara kala kar leta apni sabhi bhano ke sath jane ki kya jarurat thi
shaks gusse me : ab shamjha bhar to sirf ek ladki ke sath muh kala kar payega
or yaha to itni saari ladkiya hai kiuki ki teri ek ladki se pyaas thodi na bhuzne wale thi
yeh baat sunkar jaha rahul ki aakho me ashu the
wahi rahul ki ek bhan bohot jyada gusse me thi
tabi kuch aisa hua jisse rahul bhi hairaan ho gaya
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shaks rahul se : aa gaye apni bhan ke sath hul charre uda kar apni bhan ka muh kala kar kar
aise ladke ko to jaan se mar dena chahiye jo apni bhan ke sath hii gul charre udata ho agar itni hii aag lagi thi to apna muh kahi bahara kala kar leta apni sabhi bhano ke sath jane ki kya jarurat thi
shaks gusse me : ab shamjha bhar to sirf ek ladki ke sath muh kala kar payega
or yaha to itni saari ladkiya hai kiuki ki teri ek ladki se pyaas thodi na bhuzne wale thi
yeh baat sunkar jaha rahul ki aakho me ashu the
wahi rahul ki ek bhan bohot jyada gusse me thi
tabi kuch aisa hua jisse rahul bhi hairaan ho gaya
Ab aaageee
Kiuki Sonali bohot gusse me thi koi bhi Rahul ko kuch galat bol deta tha to Sonali ko bohot gussa ata tha
sonali ne Rahul ko jaan se bhi jyada pyaar kiya tha vo ek bhai ki tarha tha ya koi or yeh pata nahi magar sonali kabhi Rahul ko dukhi nahi dekh sakti thi or na hii rote hue
sonali gusse me .... Papa yeh kaise baat kar rahe ho apko sharam nahi ati aise baat karte hue
jii hai yeh shaks koi or nahi Rahul ka papa raaj tha
Raj gusse me .....kiuki sharam aaegi mujhe or yeh mera beta nahi hai shamjhi yeh mere bete ka katil hai jisne mere bete ko mar diya
rahul ke aakho se jhar jhar ashu beh rahe the
rahul Raj ke pas jakar bolta hai
rahul .... Papa mein ne kab apne bhai ko mar diya yeh to mujhe bhi nahi pata or mein kiu maruga kisiko
raj gusse me ...... Tere muh se papa shabh acha nahi lagta mat keh mujhe papa or tu hamara beta bhi nahi hai pata nahi ki nali ki paidash hai
yeh baat sunkar sonali behad gussa ho jati hai
sonali gusse me .....papa baap kehalane ke layak nahi jo apne hii bete ko nali ki pedaish bolta hai vo uska baap kabhi nahi ho sakta ab agar apne rahul ko ek bhi galat shabd bola to mein bhool jaugi ki tum mere baap ho
raj hairaan gusse me .... To kya karegi tu apne baap ko maregi to maar na mein bhi to dekhu ki jis beti ko mein ne apni god mein khilaya vo apne baap ko kaise marti hai
sonali muh bana kar ..... Agar jaruraat padi to mein maar bhi dugi jo baap mere bhai ka or meri bhan ka saga nahi ho paya vo mera baap kaise ho sakta hai
Sonali ko chor kar rahul ki saari bhan abhi chup thi kiuki Sonali ne unko mana kiya tha kiuki Sonali ne apni sabhi bhen ko apne se bado ki izzat karna shikaya tha na ki galat bolna
raaj gusse .....mein apni kaise apni beti ka saga nahi ho paya mein ne kabhi unko galat nahi bola unko hamesha pyaar kiya hai
vahi rahul foot foot ke roo raha tha kiu uske papa apne bete se itna nafraat kaise kar sakte hai jo apni hii bhan ke sath gulcharre udane ka bol de
