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Romance Mera pyar meri zindagi..
#81
Superb story sir
This is it ! 
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#82
Sorry friends manta hu bahot late reply de raha hu, story bich me band hone ke flow nhi ban pata hai, but iss story ko complete karna hai wo bhi ache se, bahot din baad update de raha hu kuch galti ho jaye to maaf kar dena aap log
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#83
Update 67

Thori der ring bajane ke baad yash ki mom ne darwaja khola, aaj pehli baar tha yash ke purpose karne ke baad yashmin officially uske ghar aayi thi thori sarma rahi thi kyuki usko pata tha ki maa ko humare baare me pata hai,
Yash- kya mom itni der laga di aur baaki sab kha hai kaam karne wale?
Yash mom- (thori rookhi awaz me) kyu jada wait kr liya kya tum sab busy hai apne kaam hai, 
Yash ko ajeeb laga uski maa ko aise bolte huye tabhi
Yashmin- nhi aunty abhi abhi hum log aaye hai
Ghar ke andar aate hi jab yashmin ne uske pair chuwe to wo bas formality me khush raho bol ke chali gayi jaate jaate 
Maa- yash ja fresh ho ja chai mangwaati hu
Yashmin ko unka behaviour bahot ajeeb lag raha tha unhone aaj tak aisa behave nhi kiya tha yashmin ke sath
Yash ke jaate hi yashmin ne poocha
Yashmin- aunty koi problem hai kya?
Yash mom- tum batawo koi problem hai mujhe dekho main baat ko ghuma kar nhi bolungi lekin tum dono se mujhe ye umeed nhi thi angle, yash to pagal hai par tum to samjhdaar ho tumse ye umeed nhi thi,
Yashmin ko dar lagne laga apne aap ko control kr ke poocha
Yashmin- maine kya kiya hai aunty, 
Yash mom- kyu natak kar rahi ho yashmin tum dono itne bade ho gaye ho ki apne saare decision khud lene lage tum dono, hum se poocha tak nhi, bas apna decision soona diya ki tum dono pyar krte ho. 
Yashmin se ab bardaas krna muskil tha uski aakhe nam hone lagi
Yashmin- nhi aunty aisi baat nhi hai, mujhe sach me pata nhi tha ki yash aapka beta hai, 
Bich me hi rookte huwe..
Yash mom- rehne do angle mujhe sab pata hai, kya sochi thi main ki yash ki shadi apni friend ki ladki se karungi usse baat bhi kr li thi main bahot pehle hi yash ka rishta fix kr diya tha maine, lekin ab tum dono ka kya karu, tumhe apni beti mana tha par tum logo ne, isse acha hota ki bahot pehle hi tumse rista tod leti main ye sab to nhi hota
Yashmin ab rone lagi aisa laga ki sab kuch hath se jaa raha hai.. wo rote rote boli..
Yashmin- nhi aunty aisa mat boliye, maine aapko maa mana hai, aapko nhi chor sakti aap jo chahogi wahi hoga maa, please bas aap mujhese door jaane ko mat boliye ek maa ko kho chuki hu ab aapko nhi khona chahti, apne dil par pathar rakh kar boli agar agar aap yash ki shadi apni friend ki beti se karwana chahti h to aap karwa dijiye main kuch nhi bolungi main chali jawungi yash ki jindagi se but maa please main aapko nhi kho sakti, aur ho sakte to maaf kar dijiye mujhe, wo rote rote bol rahi thi..
Yash door se sab dekh raha tha usse yashmin ka rona ab bardaas nhi ho raha tha 
Yash- maa ab bas kijiye apna natak kitna rone lagi angle..
Yash mom- aree sach me dekho to kitna rone lagi.. sorry beta majak kr rahi thi main, maine socha nhi tha aisa kuch karne ke liye par jab aayi to aunty boli to thori si teri taang khichne ka mann kiya sorry haste huwe boli..
Yashmin se ab bardaas nhi huwa usse laga tha ek pal me hi uska sab kuch chala gaya wo yash ki maa se lipat kar aur jor jor se rone lagi, jisse dekh uski maa bhi serious ho gayi
Yash mom- angle sach me beta main majak kar rahi thi, maaf kar de mujhe, mujhe nhi pata tha tum itna seriously le logi, I'm sorry angle, waise main  jhooth nhi bol rahi thi tere baare me hi bol rahi thi teri maa bhi to meri friend hai na bachpan me hi tumhara hath maanga tha apne yash ke liye,
Thori der me sab normal huwa,
Yashmin- yash tum jaante the maa aisa kuch karengi?
Yash-(haste huye) ha maa ne pehle hi bata diya tha aane do angle ko uski khabar leti hu
Yashmin- tumhari khabar to main baad me leti hu, maa chaliye hum chai le kar aate hai.
Yash- aree maine kya kiya?
Yash mom- beta iski aadat daal le ab to ye roj hoga aur hasne lagi jisse yashmin ko thori saram aane lagi..
Yash mom- waise angle tu sach bol rahi thi ki mujhe nhi chor sakti aap yash ki shadi kr dijiye agar main sach me ye sab bolti to kya karti tum?
Yashmin serious ho gayi aur boli
Yashmin- apni maa ke baad kiski ko apna mana hai na maa to wo aap hai, apne papa se bhi uppar aapko hamesa priority deti hu, ye sach hai maa ki main aapko kabhi nhi chor sakti but ye bhi sach hai maa ki yash meri jindagi hai, uske sath ke bina main kuch nhi hu, agar ye sab sach hota na maa to aaj mera aakhri din hota iss duniya main...
Yashmin ka itna bola hi tha ki ek Thapar uske gaal pe pada jo ki yash ki maa ne mara tha
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#84
awsm update bro
full of emotions
bhai aage ke update thoda jldi or regular dene ki kosis krna
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#85
Update 68
Yash mom- Aaj ke baad aisa kuch karne ka socha to mujhse boora koi nhi hoga angle.
Yashmin- sorry maa but ye sach hai, aapko boora laga uske liye sorry aage se nhi bolungi aisa kuch..
Raat hone ko huyi yashmin ke ghar pe bhi koi nhi tha to yash ki maa ne usse apne sath hi rehne ko bola jab tak college start na ho jaye aur uske dad bhi tab tak aa jayenge..
At airport
Yashmin yash ko chorne aayi thi but usko jaate dekh kr yashmin ki aakhe naam ho gayii .
Yash- Angle kuch din ki hi baat hai wapas aa jawunga phir chalenge apan Mount Abu, abhi please ek smile dikha do, nhi to main bhi nhi jaa paunga delhi.
Yashmin- smile krte huye, nhi tum jawo aur mann laga kr kaam karne, Uncle ko biswas hai tum pe tabhi to tumko bhej rahe hai, aawo ge to mere liye gifts lana bahot saari( sararti andaaz me) par yash to yash tha yashmin hasne ki majak karne ki poori kosis kar rahi thi par uski aakhe sab bata rahi thi,
Yash ne usse gale se laga liye, aur bola
Yash- Angle tum mujhe se jhooth nhi bol sakti, please khus rehne i love you my angle
Yashmin- i love you too my love.. jaldi aana

