Misc. Erotica The Hunt - (A Wife's Adultery Love Story)

[Devilmaycry]

Super story. Great Work

Chaos and cosmos was hot update. Really like the way of narration. Waiting to see what will happen between rahul and Shilpa. I am expecting that scenario to come up soon. Let’s see how it goes. Now I am like spoiled kid due to frequent update and expecting more. Anxiously waiting for new update

Awesome update

Fuck brooo tht ws hot steaming hot...
Lets see now wht mahesh could do..
Feeling sad for him

Wonderful

Beautiful narration and pics. The effort you put for this story is highly appreciated.

Thank you for the responses.

Personally I did not like it. It is a lackluster and clumsy update with lots of plotholes.

[Kenu_p]

HI FRIENDS

Brother came to his elder sisters house and knocked the door and got no response. he went to other side of the house and saw his elder sister is fucking with his brother-in law.

After that night, when he was in his room, some one locked from outside and he saw voices from next room. He entered next room by common bathroom and saw his elder sister is fucking by his father-in law and brother-in law. he also joined with them....

Can Any one have this story.. Please post it......

[veeravaibhav]

Thank you for the responses.

Personally I  did not like it. It is a lackluster and clumsy update with lots of plotholes.

So you wantedly posted something crap to see the readers reaction 

[Theflash]

I am grateful for reading your story.
Thank you so much.

[kamdev99008]

Dear Devilmaycry,

I have a Question.

An aspiring chef creates a dish, the dish even the chef does not like and served it to the crowd.
(Crowd here include hungry/starving people, food critic/bloggers, connoisseurs almost everyone)

Then What does the Chef expects from that crowd ?

[xboard1986]

Hats off to your erotic imagination

[xboard1986]

Eagerly waiting for the next update

[manmohar]

Story flow going one sideded now like mahesh going to loose everything, Job, wife,son....it sould have balance give some edge to mahesh...like affair with Priyanka or something like that ...,......just my opinion......
Although story going good

[YLTS]

You misunderstood I said I have been writing events of 8 days for the past 8 months. The first 3-4 days took Mahesh to come up with the plan. The majority of the chapters are of the 4 days from when Shilpa met Ashish.
I have no idea how long it's gonna be. I have no idea how it's gonna end. I am writing it as it's coming to me.

This has been an amazing erotica that had expressed the best portrayal of characters and their emotions without losing their respective versatilities, using your fluid writing style. Absolute recognition!

[moveovershrek]

Got to know this story from the number of views and started reading it just two days back. The author has a very bright future as a writer of erotic novels and the standard of writing is way better than some of the novels I have read .
The slow and tantalising buildup , multiple plots & sub-plots are just way too good . The scene appropriate use of literary knowledge is exquisite.
Hats off to the author

[mkgkkr]

Why is there so much of silence?

[kamdev99008]

Why is there so much of silence?

Waiting for next update with lot of patience

[kamdev99008]

waiting eagerly DMC bro

update next dear

[Siva82]

What happened buddy.. waiting for your updates
??

[kamdev99008]

waiting egerly

[xboard1986]

Where are you bro?

[Gopal Ratnam]

Waiting for the next update

[xboard1986]

What happens bro?

[aman8241987]

Bhaiya Ji kaha gaye ?

[kamdev99008]

waiting for next