Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)

[Rdxchaubey]

Plz update

[akil.juneja]

Update bro we are waiting

[akil.juneja]

Bhai update plz

[Rohan1234]

Update 50

Yeh sunkar sonam ko vo baat yaad aa jati hai jab sonam apne maa or papa ko chorkar life ke full maze me ja rahi thi.

Sonam ka dil bohot ghabra raha tha fir bhi seema ne unne sonam ko bhej diya tha.

Tabi

Ab aageeee......

Yeh dekh rahul ko bhi acha nahi lagta .
Or rahul sab security officer walo ko dhakka dekar ander jane ki kosis karta hai .
Or rahul ki aakhe achanak lal hone lagti hai.

Rahul ( gusse se ) : hato yaha se
Yaha kya hua hai.
Or in sab ko kisne mara.

Ek security officer wala

security officer ( rahul se ) : dekhiye sir aap ander nahi ja sakte yaha kisi ne sab logh ko mout ke ghat utar diya hai.
Or yaha investigation chal rahi hai.

Sonam bhadakte hue us security officer wale ko ek thapad laga deti hai.
Or bohot jyada bhadak jati hai.

Sonam ( gusse me chillate hue ) : yeh kya laga rakha hai.
Abko mout ke ghat utar diya
Mere maa or papa ko kuch nahi ho sakta shamjhe

Sonam ki is harkat par security officer wala gusse me

security officer wala ( sonam se ) : dekhiye medam aap ne on duty security officer officer par hath uttaya hai.
Aap soch bhi nahi sakti ki iski appko kya saza mil sakti hai.


Rahul ( security officer wale ko shamjhate hue ) : sorry officer dubara aise nahi hoga.

Prachi ( rote hue ) : didi kya hum anath ho gae
Kya kisi ne hamare mom dad ko mar diya.

Sonam prachi ke ashu pohochte hue.

Sonam : nahi prachi aise nahi rote
Or mera dil kehta hai ki hamare mummy or papa ko kuch nahi hue hai.

Or sonam IPS arvind ko phone karti hai.

Or IPS arvind ghar se bahar ata hai.

Arvind ( security officer walo se ) : ane do in sab ko

Or security officer wale sab ko ander ane dete hai.

Or sonam or prachi bhagte hue apni mummy or papa ko poore ghar mein dhoodne lagte hai.

Or upar jakar samne ka nazara dekhkar shocked ho jate hai.

Sonam ( arvind se rote hue ) : bhaiya yeh sab kese hue.

Or piche rahul ki bhi saari sister aa jati hai.

Rahul ( arvind se ) : yeh sab kese hua
Or kisne kiya.

Arvind : iske baare mein abhi kisi ko nahi pata mujhe raat ko rishabh ka msg aya tha tabi mein yaha puri security officer force ke sath aa gaya tha.
Or meine dekha ki kisi ne sab ko maar diya
Or charo taraf khoon hii khoon feila hua hai.
Abhi investigation chal rahi hai.
Jald hii pata chal jayega ki inko kisne mara.

Par khusi ki baat yeh hai ki sonam tumari maa or papa ko jyada kuch nahi hua hai.

Rahul ( chillate hue ) : seema maa kaha hai.

Arvind : hume nahi pata
Mujhe sirf yaha rishabh or rani hii dekhe vo bhi behosh
Or unko meine unke kamre mein shift kar diya hai.
Bhagwan ki dua hai ki sonam ki maa or papa thik hai.

Yeh baat sun sonam or prachi rahat ki saas lete hai ki unki maa or papa ko kuch nahi hue hai.

Or rahul or uski bhan bhi rahat ki saas leti hai.

Or sonam or sab logh rani or rishabh ke kamre mein jate hai.

Or dekhte hai ki dono rani or rishabh bed par behosh pade hai.

Arvind : vo to acha hua ki rishabh jii mein mujhe msg kar diya nahi to inko bachana bohot muskil ho jata.
Arvind ke gale lagte hue

Sonam ( arvind se ) : thanks arvind bhaiya agar aap time par nahi ate to pata nahi kya ho jata.

Arvind : yeh to mera farz tha sonam

Fir prachi or sonam jakar apne apne mom or dad par pani chidakte hue.

Sonam : maa papa aap thik to ho.