sonali muh teda karke .....apke muh se beti shabd acha nahi lagta jisne baap ne apni beti ki parwa nahi ki
Kajal rahul ki maa itna shor unkar bhar aa jati hai or dekhti hai
kajal hairaan hokar .....kya ho raha hai yaha or rahul to itna roo kiu raha hai
ghar se baki sab bhi bhar aa jate hai
raj ...... Kajal dekho sonali kya bol rahi hai ki mein ne kabhi apni beti ko pyaar nahi kiya yeh sab is rahul ke bajase ho raha hai yeh mere bete ko kha gaya ab meri beti ko bhi mujhse door karna chahata hai
kajal dono baap beti ko aise baat karte hue hairaan or gussa ho jati hai
kajal dono baap beti ko gusse me ......aaap dono pagal ho gae ho sab maan maryada bhul gaye
kajal sonali se .......beti tujhe apne papa se aise baat nahi karni chahiye
sonali .....maaa iase baat kiu nahi karni chahiye sabse pehle papa se pucho jo hamare ghar pohochte hii yeh bol raha hai ki rahul apni bhan ke sath gulcharre udane gaya tha kya yeh papa ki ek beti ke prati maan maryada hai
kajal jaise hii raj ko dekhti hai
raj .....maa vo maan maryada hii thi kiuki mein nahi chahata ki tum is jaise nich or ghatiya ladke rahul ke sath kahi ghumne jao
Sonali kuch bolne wali hoti hai tabi kajal bolti hai
kajal raj se .....aap kaise ghatiya baate kar rahe ho rahul hamara beta hai or apne bete se aise khatiya bate karna apko shobha deta hai
or aap yeh kiu bol rahe ho ki rahul hamara beta nahi hai vo mera beta hai or hamesha mera beta hii rahega chahe aap usko apna beta Mano ya nahi Mano
raj .....aise ghatiya ladke ko tum apna beta mante ho jisne
kajal beech me hii ...bas ab mein or kuch nahi sunna chahati
sonali gusse me ......mera bhai ko ghantiya bolne ki kosis mat karna papa
nahi to aap kitne ghatiya ho yeh aaj maa ko pata chal jaega
kajal hairaan hokar ......sonali tu yeh kya bol rahi hai
sonali rote hue ......ha maa yeh vo aadmi hai jisne apni beti or bete ko bhar marne ke liye chor diya tha vo bhi nashe mein dhut hokar
kajal .....tum kaise baat kar rahi ho sonali mujhe puri baat batao
Fir sonali bolti hai
mee jab hum bohot chote the yeh baat jab ki hai jab rahul karib 5saal ka tha or aap bua ke sath kisi kaam se kuch dino ke liye bhar gae hue thi
tab ek din papa nashe me puri tarha dhut hokar ghar aae or ghar ka darvaja ghat ghatane lage
Sonali .....payal dekh Shayad papa aa gae hai tum unko table par bithao jab tak me raat ka khana lekar ati thi
payal masson se shakal manate hu .....didi mera hath gate ki kundi tak nahi pohochta
aap hii khol to mein jab tak papa ke liye khana lekar aati hue
Us time sab bache bohot chote the jisme sonali hii thodi badi the
sonali payal se ....tu khana kaise utaegi
payal apne masoom se chehre se
payal ......didi rahul bhaiya mere sath hai hum sath me khana uta lege
rahul apne komal hath se sonali ke gaal sehlate hue ....haa didu hum sath me le aaege
sonali rahul ko gale lagakar .....mera pyara bhai apne papa ke liye apne hatho se khana lekar aaega
rahul haa mein sir hila deta hai
payal or rahul apne komal kadmo se jate hue kitchan me chale gate hai.
or vahi raj tez tez darwaja khatkhata raha hota hai.
