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		I just want a reiterate a great quote by Chinua Achebe
 "I believe myself that a good writer doesn’t really need to be told anything except to keep at it."
 
 Please think about this when ever you want to quit writing an unfinished story.
 
	
	
	
		
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		Great..... I'm speechless againYour insight on the genetic point and role of love between a couple's life
 
 This is not an erotica or a thriller... Neither just an erotic thriller
 A landmark tale contains multiple shades of love and lust... With a lot of informations on each and every aspect
 
 Will wait with crossed fingers for the next
 
	
	
	
		
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		Epic!!!! No words to describe how insanely good this Chapter was.  
Sometimes it felt like I am reading a biology book,
 
sometimes it felt like chik lit romance novel,
 
 sometimes it was a study of philosophy, 
 
Other times it was nothing but poetry 
 
 sometimes it was  sleazy 
 
sometimes it felt like I am reading something written by a criminal     Sad .
	 
	
	
	
		
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		I was doing something when i found this quote  " Fighting for peace is like Screwing for viginity" 
 It immediately remind me of Shilpa rani & her quest (The Hunt).(seducing stranger for husband is like screwing by Rahul ,Harsh and who knows)
 
 That is the impact of your style, writing style. The above comment by warlock123 shows how vast the story is.(Pablo Escobar, Abe Lincoln, Oscar Wilde,Indian Mythology, Roman History, Psychology and many other streams  in erotica but it is not only an erotica nor a thriller Yes it is a landmark tale well said by kamdev99008.)
 
 !!!!Funny thing words and thoughts.Once they are inside of your head and mind,you are their master or mistress,but as soon as you utter them,as soon as those leave your lips you become their slave,you have to live up to what you said otherwise you will be called a liar or stupid or what not?!!
 
 Eagerly but patiently waiting for many more chapters of the Sigma , the Alpha & the Bambino. yr):
 
	
	
	
		
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		 (25-02-2020, 12:00 AM)akshatha Wrote:  hotttttt 
Thank you.
	 
	
	
	
		
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		 (26-02-2020, 10:01 PM)KurtaPhaad Wrote:  I was doing something when i found this quote  " Fighting for peace is like Screwing for viginity" 
 It immediately remind me of Shilpa rani & her quest (The Hunt).(seducing stranger for husband is like screwing by Rahul ,Harsh and who knows)
 
 That is the impact of your style, writing style. The above comment by warlock123 shows how vast the story is.(Pablo Escobar, Abe Lincoln, Oscar Wilde,Indian Mythology, Roman History, Psychology and many other streams  in erotica but it is not only an erotica nor a thriller Yes it is a landmark tale well said by kamdev99008.)
 
 !!!!Funny thing words and thoughts.Once they are inside of your head and mind,you are their master or mistress,but as soon as you utter them,as soon as those leave your lips you become their slave,you have to live up to what you said otherwise you will be called a liar or stupid or what not?!!
 
 Eagerly but patiently waiting for many more chapters of the Sigma , the Alpha & the Bambino. yr):
 You know more details about the story than I do.           
	
	
	
		
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		 (26-02-2020, 06:24 PM)warlock123 Wrote:  Epic!!!! No words to describe how insanely good this Chapter was. Sometimes it felt like I am reading a biology book,
 
 sometimes it felt like chik lit romance novel,
 
 sometimes it was a study of philosophy,
 
 Other times it was nothing but poetry
 
 sometimes it was  sleazy
 
 sometimes it felt like I am reading something written by a criminal
  Sad . Thank you mate. You are very generous .
	 
	
	
	
		
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		 (25-02-2020, 12:31 PM)kamdev99008 Wrote:  Great..... I'm speechless againYour insight on the genetic point and role of love between a couple's life
 
 This is not an erotica or a thriller... Neither just an erotic thriller
 A landmark tale contains multiple shades of love and lust... With a lot of informations on each and every aspect
 
 Will wait with crossed fingers for the next
 
I never realized that I am writing a thriller. Now that I think of it, You are right it is an Erotic crime thriller.
 
I think I have a tendency to drive the story that way cause my late childhood was influenced by writers like James Hadley Chase. 
They stole my innocence           
I always wanted to write those things up what I said in that Chapter. I wanted to register those thoughts somewhere.
 