Tabi rani ko to hosh aa jata hai magar rishabh abhi bhi behosh hii hota hai.

Sonam or prachi jhat se rani ko gale laga ke rone lagti hai.

Rani ( pyaar se ) : sonam prachi mein thik ho dekho mujhe kuch nahi hua hai.

Sonam : maa pata hai mein kitna der gai thi bahar itna khoon dekhkar
Agar apko kuch ho jata to mein kya karti.

Prachi : haa maa mein bhi der gayi thi.

Payal sonam or prachi ke pass jate hue

Payal ( sonam or prachi se ) : ab tum dono chup ho jao aunty thik hai.

Sonam or prachi haa mein garden hila deti hai.

Rahul ki baki bhan bhi sonam or prachi ke pass baithe hue sonam or prachi ko shamalne lag jati hai.

Vahi rahul is dukh me hota hai ki seema masi kaha hai
Vo dikayi kiu nahi de rahi.

Rahul ( rani se ) : aunty seema maa kaha hai
Vo dikai kiu nahi de rahi hai.

Tabi rani ko kuch yaad aa jata hai.

Flashback

Tabi

Peter ( seema se )  : tuze kese chor du
Jab tak to us ladke ke bare mein nahi bata deti.

Peter rani or rishabh ko khatam kar do.
Or jaise hii vo rakshas rani or rishabh ko marne wale hote hai.

Tabi sonam ke kamre se bohot hii bhayanak awaaze ane lagti hai.

Peter : dekho re yeh kesi awaaze aa rahi hai is kamare se.

Or kuch rakshas us kamre mein jate hai magar vapas nahi ate.

Tabi

Peter : yeh abhi tak vapas kiu nahi aae
Chalo re kuch logh mere sath chalo or baki ke logh yahi ruko.

Or jaise hii peter sonam ke kakre mein ghusta hai.

To sonam ke kamre se awaaze ane lagti hai.

Booth pisaj or dayan shakti sab milkar jaag chuke hai.
Bhayanak shakti kali maya yahi to meri kaya
Yahi to hai insaaf mera charo taraf hai rakshas gera
Mahakaalam maha vaalam sarv vinasham aatma mani maha valam.

Or charo taraf cheekhne or bhayanak chilaane ki awaaze aa rahi hoti hai.

Jis aawaaz ko sunkar peter ek dum se kaap jata hai.

Tabi
Peter ki nazar ek dibbe par padhti hai
Us dibbe mein se ek kali roshani nikal rahi hoti hai.
Usko dekhkar peter shocked ho jata hai.

Peter : aatma mani yaha par
Yeh kese ho sakta hai.

Or peter us dibbe ke pass padi rakh ko dekhta hai.

Yeh or kisi ki rakh nahi un saare rakshasho ki raakh thi jinko peter ne bheja tha.

Tabi
Us dibbe se nikal rahi awaaz itni bhayanak hone lagti us awaaz se peter or sab rakshas ke kaan ( ear ) phatne lagte hai.

Or peter jaldi se sonam ke ghar ka gate band kar deta hai.

Tabi

Ek rakshas : peter sir kya hai is dibbe mein

Or aap itne kaap kiu rahe ho.

Peter ( chillate hue ) : madar chodo jaldi bhago yaha se nahi to sab maare jaoge.

Rakshas : par inka kya karna hai. ( Rani or rishabh ki taraf ishara karte hue )

Peter : hume sirf is auraat ( seema ) se matlab hai
Inko yahi chor do.

Yeh aawaaz inko khud hii khatam kar degi.

Or agar hum yaha jyada der rukhe to yaha hamari dead body bhi dikai nahi degi.

Rashas : par sir us kamre mein aisa kya hai.

Peter : bhan chod tuze bohot janna hai ki us kamre mein kya hai.

Tabi
Us aawaaz se sonam ke kamre ka gate achanak se tut jyata hai or hawa mein urta hua peter par ja lagta hai.

Peter dard se chillate hue.

Peter : saalo hatao  is gate ko mere upar se.

Tabi baki rakshas us gate ko peter ke upar se hatate hai.

Rani : tum nahi jante tum kitni badi galti kar rahe ho peter.
Agar apni jaan pyari hai to chor do seema ko nahi to tum sab maroge.

Peter : gand fate par power na ghate wale rakshas hai hum.
Jo hoga dekha jaega.