or sonali apne komal par se payal ki chan chan karte hue darwaja kholti hai
or jaise hii sonali darbaja kholti hai
sonali masoom chehre se ....papa aap aa gae
magar raj aaj nashe me puri tarha dhut tha or bohot gusse me bhi
raj gusse me ladkharata hua .......rahul kaha hai
sonali apne papa ko jaise hii gusse me dekhti hai to rone lag jati hai
sonali rote hue raj ka hath pakarte hue .....papa kya hua aap itne gusse me kiu ho
raj sonali ka komal hath pakarte hii apna gussa shant karne lagta hai
raaj .....beta sonali tum roo kiu rahi ho
or raaj sonali ke ashu pohochne lagta hai
sonali totali....papa aap rahul ko itne guche (gusse) se kiu bola rahe ho
raj gussa shant karte hue .....kuch nahi beta bas iase hii acha chalo mujhe bohot bhook lagi hai khana khate hai vaise khana me kya bana hai
sonali raj ka hath pakar kar jate hue ....papa mujhe khana to banana ata hii nahi bas maggi banani ati hai to mein ne aaj apke liye maggi banai hai
raaj jate hue table par baith kar ....meri beti me aaj pehli baar maggi banai hai
sonali haa me garden hila deti hai
tabi payal or rahul apne chote chote hatho se katori me maggi lekar ate hai
rahul ....,papa yeh dekho maggi bohot taty (tasti ) hai
Magar raj rahul ki baato par dhyaan nahi deta
raj payal se ....bati maggi nahi khilaoge tum mujhe
payal apne chote hatho se maggi ki katori age karte hue .....yeh lo papa
Raj jaise hii payal ke hatho se katori leneke liye khada hota hai vaise hii raj apne per (leg) se rahul ka per dava deta hai jise rahul chillane lagta hai or rahul ke hath se katori chutkar raj ke pent par gir jati hai garam garam maggi raj ke pent par girne se raaj ko thoda dard hota hai
yeh dekhkar rahul rote hue
rahul totali awaaz me ....chori (sorry) papa
jisse raaj ko gussa aa jata hai
raaj gusse me ......teri himmat kaise hue mere upar maggi girane ki bohot maggi girane ka souk hai na tuzko aaj tuzko batata hu
or raaz rahul ki peet par ek Tezz ki thapad marta hai jisse rahul niche gir jata hai or rahul ke back par thapad ke nishan lad jate hai
or niche gire gire rahul Tezz Tezz rone lagta hai
jisko dekhkar sonali or payal bhi rone lagte hai
Sonali rahul ko rote dekhkar raj or apne komal hatho se marne lagti hai or bolti hai
sonali rote hue ......gande papa aap bohot gande ho
raaj vaise hii nashe me tha usko koi hosh nahi tha ki vo kya kar raha hai
raj gusse me .....tubmujhe marti hai apne papa ko bohot bigar gae hai tu aaj tum dono ko bahar rakhuga na tum sudhar ho jaoge
or raj rahul or sonali ko ghar se bhar nikal deta hai or raj gate band karke ander kamre me behosh hokar so jata hai nashe ke karan
sonali or rahul bahar Tezz Tezz ro rahe the
Tabhi asman mei. Bijli kadak e lag jati hai or hawa bhi bohot teztez chal e lagti hai or kuch der mein barish shuru ho jati hai jisse rahul or sonali bhigne lagte hai or dono ko thand lagne lagti hai
sonali gate ghatghatate hue rote hue .....papa gate khol do hume bohot thand lag rahi hai
magar raj to nashe me behosh pada tha
bahar bharish dheere dheere bhayanak roop lene lagti hai
rahul sonali se rote hue .......didi thand lag rahi hai
vahi payal rote hue raj se bolti hai
payal rote hue raj ko uta e lagti hai apne komal hatho se .......bade papa uto uto dekho bahar barish ho rahi hai
