02-02-2020, 10:55 PM
ENJOY THE LATEST UPDATE GUYS. HAVE FUN. DO COMMENT IF YOU LIKE IT. CRITICISMS ARE WELCOMED AS WELL.
LINK IS IN THE BIO. FIRST PAGE.
LINK IS IN THE BIO. FIRST PAGE.
(02-02-2020, 10:55 PM)Devilmaycry Wrote: ENJOY THE LATEST UPDATE GUYS. HAVE FUN. DO COMMENT IF YOU LIKE IT. CRITICISMS ARE WELCOMED AS WELL.
LINK IS IN THE BIO. FIRST PAGE.
) dr praveen ....... a psychiatrist .... manipulator of minds(03-02-2020, 08:29 PM)Kiran45 Wrote: so happy to see this updateI am glad that you like the update and enjoyed reading your review. Thank you for the rep.
I loved how shilpa is struggling with her emotions and how she played game with rahul
I am great fan of how you play game with each characters...., In your game all characters are intelligents and they all have their weakness and its great to see how they all are playing it
I love the way rahul is playing and the way he humiliated her in public
New character is also great and the relationship between shilpa and indra is interesting and waiting to see what will happen b/w them
waiting to see what asish will do in next update
great update
(03-02-2020, 11:49 PM)kamdev99008 Wrote: your story ....more than the story your narration and portraying of characters is ultimate.............That's high praise
i'm very impressed with your story
in my opinion your story is far greater epic........... than the so called epic...unwanted houseguest..... left in middle by original author
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now on present scenerio
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the weakest portrayed character of the story has the sharpest mind.......... even more sharper than ashish
because ashish is using his power and position too beside his intelligence
but rahul............ he has no power, no position, no dominating status..... instead he is one dominated by everyone....
be it mahesh, shilpa, ashish or even their subordinates
but he has learnt his techniques from his mistress (feminine master) dr praveen ....... a psychiatrist .... manipulator of minds
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his first target shilpa is trapped in a web tightning day by day....... worsen to it .....her sex episode with rahul....... make her feel guilt, degrade and fearful...... in her innerself
on the other hand .... his second target.......... mahesh is also not in much better condition........... humiliation by ashish making him aggressive and short tempered...... leading to distractionfrom shilpa........... her partner in crime(s)
waiting for next update eagerly................... what is waiting for shilpa inside ashish's flat
. Enjoyed reading your analysis. Thank you very much. I am abstaining myself from talking about the characters cause I might spoil the story. It's good to read about the characters from other's viewpoint.
(04-02-2020, 05:38 PM)warlock123 Wrote: wow!!! Fantastic Update!!!Thank you, I enjoyed reading your review. Good insights.
I liked how Shilpa managed Rahul. I thought she will become typical - "Am I attracted to Rahul?" type morally torn character.
I imagined she would become shy and submissive to Rahul after her wild night. I thought Rahul would tease her a lot and force her to give in to lust.
But the way she came out and the threats she used is pretty chilling.
The thought didn't cross my mind that it's just not the females who are only afraid of social stigma.
I enjoyed the new character Indra. I find it a very unique introduction of the character by using a dog.
Damn!! Shilpa is smart the way she fooled Indra in the past.
In the pump, I liked how the cash collector was not mean to Shilpa despite her compromising wardrobe malfunction. Not everyone is the same. Nice touch.
Although I found the use of stages of grief theme is forcefully inserted in this update. It felt excess information.
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