Or peter seema ko lekar desh 2 ki taraf jane wala hota hai
Tabi
Rani chillate hue


Rani : tum logh yaha se to bach gaye magar vaha usse bhi puri halat hogi tumare.

Or tum khud marna pasand karoge.

Peter : haa haa dekh lage.

Or peter vaha se chala jata hai.

Magar us rakshas ke gane ke baad bhi vo awaaz jo us dibbe se nikal rahi thi band nahi hoti.

Jisse rani or rishabh ke kaan fatne lagte hai.

Rani : mahadev yeh kesi takat hai to band hii nahi ho rahi .
Agar yeh jaldi band nahi hue to hum jarur mar jaege.

Or jaise hii sonam ka gate tut jata hai achanak se samne ki diwar par latki hue mahadev ki tasvir achanak niche gir jati hai.
Or us dibbe ki aawaz jaise hii mahadev ki tasveer se takrati hai  to vo awaaz dheere dheere band hone lagti hai.
Or fir shant ho jati hai.

Or rani & rishabh vahi behosh ho jate hai.

Fir arvind vaha aa jata hai or rani or rishabh ko behoshi ki halat mein dekhta hai.

Flashback end.

Or vahi rishabh neend mein barbara Raha hota hai.

Rishabh ( neend me ) : seema ko chor do usko desh 2 mat le jao.
Rohan seema ko bacha lo.

Fir vo awaaz raat mein band ho gai hoti hai .
Mahadev ki tarveer ke bajase

Vo rahul ke ate hii fir chalu ho jati hai.

Jis awaaz ko sunkar rahul ka sir dard hone lagta hai.

Or rahul tezz tezz chillane lagta hai.

Or vo awaaz rahul ko apne taraf bulane lagti hai or kheechne lagti hai.

Isse sonali or payal bohot ghabra jati hai.

Payal ( rahul se ) : kya hua rahul tum itna chilla kiu rahe ho.

Rahul ( chillate hue ) : yeh aawaz mera dimak fad degi isko band karo.

Payal : khonsi aawaaz rahul hume to koi bhi awaaz sunai nahi de rahi.

Yeh aawaz bas rahul ko hii sunai de rahi hoti hai.

Us dibbe mein se nikal rahi aawaaz rahul ko bulate hue.

Aawaaz ( rahul se ) : rahul mere pass aao or mere mein shama jao.
Aaa jao rahul mujhe tumara hii intzaar tha.
Pata nahi kitne saalo se.
Aa jao rahul.

Rahul ( chillate hue ) : yeh awaaz band kiu nahi ho rahi kiu .
Nahi please chup ho jao.
Mujhe tumare pass nahi ana.

Yeh baat sunkar rahul ki saari bhan or sonam rani sab ghabra jati hai.

Sab rahul ko pakarte hue.

Ruchi : bhaiya kya hua
Yeh achanak apka sir kiu dard hone laga.
Mein abhi doctor ko bulati hue.

Rahul utt kar bathroom mein ghuss jata hai gate band kar leta hai.

Sab gate pitte hue chillane lagte hai
Ki rahul gate kiu band kar liya gate khol

Vahi bathroom mein rahul
Ka sarir do bhago mein divide ho jata hai.

(Ab first bhag ko rahul
Or second bhag ko rahul too kahuga.)

Tabi do shaks ek dusare ke samne khade hote hai.

Rahul dusare shaks ko dekhte hue
Rahul : khon ho tum.

Rahul 2 : khon ho tum.

Rahul : yeh kaisa sawal hai.

Rahul 2 : yeh kaisa sawal hai.

Rahul : mein rahul hu.

Rahul 2 : mein rahul hu.

Rahul ( shocked hokar ) : kyaa tum rahul ho.

Rahul 2 ( shocked hokar ) : kya tum rahul ho.

Rahul : ha rahul mein hu.

Rahul 2 : haa rahul mein hu.

Rahul : tum mere copy kiu kar rahe ho.

Rahul 2 : tum meri copy kiu kar rahe ho.

Vahi bahar gate par sonali chillate hue.

Sonali ( chillate hue ) : rahul gate khol kya hua tuze
Baki sab ki chilla rahe hote hai gaye kholne ke liye.

Vahi
Rahul : mujhe sona didu gate kholne ko bol rahi hai.