raj nind me barbarate hue .....hone de aaj thand me pade rahege tab pata chalega inko
payal ko shamaj nahi aa raha tha ki ab kya kare
payal bohot kosis karti hai kundi kholne ki magar payal se kundi nahi khulti
or payal ko nisha ruchi ki bhi fikar ho rahi thi kiuki vo dusare kamre me so rahi thi
payal nisha ruchi ko urate hue rahul or sonali ke bare me batati hai
jisko sunkar nisha ruchi bhi rone lagte hai
fir payal nisha ruchi se bahar nikalne me madad maggi hai
fir teno kosis karke bohot mushkil se khidki ke jariye bahar nikal jate hai
payal bhagte hue sonali ke pass didi didi bolti hue aa jati hai
sonali .....payal tu kiu aae yaha par dekh kitni thand hai ja ghar chali ja
sonali .....didi aap bhi ghar chola dekho humne khidki khol li hai
sonali rote hue ..... Nahi sonali ab mein us ghar me nahi jaugi kya pata papa fir rahul ko mare jab tak mamma nahi aa jati mein us ghar me nahi jaegi
payal ke mann me bhi apne bade pala ke liye nafraat bhar gae thi
nasa aisa hota hai ji kitni zindagi barbaad kar deta hai
payal rote hue .....didi aap nahi jaogi to mein bhi nahi jaugi
kiuki unhone mere bhai ko mara hai mere pyare bhai ko dekho didi rahul ke pit (back) papa ke karne se kitni lal ho jae hai
sonali yeh dekhkar bohot roti hai or rahul se bolti hai ..
....rahul tume jyada dard ho raha hai pit par
rahul haa mein garden hila deta hai
rahul rote hue ......didi papa ne mujhe itni se galti par kiuki mara jabki unhone hii apne per se mera per dava diya tha jis karan vo maggi mere hath se gir gae
dono shocked ......kyaaa
payal rahul ke per dekhti hai to uska per bhi red ho gaya hota hai.
or teeno rone lagte hai
kya rahul ke dard me andhi hokar is thand mein apne aap ko nukshan boho chah rahi thi
nisha ruchi se ....ab hum kita ,(kya ) kare
ruchi .....agar hum bhi inke sath gaye to hum bhi beemar par sakte hai fir rahul bhaiya payal didi or sonali didi ko khon shamalega
nisha .....fir hum kta ( kya ) kare
ruchi......hume doktar (doctar) ke pass jana chahiye
or nisha or ruchi barish me bhagte hue doctar ke pass jati hai
vahi
or teeno bhan bhar barish me kabhi der tak bhigte rehte hai
Rahul ki sabhi bhan rahul se bohot pyaar karti thi or unka dukh dard khud mehsus karti thi magar ruchi nisha ne aaj dimak se kaam liya tha ki doctor ko bulaya jae
rahul sonali se ......didi thand lag rahi hai
sonali ne bhi doctor ke pass jane ke bare me pehle socha tha magar rahul ke aise halat dekhkar vo ja nahi payi
kiuki Sonali rahul ko chorkar nahi jana chahati thi
sonali rahul or payal ko thand me kapte hue dekhkar sonali ko bohot dukh hota hai or sonali apni frok utar kar rahul or payal ke upar felakar pakar leti hai jisse barish ki boode payal or rahul par na gire magar frock utarne se sonali ek badan se kapra bhi utar gaya tha jiske karan sonali bhi thand me kap kapa rahi thi
sonali ne payal or rahul par ati hue musibat ko apne upar le liya tha
vahi ruchi nisha rote hue apne komal kadmo se doctor ka darbaja ghatghata rahi thi
tmagar itni barish me koi darvaja nahi khol raha tha
bohot barbaja khatkhata e ke baad bohot muskil se barbaja khula
kisi auraat ne darvaja khola tha
aauraat ....kya hai.