Yash ko aaj 8 din ho gaye the aaj college bhi wapas start hone wala tha, arjun bhi apne gaon gaya tha, yash ke jaane ke baad jab bhi time milta yash angle ko call kar liya karta,

At college..
Ladka- Bhai aaj to pehla din h college me senior sab raging lenge humara.
Rudra- Son of mla of Jaipur, tu kyu tension le raha hai janta h na mera baat kon h aur iss college ke laundo me utna dam nhi h jo mere se panga le sake.

Rudra introduction.
Jaisa ki aap logo ko pata chal hi gaya hai Mla ka beta hai, to uska rehan sehan to aap logo ko pata chal hi gaya hoga, ego, attitude sab peak pe tha ya ye bolo abhi tak koi milla nhi tha uska ego torne wala, rudra ne ek saal drop kiya tha to dekha jaaye to usko abhi 2nd year me hona chahiye tha.. but paise ki garmi aur aiyashi ka bhoot,

Rudra- waise yaar koi dhashu  ladki  abhi tak nhi dikayi di h yaar lagta h sab aunty log ke sath hi padhna padega.
Ladka- bhai ek ladki h bahot hi khubsurat hai , wo 2nd year me hai par uska ek bf hai soona hai toop hai.
Rudra- humse bhi bada toop uske samne uski gf le jaunga dekhna..
Aise hi baate kar rahe the wo log ki yashmin apni car se aa gayi college ladke ne usse isaare se yashmin ko dikhaya..
Rudra- bhai kya ladki hai ye kis chomu se pati hai, isse to meri gf honi chahiye thi
Ladka- rehne de bhai ye possible nhi h soona hai sacha wala pyar hai dono ke bich..
Rudra- tu dekh lena ek hafte ke andar hi isse apne bed pe na laya to mera naam rudra nhi..
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#86
Superb Update
Dekhte h rudra kya krta h....
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#87
Update 69