Rahul 2 : mujhe sona didu gate kholne ko bol rahi hai.

Tabi sab dhakka dekar gaye khol dete hai.

Or samne ka nazara dekhkar shocked ho jate hai.

[NEIL2025]

Plz add some cool picture too

[Rani]

Nice story age lekho

[Xabhi18]

Update to sare 1 no. hai...
Lekin aage ka bhi to update kro...

[OzyMoon]

Update?

[Rohan1234]

Bhai comment hii nahi ate na like ate hai next update kaise du jab koi like or comment nahi karte

[Xabhi18]

Bhai 1 update do fir dekho kitne comment aate hai
26 Dec se wait kr rha hu bhai

[Rohan1234]

Bhai 1 update do fir dekho kitne comment aate hai
26 Dec se wait kr rha hu bhai

Next update abhi post karta hue 2 minute mein fir dekhte hai like or coment wagera

[Rohan1234]

Update 51

Rahul 2 : mujhe sona didu gate kholne ko bol rahi hai.

Tabi sab dhakka dekar gaye khol dete hai.

Or samne ka nazara dekhkar sab shocked ho jate hai.

Kiuki vo rahul 2 vaha se achanak gayab ho jata hai

Or sonali rahul ko dekhti hai to rahul apna sir ( head ) pakar kar ro raha hota hai.

Us atma mani ki awaaz rahul ko bohot pareshan rahi thi.

Or sonali fata fat rahul ke pass jati hai.
Or rahul ko apni god me lita leti hai.

Sonali ( rahul se ) : betu tu itna ro ( carry ) kiu kar raha hai.
Pehle bhi tere head me itna dard hota tha jo tu bardast nahi kar pata tha.

Payal rahul ka head sehlate hue

Payal : rahul mat ro tere sir mein pata nahi kiu itna dard hota rehta hai.
Mujhe kabi shamaj nahi ata.
Iske piche kya vaja hai.

Rahul ki saari sister rahul ko is dard mein dekhkar rone lagti hai.

Tabi

Sonam ( prerna se ) : prerna didi yeh rahul ko kya hua hai.

Prerna : sonam mujhe bhi nahi pata ki rahul ko kya hua hai.

Tabi rani se raha nahi jata or achanak se rani bol deti hai.

Rani ( sonam se ) : beta mujhe raat mein tumare kamre se bohot bhayanak or darawani aawaaz aa rahi thi.
Jisko sunkar mere kaan fat rahe the.

Yeh baat sunte hi sonam ko kuch yaad aa jata hai.
Or sonam bhagte hue apne kamre mein jati hai.
To dekhti hai sonam ke room ka gate tuta hua hota hai.

Or bagal mein bohot saari rakh padi hoti hai.
Or us dibbe ke charo or om ka chakra bane hote hai.

Or uski roshni bhi bohot tezz hoti hai
Or usme se black colour ki roshni nikal rahi hoti hai.

Prerna ( chillate hue ) : sonam is dibbe mein kya hai.

Magar sonam ko khud nahi pata tha ki is dibbe mein kya hai.

Sonam : mujhe nahi pata prerna didi.

Prerna : to tumare pass yeh dibba kese aya.

Sonam haklate hue bolti hai.

Sonam ( haklate hue ) : yeh dibba to mujhe divya ne diya tha.

Prerna shocked hokar

Prerna ( chillate hue ) : kya magar kab or kese

Flashback

Update 5
Jab mahakaal sunglee lu ko mar deta hai.
Or veer ko bacha leta hai.
Tabi ek ladki mahakaal se chipak kar rone lagti hai.

Yeh mahakaal se dekha nahi jata or mahakaal us ladki ko ek dibba deta hai.

Vo ladki koi or nahi divya hii thi.
Jo apne rahul ko na dekhkar mahakaal ko pakar kar ro rahi thi.

Or mahakaal vaha se chala jata hai.

Divya us dibbe ko dekhkar bohot khuss hoti hai.
Ki uske pyaar ne apni nishani di hai jab tak rahul vapas nahi aa jata.

Or divya ka khusi ka thikana nahi hota kiuki divya pyaar jo karti thi apne rahul se

Or apne rahul ki koi bhi chiz kese mana kar sakti thi.