nisha rote hue...anti PLZZ doctor unkal (uncle) ko hamare sath bhez do mera bhai or didi thand me kaap rahi hai
auraat .....tu pagal hai dekh nahi rahi hai kitni Tezz barish ho rahi hai iss time bahar jana khatre se khali nahi hai chal bhag yaha se
ruchi or nisha vahi rone lag jati hai
tabi ek aadmi ander se bolta hai khon hai radha
radha....koi do choti choti bachi aae hai shayad iska bhai or bhan bemaar hai
Vo aadmi bahar ata hai vaise hii ruchi nisha us aadmibke kadam pakar liti hai or rote hue bolti hai
ruchi ....uncle hamare bhai or bhan ko bacha lo
aadmi ....tum itni barish me yaha kaise aae or itni barish me bhar jana khatre se khali nahi mein tumare bhai or bhan ke pass nahi ja sakta
vahi barish me bhegte bhegte payal behosh ho jati hai
tabi rahul rote hue ...didi didi apko kya hua didi uto didi
payal bhi rahul ko utane ki kosis karti hai magar payal nahi utti
vahi
ruchi ......doctor aisa mat kaho aap ek doctor ho or doctor to bhagwan hota hai
Or bhagwan to sabki madad karta hai mere didi or bhai ki bhi madad karo
doctor ro apni jaan ki parwa kiye dusaro ki jaan bachata hai
aadmi ....par itni barish
radha ......apko jana chahiye
aadmi ....thik tha
or vo aadmi apna saman lekar ruchi nisha ke sath chala jata hai
jab doctor vaha pohochta hai to dekhta hai teen bache barish me besudh pade hai
yeh dekhkar doctor ke aakho me bhi aashu aa jate hai
Or vo doctor jaldi se teeno ko utata hai or khidki ke jariye ghar ka gate kholta hai or undar bed par lita deta hai
bheegh to ruchi nisha bhi gae thi magar itni nahi magar choti hone ke karan vo bhi ghar ke ander aakar behosh ho jati hai
pach paach bacho ko aise bhegte or rote or thand me tadapte dekhkar doctor ko bhi rona aa jata hai
doctor sab ka ilaz karta hai or sonali ko frock pahnata hai
or dawai khilakar raat bhar pacho bacho ki patti karta hai
aise hii subha ho jati hai
magar in sabka baap to abhi bhi nashe me soya hua tha kiuki nasa aise cheez hota hai jo ek baar lag gae to ghar barbaad karke hii chorta hai
subha hote hii achanak se rahul ko hosh aa jata hai magar rahul ki bhan abhi bhi behosh thi
rahul....uttare hue Tezz Tezz rote hue didi didi chillane lagta hai
doctor.....beta chup ho jao
rahul doctor se bolta hai doctor meri bhan ko kya hua hai
doctor .......beta tumari bhan thik hai or thodi der mein hosh aa jaega agar tumari yeh dono (ruchi nishi) bhan nahi ati to tum sabka bachna mushkil tha
par
rahul ....par kya doctor
doctor.....hum tumari is bhan (sonali) ko nahi bacha paye
rahul.....yeh sunte hiiii didi didi bolte huye dubara behosh ho jata
doctor mann me .....inke mata pita kaise hai jinko apne bacho ki bilkul bhi parwa nahi hai koi apne bacho ko chorkar kaha ja sakta hai vo bhi itne chote bacho ko
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rahul ....par kya doctor
doctor.....hum tumari is bhan (sonali) ko nahi bacha paye
rahul.....yeh sunte hiiii didi didi bolte huye dubara behosh ho jata
doctor mann me .....inke mata pita kaise hai jinko apne bacho ki bilkul bhi parwa nahi hai koi apne bacho ko chor kar kaha ja sakta hai vo bhi itne chote bacho ko
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Doctor dubara se rahul ke upar pani dalte hai jisse rahul ko dubara se hoss ata hai magar hosh mein ane ke baad rahul sonali didi ko dekhte hii rahul rote hue masoon shakal ke sath bolta hai ....sonali didi utto na aap ko kta (kya) hua hai.
rahul dubara behosh ho jata hai aisa bohot baar hota hai doctor ko shamaj nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare
Vahi dusare kamre me raj in sab baato se befir hokar jyada nashe ke karan abhi bhi so raha tha or itni gehri neend me so raha tha ki usko apne bacho ki rone ki awaaz bhi sunai nahi de rahi thi aise khon se nafraat thi raj ko rahul se jo rahul ka rona bhi raj ko sunai nahi de raha tha .