At parking after college
Aakash, riya, shreya aur yashmin sab bench pe  baithe huye the, jaahir si baat h done ke bf college se gayab the i mean absent the to unka mood kaisa hoga uper se Aakash ar riya dono ke maje le rahe the..
Rudra yashmin ke pass jata hai..
Rudra- hi 
Yashmin-hi 1 year?
Rudra-ha, kya main yaha baith sakta hu
Yashmin- Sorry ye saari seat reserved hai tum kahi aur jaawo
Rudra- would you like to be my friend?
Aakash- abe wo samajh me nhi aata kya tujhe, jaa yaha se
Rudra- tu janta h kisse baat kr raha h mera baab kon hai?
Aakash uthne wala tha to yashmin ne usse mana kr diya 
Yashmin- badi akad h tumko tumhare baab ki
Rudra- itna attitude achi baat nhi h wo bhi mere samne..
Yashmin- kaas tum pehle wali yashmin se mille hote tumhari ego aur attitude dono tumhare hath me de deti... Aur hasne lagi. Dekho 1st year ke ho isse liye kuch nhi bol rahi hu aaj pehla din h tumhra enjoy karo college life.
Rudra- tumahre jaisi dost mill jayege to enjoy hi enjoy hoga college me
Yashmin- whatt???
Aakash- abe wo saane tu jata h ki nhi yaha se apne senior se baat karne ki tamiz nhi h kya tujhe..
Rudra- soona h tumhra koi chomu sa bf h, wo mere aage kya hoga, MLA ka beta hu paisa paani ki tarah bahata hu meri dost ban jawo..
Rudra ne itna bola hi tha ki yashmin se usko Thapar laga diya.
Yashmin- don't cross your limt mr itni der se yahi soch kr chor rahi thi ki 1st year ke ho,
Rudra uski taraf badh raha tha to Aakash usko dhaka diya 
Aakash- abe bhosri ke samjh me nhi aata tere dimag me baat..

Behes behas me Aakash aur Rudra me ladayi hone lagi, jahir si baat h College ke bache lag bhag jaa chuke the aur rudra thera mla ka beta do teen chamche uske support me aa gaye the, aur sab mill kar Aakash pe bhari padne lage the

Yashmin ladayi chudwane ke liye bich me gayi, wo kosis kr rahi thi Shreya aur riya bhi aa gaye, tabhi yashmin ki najar gaadi se utarte hath me phoolo ka guljasta liye yash pe padi, tab tak rudra ka hath yashmin pe laga wo ladkhara kar ek lamp poll se tarkra gayi, yash ke hath se phool gir gaye aur bhagta huwa yashmin ke pass pahucha, yashmin ke sir se halka sa khoon nikalne laga tha, yash wahi baith kar yashmin ko uthaya uske sir se khoon ko hath se saaf kr raha tha, yashmin jab yash ko dekhi to uske aakho se aashu nikal rahe the, Hoga bhi kyu nhi jis angle ko aach tak nhi lagne de sakta tha yash aaj uske sir se khoon nikla tha, tab tak shreya aur riya bhi aa gaye the, Yash kuch bola nhi par yashmin ne uski aakho me dekh liya
Shreya to riya- ye gaya ab,
 wo utha aur rudra ko maarne laga uske chamche to ek do hath lagne se hi side ho gaye the, yash rudra ko maare jaa raha tha usse mouka hi nhi milla ki wo yash pe hath utha sake, yash ki aakho se aashu nikal rahe the, aur uske hath rudra pe pad rahe the, 
Yash- tu janta h tune kiski chuwa hai, meri angle ko, aaj tu nhi bachega..
Yash ne itna maara tha usse ki wo ab uthe ke layak nhi tha, Aakash yash ko rok raha tha par usse dhaka de deta aur phir rudra ko maarne lagta, 
Yash pass se ek rod utha ta hai aur uske hath pe maar deta hai jiski umeed kisi ko nhi thi, yash uske sir pe maarne hi wala tha ki yashmin aa kar uske gaale lag jaati h aur bolti hai..
Yashmin- please betu chor do iss mar jayega ye..
Yash gusse me tha wo yashmin ko hatata hai aur bola- mar jayega to mar jaane do isse angle isski itni himat tumpe hath uthayega.. aur wo phir maarne ko huwa..
Yashmin- meri kasam yash please chor do usse..
Yash ko aur gussa aa gaya par wo rod chor diya yashmin phir se gale laga kar rone lagi, yash bhi ro raha tha.. 
Dono ka pyar dekh kar rudra soch me pad gaya kya aisa bhi pyar hota hai?
Rudra ke chamche aaye aur rudra ko uthaya
Rudra- tune bahot badi galti kr di h mujh pe hath utha kar. Tu janta h mera baab kon hai
Yash ne uska collar pakda aur bola
Yash-  tere baab ko to main nhi jaanta par tu ja apne baab se mere baab ke baare me poochna wo tujhe batayenge ki mera baab kon h naam hai unka Vikram Singh.
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#88
Hello friends update post kar diya hu aap log pado aur please aap log batawo ki story kaisi lagi aap logo ko, ye story xossip pe incomplete thi to is story ko yaha complete karunga, please reply kiya karo dosto acha lagta hai.
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#89
Awsm Update bro
keep writing and posting
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#90
Bhai continue karo yr...
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#91
Awesome bro keep updating
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(22-12-2019, 10:42 PM)rrdon Wrote: Hello friends update post kar diya hu aap log pado aur please aap log batawo ki story kaisi lagi aap logo ko, ye story xossip pe incomplete thi to is story ko yaha complete karunga, please reply kiya karo dosto acha lagta hai.

bhai xossip par ye meri favourite love story thi.......... aur ab apne dobara shuru kiya hai.... to mein bata nahi sakta kitni khushi hui hai

ab yashmin aur yash ki jindgi khushiyon se bhar gayi to ye ek naya jamura kood gaya beech mein

dekhte hain aage

keep posting........regularly
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