Or mahakaal ne to khud kaha tha ki rahul tumare pass dubara jarur vapis aaega .
Or jab tak nahi ata is dibbe ko shamal kar rakhna .
Or kabi is dibbe ko akela nahi chorna.

Magar divya ko kya pata tha mahakaal ne divya ko kya shamal kar rakhne ko diya tha.
Or kya tha usme.

Magar divya khuss thi ki vo is dibbe ke sahare apne pyaar or apne jaan apne rahul ka intzaar kar legi.

Magar niyati ko kuch or hii manjhur tha.
Shayad divya ko abhi or tadapna tha
Jiske sahare divya rahul ka vapas ane ka intzaar karna chahti thi
Shayad vo bhi niyati usse chin lena chahati thi.

Isliye jaise hii divya apni bhabhi ke sath hospital gayi
Veer ko admit karwane.
Kiuki veer ki halat bohot kharab thi.

Magar kuch time ke operation ke bad veer khatre se bahar a gaya.

Doctor ( divya se ) : abhi apke bhai veer ka operation hua hai .
Or vo thik hai kuch hii time mein unko hosh aa gayega.

Divya is baat se bohot khuss ho jati hai ki uska bhai veer thik hai.

Or divya apne bhabhi ke gale lagkar.

Divya : bhabhi veer thik hai ab rona band karo mahakaal ne veer ko bacha liya.

Or fir divya apne bhabhi ke ashu pohoch deti hai.

Bhabhi ( divya se ) : tere bajase hii to divya mahakaal yaha aya hai.
Or rahul ka sabse acha dost bhi to hai veer
To mahakaal ko veer ki madad karni hii thi.

Bhabhi roni se surat banate hue

Bhabhi : nahi to mein ne rahul ke sath jo kiya uske bajase mujhe lagne laga tha ki rahul mujhse bohot nafraat karega.

Bhabhi divya ka sir sehlate hue

Bhabhi ( divya se ) : magar mujhe khussi hai ki rahul ke man mein nafraat se jyada tere liye pyaar hai divya

Or itna pyaar ki vo kisi bhi apno ko chahe hum sab ne uske sath kitna bhi bura kiya ho
Fir bhi rahul tum ko dukh me nahi dekh sakta divya

rahul or veer ki dosti hii aise thi ki mahakaal ko ana hii pada veer ko bachane.



Bhabhi ( pyaar se ) : mujhe khussi hai ki rahul abhi bhi tuzse bohot pyaar karta hai
Apni jaan se bhi jyada.

Divya : mujhe pata hai bhabhi magar mujhe yeh bhi pata tha ki rahul khatre mein hai.
Uski jaan ko bachane ke liye yeh sab karna jaruri tha.
Nahi to vo logh mere rahul ko maar dete.

Divya ( bohot rote hue ) : or yeh mein dekh nahi pati .
Mujhe rahul se bicharna manjhur tha.
Magar rahul ko marta hua dekhna nahi.

Bhabhi ( divya se pyaar se ) : jo bhi hota hai divya ache ke liye hota hai.
Acha ab jaldi ja apne bhai veer ki medicine lekar aa mein jab tak veer se mil leti hue.

Divya haa mein garden hila deti hai.

Or medicine lene divya hospital ke bahar chemist par jane lagti hai.

Magar divya ko kya pata tha ki bahar divya ki mout uska intzaar kar rahi hai.

Or divya us dibbe ko apne sine se lagae hospital ke bahar jane lagti hai.

Divya ( mann me ) : pata hai rahul mein tumse itna pyaar karti hue ki din mere ek pal aisa nahi jata jab mein ne tumko I LOVE YOU or tumari tasveer ko apne sine se lagae nahi so jati jab tak mujhe chen nahi ata mere dil tume hamesha pyaar se dekhne pyaar karne ko bol rehta hai.

Divya ( MANN ME ): I LOVE U RAHUL
i love u so much.

Tumare bina to mera yeh sarir mout ke saman hai.
Magar mein kya karu tumari jaan ke liye mujhe apne pyaar ki kurbani deni hogi.

Or jaise hii divya medicine lekar jaise hii murti hai.

Tabi
Ek shaks apni car ke aage badi badi lohe ki keel lagakar full speed mein car ko bhagate hue divya ko takkar mar deta hai.

Or divya dard bhari cheekh ke sath bolti hai.

Divya : i love you rahul
I love you
Or udate hue door jakar girti hai.