Vahi rahul ko yeh baat sunkar Sadma lag gaya tha ki uski sonali didi mar gayi hai jis karan rahul baar baar behosh ho raha tha
rahul dubara se hosh me ata hai to rote hue bolta hai .... Didi utt jao na didi utt jao na didi
doctor rahul ke ashu pohochne hue bolta hai ......beta ab vo kabi nahi uttegi vo ab bhagwan ke pass chali gae hai vaha se koi vapis nahi a sakta
doctor ki yeh baat sunkar is baar rahul behosh nahi hua balki uski aakhe ek dam lal ho gaye itni lal ki vo ki ek baar to doctor bhi rahul ko dekhte hii bohot dar gaya
rahul ke chest par jo mahakaal ka Chitra bana tha vo uske hatho me aa gaya
rahul rote hue ...nahi meri didi mujhe chorkar bhagwan ke pass nahi ja sakti mein bhagwan se pratna karuga ki vo meri didi mujhe lauta de or agar unhone meri didi vapis nhi ki to mein bhi jivit nahi rahuga
rahul chillate hue .... Iske jimedaar sirf bhagwan hone
bahar subha ka time tha abhi bas 5 baje the halka ujala hona shuru hua tha
doctor nam aakho se .... Beta aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta jo ek baar bhagwan ke pass chala jata hai vo vahase kabi vapis nahi ata tum sukar manao ki tumari didi ne tume apni frock ki chaya se tumko or payal ko bacha liya nahi to tum bhi zinda nahi rehte aise bhayanak tufaan or barish mein
rahul jhallate hue ....nahi koi meri didi ko nahi le ja sakta mein jakar abhi apni didi ko bhagwan se vapis lata hue
Or rahul payal ko uttane ki kosis karta hai magar uta nahi pata apne chote hone ke karan
fir rahul rote hue apni puri shakti se utane ki kosis karta hai jisse sonali rahul ke chote chote hatho me aa jati hai magar rahul sonali se bohot chota tha jisse rahul ke hath dukhne lagte hai
or mahakaal ka Chitra rahul ke hatho me or gehra hone lagta hai jisse rahul ko itni se umar me ek Tezz dard ka samna karna padhta hai magar rahul ko us dard ki parwa kiye bina hii sonali ki utta ke jane lagta hai
doctor shocked tha ki rahul ne payal ko kaise utta liya itni choti si umar me
doctor hairan hokar ....beta tum apni didi ko kaha le ja rahe ho
or doctor bhi rahul ke piche jane ki kosis karta hai magar ghar ka gate achanak se band ho jata hai
rahul rote hue ....didi me apko bhagwan ke pass se vapis jarur lauga aap chinta mat karo apko mere hote hue kuch nahi ho sakta
rahul sonali ko utta kar is goan ke bane ek mandir mein lekar jane lagta hai raste mein pade hue kankar, kach or pathar rahul ke nange per hone ke bajase chubne lagte hai jisse rahul ke per se khoon nikalne lagta hai magar khoon nikalne se bhi rahul ko koi fark nahi padhta jaise rahul sare dukh dard bhool gaya tha jaise rahul ne is sansaar or duniya ko bhool gaya tha rahul ko to bas apni sonali didi hii dikhai de rahi thi rahul ka talwa pure khoon se latpat tha par rahul apni bhan ka chehara dekhkar ro raha tha is samay jyada tufaan or barish hone ke bajase koi bahar bhi nahi nikla tha jaise hii rahul mandir mein apna per rakhta hai mandir hilne lagta hai fir shant ho jata hai aisa lagta hai ki koi halka sa bhukamp aya ho rahul ke per ke nishan unke per mein se khoon nikalne ke vaja se mandir ki sheedi par bante jate hai har jagah anek ghantiyo ka shor bajne lagta hai rahul jaise jaise apne per (foot) mandir par rakhta hai vaise vaise mandir me ek Prakash phelne lagta hai or rahul ke piche se ek awaaz Tezz Tezz pure mandir mein sunai dene lagti hai
ANT MEIN ARAMB MEIN KALO KA KAAL MEIN MAHAKAAL MEIN
tabi kisi ki awaaz ati hai
samne se. (haste hue ) ...... Rohan
us awaz ka suwar aise tha jisse rahul bhi chakit ho jata tha or rahul us taraf dekhta hai.
