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(16-12-2019, 05:46 PM)Veer Wrote: Fantastic story! Amazing start! Awesome writing. Brother, this story has a great potential to be one of the most popular stories in this forum if you can use the enemy theory properly. Let this thug make simran his personal whore and later make vishal to be a peeping Tom who will see his loving wife to be fucked by a criminal secretly.
Oh! Yeah, then it will be really a great story.
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(16-12-2019, 04:28 PM)sanashaikh Wrote: Hmmm bohat achi story hai aap ki. Next time pyar sa maza kerwa a waisa bhi ab tu bahar ka LU... Ka maza mill gaya hai
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(16-12-2019, 05:46 PM)Veer Wrote: Fantastic story! Amazing start! Awesome writing. Brother, this story has a great potential to be one of the most popular stories in this forum if you can use the enemy theory properly. Let this thug make simran his personal whore and later make vishal to be a peeping Tom who will see his loving wife to be fucked by a criminal secretly.
Thank u .. aage ka journey me dusre characters add ho jaynge, Aisa koi situation hoga toh ye criminal ka character b add karoonga..
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(16-12-2019, 05:54 PM)Rahul007 Wrote: Wow! What a wonderful story! Brother, you have chosen my most favorite theme. The use of enemy theory in adultery is extremely hot and erotic.
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(16-12-2019, 05:19 PM)Vamp Wrote: Bahut hi majedar aur masaladar update dhiya aapne bhai 
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(17-12-2019, 12:54 AM)Wickedsunnyboi Wrote: Badhiya likh rahe hooo... Khoob bahot khoob
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Nice one.. the first part of her life..
Waiting for what next for her... And us as well
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(17-12-2019, 06:01 PM)Yampag Wrote: Nice one.. the first part of her life..
Waiting for what next for her... And us as well
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(30-11-2019, 01:32 PM)Sam15 Wrote: Chapter 1
January 2019 mumbai sheher me rehene wali ek pyari siMarried couple vishal Aur simran apni shadi shuda life se bahut hi khush the unki ek 2 saal ki beti b thi.. Aur une ek shadi attend kar ne city se bahar jana tha., "simran jaldi karo late ho rahi hai vishal ne apni patni ko awaz laga tha hai," simran Aj kuch zyda hi saj daj k Nkalln rahi thi , Aur vishal ko jaldi padi huwi thi, vishal Aur simran ki shadi ko Abhi sirf 2 saal hi huwe the aur unki ek pyari si beti b thi , simran ki umar 27 Aur vishal 29 ka hi tha.darasal une apne rishte daar ki shadi attend karne jani thi , vishal Abhi tak udar nahi gaya Huwa tha wo log apni car se hi jane wale the, bas suna tha ki wo kisi gau type jaghe hai jo ki sheher se thodi bahar hai.
Simran bahut hi zyda khubsurat lag rahi thi usne Aj cream color ki saree pehni Huwi thi jo ki transparent thi. aur blouse b bahut hi choti aur tight pehni thi jisse uski peet bilkul nangi hi lag rahi thi. Aur usne Saree ko apni nabhi se 2 inch niche bandi huwi thi jisse uski gehri nabhi aur pet saaf Nazar aa raha tha, aur saree b itni tight pehni thi uska figure toh saaf dikh raha tha khaas kar k uski gaand ,Vishal ye dekh ke kehta hai " jaaan bahut hi kamal ki lag rahi ho kisi ka dil na aa jaye tumpe ," Simran accha tumare hote huwe kis me itni himmat kehkar simran ne zor se vishal k hont ko chum leti hai , aur wo log apni beti ko apni nani k paas chod k shadi k liye nikal jate hai. Vishal b Aj pehli bar hi ja raha tha usko b sahi se adress nahi malum tha aur darr b tha ki saat me simran hai wo b ek gau k raaste jana koi kathre se khali nahi .