Thanks for the comment and appraisals.
	 
	
	
	
		
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		 (25-02-2020, 02:39 AM)desiass Wrote:  I just want a reiterate a great quote by Chinua Achebe
 "I believe myself that a good writer doesn’t really need to be told anything except to keep at it."
 
 Please think about this when ever you want to quit writing an unfinished story.
 
There used to some readers who regularly encouraged me to write the story. Now they don't.
 
The story was not gaining any new readers moreover it has lost a handful of old readers who used to comment.
 
Hence I came to that conclusion of quitting.
 
The problem is I am writing a story which I want to read. I don't write to please readers, there I have just said it. Hence the story does not have many readers. 
But on the other hand, I do want many readers to read the story.         . And I can't have both. That is the dilemma.
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Bhai you are writing great. Please don't stop and do not change your way of writing.Morever many readers read your story but not reply. See your views bro. Keep writing. We love the way you write.
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		 (27-02-2020, 11:59 PM)faltu123 Wrote:  Bhai you are writing great. Please don't stop and do not change your way of writing.Morever many readers read your story but not reply. See your views bro. Keep writing. We love the way you write.
 All the best.
 
Thanks, man. I have abandoned the idea of quitting already. The above post was just a reply to another post.
	 
	
	
	
		
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		 (28-02-2020, 09:00 PM)Devilmaycry Wrote:  Thanks, man. I have abandoned the idea of quitting already. The above post was just a reply to another post. 
eagerly waiting for your next blockbuster update
	 
	
	
	
		
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		 (28-02-2020, 09:51 PM)kamdev99008 Wrote:  eagerly waiting for your next blockbuster update 
Corona virus has fucked the market,I got time until it recovers. 
I have not wrote any words yet. 
Do you guys want a short quick update tomorrow morning    or a well coordinated  one in next week?
	 
	
	
	
		
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		 (28-02-2020, 10:00 PM)Devilmaycry Wrote:  Corona virus has fucked the market,I got time until it recovers.I have not wrote any words yet.
 Do you guys want a short quick update tomorrow morning    or a well coordinated  one in next week?
 
we can wait till next week for a complete dose..........
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Wating for updates Bro...
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Your art of writing has been awesome and humorous makes me wanna read further and further.
 I  enjoyed the jokes, pun, gag, one liner, all in all the humour part
 
 Again thank you for such a great entertainment
 
Some would say I am the REVERSE 
 
	
	
	
		
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		Your art of writing has been awesome and humorous makes me wanna read further and further.
 I  enjoyed the jokes, pun, gag, one liner, all in all the humour part
 
 Again thank you for such a great entertainment
 
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		He touches Shilpa's perky boobs with one hand " he needs the  hints of your mountains." 
 Mahesh's fingers brurshes shilpa's nipple over her baggy blouse and bra "He loves challenge, unless he knows there are two high peaks ready  to be conquered ,how he gonna even think of even climbing?"
 
 Mahesh's other hand roams on Shilpa's flawless back which is entirely covered " If he does not know how smooth it is, why would he dream of the adventure of skiing there? "
 
 
 Shilpa get tensed under Mahesh, Mahesh's hands travel furthur and lighly grabs Shilpa's plump ass " If he can't see how wild you sway while you walk, how can he be wild enough to committ wild blunder losing into the wilderness of your junoesque  landscape "
 
 
 To feel what I feel when I watch my wife's body,it was made for men to fight over ,it was made for crime and that is what this body is gonna committ ."
 
 एक सब्र है इसके सिवा कुछ पास नहीं है, बर्बाद तमन्नाओं का एहसास नहीं है /
 कमज़र्फ नहीं हूँ के जो मैं मांग के पी लूं, और ये भी नहीं है की मुझे प्यास नहीं है //
 
	
	
	
		
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		एक सब्र है इसके सिवा कुछ पास नहीं है, बर्बाद तमन्नाओं का एहसास नहीं है /कमज़र्फ नहीं हूँ के जो मैं मांग के पी लूं, और ये भी नहीं है की मुझे प्यास नहीं है //
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