Car bohot hii jyada speed mein thi jisse divya ka pura sarir khoon se latpat ho jata hai.
Tab bhi divya us dibbe ko apne sine se lagae vahi padi hue hoti hai.

Or apni akhiri saaash le rahi hoti hai.

Or us saah mein bhi divya apne pyaar apne jaan

Ko I LOVE YOU HII bol rahi hoti hai.

Divya apni akhri saah lete hue.

Divya : rahul i love u.

Or vo shaks jisne divya ko takkar mari thi.
Vo piche mudkar dekhta hai to divya ka koi bhi reaction nahi ata.

Shaks ( mann me ) : lagta hai mar gayi.
Jitni baar mein rahul ko marne jata hamesha usko mere se bacha leti thi.
Mere raste ka sabse bada pathar ban jayi thi yeh ( divya )
To isko raste se hatana hii pada.

Or vo shaks haste hue achanak se car lekar vaha se gayab ho jata hai.

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Update 52




Shaks ( mann me ) : lagta hai mar gayi.

Jitni baar mein rahul ko marne jata hamesha usko mere se bacha leti thi.

Mere raste ka sabse bada pathar ban jayi thi yeh ( divya )

To isko raste se hatana hii pada.



Or vo shaks haste hue achanak se car lekar vaha se gayab ho jata hai.



Ab aageeee...........



Or vehi se sonam dekhti hai ki kisi ne divya ko takkar mar di hai.

To sonam scooty vahi chorkar bhagte hue divya chillati hue divya ke paas aati hai.



Magar divya ka koi bhi react na dekh dar jati hai.



Vahi 

Logh bate kar rahe hote hai.



Logh 1 ( logh 2 se ) : to check kar yeh zinda hai ki nahi koi security officer ko phone karo.



Logh 2 : haa bhai koi security officer ko phone karo.



Sab logh ek dusare ko bol rahe hote hai ki security officer ko bulao or hospital lekar jao magar koi khud madad karne ke liye age nahi ata.



Yahi hamare desh ki bekar baat hai.



Or sonam divya ka sir apne god me rakh leti hai.



Sonam ( gusse me logo se ) : tum logh insaan nahi sehtaan ho sab ek dusare ko bol rahe ho ki security officer ko bulao , hospital lekar jao magar koi bhi madad karne age nahi ata.

Agar tumari bhan ya beti yaha aise hoti tab bhi aap aise hii bolte



Sharam ani chahiye aap sab ko ki ek insaan yaha mar raha hai or aap yeh dekh kar baate kar rahe ho ki yeh abhi mara ki nahi.



Sonam ki baat sunkar vaha khade sab logh apni garden niche kar lete hai.



Sonam ko pata tha ki divya rahul ko apni jaan se bhi jyada chahati hai.

Or itna pyaar karti hai jitna shayad vo khud bhi nahi karti thi.



Isliye sonam kabi rahul ke samne nahi aae kiuki agar aa jati to vo shayad vo apna pyaar ijhar karne se rokh nahi pati.



Or divya bhi janti thi ki sonam bhi rahul ko dilo jaan se chahti hai 



Par kiu iska abhas na divya ko tha nahi sonam ko 





Sonam ( rote hue divya se ) : divya aakhe kholo tume kuch nahi ho sakta 

Mein tume kuch nahi hone dugi.



Magar divya koi bhi jawab nahi deti.



Sonam ( bohot tezz chillate hue ) : divya agar tume kuch ho gaya to rahul ka kya hoga tumne kabi socha hai.

Divya tume utna hii padega apne rahul ke liye apne pyaar ke liye.

Nahi to tume bhi pata hai jab rahul ko tumare bare mein pata chalega to vo bhi nahi jee ayega vo bhi jinda lash ban jayega divya 

Tume utna hoga apne liye nahi to rahul ke liye.



Sonam : ut jao divya 

Utt jao 





Tabi achanak se sonam ki aawaaz us dibbe mein jati hai or us dibbe se nikal rahi black colour ki roshni divya ke ander shamahit hone lagti hai.



Or ek tezz zatake ke sath divya ek bohot gehari saas leti hai.



Divya ( gehari saash lete hue ) : rahul I LOVE YOU 



rahul ke to bas tan man mein bas rahul or uska pyaar basa hua tha divya ki har saash bas rahul ka hii naam leti hai.