Vishal ne car ko highway se speed pe leja tha hai Aur wo log baatein karte huwe highway se bahut aage nikal jate hai , aage se us gau ko jane wali raasta pakad lete hai , aur sham hune aayi thi kuch samaye me hi andhera hune wala tha vishal ne soch ki aage milne wali petrol pump me gadi rokh k kuch kha liya jaye , lekin udar Aisa koi jagha nazar nahi aa raha tha bas jungle hi nazar aa rahe the samne kuch dukaan jaisa nazar aane pe vishal ne car rokh diya.aur simran ko kaha ki tum car me Baithi raho aur vishal ne uss dukaan me jake kuch lays kharide, aur dukan dar se pucha ki rampur kitne km me milega dukan dar ne kaha sahab 40km me milega lekin usse pehle security officer ka checkpost milega udar thoda sambal Kar jana udar security officer kamm daku log zyda milenge hai toh wo security officer ka checknaka lekin wo log uss pe kabza kar klogo ko lut lete hai , vishal ko darr b laga aur kar b kya sakta tha wapas b nahi ja sakta shadi toh attend karni hi hai Aur wo car lekar aage nikal padta hai , " simran puchti hai kya Huwa pareshan kyu ho ? " vishal ye raasta kuch sahi nahi hai , simran kehti hai aisa kuch nahi hai tum daro mat jaldi se pahunch jaynge .
Aage 20km k baad security officer ka checkpost nazar aata hai vishal car kkki speed ko kamm kar deta hai lekin udar koi nahi nazar aata hai , vishal ne idar udar nazar marta hai bas light ki roshni hi thi aur koi b nahi tha , itne me ek security officer wala aa jata hai aur kehta hai ' kya hai bhai gadi kyu roka hai vishal wo checkpost hai na islye , ' security officer gaur se car k andar nazar maarta hai Aur kehta hai sheesha niche karo..vishal ne sheeshe ko niche kar deta hai.. wo security officer wala gaur se simran k or deke jata hai vislal bolta hai sir hum shadi me ja rahe hai.. security officer wala kehta hai bahar niklo simran darr jati hai aur vishal k taraf dekhti hai.. vishal car se bahar nikal k security officer k paas aake kehta hai sir hum shadi me ja rahe hai Aap chahe toh gadi ki talaashi lijiye..security officer wala dik ne me kisi gunde se kamm nahi lag raha hai kala sa shirt k button b khule huwe the muh me paan b tha , Aur wo security officer wala gusse me kehta hai talashi toh beta mai tum log ka lunga hi kar k paan tuk k simran k taraf dekta hai Aur kehta hai ye kaun hai vishal Bolta hai meri wife, security officer wala accha bahut hi khubsurat hai yaar vishal ko gussa b aa raha tha wo majboor tha..
security officer wala kehta hai chalo bahar aa jao madam talashi leni padegi, "simran car se bahar aa jati hai raat k andhere me wo saree me chamak rahi thi, kisi b mard ki halath kharab ho jaye aisi apsara ko dekar ye toh ek gunda security officer wala tha iska halath kharab hona swabavik hi tha,, simran bahar aa kar vishal k kareeb khadi hoti hai, " security officer wala kehta hai chalo mere saat ; ' ye log darr jate hai ki ye kidr bula raha hai, 'vishal himmat kar k puch leta hai aap hame kaha leke ja rahe ho. " security officer wala kehta hai hamare office me aage chal k jana padega apni car idar hi chod do phir aake le jana, " Aur ye log uske piche chal ne lagte hai wo une ek jungle ki raaste se le jane lagta hai , " simran vishal se kehti hai ye hame kaha le ja raha hai wo b ye raaste se muje darr lag raha hai, vishal kehta hai daro nahi Mai hoon tumare saat. " jadiyun se thoda aage jate hi ek chota sa office nazar aata hai jo ki bahut purani si thi.. bahar ek dim light laga huwa tha,, Aur andar kuch log ki Baat kar ne ki awaz b sunayi de rahi thi. "Simran kehti hai vishal muje sach me darr lag raha hai ye hame kaha le aaya, " vishal wo security officer wale se puchta hai bhai ye kaunsi office me le aaye ho hame, tabhi wo security officer wala kehta hai " abe chup kar k chal warna ghaseet k le jaounga samje ab idar hi ruko mai aata hu kehkar wo andar chale jata hai ..Aur thodi der me wo bahar aata hai Aur bolta hai andar aao bade saab log bula rahe..
To be continued.......
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(18-12-2019, 02:08 AM)Oexbiixossip2 Wrote: simran She is not like her.... mai ne simran k character ko alag hi andaaz me pesh kiya hai ...
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Dusra plot k saat aaounga..