Vahi rahul ke jane ke baad doctor soch me duba hota hai ki is bache ko kya ho gaya or yaha abhi kya ho raha tha
rahul ke kuch samay ke baad rahul ki baki bhan ko bhi hosh aa jata hai hala ki unki bhi tabiyaat abhi puri tarha se teek nahi thi
Par payal ne charo taraf dekha ki uski sonali didi or rahul yaha nahi hai
payal rote hue ......meri sonali didi or rahul kaha hai or aap khon ho
Fir nisha ne puri baat payal ko bta di ki yeh doctor yaha kese aai or kya hua tha
vahi ab subha ke 7 baj chuke the or raaj ki bhi neend khul gae thi
or raj ubasi lete hue kamre ke bahar nikalta hai
or payal ko awaz lagate hue bolta hai
Raj payal se ......payal mera pani garam karne ke liye rakh de mein jab tak brush wagera kar leta hue
raj ki awaaz sunkar payal nisha ruchi or vo doctor bahar ata hai.
or doctor ko dekhte hii raj chock jata hai
raj chockte hue .....are Sanju bhai aap yaha
doctor sanju bhi raj ko is ghar me dekhkar shocked ho jata hai .....raj tum yaha
raj Sanju ke pass ate hue ......kya baat hai sanju itni subha tum yaha sab ghar mein thik to hai na
sanju chirchirate hue ......ha mere ghar mein sab thik hai magar kal mein tumare ghar nahi ata to kuch thik nahi hota
raj yeh baat sunkar shocked ho jata hai or apni betiyo ko dekhne lagta hai fir bolta hai
raj hairan hokar ....tum bolna kya chahate hue sanju
sanju ghoorte hue .....raj tum kal kaha the
Raj hairan hokar ....mein to ghar par hii tha
sanju ghoorte hue .....par tum ghar par to nahi dekhe
raj nazre churate hue .....are yaar kal jyada pee li thi is bajase is kamre me bed par so raha tha
sanju.(gusse me )....... Itni pee koi thi ki apni beti or apne bete ka rona bhi nahi sunai diya unka dard nahi sunai diya tum jaise baap par to thukne ka mann karta hai
jisko apni beti or bete ki koi parwa na hokar daru ke nashe me aaram se so raha ho
raj gusse me ......sanju tamiz se baat karo
sanju gusse me ......tamiz se vo bhi tumse yaha tumari beti or beta mar rahe the or tum aram se so rahe the or tumse tamiz se baat karu agar mein kal nahi ata to shayad tumare koi beti zinda nahi hoti na hii beta jab bache ko shamal hii nahi sakte to paida kiu karte ho
yeh sunkar raj ko ek Sadma sa lagta hai
raj shocked hokar .....mujhe puri baat batao sanju
fir sanju kal raat se lekar subha tak ki puri baat bata deta hai
jisko sunkar raj ke pero tale jamin nikal jati hai or dharam se niche gir jata hai or uske aakho se ashu nikalne lagte hai
sanju raj ke pass jate hue uske kandhe par hath rakhte hue ......sukar manao ki sirf tumari ek beti hii mari hai . Baki sab bach gaye
yeh sunkar raj behosh ho jata hai
aaj raj vo baat yaad ati hai ki sonali raj ko kitna pyaar karti thi ek or baat yaad ati hai jab raj nashe ki halat me ghar aya tha gusse me
sonali raj ka chehra sehlate hue .... Papa aap itne gusse mein koo (kiu) ho
fir raj ke samne ek andhera chane lagta hai or samne sonali rote hue raj se bol rahi thi
sonali rote hue .... Papa apne mujhe mar diya mera kya kasur tha aap bohot bure ho papa aap bohot bure ho