Magar rahul ko to kuch pata hii nahi tha ki divya kis musibat mein hai.

Rahul insaab bato se anjan tha.

Ki divya ke sath kya hua hai.



Agar rahul ko pata chal jata to pata nahi kya hota iski kalpana bhi nahi ki ja sakti hai.



Ya to rahul khud mar jata ya us shaks ko mar deta jisne divya ko marne ki kosis ki thi.



Or divya jaise hii sonam ko dekhti hai to usse rote hue bolti hai.



Divya ( sonam se ) : sonam ab tum ko hii rahul ko shamalna hai.

Ab tum hii ho jo rahul ke ander ki nafraat khatam karke uske ander pyaar ka sanchar kar sakti ho.

Tum rahul ko kuch mat batana ki mein ne rahul ko kiu chora or iske piche kya bajaye thi.

Agar rahul ko yeh baat pata chali to rahul akela hii us shaks se ladne chala jayega 

Jisse mein rahul ko bacha rahi thi.

Or yeh mein abhi nahi hone de sakti.



Divya tezz sash lete hue sonam se 



Divya : vada karo sonam ki tum rahul ko kuch nahi bataogi.

Or rahul ko itna pyaar karogi ki usko meri kabi yaad na aae.

Agar rahul ko meri yaad aaee to vo bas rota rahega ki divya ne mujhe kiu chora 

Or sab se nafraat karne lagega 



Vada karo sonam ki tum rahul ko itna pyaar karogi ki tumare samne vo kabi mujhe yaad na kare 

Vada karo sonam.



Sonam ( rote hue ) : mein vada karti hue divya ki mein rahul ko kabi tumari kami mehsus nahi hone dugi.

Or rahul ko itna pyaar karugi ki jab rahul ko tumare bare mein pata chalega tab mera pyaar hii uski taqat banega.





Divya dibba sonam ko dete hue.



Divya ( sonam se dard ke sath ) : yeh dibba mujhe mahakaal ne diya hai.

Ab iski raksha tume karni hai.

Mujhe nahi pata ki isme kya hai.

Magar itna pata hai agar mahakaal ne yeh diya hai to isko bohot bada karan hoga.

Or jab tak vo karan pura nahi ho jata jab tak  tume is dibbe ki raksha  karni hogi.



Sonam ( divya se ) : divya vo khon hai jisse rahul ko khatra hai.



Divya ( rote hue ) : vooo insan nahi ek sehtan hai ek darinda hai tum nahi janti sonam ki vo aisa rakshas hai ki jiske ander na daya or bhawna na rehm kuch bhi nahi hai.



Sonam : khon hai vo



Divya ( rote hue ) : voooo .....Da........

Sonam : kya da divya 





Divya : vooo



Is divya ka hand dheela padh jata hai or divya ek bohot gheeri nend mein chali jati hai.



Jaha na to dard hota hai na takleef jaha sirf rahul or uska pyaar hota hai.



Or us pyaar ke gheri neend mein divya chali jati hai.



Sonam rote hue chillati hai.



Sonam : divya tum mujhe chorkar nahi ja sakti 

Please utt jao divya.



Magar ab divya ko kuch bhi sunai nahi de Raha tha.



Or sonam divya ko pakar kar samne wale hospital lekar chali jati hai.



Or fir hospital mein vahi drama shuru ho jata hai ki hum inko admit nahi kar sakte yeh security officer case hai.



Vahi divya apni saashe bohot tezz tezz le rahi hoti hai.



Sonam ( hospital staff se gusse me ) : tum sab ko to mein bad mein dekh lugi 

Agar tumara pura hospital nahi band karwa diya to dekhna 



Sonam IPS arvind ko phone karti hai.



Sonam ( rote hue ) : arvind bhaiya yeh logh divya ko admit nahi kar rahe 

Uski halat bohot kharab hai.



Or sonam arvind ko puri baat bata deti hai.



Arvind : mein hu na sonam jaise neha meri bhan hai vaise tu bhi to meri bhan hai.

Or dheeraj rakho or meri baat karwao hospital staff se.



Or sonam arvind ki baat karwa deti hai.



Tab jakar vo hospital vale divya ko admit karte hai.



Or divya ko operation theater me le jate hai.

