28-01-2020, 09:53 PM
very hot story ! Please keep going.
(17-12-2019, 12:43 AM)kamdev99008 Wrote: see this screenshot.......... clickquote botton on the desired posts and ....insert quotes by clicking link on post reply panel border
(28-01-2020, 09:57 PM)Dinesh Raveendran Wrote: Simply Superbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
(28-01-2020, 10:27 PM)chellaporukki Wrote: Very nice
(28-01-2020, 11:19 PM)King Kesavan Wrote: Wow. Awesome thoughts and writing. Hats off bro.
(28-01-2020, 11:27 PM)akshatha Wrote: wow. beautiful story. keep it up.
(28-01-2020, 08:46 PM)xavierrxx Wrote: AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEE NO WORDS TO PRAISE .. YOU ARE ROCKING :)
(28-01-2020, 08:52 PM)Manikandarajesh Wrote: Excellent update
(28-01-2020, 08:56 PM)Rangushki Wrote: Amazing writing
(28-01-2020, 09:02 PM)Vasanthan Wrote: Fantastic narration.
(28-01-2020, 09:53 PM)akshatha Wrote: very hot story ! Please keep going.
(27-01-2020, 05:58 AM)NovelNavel Wrote: Wonderful update.
If Rahul itself is handling shilpa like this. How Aashish will handle.
. Sometimes I just throw in elements in the story without any specific agenda. Like in one post Shilpa was dressing up for Ashish and she was using the perfume.At that time I had no idea why I mentioned that.But later it came handy for me and I made the Naina character an arachnologist. Even when Naina was having dinner with Ashish before I wrote she is lying about something. I really had no idea what she was lying about. Then later I used that point to say she was lying about her profession as an Economist.
(27-01-2020, 09:01 PM)kamdev99008 Wrote: great.............. you have created not only a paintingFirst of all, thank you. I saw that painting in an art exhibition once.It was an imitation of course. But nonetheless, I was fascinated by the concept. It's was puzzling. So when I started writing about this chapter I felt that painting would fit the theme of Rahul's approach to seduce Shilpa.
but a masterpiece
a portrait
so ......... rahul patiently took steps without reacting to his humiliation, pain and agony ............
and make shilpa feel the all pain, agony and humiliation.......... not only this but the degradation, broken pride and collapsed domination
he given real tribute to his beloved mother............. by knocking down her 1 killer
but............. will shilpa knocked down............ if yes........... than mahesh will not be at far
if no......... than...........she will make rahul's life worst than the hell
ashish is the opportunity............ for rahul..................
by using ashish............... rahul's eternal hunger of revenge and payback ......against shilpa and mahesh............ fulfilling
eagerly waiting for the next
(28-01-2020, 09:09 AM)Kiran45 Wrote: Excellent update broThank you very much.I enjoy reading your comments.
I don't have words to describe how great it was
Humiliation at its best
"The mask Rahul wore all this time was his true face, and his real naked face was an act, an act he has been acting his whole life."excellent lines
And take as much time it required to create this masterpiece
I can wait forever for this story updates
Thank you for telling such a great story to us
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(28-01-2020, 05:01 PM)warlock123 Wrote: Man, I love that in your story everything is connected. Your cats and dogs post was so brilliant I did not realize you were setting up Mahesh to take the cold drink all along which was so crucial. But it did not feel forced, The series of events before that are there to justify that moment.
Another thing I liked is You gave Shilpa enough chances. she did not surrender just like that. She hesitated to take anything Rahul offered but you made the conversation between Rahul and Shilpa in such manner that she ended up consuming those intoxicating substances to soothe her emotions.
The way Rahul seduced her is so dirty....too dirty. Good luck to any woman who is on Rahul's bad list. He trapped her in every possible way and none of those feel forced. Not anytime Shilpa acted stupidly before they touch each. The way Rahul took away her powers is so humiliating, slowly bit by bit he broke her. Fuck it was hot. He made her feel every moment what she is doing. The whole chapter felt like slow strip dance.
Thank you for this hot update. Patiently waiting for the next.
(27-01-2020, 09:13 PM)desiass Wrote: Even though its a late update...I fell it is worth waiting for
. That previous update was short I was going for sex based on only sex drugs. Shilpa would get horny and could not control herself, Rahul will console her and have sex within no time. Then I realize that does not look very promising cause I am about to write an impossible sex scene. Stepmom and stepson in front of sleeping husband, moreover the female character absolutely feel no attraction to the male up to this point. It is a near-impossible thing to happen just like that. Hence I had to go through all that drama to make it look like somehow believable.i am not claiming that it was 100 percent realistic but I tried to make it look convincing that's why it took 7 parts.![[Image: 135413885_738_1000.jpg]](https://img38.pixhost.to/images/516/135413885_738_1000.jpg)
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(29-01-2020, 08:20 PM)Rockket Raja Wrote: Simply Awesome. Story and pictures
(31-01-2020, 03:40 AM)xboard1986 Wrote: New month... New update.. Waiting
(01-02-2020, 04:02 PM)Steven Rajaa Wrote: Very nicely written. Loved it. Thank you
(02-02-2020, 01:01 PM)Johnnythedevil Wrote: Fantastic update