ap rahul par itna gussa the ki apko mere rona bhi dikhai nahi diya mera dard bhi dikhaye nahi diya apke nashe ne meri zindagi leli
sonali gusse me ........aap meri mout ke jimmedar ho papa mein bahar tadapti rahi barish me bhegte rahi par apko kuch sunai nahi diya
sonali gusse me ....apne apni beti ko marne ke liye chor diya vo bhi tadpa tadpa kar mein darvaja khatkhatakar chillati rahi ki papa darvaja kholo papa mujhe bacha lo apni beti ko bacha lo magar apne meri baat nahi suni
Sonali raj ke seene par marte hue or rote hue ........kiu papa kiu apne apni beti ko kiu marne ke liye chor diya
raj rote hue .....muze maaf kardo beti mujhe maaf kar do
or isse jhatke se raj utt jata hai
Or rote hue bolne lagta hai mujhe maaf kardo beti mujhe maaf kardo vahi sonali ki ghabar se payal nisha or ruchi bhi sadme me chale gaye the ki unki sonali didi mar gayi hai
Magar payal apne aap ko shamalte hue bahar nikalti hai
Tabi piche se doctor....beti kaha ja rahi ho
Payal rote hue .....apne bhaiya ko dhoond ne
Nisha ruchi .....didi hum bhi apke sath chalege
Doctor ....beta tum bohot chote ho tum kaha dhoodo ge apne bhai ko mein bhi tumare sath chalta hue
Raj ........beti mein bhi chalta hue tumare sath
Payal kuch nahi bolti bahar nikal jati hai or uske sath baki sab nikal jate hai or payal ko dhoodne lagte hai kafi dhoondne ke baad bhi rahul ka kuch pata nahi chalta
tabi payal ko khoon ke nishan dikhai dete hai jo per ke jaise bane the yeh dekhte hii ruchi nisha sakte mein aa jati hai
Nisha rote hue payal se .....didi yeh khoon ke nishan kese hai kahi yeh hamare bhaiya ke khoon ke nishan to nahi kahi hamare bhaiya ko kuch ho to nahi gaya
Ruchi gusse me raj ke bas jakar ....yeh sab apke ke bajase hua hai agar mere rahul bhaiya ko kuch ho gaya to mein apko kabi. Maaf nahi karugi
raaj kuch nahi bolta bas rota rehta hai
raj bhale hii rahul se pyaar nahi karta tha magar sonali se bohot pyaar karta tha sonali ke mout ki ghabar sunakar raj admara sa ho gaya tha
Or sab us nishan ki taraf badne lagte hai jo kisi jungal ki taraf ja rahe the
nisha rote hue .... Yeh nishan jungal ki taraf kiu ja rahe hai kahi hamare rahul bhaiyo or sonali didi ko koi sher to nahi uta kar le gaya
is time payal badi thi to usko hii nisha or ruchi ko shamalna tha ek badi bhan ka farz nibhana tha
vaise to yeh farz raj ko nibhana chahiye tha magar payal nisha or ruchi ko shamal rahi thi
payal nisha ruchi ke ashu pohochne hue...rahul bhaiya ko kuch nahi hoga or na hii sonali didi ko sab thik ho jaega
ruchi as bhari aakho se.....didi sab thik ho jaega na
payal chup karate hue....ha ruchi sab thik ho gaega ab na mat thik hai
or fir sab aage chalne lagte hai or rahul ke khood bhare chote chote pero (foot) ka pucha karne lagte hai kuch door jakar jab sab samne dekhte hai to sadme me aa jati hai
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Wah bhai superb
Kafi Emosnal update tha
Sonali mar gayi choking news hai dekhna hai aage kya hota hai agle update ka entjar rahega