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Simran k us incident k baad kuch samaye beet gaya tha simran k andar Abhi b wo raat ki ghatna zinda thi wo usko bhualye bhul nahi sakti thi.. samaye k saat usko wo bhula dena zaroori tha Kyu ki usko aage apna life Aur family b dekna tha..islye hi wo Aj tak vishal ko us bare me kuch nahi batayi huwa thi.. samaye k saat simran b normal hote chali aayi thi.. Aur pura dhyan family ko de rahi thi...aise hi ek din wo shopping karne chalti hai us din wo ek Top Aur leggings pehna huwa tha, top kafi short Aur tight thi uske gaand se thoda hi niche tak thi.leggings b skin fit thi...isse uska gaand saaf nazar aa raha tha.. wo ghar se bahar aake apne car k paas jati hai Aur car leke market k taraf chal padti hai.. market k kareeb ja k wo apne car ko udar hi ek kacche parking me park karti hai..Aur market k taraf chal padti hai..usko ghar ka kuch saman khareed na hota hai..wo her ek shop se kuch na kuch khareed the huwe ja rahi hoti hai..aage ja k wo ek shop me chali jati hai wo shop me kuch bheed thi aur roshni b kamm thi, simran ko jana hi padta hai Aur wo andar chali jati hai. andar bas 2 hi dukan wale the wo hi customer ko saman de rahe the. islye simran ko thoda intezar karna padta hai aur wo udar hi chup khadi hoti hai..wo log customers me busy the idar simran akeli hi khadi intezar kar rahi thi... thodi der me ek awaaz Zor se sunayi deti hai " abbe jaldi karo bheed zyada ho rahi hai" ye awaz dukan k maalik ka tha jo Abhi hi andar Aaya tha.. simran b usko tirchi nazar se dek leti hai, uska age 55 k paas hoga pet samne ko Aaya huwa tha hatta katta sa tha.. wo simran k kareeb hi khada ho jata hai Aur wo log ko bata ne lagta hai..wo ek nazar simran pe b maar leta hai aur uske jism ko gande nazaron se ghurr ne lagta hai...usne chudidaar b tight wala pehn raka tha jo ki side cut tha isme uski leggings me uske thighs b saaf nazar aa rahi thi uski curvy figure ko wo ghurre ja raha tha uski gaand b wo tight wale dress me bahar ki wor nikal aayi thi.. simran se ab wo puchta hai " madam aap ko kya chahi ye" simran kuch saman bata deti hai aur udar hi chup khadi ho jati hai.. wo dukan k andar kaam karne walo ko bata deta hai aur jaldi karne bolta hai.. kuch min me phir se dukan walo ko puchta hai "madam ka saman ready ho gaya kya madam intezar kar rahi hai" ye bol kar wo apna ek haat chup k se simran k kamar me rak deta hai Aur dukan walo ko saman k bare me bata ne me lag jata hai..simran uske haat ko apne kamar me dekti hai aur kuch react nahi karti hai udar hi chup khadi ho jati hai. wo dukan walo se Baat karte huwe apne haat se simran k kamar ko sehla deta hai. phir b simran chup khadi ho jati hai.. apne haat ko Abhi b wo simran k kamar me rak kar hi wo log se Baat karta rehta hai.phir wo simran k taraf dek kar uske kamar ko halke se daba deta hai.simran ko ab kuch ajeeb lagta hai wo thoda side ko ho jati hai isse uska haat simran k kamar se alag ho jata hai....
Simran usse alag ho k khadee ho jati hai aur apne saman ka intezar karti hai ki jaldi mil jaye..ab wo simran ko piche se dekta hai upar se leke niche tak usne dress b bahut tight pehn raki thi isse uska gaand saaf nazar aa raha tha..ye dekar wo apna haat pant me le jakar apna lund sehla deta hai.. Idar simran ka saman b aa jata hai wo jaldi se saman lekar udar se nikal jati hai. Wo ab apne car k paas jati hai jaha wo car park ki huwi thi... Waha kuch kaarigar baith k apas me baat kar rahe the. Simran ek nazar unpe dalti hai wo log simran ko hi ghurre ja rahe the.. Wo jaldi se apna saman car me rakh k andar baith jati hai aur waha se nikal jati hai.....
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Good story.Has the potential to be an erotic long story.Keep it up.
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bhai meri didi ko bhi simran maan lo kuch comment to karo plz..
kaisi lag rahi hai. upar se niche tak dekho
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