Vahi divya ki bhabhi jaise hii divya ko operation threater mein le jati hue dekhti hai.



To bhagte hue divya chillate hue opretion threater pohochti hai.



Bhabhi ( doctor se ) : yeh meri nanand hai doctor yeh to apne bhai veer ke liye medicine lene gai thi fir yeh sab kese hua.



Doctor : dekhiye inki halat bohot kharab hai 

Kisi ne inko car se uda diya hai.

Or inka bachna bhi bohot muskhil hai.



Bhabhi rote hue us doctor ke leg pakar leti hai.



Bhabhi ( doctor se ) : please doctor meri nanand ko bacha lo

Apko jitna bhi paisa chahiye mein dugi

Mein apni saari jwellary bech dugi .

Agar veer ko yeh pata chala to pata nahi kya hoga.



Please doctor meri nanand ko bacha lo.



Doctor ( bhabhi se ) : dekhiye medam hum kosis kar sakte hai.

Baki sab bhagwan ke hath mein hai.



Or doctor ander operation karne chala jata hai.



Tabi piche se sonam aa rahi hoti hai.



Or bhabhi sonam ko dekhti hai.



Bhabhi ( sonam se ) : dekh na sonam divya ko kya ho gaya hai.

Yeh logh bol rahe hai ki kisi ne divya ko car se uda diya.



Or kuch der mein operation ho jata hai 



Or doctor niche sir jhukaye bahar ate hai.



Bhabhi ( rote hue ) : kya hua doctor divya thik hai na.



Doctor : sorry she is going to coma.

Hum ab yeh nahi bata sakte ki yeh ( divya ) kab is gheri neend se utte gi.





Bhabhi ( chillate hue ) : nahi yeh nahi ho sakta.

Divyaaaaaaa





Yeh sunkar vahi pass ke cabin me leta hua veer ghabra jata hai.



Or veer ki halat to nahi thi ki chal sake magar divya ka naam u chillate hue sunkar

Fir bhi kosis karke bahar aa jata hai.



Or bahar ka nazara dekhta hai.





Next update mein yeh flash back bhi end ho jaega or fir shuru hoga atma mani ka khel 





Next update subha deta hu .

[Rohan1234]

Bhaiyo is story ko is liye maine band kar diya tha kiuki koi itna padh nahi raha tha kiuki aise story likhne me bohot ghante lag jate hai jabki yaha jyada tar adultary or sex ki hii story logh jyada pasand karte hai 

Or usme family me sex karte hue  uuuuuu aaaaaa dikhate hai or logh usko pedh kar maze lete hai jabki yeh story sex par adharit nahi hai haa isme sex jarur hai par yeh story pyaar or vishwas par adharit hai 

Iska ek update likhne me karib 5 ya 6 ghante lag jate hai or fir isko post karne me soch lo kitna time lagta hai

Jab writer itni mehnat karega to writer readers se itna aspect to karega ki ache review or like aae

Agar nahi aaege to us story ko band kar dega aap khud socho 

Aaj mein us din ke baad side par yaha hue chalo dekhte hai yeh story kitni ko achi lagti hai 

Agar achi nahi lagi to mehnat bekar hai  abhi mein ne 2 update post kiye hai padh kar bataye ki kaisa laga 

[Rajakiller123456]

bhai kitni stories ko mix kr ke yaa copy kr ke vhaa se yha likha hai

[Xabhi18]

Bhai mujhe update pasand aaya baki logo ka nhi bta sakta
Maine Isi story ko dusre forum me yha tk read kra hai jo 2nd Rahul hai mata parvti ke pass jakr jo bat chit hoti hai udhar tk pdha hai
Aage ka intjar...

[Rohan1234]

Bhai mujhe update pasand aaya baki logo ka nhi bta sakta
Maine Isi story ko dusre forum me yha tk read kra hai jo 2nd Rahul hai mata parvti ke pass jakr jo bat chit hoti hai udhar tk pdha hai
Aage ka intjar...

Bhai us forum par yeh story bohot age ja chuki hai to aap vahi is story ko pado 

Vaha like or views bhi ache hai isliye mein vahi update deta hue

[Xabhi18]

Kya mujhe link mil sakta hai us forum ka

[Rohan1234]

Bhai yaha dusare forum ka link dena mana hai

[Xabhi18]

Bhai mail kr do sk56839319; me